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Sanaa

@Sanaa629

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: scorpio95
great part! you're getting me hooked with this ff everytime u update. 😊 plz continue soon! 😊

Thank you..!! hope that continues..!! 😛 lolx..

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firoza malik

@dimpledsmile

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

hey sanna ..

awesome part..

do continue super soon..

tthnx 4 da PM!!

tc.

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PRACHI GOYAL

@prachi06

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#83

awesome update

this seems really interesting

ALL THE BEST FOR NEW FF

thanx for pm

continue very soon

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548252

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

I mentioned it at the start completely..It's set in the UK, Cardiff..not India..I said.."the chilly winds of Cardiff"..Or something like that..but don't worry..it'll be more confirmed as you go along..😊

Thanks loadz..!!

Love,

Sanaa

Hey:))

sooo sorry I think I just miss that

take care

love miss93

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Zarqaa

@cant.be.assed.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

OMG that was great!! lol soo both rahul and armaan r flirts.. not suprised..aww riddhima already has a crush on him thats soo cute! i bet armaans already starting to like her too
i love rahul and muskaan bickering hehe

continue soon x

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desikalakaar

@desikalakaar

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Heyyy :)

Oh wow a new FF! :)

I saw the first PM for this, but didn't open it because I wanted to be on the computer first (I usually comment from my iPod). But oh goodness, you already have an update!! :)

Well, now, before you add any more fasttt updates, I'll go read the prelude and part 1 :) Wait up for me!

I'll come back and edit :)

*BACK*

OHHH MY GOOODDD.

YOU ARE AMAZING (bows down)

The concept was amazing, the writing was amazing, the dialogues were amazing, and Armaan was hot (as always)

I loved the first part! It was so cute and so real! I think that while Riddhima continues to fall face first into the "falling-in-love-with-Armaan" pit, Armaan is going to go Casanovaing with other girls. Just don't want to see her heartbroken! But I'm sure you have a better concept than the crappy one I just conjured :)

Good Luck with this one and please do update Life Out of Control!

Love,

Kri <33

Edited by kajenkashkriya - 14 years ago

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Rabia Amla

@-RabiaKSGKaJen-

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

Sanaa <3 OH EMM GEE!

I Freakiin Loved Thee Partt <3

The Prolouge Hooked Me Into The Story.

First Part Was Just Amazing <3

Love That Song <33

Wohooo Armaan Entryy =))

Hmm Raool's Cuziin Bro.

Riddhima & Raool. Raool Liked Riddhima. Luckilly She Didnt Have Anny Feeliings For Hiim :P

Armaan Styll Dashing & Handosomee <33

Hayyee <3 AR Same Classes.

Intrestingg <3

Plesshh Update Shoon Also LOOC!

Its Been Agess!

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fri42911

@fri42911

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#88

nice udpate.

thanks for the pm.

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#89

Sanaaa!

Wow..another ff on the block and its AR...thats just a cherry on the top ;) haha! Well i know im SUPER late in commenting here and youre other ff and OS...but i apologize for that sincerely and its just that, summer vacation and work and volunteering has kept me busy thus, im barely on IF. But as soon as i saw youre PM..i jumped right into reading this:) The prelude was just wayy tooo goood..though it didnt give the characters away, but it gave a hint of the story and the concept. And i MUST add you have improveddd TREMENDOUSLY in writing such stories, and you should seriously publish this and until then, just keep writing away and express youre talent like this :) Now moving onto the first part, WOW! Beautifully described, great emotions (especially the whole dynamics of Riddhimas life, mind and heart)...can it get any better? LOL i bet not, but im very much excited for this story to get unrolling. I definietely love riddhimas character in this and im waiting to fall in love with Armaans as well ( My prince charming haha). Oh and for Riddhima, it definitely seems like "love" at first sight though shes calling it a crush, but im sure the more she pulls away, the more her and Armaan are going to get closer even ...kinda like newtons law haha! Anyhow, the high school concept is very realistic and something im looking forward to reading and im sure the story will go a LONG way...atleast i hope so :) Also, about Riddhimas character, she totally represents every high school girl...for me atleast ...shes looking for "forver" friends and strong long term relationship...and i hope she finds that companion in Armaan though its always harder in high school especially with those "bimbos" around.(btw, loved that cafe sequences haha). Oh and hmm Rahul, better not be a kabab mein haddi but he can always be a catalyst for AR and i adore his and muskaans fights...can never get old :D Armaan does seem like the kadoos in the first part, but I know for sure, that will change and as the story progresses, ill be "la la" over him like ALWAYS.😳

Okie dokie, ill stop my bak bak there...:) You better update soon and i promise to always continue commenting :) Mwah! Take care!

- Devu

Edited by nyxx - 14 years ago