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AVKKG

@AVKKG

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Ankuuu 🤗
and thats a trillion and more HUGSSS!!!!

Baby, you astound me with your writing skills and if this OS is a result of some random idea (your words on what brought about this OS) you had, then I can only imagine, what the outcome will be when you decide to seriously pursue writing!!
How can you even think that this story didnt come out well???

I dont even know where to start from and what to comment on?? But let me try and see if I can do any justice with my comments to your writing and this story!

First -- THANK YOU for giving this story a happy ending!! I wouldve come and killed you otherwise!!! 😆

Have I told you how much I adore your total attention to the tiniest little detail in your stories?? I find that even here in this OS!
Whether its making known why Riddhima chose to be a doctor for the Armed Forces, or the complete change in Armaan as soon as Riddhima got pregnant!!

The way Armaan proposed to Riddhima -- I swear, I havent come across a proposal like that in any of the numerous FFs/stories I have read!!
Those words and that moment just left me speechless!!!" You've always been healing my wounds Doctor, allow me to heal yours."

And I think I have no words to praise the way you wrote about Riddhima's pregnancy phase- the way Armaan changed emotionally, the way he took care of every minute detail for Riddhima during the pregnancy!! Just everything was so beautifully and poignantly described!!!! I dont believe I read such a beautiful portrayal in any FF!!

The part where Armaan broke down on being called back for duty and where Riddhima gives him the strength to leave was very very touching, to say the least!!!
But I was honestly glad that she made him leave instead of giving in to selfishness or allowing him to give in to selfishness, instead of duty!

And last --- the ending was just BEAUTIFUL!!! More so, becos Armaan came back, like he promised, to make sure he was the first person his baby would see when she opened her eyes!!!

A SIMPLY OUTSTANDING PIECE OF WORK, ANKU!!!! Totally one of my favorites, for sure!
I tried to comment the best I could, but sometimes, words are not enough!!
I hope you understand!!!

LOVE YOU!!!

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amruta04

@amruta04

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

hey Ankita 🤗
awesome oneshot
loved it very well written ending was beautiful
i m soo happy that Armaan kept his promise to be the first person baby would see when she opens her eyes...

thanks for giving it happy ending !!!

do write more OS

take care and thanks for the pm.

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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

It was one of the most amazing one-shots i have ever read..

It was magnificently beautiful and endearing...i had tears in my eyes throughout the shot..

I can relate to this shot more because I'm myself from an army background and know how it feels when your dad is away in a place where the situation is very intense...i have seen my mom in distress thinking about my dad's well being.. my mom always tells me about the time when she was carrying my bro and my dad had to go to kargil..

I actually don't have words to describe what i am feeling right now anku... but just that it was beautiful..😊

Love,

Vaishnavi😃

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Kiara_angel

@Kiara_angel

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Loved it...😊
best was Armaan as army officer
thanks for the pm..

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Awsm os yar.
Realy nice.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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firoza malik

@dimpledsmile

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

nice 1..

thnx 4 da PM!!!

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Wow Ankita ! I loved this OS.. There was only one word I could say after reading it - BEAUTIFUL <3

The way you have written is so endearing. So may things coupled together. The responsibility of an army officer, an understanding wife, a lovely husband, wonderful parents, and madly in love with each other couple 😳 It just seemed to be perfectly written. Trust me, you should ALWAYS go ahead with ur random thoughts 😆 You write beautifully and very realistically and though these things are something I tell you mostly but they never cease to awe me. Its always wonderful reading from you.

Love
Vini

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Rupa Roy

@-Im-Possible-

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

awesome OS, luvd it...
luv the way you have put AR emotions, they missed each other so much😭...
loving this army officer Armaan...
Keep smiling & TC...

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annihilation

@annihilation

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

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Anku, I seriously have no words to say.You have left speechless.😳

First, 🤗🤗🤗 as a token of love and appreciation.And a *Pat on the back* for coming out with such a masterpiece.I thought COME might keep the 'creative' section of your brain occupied, but no, your creativity, imagination knows no bounds.I absolutely LOVED the concept of this OS, each & everything about it was refreshing & new and it still kept hold of its Armaan-Riddhima of DMG connection.Armaan belonging to Army background, and Riddhima being a doctor and the way you set up the whole story was beautiful.I didnt feel anywhere that something is missing, it felt so complete.Every little detail of their lives, the confession ("You have always been healing my wounds Doctor, Now allow me to heal yours" - BEAUTIFUL 😳), Riddhima's pregnancy, the separation, the reunion and everything was so poignantly described.LOVED it completely Anku.You're Amazing! :) Keep it up, and keep writing more :) ILY<3

Edited by herms_angel - 14 years ago