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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#381

Geet : wo maan new ice cream parlour khula tha. To socha kyun na wha jake dekha jaye.
Maan : what ?
Dekha jaye ya
Geet : maan, to kya hua
Maan : geet you are not kid
Geet : kya masti bs kid karte hai
Mujhe to lagta hai. Aap abhi se bude (old ) ho gye hai.
He babaji, apne acha kiya mujhe phle hi bta diya. Nhi to mein kaha ek old man ke chakkar me fs jati.
She hidely smiles.
Maan : geeettt
Geet (she sweetly said ) : maan , mera naam geet hai mujhe pata hai.
She slides her hand around his neck.
Maan : geet
Geet : sshhh
Maan apko darr lag rha h
Maan : geet ,ye office h
Geet : to maan
Flashback

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sakshi

@tanvi04

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#382

superb awsome loved continue soon

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#383

Yash : geet
(Ye kha kho gyi)
Geet
G : ha maan
Y :oh ho
Jagti aankho se apne piya ji ke sapne
G : yash ye sb
Y : haye, kya pyaar hai
G :apni filmi style bnd kar
Y : ab unka aur koi naam bi le ye bi gawara nhi
Wah "maan "
Sorry maine apke unka naam liya, khi apko bura to nhi laga
G : ab tune bakwas band nhi ki to,
Mein tera kya haal karungi, ye mujhe bi nhi pata
Samjha.
At other side
Maan (aaj bi utna hi gussa h, aur whi narazgi jo phli mulaqat me thi)
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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#384

Maan (ab to tumhe sorry khna hi hoga, mujhe miss
Whatever jo bi ho )
Precap :
Flashback continue

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sakshi

@tanvi04

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#385

waiting eagerly just awsome n i m first to comment to happy fot that alsocontinue soon

Edited by sakshi04 - 13 years ago

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#386

Frnds mobile se update dene ki wajah se @ pm nhi kr pa rhi hu.
@plz click like buttn. If you like it. And @do comment

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erumzaheer

@erumzaheer

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#387

yaar nice one but plz stop this flash back n present confusion

continue soon and move the story to present only as soon as possible

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#388

wow!!!!!!!

present n past ki story ko bahut achhe se lekar chal rhi ho tum

love dis combination

well done

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#389

@erumzaheer. Bina past ke aage yani future situation & present samajh nhi ayenga

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#390

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4 Pming Me...😛

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updates.👏👏👏..

me dear...😃..

really dear..😛

lots of hugs n kisses 4 u...🤗...

lov,❤️

Tama

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