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savie_

@savie_

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#271

i hope adi is not dead ...

last 5 bullets may be geet ne chalayi ho ...

may be ,...

thanks for the pm...

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shanky18

@shanky18

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#272

hahaha...dats was awesum...bravo...im pakka sure Donaka Maan would not kill his hone wala salla...hahahaha...

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#273

oh no Anu, Adi is dead 😭

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-bansi-

@-bansi-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#274

OMG...Dat was an awesome update anu...!!!!
is adi really dead...??? 😲
oh god if yes then wot would happen geet...how is she gonna take the news of her brother's death...??😭
she will b shattered...
well coming to maan...ooopss DON...!!
sumthing drastic has really happened in his life that he is avoiding himself to be called maan...!!! suspense is in store for us...i guess😉
it was a beautiful update anu...🤗
thank u for giving us a lovely update dat too double...!!!
love u sooo much...😳

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#275

Don't tell me Adi is dead 😭 I hope he's not !!!

Maan heard Geet's whole convo with her brother ; something tells me he'll not leave her too

Awesome 👏 👏 & super duper exciting part 👍🏼

Loved immensely

Thanks for pm ...

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SaJan-SaJan

@SaJan-SaJan

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#276

nice update...

thnx 4 d pm..

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shalinisaran89

@shalinisaran89

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#277

omg adi dead...

feelin sad 4 geet

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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#278

omg...adi died...??????i mean he really died??????wat will geet do now...continue soon...mw wanna know more n thnx for the pm...

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#279

Oh my Lord
stupid maan ka bacha ... Geet ke bhai ko maar diya... Now how will she ever forgive him.
Me so sad :(
ok fine let me hav happy thoughts... So maan is actually undercover intelligence force and since adi was face to face infront of so many ... He just cudnt let go of adi...that was he only way the underworld wud believe that he is not tied to any good guys whatsoever... Evn if this is not the story but atleast this has calmed me down. Another worrysome point is... Since adi is outta picture, don will go to his house as the friend of adi... Kharoos khain ka ;(. Don't go crazy reading my comment, I do believe in maan but writing all my worries outloud... That's all
The entire update was well written. Geets call and maan not answering... Just taking her voice in was beautiful.
U sketched the combat well ! It was allvisual to me. It felt like as if I was watching a Hollywood film.

Whn r u updating this? Can't wait for an update.. Plzzz jaldi kerna.
Aur haan anu one on one was awesome too. Luv the jealous maan.