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Posted: 19 years ago
hey.............continue yur story................and since today is valentines day, why dont u rite a romantic part........
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Posted: 19 years ago

recap: angad and kripa get on the plane for london. kripa is nervous about meeting his family but angad helps her calm down by telling her more about his family.

next part:

the plane lands and angad and kripa step into the london airport. when they get out of the airport, they see naina waiting for them outside the airport. she hurries and hugs angad and looks at kripa and just smiles artificially. then they get into the car and leave to go to angad's house.

As the car arrives at the Khanna Mansion, the large gates open to welcome Angad and Kripa to the big and beautiful palace. Kripa looks at angad and smiles nervously. angad notices this adn puts his arm around kripa to make her feel more comfortable. she looks up at him and rests her head on his shoulder as the car is driven to the huge parking lot with more than 10 cars.

K(whispering to angad): wow angad...you never told me you were so rich.............

A: i didnt think it was important

kripa smiles and rests her head on his shoulder as he brushes her hair with his fingers. She was surprised that angad belonged to such a prestigious family in london. he had never mentioned much about his life in london. he always talked about his family but his past was still a big secret for kripa. she had a million questions to ask angad but she had to wait until later.

when they entered the house, kripa couldnt help but notice how beautiful the interior of the house was.

K: oh my god angad....the interior is beautiful. who did it?

A: well...........my sis...remember aaliyah?

K: oh really? wow! she's awesome. she did this all by h erself?

A: yup....well she wanted to become an interior designer and I thought that this would be her perfect first assignment so i let her do our house. and she turned out to be ver talented in all this stuff.

K: no kidding! where is she by the way?

angad looked around but aaliyah was nowhere. he also asked his mom but she didnt know either. the Khanna Mansion was so huge that no one knew who was where in the house. Angad went to the phone and dialed a number and talked to someone lovingly. kripa just looked at him. after a while, he hung up the phone and went to kripa.

A: she said she's coming downstairs....

K: she?....u mean aaliya?

A: no i mean my mom! ofcourse i mean aaliya...she'll be here in a minute. she sounded exited to meet you.

Kripa smiles and held angads hand as she grew wven more nervous. Now it was time to impress angad's family. ...everyone......his dad, his sister, his brother......and daadi.. because she knew that if daadi disliked her, then angad would leave her just for his daadi. as she was lost in her thoughts, she saw a young girl walk down the stairs. kripa turned slightly to get a good look at her. She knew it was Aaliya. she was exactly how angad described her...beautiful,petite, smiling, intellectual....she looked so much like she was angad's sister.

K: Hi!

(aaliya = aa)

aa: hi...um kripa right?

K: yeah.....kripa, kripa sharma. and you have to be aaliya.....youre just like angad described you!

aa: and what did angad say about me?

K: that you are the most beautiful sister and the best friend that one could have

Aaliyah held her hand in front of kripa to gesture a hand shake and kripa adn aaliyah became fast friends. Then walked in angad's dad, Dilip Khanna, He seemed to be this uptight rich businessman who never cared about anything but his work. as he walked in through the door, kripa looked up tensed. angad went and stood next to kripa. Dilip saw angad and a smile came accross his face. he went and hugged his son and kripa just kept looking at the bond that angad and his dad shared. tehn dilip took a quick glance at kripa and then he looked at anfad. Angad nodded his head as if he wanted to say that kripa was his love and the future daughter-in-law of the khanna family. Dilip then looked at kripa and went up to her.. Kripa smiled nervously and said her hello to dilip. Then a smile crossed his face again, a smile that was comforting and full of affection. kripa got more relaxed and then took his blessings. He didnt seem as bad as his appearance made him look. She knew that he was a great friend, philosopher, and guide.

But then suddenly, Kartick walked in behind angad's dad a few minutes later. As is it was a natural reflex, angad's arm quickly wrapped around kripa's shoulder as in to protect her from kartick. But all kartick did was look at kripa and angad and then he left to go upstairs.. kripa was pretty shocked to see his behavior. at first she thought that what angad had said about kartick hating him wasnt really true. but after seeing all this, she was sure that he hated angad, or else why would someone act like this when his own younger brother brought home his bride-to-be? As these questions bothered kripa, angad tapped her shoulder and she looked at him.

A: so how are you doing so far?

K: im fine....but kartick? what just happened?

A: oh.................forget him....you still have to meet daadi, remember?

K: oh yes, ofcourse. where is she?

A: come with me.................

angad grapped her hand and walked accross the living room into a hallway that led to another room. As they entered the room, kripa notived tha t the room was extremely clean. she knew it had to be angad's daadi's room. angad could not have been that clean. She looked around to see pictures of a woman with angad's family and then pics of her with a cute young boy.

K: angad.....who is this little kid here. he's so cute.

A: uh..kripa.......its me.

K: you? oh my god...you used to be so adorable, what happened as you grew up?

A: hey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

K: im just kidding.........

K(putting her arms around his shoulder): Have i ever told you how amazingly hot you look?

A: let me think......hmmmmm.......no, i think you kinda missed that part!

Kripa smiled and kissed angad's cheek and then hugged her. but as she hugged him, she heard a noise, like someone was coughing deliberately. they both turned around to see angad's daadi standing in the door way looking at them hugging. kripa immediately let go of angad and angad just kept looking at daadi.

A:daadi............

angad hurried upto her and hugged her. he hadnt seen her for over a year. she was his best frnd.

A: daadi.....i want you to meet someone.........this is kripa.......your, your bahu

Da(looked at kripa and then looked at angad): kripa?

A: yes daadi............

daadi went upto kripa and kripa bent down to get her blessings. she placed her hand on kripa's head and wished her the best. kripa got up to face daadi and looked at the love in her eyes. She immediately knew why angad loved her so much. just by looking at her, she could tell that she was full of wisdom and love. kripa immediately hugged her and broke down into tears.

Da: arre kripa....kya hua?

K: kya mein aapko daadi bula sakti hu?

D: ofcourse beta.....tum bhi to meri beti ho.

Kripa hugged daadi for a few more moments and then she looked at daadi again.After talking for a few minutes, kripa, daadi, adn angad go to the living room where the whole family is waiting for kripa and angad. Angad once again gives a formal introduction of kripa as the love of his life and his fiance. Everyone congratulated then again, except kartick who just looked at them enviously.

After talking to kripa for a few minutes, Dilip suggested that kripa should go unpack as she must be tired. When kripa asked for what room to put her luggage in, everyone smiled. A confused kripa just looked at everyone, not knowing what she was doing wrong. Then Aaliyah got up and told kripa that she would be living in Angad's room as they are going to get married soon. Kripa was extrememly shocked to hear this.. How could she and angad stay in the same room? They werent married. If her parents would have heard about this, they would have been outraged. She didnt know what to think.How could angad's parents have no problem with this? didnt they think this was wrong? ofcourse kripa didnt mind. she had done way more than just share a room with angad. but what shocked about was that angad's parents didnt mind them living together before getting married. She turned to daadi, who looked like she was mad but didnt want to do anything about it.

Then suddenly, aaliya snapped her fingers in front of kripa that brought her out of her trance. Kripa looked at aaliyah who was smiling and then called the servant to bring up kripa's luggage. Kripa didnt say anything. Only because she was still shocked. what if her parents found out? they would be outraged. But all kripa could do was whatever she could do to impress his family. she just followed aaliya to angad's room.

coming up: kripa finds something while cleaning angad's room.

ok thats it for today.. yeah i know today is valentines day but i cant write a romantic part coz it wont really go with the story. and plus, its not valentines day in this story so i cant rite a romantic part. i know this part was pretty boring......no intense scenes between kripa and angad. but i promise that the next few parts will make up for it............

KEEP LEAVING COMMENTS...................................

love,

Rani

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Posted: 19 years ago
wow that was an excelent part!!
i wounder wat agands top secret is!!!?!?!?
well coninue soon!!
lots of luv and sugar
Hina
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part
is she going to find out that angad loved some other girl before her lol 😆
cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: karismic_angel

aww, tht was reely good.

thanx for the sweet comments once again. if you guys are wondering what angad's top secret is...keep guessing....maybe you guys can guess.

so keep leaving comments. i dont know when im gonna continue. maybe today, but if i cant...then definitely tomorrow.

😊😛😊

Love,

Rani

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Posted: 19 years ago

recap: angads family tell kripa that she will be staying in angad's room as they are gonna get married soon. but kripa is shocked after seeing how modern angad's family is.

next part:

kripa is unpacking her luggage in angad's room, still not able to overcome the shock of the forwardness of angad's family. in her house, she was lucky enough to get a room next to angad. as she unpaced, she saw angad quickly throw all his clothes into his closet.

K:angad????? yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?

A: what?

K: why are you just shoving all your stuff into your closet? such a mess!

A:(smiling) kripa....this is just how i am. i cant keep things clean and you get used to this coz after marriage, ur gonna be doing all this stuff for me.

K(coming closer to him): oh really?

A:yup...i mean....its always the wife's job to do the cleaning for her man...

K:(hits him again): you guys....all of you are so.....aarrrggghhh!!

A: ok maybe im like that....par yeh baki sab kaun hain?

kripa smiles and starts hitting him again and he gets hold of her hand and pulls her into his arms. and slightly moves in to kiss her but kripa turns her face.

A:(surprised): whats wrong?

K: angad koi aa jayega...i mean....daadi ya phir aaliya....

A: so what? what do we hav to hide? we're gonna get married. we're in love.....and its completely normal for two people in love to kiss

K: i know that angad...but....i feel awkward in front of your family already. i dont want to feel even more embarrased. i mean if my parents saw us like this, they'll kill me.

A:(smiles and hugs kripa): oh kripa....my family doesnt care. they have been living here for more than 25 years now. i dont think they care.

K: but dont you think thats weird? i mean......dont you want your parents to care?

A: oh kripa.....its ok. everyone here has their own life. no one is bothered about someone else's life. and my family is no different.

K: but angad...........

A: kripa....if we keep talking, then this is never gonna end.

he holds her by the shoulders and makes her sit on the bed.

A: Look! both of us have grown up in different countries, different cultures, different type of family, basically everything was different for both of us. But i think the love that we have....its enough for us to feel like we are the same person, with two bodies but one soul. so i dont think that this shud be an issue between us..

Kripa nods her head in understanding.

A: so guess what youre gonna do now?

K: take a shower?

A: nooooooo.....guess again

K: clean ur room!

A: no thats tomorrow....last chance

K: I dont know...you tell me

A: kiss me!

Angad grabs her and pushes her on the bed. there's a small scream from her as she is surprised by angad.they fell on the bed and angad kisses her passionately with kripa giving him back the same.

ok i know this was really short but this is all the time i had to rite the next part. tomorrow is gonna be a big part...maybe 2 parts.

so just have patience

love,

rani

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Posted: 19 years ago

Recap: kripa is still feeling weird about saying in the same room with angad but he convinces her to think otherwise.

Next part:

After taking a shower, kripa came out of the bathroom while angad was sitting on his bed reading something. When he sees er, he cant get her eyes off her because of how gorgeous she looks with her wet hair on her face. As she tried her hair with a towel, Angad was even more attracted towards her, automatically getting up and wrapping his arms around her waist. Kripa just looks at him and tries to get away.

K: let me go angad.. koi aa jayega

A: ghar mein koi nahi hai

K: i have work to do

A: work? but u just cam here. what work do you have?

K: i hav a lot...i have to unpack the rest of my stuff, i hav to clean this room up, i hav to unpack ur stuff., i hav to.........

A: ok ok.....can you plzzzzzzzzzz do it tomorrow? lets go out for a drive ro something.

K: no. i hav to finish this. we'll go tomorrow.

kripa pushes him slightly and carried on trying to fix the room. Then suddenly angad hugs her again, but she pushes him agin. When she turns around as is beginning to start cleaning, she turns around when she hears angad's voice.

A:

koi nahi hai kamre mein

kya haseen mila hai pal

aaj shararat karne do

kaam baaki karenge kal

Kripa starts singing again as angad gets closer to her and she pushes him on the bed

K:

jao baba jao

aise na behkao

hosh mein aa jao

pagal na bano tum

A:

dilbar shikdum

dilbar shikdum

dilbar shikdum

dilbar shikdum

A:

khidkiyan kahe parde ghirado

iss tarah se na mujhko saza do

K:

chod do mujhe

jaane bhi do na

hai kasam tumhe

yu zidd karo na

A:

Kaisi yeh majboori

kis liye hai doori

K:

ho bade deewane

hai mujhko yeh maloom

A:

dilbar shikdum

dilbar shikdum

dilbar shikdum

dilbar shikdum

they have a playful fight again and kripa pushes him off agian. this time angad gets annoyed. looking at him, kripa just smiles. looking at her smile, angad turns around

A:

Na sathao tum yun muskurake

chum lo sanam baho mein aake

K: chalo chalo

haari mein haari

maan li sabhi

baatein tumhari

Hearing all this, angad gets hopeful again

A: baaton hi baaton mein

pal guzar na jae

K: aao ik duje mein

ho jaye kahi gum

A:

dilbar shikdum

dilbar shikdum

dilbar shikdum

dilbar shikdum

Then kripa triesto play hard to get again and this time angad is really annoyed acts like he doesnt want her nemore. kripa is shocked and tries to pacify him. she hugs him from behind

K:

koi nahi hai kamre mein

kya haseen mila hai pal

aaj shararat karne do

kaam baaki karenge kal

A:

jao baba jao

aise na behkao

hosh mein aa jao

pagal na bano tum

Kripa kisses him and there is a long pause. They just look at each other and start singing again as they smile.

both:

dilbar shikdum

dilbar shikdum

dilbar shikdum

dilbar shikdum

angad gets hold of kripa again and kisses her neck and shoulder. Her hands are digging into his neck. and the scene focuses on the moon outside the bedroom window.

ok this is the last part for today. i felt bad for riting a short part earlier. so here is the last one for today. tomorrow is the big part (s)....ko keep reading and keep leaving those comments.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

love,

rani

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Posted: 19 years ago
that was awesome! i luved the last 2 parts! Rly they were great! Cont. soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
wowwwwwwwww
nice parts!!!!
awesome!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
aww tht was sweet! i luv tht song esp abhi n angad - cud imagine him singing n dancin 2 tht...lol.. 😳

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