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Anupama

@beforesunrise

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#201

this was so awesum 👏 da way seb tortured maan 😆 ...nd the punch OOps now I think seb is sure how much he loves geet 😆

well I think new entry cud be sameera 🥱

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#202

Seb ne aa baeal (cow) mujh maar(hit) kiya

Man he jus crossed his limits in torturing Maan

Hop Maan zyada na pite warna toh Seb gaya hahahaha

Loved all the monets

Nonna n Geet's relation was fab

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bobbydoll

@bobbydoll

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#203

Lovely update eagerly waiting for next update

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ixiaa

@ixiaa

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#204

Sanjana i had planned to write a long comment after reading the update but the comment in the end has shocked me.

Ok here is the bad news...I am going to go overseas soon...so possibly one update before I leave...once I am gone I don't know how frequently I'll update because I am only taking my I-pad but hopefully I will! 😃

My only request plz give an ending to the story if u r not sure about updating next... Plz do not keep us lurch n hanging...end the ff if it is not possible for u 2 update...Plz it my humble req. as i will absolutely hate it if such a good story is left incomplete with out a ending.

😭😭😭

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#205

Awesome update
lobed it loadz
can't wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da PM
muahhh
xxx

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#206

hiii

awesome update

loved it

glad meera is also helping them

love seb

loved seb teasing maan

can't wait 4 more

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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shreya

@.Lilith.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#207

OMG...U had me goin all🤣🤣🤣 with the last part!!!!

This seb is a darling😳...geet can have her maan...so she can giv seb 2 me😍

FAB update sanjana...like always

So sameera too was involved...what a brainless bimbo!!!!

She actually bought VSK's ''I-will-marry-u-if-u-do-this-for-me'' crap????

Cont soon

Thanx 4 PM

Love

Shreya

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Sanjana

@maan-ki-sanjana

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: mechantefille
ME first!!!!! Finally!!

Am toh so hooked on to this FF naa ki bas!!

Sameera of course!!! She's the new entry right?? If not then who? Vicky??

OMG Sanjana...I love Seb - the best character you've created.

And the way he tortures Maan - bechaara - to think Maan had no clue what she went through...I hurt for Geet - i truly do!!

And if Sameera tries so much as t obarge in the middle, I shall punch her face just as Maan did!!

Loved it and waiting for more eagerly!

First of all welcome to the FF!! Thanks for the lovely comment...glad that you are enjoying 😳
LOL I won't say who the new entry is yet...but maybe you are right 😉...LOL Seb is a special character for me, so really glad you love him! He loved torturing Maan!

Originally posted by: sam_princess
nicee update dear

Thanks yaar!😃

Originally posted by: rupzloveu
awesomeee

Thanks dear! 😃

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Sanjana

@maan-ki-sanjana

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: angili
this is amazing while i was rtreading seb mann convo i was laughingand waiting for the punch i was like and hi take the lappy with you please we woulnt sservive without the updates please update frequently pleaseseb tum toh gaya beta

Thanks dear 😳 LOL I think even Seb knew that the punch was coming 😆
Don't worry I'll definitely try to update...can't promise...but will try my best 😃

Originally posted by: paponecon
ooh how disgusting woman the sameera was!!!!!!!!!chiii...

"Oh we are very close." Seb said in a suggestive tone that had Maan gritting his teeth. "I was the first guy to sleep in her bed and even her first kiss."😡

"Why as kids we even had baths together." Seb continued to taunt Maan, even though Naintara was making signals for him to stop. She looked panicked, scared that Maan was losing control, but Seb was having too much fun. He was twisting everything; Geet and him just shared a kiddy pool when they were 4, hardly threatening but Maan didn't need to know that. "Though I've to say that I had no idea that she would turn out so'so hot. She has one smoking body. I wouldn't mind-"😆

But Maan had heard enough.

"You ass*****" He shouted while jumping off the chair and punching Seb right on the face.👍🏼👏

u r just too good...🤗

Thanks dear!!! LOL it was a fun scene to write...Seb is a character with whom I can have fun😆
Sameera...well you'll find out more about her...but she is a character with many shades...

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euphoric

@euphoric

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#210

Hi Sanjana😃

this has to be one of the best pieces of fiction i have read around😳

Kudos to u girl👏👏👏👏👏👏

The past of Maan and geet or Iman and Belle was no less than a fairy tale tht u made us live in this real world... thnk you so much for putting it through so impeccably tht i has a dreamy and drooling face all the while as i read thru their love story😃

Belle was fun... places where her conversation drifted to cannibals in Africa was hilarious😆😆😆 I am imagining Maan's face in tht all the while... the ballroom dancing and the evening dress atmosphere u build... u certainly reminded me of the cinderella ball😳

I love the suave and graceful moments... and ballroom dance is something tht has all the dreamy stance to it... they would make the most handsome pair dancing around the tunes to the soft music while people would look as they turn and swirl😍 oh ok... too much dancing got in here😆 all in all everything about it was perfect... from their first meeting to be friends... their confession... their love story,... and ofcourse the love making... well tht as well was sensuous and dreamy☺️... thy knew they needed each other to stay on and they knew wht they meant to each other... the trust they had come to build in each other despite being oblivious to each other's identities was certainly commendable... this is wht fairytales r made up of😍

and then the inevitable... the separation all the bonds have to be tested against the scale of time and space... thts wht came in

Oh! what a despicable father and a sorry excxuse of a man😡🤢 can't believe for money he ruthlessly destroyed his own son's happiness! Poor Maan... really sorry for him😭

It would have been so difficult for Geet... she lost her love... her family and thot she was shunned by the man she gave her everything to no wonder she lost faith in him... and his love... and then she lost her baby too... tht was enuf to cripple a giant rock and Geet... she was a fragile being... tht was heart wrenching😭

*editted*

Meliara has to be the cutest kid around... i love her... thanks for Meliara she had a purpose in life to carry on and thanks to the group pf her friends who stood by her side and motivated her to keep afront... wonderful portrayal there😳👏👏👏

Ok i love Seb... strike where it hurts the most... the guy has kept to word😆 he knows how needs to aquire what he wants... he's a wonderful guy... ready to marry a friend just for the sake of her happiness and the child😃 not many Seb roam around on this planet... but i know a few does😳 amazing human being and an amazing friend👍🏼

I really fell sorry for both Maan and Geet... he has met her 3 yrs later... knows someone messed up their relationship but has no clue how to get to her... she's too hurt right now to listen to him... she doesn't believe him for she had been presented a wrong and a false image of him... she was made to believe tht her Iman was a cheater... a guy who used her and left her on the contrary he's desperate to reach her... to make her see her view point... but alas she has fortified herself

Oh yea... how do i forget the lost child wht else was left to kill her insides tht was hard... a fairytale was turned to a nightmare

hmm... interested would be now to see how Seb gets Maan and Geet together... Did i say i like Naintara here😳 for once she's working in favour of Maaneet😛

Oh i love the J maan😆... who wouldn't... right? tht punch was solid... wondering did poor Seb lose a couple of teeth there😆

All in all a great read...Loved it totally😃

Oopss this really got long😆

Love,

Sonia

Edited by euphoric - 14 years ago