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Posted: 13 years ago


Thanks Afsha!😃

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Loved the update!! Can't wait to read more! Thanks for the PM!


Thanks dear! 😳



Thanks hun!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shalve

awesome update...loved it



Thanks dear!😃


Thanks Jaz!😃

Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii

Superb part!
thanks for the pm
sorry for the late comments but was unable to access the internet for a week


Thanks hun!😳


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: undisclosed

i enjoyed the update...i loved the way you described mel and maan playing😆...awww but then i felt bad that geet made mel sad when she had been so happy just a few minutes before...it looks like maan didn't like being called a stranger...i wonder what he will do😉

1. oh no!...why is geet mad at her parents still?😕...did they want her to abort?
2. hmmm i have no clue what vicky's past is about😳



Thanks!😳
Maan...well he is diabolical...he has his plans!😆

Good guess.!

Originally posted by: shalini01

please add me to your PM list, i love this FF.



Thanks Shalini!😳

Originally posted by: sweetanu2314

loved the update...do continue soon...do pm me when u update next pls...



Thanks Anu!😃

Originally posted by: anu_luv_maan

OH just love Vicky his personality is imposing ,quite and smart '..felt bad for maan when geet told mel not to play with him '''the last part maan-vicky's convo scene was amazing ''''



Thanks Anu! Vicky's character will come out more...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago


Thank you all because you guys are so so supportive and absolutely amazing. I am so sorry for being so slow...but with fasting, Eid and new placements it's been really hectic!

Anyways here is the long awaited update...hope you all enjoy!






Sliver and blue


Chapter 25: Walking Alone

Dear Iman,

I love you so much,

Yet you are away

But still I believe in you

My love won't let me lose faith.

Geet

PRESENT:

Maan stared at the file in front of him, trying to analyse the situation. He had glanced passed some parts, especially the medical files, instead focusing on the information about her social life. He had a better grip on Geet's past because of all this information but it was both a blessing and a curse. For he now understood that she had gone through enough hurdles to last a lifetime and they caused his heart to constrict with regret and remorse. There were many questions still in his mind but they could only be answered by her.

There was still the mystery of who was behind splitting them up. Maan couldn't wait to get his hand on the perpetrator and destroy the despicable creature. His Geet had gone through so much for that person and not to mention their unborn child.

Unborn child.

As usual those words brought a pang of pain in him. He had never aspired to be a father but had assumed it might happen in the future. But to see the devastation of the wisp of a dream was heart wrenching.

And then his mind would conjure up the image of Geet going through all this, breaking his heart all over again. He felt anger at himself for being helpless to stop all that had happened as well as guilt for not being there for the person he loved the most.

Despite everything he now knew what was important; getting back Geet. Revenge could wait, but he couldn't wait for her. He was thirsting for another chance with her. With Vicky's help he now had a clear picture of Geet's priorities and he was not above using them to gain her back.

So Maan Singh Khurana made a few phone calls, creating a net for Geet to be trapped in.

I am going to block all your roads, so that you can only come toward me. Only to me Geet!

PAST:

Geet looked around Dev's apartment without any emotions. They had all known that Dev was well off but still they were surprised to see how big his apartment was. Dev had always been secretive about his family and none of them had asked him because they didn't want to bring up a sensitive issue.

Dev took get to one of the guest bedrooms and Meera to the one to hers. Geet's room was so relaxing, with a light lilac colour and with a big window looking out on to the street. The bed looked inviting with the soft mattress and the numerous pillows but in Geet's eyes everything appeared dull. She was unable to see the beauty in anything, instead was wallowing the darkness within herself.

Geet wanted to thank Dev but he didn't let her say anything. Inside she was very grateful to all her friends for their support but she didn't know how to express any emotions. Instead she was left with a blank canvass for emotions.

Suddenly her phone started to buzz causing Geet to frantically reach for it. With shaking hands she held the phone and heart started to pound as she saw that it was from Iman.

With lighter heart she let a smile bloom on her face before she opened the message but just as quickly her happiness was wiped away.

Stop bothering me.

Her mind refused to accept that it was from him! Her Iman could never write anything like that to her, never!

She frantically texted him back but the replies got progressively worse and finally she got some photos that showed him with another woman.

No! He can't do that! He loves me!

Her heart battled with the small part that had doubts creeping in but valiantly she fought. However nothing could stop the oppressive pain that was building within her. Pain that was a result of the separation from her lover, her parents and essentially herself.

Feeling suffocated she felt the need to get away. So without a single word to any of her friends she walked out of the apartment and on to the road.

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Depression is not sadness nor is it despair but instead it is worse. It's the lack of hope, emotions or feelings. It's being in a pit without any light, or without any true reason to even get out of the pit. It was the darkness that engulfs you without any sense of direction.

Geet felt so cold, as if she was frozen from her core, both physically and emotionally. She didn't knowing how long she had been walking, neither did she understand where she was walking. Instead she had just let her feet carry her wherever it desired. There were so many people walking around her, yet she was all alone in her world of misery.

Trashy girl

Her mother's words revolved around Geet's mind, sinking in along with the texts she had received. First time in her life she felt unclean and impure. She who had never believed in such things had succumbed in her own case.

Yes I am responsible for all this! Mum and Dad were right. I deserve all this pain!

Before she knew it she was in front of a body of water. She didn't know or even care whether it was a lake, beach or a river. All she could see was the murky water in front of her.

Can I wash all the dirt away? Can I cleanse myself of the misery?

The water beckoned to her'asking her to embrace it in order to achieve redemption. She didn't know how but her feet started to carry her closer and closer to the water. She stared down at it, look at herself in a reflection that showed all her flaws.

Is this who I am? This murky reflection, darkened by the swirls of dirt.

How would it feel to immerse myself within these depths and let the darkness overtake this loneliness? How would it feel to drown away all these feelings? To submerge myself away from this world?

But just as she took the final step forward Iman's face flashed through her mind, bringing forth all the moments that had become her past, making her take a step back.

His face brought back some hope, for she still trusted him.

Geet how can you think of all the moments you have spent with him as lies? Such precious feelings and emotions cannot be fake nor can someone pretend such depth of love.

He asked for me to wait'.and wait I shall.

Because he is worth that. He is worth anything'and everything.

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At Dev's apartment the whole gang was panicking and worried about Geet. None of them wanted to bring up the fact that they were concerned whether she would do something drastic but it was in the back of all of their minds.

"I am sure she is fine." Meera tried to reassure everyone but failed to even convince herself. All she could see was the blank look on Geet's face the last time they had spoken.

"Maybe she just went for a walk." Dev made the inane comment even though it sounded stupid to himself. "She'll be back soon."

Rahul was pacing around the room, not even listening to others. He had always felt responsible for Geet as she was his baby sister and at this moment he felt like a failure. He had failed to understand that she had been in love and even this moment he should have been with her. "It's all my fault'I should have been with her." His voice clearly showed his guilt.

Naintara watched them all worry but she was the only one with a semblance of calm. Not because she wasn't worried but because in a way she had sense a kindred spirit in Geet. Both of them were fighters and she knew that Geet would not take any drastic action because she was smarter than that.

Seb on the other hand was already thinking of places that they would have to search for her. If anyone could find her it would be him because he understood where she would runaway better than anyone else. Still that didn't reassure him at the moment as he could only think of the worst case scenarios.

Lily on the other hand sat in silence. As a young pregnant woman herself, she tried to put herself in Geet's shoes. But she couldn't because her baby was connected to Rahul and their marriage was the very difference between the two pregnancies. She couldn't even contemplate rearing a child by herself without his support and that made her anxious to think of the turmoil her friend must be going through.

Slowly the front door of the apartment was opened. In a synchronised manner they all turned towards it and faced the person responsible for their worries.

They all stared at Geet in surprise, as this was the last thing they were expecting.

"Gi'Gi what happened?" Dev finally broke the awkward silence.

"I'I just thought it would be nice." She mumbled as she fingered her hair. Gone was the long tresses that reached her waist, instead she was left with hair that was hardly two inches long.

I wanted to change myself. Become someone else. Another Geet, so that I can face my own reflection without flinching.

She recalled the barber's horrified face as she told him to cut all her hair off. The poor man tried to tell her that she looked beautiful with her hair long but she didn't pay any attention. Instead she had taken a pair of scissors and started to snip it all off herself.

The barber than relented and tried to salvage the cut but had only managed to make it look less horrifying.

She looked at all the concerned faces staring at her and could finally feel some emotions. She felt guilt at putting them in this situation.

This time it was Seb who came forward. He cupped her face and gave a big smile. "I like the new look. We can all see your face better." He leaned forward to plant a kiss on her forward.

As if woken from trance they all came forward and gave fake reassurances of how nice her hair looked. Geet could see through all their lies but still found their warmth comforting.

But Naintara wasn't having any of that. "It looks terrible. You look like you have a dog on your head."

"Naina-" Dev tried to stop Naintara's blunt insult.

But she just ignored him. "Come to the bathroom and I'll fix it in a jiffy." With that she dragged a complacent Geet away. All the others followed quickly, anxious about what Naintara would say or do to Geet.

"Okay firstly just relax while I wet your hair." She lightly massaged Geet's head, making Geet feel more relaxed. "Hmmm'the barber must have been quite crap to do such a dodgy job."

"Umm..I cut it." Geet murmured.

While anyone else would have been embarrassed or at least repented, Naintara bulldozed ahead. "Well that explains it. That was a stupid thing to do'always let the professionals do their job. Now close your eyes while I get to work."

Geet just nodded and complied.

"So you are pregnant, eh? No, don't say anything. I need absolute silence!" Naintara admonished. "Back to the topic. The guy is a bas***d."

"No he isn't!" Geet protested, opening her eyes angrily.

"Calm down and close your eyes again." Naintara again scolded. "He is a bas***d but then again all men are like that. Give them a penny and they want the whole bank. But don't worry about it. It's not end of the world. The important thing is that you don't do stupid things like what you did today again."

This time Naina didn't say anything when Geet opened her eyes, instead just continued on. "All the people here were so worried about you. If you don't care about yourself, don't be selfish to put them through such worry again. They love you and would do anything for you. That's more than what many other people have."

All the others were surprised to see Geet nod to Naina. "You are right. I was being self-centred when I walked away without telling anyone."

"Just don't do that again." Naina said in a softer voice.

The others finally understood what Naina was doing. She unlike the others wasn't being gentle with Geet but instead was making Geet act normal. She in her own way was supporting Geet.

"Look. Now isn't this better!" Naina exclaimed as she finished. "This is more Audrey Hepburn, rather than a homeless person."

Geet giggled at Naina's comment. "Thanks Naintara."

"I would say anytime but honestly please don't get such a horrible cut ever again." She said with a smirk.

Seb watched her silently. Hmmm'maybe ice queen isn't so evil after all.

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PRESENT:

"Think of Naina and Dev. Naina and Dev." Geet mumbled to herself while trying to calm down her turbulent temper. She was reminding herself why she was here and for whom.

I can't leave now because that would hurt them. They deserve better than a friend abandoning them. After all the support they have given me, I can't ditch them at such an important point in their lives.

I have done nothing to be embarrassed about, so I shouldn't be the one to run away.And remember that nothing is ever solved by running away. Is that what I want to teach Mel?

Yet all she could see was Mel and Maan together.

Mel was both her weakness and strength. She was the foundation of Geet's life but she was also the only person that could cause such a reaction within Geet.

Well Maan as well, a traitorous part of her mind reminded Geet which she tried to ignore.

Suddenly her phone started to ring, breaking Geet's reverie.

"Hello Geet! It's Adam."

Geet quickly composed herself, so that she could talk calmly to her boss and teacher. "Hi Adam. How are you?"

"Good. I am calling to tell you the good news. We have a new investor for the heart clinic we were planning on opening!"

"Wow that's great!" This time Geet's interest was genuine.

Three things had driven Geet after Lily and Rahul's death; Meliara, her friends and her ambitions. She had wanted to prove herself to the world. She striven and worked hard to reach this point in her life and finally everything was falling to place.

"I know this means a lot to you." Adam Bing responded. As her mentor he had watched all her steps and had guided her. "This means a lot to both of us."

"Who is the investor?"

"Kapoor Alliance."


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Precap:

Kapoor Alliance meeting!

NEXT:

Chapter 26: Entrapment - Pg 122


AUTHOR's NOTE

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Edited by maan-ki-sanjana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Kapoor aliance - yeh bomb kahan se gira??
huh??😕

I'm actually loving ur Naintara - nothing feels better than being treated normally when ur in pain.

Sanju i loved it. It feels rather short tho - yeah I know paranoid me speaking.

And Is Maan behind these Kapoors or is it just some random threat on Maan's radar??

shall we get an update sooner??

love
Amru

p.s. - I missed Vicky - and Seb - oh wait - forgot to send them...sorry!! 😳
Edited by mechantefille - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

amru ki bacchi😡😡

moi second😭😭😭😭
koi gl nahi iwas busy with NPM😳😳
so i am not unhappy!
geets depression has ended?😕 i thot u wrote that she did try to commit suicide..and her frnds kno..was this it?😕😕😕
u kno i was imagining phoebe cutting monicas hair somehow...😆😆😆
kapoor as in sameera kapoor?? ya maan ka masterplan?
me missed my seb😡 and vicky😡 and mel😭😭
loved it😳
Edited by aashluvsmaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update must say NT is great in this FF
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOMEEE
i feel bad for Geet
but she's lucky she had her friends on her side
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
so is this new alliance maan's idea hmmm maybe...
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Posted: 13 years ago
@amru..i so knew u were gonna say that..roflll

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