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LOLqueenAR

@LOLqueenAR

Explorer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Anku i cannot describe how beautifully you have written this one shot...i had tears in my eyes reading it...it was emotional yet very beautiful..the way you described how Armaan being an army officer confesses his love was very cute..i giggled because it was unique yet subtle..then the time when riddhima was pregnant,her fears were soo real yet heart wrenching..the time wen armaan was summoned for his duty,the way he first refuses and then understands and goes for his duty got me to tears..the way they hid their pain for making other smile..it was all very beautiful...the time when armaan promises riddhima that he would be the first person his baby would be with was awww and when riddhima refused to go in for delivering just bcoz of armaan's promise showed how much she loved him and wants him to be their...but when riddhima opened her eyes and saw armaan with her baby..made me smile like anything...it was very cute yet very sweet...and then the little conversation between them in hospital was very nice...it was a very beautiful OS ankita..please write more..i have become a fan of your writing

name-u know me😉

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Ayesha87

@Ayesha87

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Thanks so much for this OS yaar🤗

It was beautiful...aww so sweet & emotional😳

I could imagine each & every scene for our AR...awesome...loved it heaps😃

U wrote amazingly👏

Take care😛

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anushkajain

@anushkajain

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#53

awesome os 👏
this is one of the best os i have come across ⭐️
loved it very much 😃
keep writing more😊

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#54

only one came out from my mouth after reading it

superb i love it buddy
you make me speachless
the way you wirte a beutiful story honsetly i felt like iam reaing a fairy tale
i guess this was a best b day gift to any of your frnd
gr8
thankx for the pm
do write more why you saying you dont done a good work when you done a fab work
maria😊

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cuteshilpa

@cuteshilpa

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#55

hey love the part

it awesomw

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deepa

@crazy_4_karan

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#56

wow tht was the most beautifully written OS i have read in the recent times...

loved the calm n composed way in which u projected their pain, emotions n love for each other..

Armaan as a army officer is jst sooo beautifully pictured here, tht i jst fell in love with him all ovr again..

the way Riddhima supported thm was jst wow its takes a gr8 deal of self control to do wat she did specially in her condition.. its soo difficult to let ur loved one's go, wen u r nt even sure tht ul ever gt to see thm again or nt..

n thn their princess awww Armaan wld surely b the best daddy in this world..

loved the OS..

Pm me the next time u write something, wld love to read mre frm u :)