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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

hi dear wen wil u update ? can we wait 2day😃


A few more pages of comments n I'll b back 😉😈
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update comin 2nite 😃
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Recap-Maan gave a confused look...Dev couldn't make a head or tail out of this scene and Vansh was enraged beyond doubt but kept his calm as he knew he has to.




But he knew one thing for sure, if Maan likes/lusts or even loves her...he'll make sure it stays long enough to let his plan execute to perfection.
Chapter-9
How can you not love me?


'Bro my sixth sense is telling me that there's something wrong with this Vansh guy...he's...he's a...' Dev tried to say what he felt.




'Creep' Maan completed Dev's sentence and smirked 'Isn't that what you've been saying for the last 24 hours?'




Dev frowned.




'Oh come on Dev...why are you so bothered about him? Chill...he's a nobody any way' Maan rested himself on his couch and pulled his guitar and started playing a tune, closing his eyes, smiling to himself. Dev creased his forehead seeing his brother, true, he have never bothered about his clients or his business rivals or any one in particular, but something about this man JUST didn't seem right.




'And that girl- Geet...what about her? Why was she looking at you in such a strange manner? And why on earth did she run away like that?' Dev couldn't help at the bursting of questions one by one as the doubts were simply eating on him.




Maan stopped playing 'some respect Dev Singh Khurana' he turned his head to a confused Dev 'she's your sister-in-law to be' Maan stated each and every word precisely.




'What?' Dev almost barked in surprise 'are you...are you serious?' Dev didn't know whether to pray for a yes or no, whether to feel happy for his brother or sorry for that stranger.




'I don't think I cracked a joke...now end of discussion' Maan replied with finality in his tone.

* * * * * * * * * * * * * *

How dare he? Just how dare he? How can someone be so shameless to kiss a girl just like that and then stalk her till here?




''Who...who are you?'' She asked him fearfully.

He smirked and whispered close to her ears ''Maan''





Just the very thought of him or that rainy evening brought disgust to her whole self...that jerk! And he actually have the nerve to come here at her in-laws' house? Hey wait- something snapped inside Geet.





What if he...Ohh no! She thought horrified...what if he tells something to Veerji? Geet gasped at the sudden realization.

* * * * * * * * * * * * * *

'I want you to give me the exact details of Mr Veer Singh Shekhawat do you understand... and I mean everything- right from his bank details, credit card details to his childhood life, his bonding with his family everything and do a background check on Mrs Geet Shekhawat as well, understood' IB officer Arjun Singh Rathod stated with finality and cut the call.





I know Veer's death was not planned by some terrorist group, there is a much bigger and dirtier conspiracy behind it.





Just when he was lost in his own thoughts, a soft, female body bumped against him, spilling her cola over his jacket to which he frowned.





'Ohh...I'm...I'm so sorry sir' she said and tried to open her bag for a hankie but all her shopping bags and the romantic novel she was reading and with went the remaining cola which got spilled over the pages of the book!





'Clumsy woman' Arjun muttered and bent down on his knees to help her. 'Nooo' she shouted 'my Mills and Boons' she almost cried with her eyes welling up.





Arjun rolled his eyes and saw her teary eyes as she looked up to him and stopped.Their eyes locked for a brief moment till Anwesha's cell came as a rude interruption playing the saxophone riff of the song 'Careless Whispers'.





'Never mind...you'll get another one' he said softly looking away from her dreamy gaze. She cocked her head to the side and looked at him questioningly. Soon Arjun cleared his throat and changed the statement 'I...I mean I'll buy you another one'.





Arjun understood that she was probably some princess of some rich household, which explained her behaviour but didn't knew why the face seemed known. Arjun smiled at her and said 'promise'.





She didn't even realize what she was doing in the middle of a hustling-bustling shopping mall, looking dreamily at a stranger until Arjun got up with her bags in one hand and offered another to the dazed girl.





Anwesha felt slightly embarrassed at her own plight and got up quickly mumbling a 'thanks'. Arjun chuckled shaking his head as she went in a hurry.

* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *


'Geet' Vansh called out 'Me and Gauri are leaving for the fair...we might be late, have your dinner at time all right'.





'Ji Bhaaisaa' Geet nodded and bade goodbye to them. She sighed in relief as she realized that everything's still normal and that Maan dude haven't said anything to her Bhaaisaa yet. But she was still scared, this man seemed unpredictable. If he has the audacity to actually KISS her and now come all the way here, he certainly is capable of doing anything.





She didn't even realize that she was thinking of another man apart from Veer after a long time. But brushing aside her thoughts she started to prepare for dinner.

* * * * * * * * * * * * *

Both Maan and Vansh thought that they were genius when it comes to taking things out without letting the other guess about your motive- this was after a conversation they had on phone.





But for a change, Vansh outsmarted Maan. As he coolly told Maan about him and Gauri going to the fair that's on, not forgetting to mention that Geet is home, alone.





Maan already had his car keys inside the ignition...he could wait no more.


* * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

Maan stepped in the large mansion. There was hardly any noise inside except for a faint sound coming from an area not too far away. He slowly reached for the source of the sound and it started to become clear.





He reached the kitchen and saw his angel stood in a flesh-coloured saaree, chopping vegetables, looking lost with her profile facing him.





A wide grin spread across his face to see her for the third time. He slowly advanced towards her, making sure of not making a sound when suddenly Geet cut her finger and gasped in pain, started to move her finger up and down closing her eyes.





But her movements stilled as she felt someone's hand caught her wrist and his warm mouth over her cut finger.





Geet stood numb for a few seconds before him with her mind not registering anything. Was she dreaming? Has she gone crazy? Her lips were parted and eyes lost.





Maan looked at her and his naughtiness overtook his concern looking at her adorable features. She blinked a couple of times, he smirked with her finger still in his mouth and then kissed it.





Slowly and sensuously he kissed five of the fingers, one by one. Geet still didn't realize what was he doing or worse, what was SHE doing?





Maan now placed a kiss on her wrist, and kept moving upwards, placing kisses up her whole hand, finally kissing her ear and whispering 'good evening' to which Geet jumped in surprise only to see the man of dreams...WHAT? Wait...the man of her nightmares was standing so close to her, giving a devilish smile.





Feeling of shock and humiliation coarse through her whole being and she swiftly turned away from him and covered her mouth with her pallu.





Maan kind of understood her behaviour. He hugged her from her back and placed his chin on her shoulder. Geet stiffened.





'What...what the hell are you doing here?' She demanded rudely and snapped away his hands off her and turned to him 'how dare you' she cried.





Maan looked at her in a confusing manner, but he was quick to realize the reason behind this demeanour.





She has been raised in a traditional, conservative family under a cunning brother and God knows what kind of parents, a tragedy has occurred in the house, pretty recently and apart from all that, she looked too naive and innocent to give in to his advances, so he decided to play cool.





She marched up to him and held his collars, Maan stood there without protest.





'You' her voice shook ''You kissed me'' she cried.





''So?'' He asked coolly and added ''I'll do it again and again and more...because I know I have the right''.





Geet was dumbfounded. She slowly released her collar 'you have the right?' She mumbled inaudibly. But that didn't stop Maan, he grabbed the back of her head which brought Geet's attention back to him and without warning kissed her hard and tight.


Precap #1- 'Who is she?' Annie and Vicky asked in union, all exited.





'Well...her name is Geet'


Precap #2- He slid his fingers down her silky arms and looked in her eyes 'because I care for you' he said with utmost honesty in his eyes and voice.


Done with the update galllsss...upto u all 😃

DO NOT forget to hit like n comment as more Maneet moments to come 😉

Well, this Maneet scene was an ode to Muskaan di's 'Pyaar ka ehsaas'...my inspiration 4 the scene 😳

P.S- No. of likes n comments decreasing...not fair 😭

Do u guys want me 2 continue? If yes then plzzz hit like...these r my only motivation 😊

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Shreya
Edited by shelly_08 - 13 years ago
LILY111144 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
just lov ur M ND G,love the story plz updae it regularly ,i promise 2 commennt😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing dear, waiting for more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 9
nice part...
if only Geet knows what her evil bro is planning all the while...
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update dr,
loved it,
do continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome story... please update soon...
n add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
Woohoo..
Enjoyed it. Thanks Shreya
cant wait to read next
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb update...loved geet...and maan too...😉 do continue soon...😊

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