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Posted: 14 years ago

~Enigma~
part 64





Geet "I am perfectly fine!" she stamps on her foot and sits in the car... Maan just smiles way... He loved her little fake anger...

Rajji rik & rus stood there shocked. Was there mum really there? Or they hallucinating. Rik and rus was the first one to run and hug her whole rajji came slowly... She was angry, very angry... She have seen what have her sister done to keep them safe. Rano smiles... "see I kept my promise. I am back before your birthday... Rajji did not say a word when she ran off!

Geet walks in flowed by maan. Rano stood there confused, both twins ran towards maan for there gift while geet fuming as he takes one gift after another from maans hand...
Rik with evil smirk "mammaa is here, you can't say anything now!" maan almost laughed... Oh how much he likes this geet now... He can take her anywhere, without worry.
Maan "I was thinking why don't we go out today!" he smirks... Geet stood there arm crossed tapping her shoe.
Geet "you can go out with my shoe!" she snaps and walks off... Maan rolled his eyes, nakra! Both failed to realize Ranos misery. Maan flowed geet in her room...
Maan "where shall I reserve our place?"
Geet "I have told you! I am not going..."
Maan "how about disco?"
Geet "I am not going! Go way!"
Maan "yes disco it is! Be ready at 9!"
Geet turns round to shout but he already disappeared... It's 5am... She instantly slammed her body on bed and off to sleep...

A big alarm woke maan up... 4pm... How long he have been sleeping? He sat up, stretched him self... Trying to remember his room again... Then he remembers they are going disco tonight... Maan smiles... Let's see how you refuse this time...

Geet in her room sat in front of the telly with a big bowl of fruits... With every bite she was repeating to her self, she is not going, she is not going, she is not going! Her life went upside down when he walked in! From the first day, first meeting untill now, he have left no stone to make my life hell! Pure 4 months of hell. Her phone beeps. It's a tex! No other then the nautanki maan sing khurana! Then there comes the ring... "boliye?"
Maan "I rang to remind you!"
Geet "yes, remind me what exactly?"
Maan "something starts with D!"
Geet "Dust danav!"
Maan "yes, you have thought perfectly correct, dust danav ki sath disco pe jana hi!"
Geet "ham nahi ane wale!"
Maan "maan khurana ko na karke dekho to!"
Geet "no! I am not coming!"
Maan "be ready other wise i will take you in your teddy bear nightdress!" she makes a face. Looking at her nightdress... What's wrong with her nightdress?

She snaps at the phone and stands up. She have no intention to go, only this morning she just came back from France! Geet stands in front of the mirror! Hand on her waist... "tell me who goes to disco after a almost 10 hours flight! Tell me?" she makes a baby face... Suddenly a voice makes hr jump... "shall I help?" she was about to spin round when maan hugs her from the back. Holding her tight... Maan rests his chin on her shoulder... Cheek to cheek... "shall I help?"
Geet "I don't need any help..." geet looks down with a sigh smile...
Maan "I can clearly see you do!"
Geet "can you get out! I need to change..." maan gives her a angry glare! Telling maan sing khurana to get out!"
Geet "please..." she makes a baby face
Maan "you stay naked whole night on my bed... You never have problem then!" geet went pink in embarrassment! Couldn't he brought out this conversation any other time! Uff... She looks everywhere then his eyes, which was full of miscivious idea...
maan "shall I continue the list how beshram you are?" that broke geets little embracing moment and the hot flash!
Geet "what do you mean I am beshram?" she spines round in his embrase and tries to push him way...
Maan "list- changing cloths right infront of me... Then..." before maan could say another word geet rests her finger on his lips... "au private bathe hi!" she smiles... There was a odd silent like those word had completely different meaning then it suppose to... Maan gently gives her finger some kiss... "ayisy... Come to think of it... I haven't seen anything of yours... She mocks... I want to see!" se tries to open his shirt... But maan backs way... Her finger was tickling him... "what are you doing?"
Geet "are! I have to if you are good enough for me?" her finger travels down to his trouser... Maan jumps on her bed... "geet what are you doing?"
Geet "I have to see!" she started to tickle him further...
Maan "stop it geet!"
Geet "hame dekna hi!" she burst out in laugh, still chasing him...


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Posted: 14 years ago
I m sorry for pooor maabn!! he has to deal with besharam geet!! may allah be with him!!
waiting for next update!!
Edited by Shimmerr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update!
Hope dey wl confesa dere love soon...
Update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hay rabba geet toh naughty hogaee...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved da upadat e
do continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awsum update...
Maaneet moment at the end was awsum...
Luvd da naughty geet...
Eagerly waitin for da next update..disco disco...
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Posted: 14 years ago
geeet...beware ...u r dealing with maan singh khurana...plan back fire honae ka poora chance hai😆...do continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
🤣oh god i loved it a lot🤣🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lol
Last part I was laughing so much, uff you are to good.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awe... poor Maan... ab koi bachaye maan ko geet se... awesome update...

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