MG FF:Limitless -Thread 2- - Page 22

Originally posted by: euphoric

Hi Sanjana😃

this has to be one of the best pieces of fiction i have read around😳

Kudos to u girl👏

Sonia thanks so so so much for the lovely comment😳
Firstly can I say that I really love your FF Ripped Apart...It's a brilliant story...

The past of Maan and geet or Iman and Belle was no less than a fairy tale tht u made us live in this real world... thnk you so much for putting it through so impeccably tht i has a dreamy and drooling face all the while as i read thru their love story😃

Belle was fun... places where her conversation drifted to cannibals in Africa was hilarious😆😆😆 I am imagining Maan's face in tht all the while... the ballroom dancing and the evening dress atmosphere u build... u certainly reminded me of the cinderella ball😳

Awww I am glad that you enjoyed Iman and Belle's story...I did aim to make it seem like a fairytale...An other worldly love...
LOL the cannibal part was purely me 😆 I am a weird person...studying med does that to you!

I love the suave and graceful moments... and ballroom dance is something tht has all the dreamy stance to it... they would make the most handsome pair dancing around the tunes to the soft music while people would look as they turn and swirl😍 oh ok... too much dancing got in here😆 all in all everything about it was perfect... from their first meeting to be friends... their confession... their love story,... and ofcourse the love making... well tht as well was sensuous and dreamy☺️... thy knew they needed each other to stay on and they knew wht they meant to each other... the trust they had come to build in each other despite being oblivious to each other's identities was certainly commendable... this is wht fairytales r made up of😍

The reasons I added the dancing parts are that all fairy tales need dancing and because GURTI dance so well that I can easily picture them in the scenes. The whole aspect of them not knowing each others identities was essential to the story but also because I think a person's name or job doesn't make them who they are...at times they can act to stop us from really knowing a person.

and then the inevitable... the separation all the bonds have to be tested against the scale of time and space... thts wht came in

Oh! what a despicable father and a sorry excxuse of a man😡🤢 can't believe for money he ruthlessly destroyed his own son's happiness! Poor Maan... really sorry for him😭

It would have been so difficult for Geet... she lost her love... her family and thot she was shunned by the man she gave her everything to no wonder she lost faith in him... and his love... and then she lost her baby too... tht was enuf to cripple a giant rock and Geet... she was a fragile being... tht was heart wrenching😭

Yes the separation was necessary because in reality there are always people who destroy or try to destroy other people's lives...
Geet has lost faith in Maan/Iman but more importantly she has lost faith in love and what it entails...so even if she does find the truth whether she can move on is a different story...If the story was just Iman leaving her, she would continue to love him but when people died she couldn't.

*editted*

Meliara has to be the cutest kid around... i love her... thanks for Meliara she had a purpose in life to carry on and thanks to the group pf her friends who stood by her side and motivated her to keep afront... wonderful portrayal there👏

Ok i love Seb... strike where it hurts the most... the guy has kept to word😆 he knows how needs to aquire what he wants... he's a wonderful guy... ready to marry a friend just for the sake of her happiness and the child😃 not many Seb roam around on this planet... but i know a few does😳 amazing human being and an amazing friend👍🏼

Awww...thanks for loving Mel...she is based on my favorite person! So I had to give her the best scenes! Seb is also based on someone close to me...I really believe in friendship...its such a pure thing...True friends will always help, through thick and thin...😃

I really fell sorry for both Maan and Geet... he has met her 3 yrs later... knows someone messed up their relationship but has no clue how to get to her... she's too hurt right now to listen to him... she doesn't believe him for she had been presented a wrong and a false image of him... she was made to believe tht her Iman was a cheater... a guy who used her and left her on the contrary he's desperate to reach her... to make her see her view point... but alas she has fortified herself

Oh yea... how do i forget the lost child wht else was left to kill her insides tht was hard... a fairytale was turned to a nightmare

Yes the death of her baby totally scarred her...there is no greater tragedy then losing a child...that part was very difficult to write...yet I have worse scenes coming up...so better gear my self 😕

hmm... interested would be now to see how Seb gets Maan and Geet together... Did i say i like Naintara here😳 for once she's working in favour of Maaneet😛

LOL My Dev and NT are very different from the show...

Oh i love the J maan😆... who wouldn't... right? tht punch was solid... wondering did poor Seb lose a couple of teeth there😆

HHAHAHHAA...don't worry even a punch won't stop Seb...he'll continue on with his mission...with or without teeth! 😆

All in all a great read...Loved it totally😃

Oopss this really got long😆

Again thanks for the lovely comment! 😃

Love,

Sonia

Originally posted by: Dilsay

Thanks for the update...

loved Maan's punch hheee ...so he did become jealous...

wondering how Geet would react if same goes with Maan ...

update soon

Originally posted by: MaaneetLuverr

Awesome update::
Grrr that virender is such a b******,,,and that sameera is such a cheap that she'll du anything for s**
awww luv naano and geet talks
Haha seb was jus funny wen he was makin maan jealous but he had no clue wat was coming to him,,poor guy
Nice precaps x
Is the new entry vicky?
Have fun on your journey...
Cont soon Xx...
thx 4 the PM

Originally posted by: Lip-a-Licious

fabulous update Sanjana... ⭐️
will Vicky be in the next update????

Originally posted by: angili

Sanjana when you will update I am missing this ff please update solo please

Originally posted by: -dia-

Sameera is such a 🤬 & VSK is another @#$%^&🤬

Disgusting ...can they stoop lower than this??? I think they can😡

GAWD ...I was ROFL all over the Maan - Seb Convo🤣

loving 'J' Maan ...was so cute ...Poor Seb😆

wonderful update!!!

loved it ...awesome!!!

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

Originally posted by: Vidushi89

Awesome dear...loved seb...n maan gave him a punch...ha ha ha...

Thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: drashsree100

Sam & VSK was in this together ... 2 🤬 🤬 in the same dirty game 😡😡

But Nonna & Seb knew about Geet's condition ; her parents' part was really . Felt bad for Geet .

Seb is such a tease 😈 😆

I only hope Maan does not hit Seb much.

Superb update 👍🏼

Thanks for pm ...

Originally posted by: Ilovemsk

Ossum
Can't wait for the next one!

Originally posted by: spvd

part 20
past
Belle is missing Iman so badly and is also feeling guilty that he couldnt say her feelings or love to her family...
Maan's procrastination is not gonna help him at all...
oh VSK and Sameera...chi disgusting...

present
honestly, is Seb planning to die in the hands of Maan badly?
oh no hes like trying to irritate the lion in its den...
an imbecile really...
Maan is too possessive of his Geet...
he will never tolerate any guy looking at her let alone touching her...
cont ASAP dear...
wanna read more on the present...

Originally posted by: vrsharma

poor maan,

going through so much torture

Originally posted by: azee11

nice update!!! this vindaer & sameera are such🤬

enjoyed Seb & Maan meeting

Luv

TC

Atiffa

Originally posted by: wajiha-1

fab