Kya yahin pyar hai LAST PRT P. 180/ 183!! - Page 102

aww your ending it... i'm gonna miss it. but looking forward to the ending. can't wait...

awwwwwwwwww what last part..... 😭 anyways..But I will say that u r a very very very good writer.....

Originally posted by: Shahrambaa

aww your ending it... i'm gonna miss it. but looking forward to the ending. can't wait...

you better be...hhaha no jk. yes it will be the last part and i feel bad too but before i get some evil ideas i need to end it.

luv rani

hey rani!!! how are you? did your finals finish? if so how did they go? im sure u did great...anyway continue soon...im so sad thiss fanfic will soon end

Originally posted by: desiigirl19

ok im really sorry for not writing earlier but i have been so busy that its not even funny. i promise to write the next part before the next weekend. THE NEXT PART IS THE LAST PART. i kinda feel sad coz i have been writing this for the past like 6 months and now its gonna end. :(
anyway. next part will be up soon. i am half way done with typing it up. i want to make it perfect and effective so it mite take a little time so have some patience :D

luv rani

wat???😲 . u r ending the ff 😭 and the next part is gonna be the last part😭. i am gonna miss this ff.😭

Hey,
I will surely miss this fan fic. It has been one of the fantastic ones i've read. Good Luck with last part. Can't wait for it. Bye. Divjot

ok guys. i just got back to writing the story. school is finally ending and finals are going on so ive been a bit busy. but since only few more days left, i will be writing very soon. i took the SATs again and they were pretty good so im not that stressed anymore. Anyway, the next part should be up by this weekend. if not then definitely Thursday.

luv rani 😊

A: Prithvi...tum yaha?

P: Angad mein tumse kuch baat karna chahta hu. I'm really sorry for....

A: whatever Prithvi. I dont want to remember all this anymore. I have decided to go back to London and join the family business.

P: what? but u hated the....

A: yea i hate the business. but i have lost my inspiration to sing now. I have nothing to sing for.

P: but u do Angad. Thats what i want to tell you. nothing is over yet. you still.....

Announcer: This is the last call for Mr. Khanna....Mr. Khanna please report to gate number 4.

A: Prithvi..its too late for anything now. I have to go.

Angad turns around and is about to leave but Prithvi starts to yell out for him.

P: Angad you are going to regret this......Angad please stop!!! nothing is over yet

Angad just kept on walking, ignoring everything that Prithvi said.

P: Angad meri baat to suno ek baar.......Kripa ab bhi tumhari hain....humne shaadi nahi ki!!!!!

It's too late. Angad goes in and the gates close. Prithvi, in a shock, runs to it and tries to open it but he cant. He slams the door and sits on the chair nearby. There are tears in his eyes. His phone rings suddenly.

P: hello?

K: kaha ho prithvi? mein kitni der se intezaar kar rahi hu. its 3 o'clock.

P: yes i know...I'm on my way. yaha traffic bohut hain.

K: oh? ok jaldi aao......mujhe neend aa rahi hai.

P: Kripa..if you dont mind, kya mein mere ghar wapis jaa sakta hu? im really tired.

K: uh...yea sure prithvi. then i guess i'll see you tomorrow or something.

P: yea....I'll see you tomorrow. good nite

Prithvi hangs up and slides back into the chair. He rests his head on the back of it and holds in his tears. Suddenly, he imagines kripa's face in front of him and tears just flow out....

P:(thinking): I'm sorry Kripa....I'm really sorry!!!

Suddenly, someone's hand touches Prithvi's shoulders. He jumps up and looks at the person. He wipes his tears and smiles a little in surprise.

P: tum...maine to socha tha ke......

The camera zooms into that person's face.

A: ha....mein chala gaya tha lekin...kripa ki yaadein mujhe wapis le aayi. jo tumne abhi kaha. kya woh sab sach....???

P: ha angad. Kripa aur maine shaadi nahi ki. shaadi ki raat....

''''''''''''Flashback''''''''''''''''

Kripa is sitting in her room with, dressed up as a beautiful bride. Prithvi quietly enters and hugs Kripa from the back, as she is facing the moon. She jumps a little then goes back to watching the moon. Prithvi rests his head on her shoulder and kisses her neck gently. Kripa doesnt move, she acts stolid. Noticing that she isnt reacting, Prithvi turns her around and notices the tears in her eyes.

P: kya hua kripa? tum khush nahi ho? aaj humari shaadi hain....we are going to be together forever.

Hearing this, more tears come out of Kripa's eyes. She tries to control it but then she loses it and breaks down. She sits on her bed with some force and burries her face in her hands. She couldnt beleive that this was happening to her. Prithvi is a little shocked and goes and sits next to her. He puts his hand around her shoulder, trying really hard to control her.

P: kripa....kripa kya hua? tum itni..roh kyon rahi ho? ......kuch to bolo......

K kuch nahi...ab kuch nahi ho sakta. sab kuch tey ho gaya hain....aaj raat mein apni saari khushiya qurbaan kar dungi...sab kuch khatam ho gaya hai

P: kripa....yeh..yeh tum kya keh rahi ho? yeh shaadi.....kya tumhari marzi ke bina ho rahi hain? maine to kabhi tumhe force nahi kiya tha na..to yeh sab kya?

K: kuch nahi.....just leave prithvi. mein kuch der main tayyar ho kar niche aa jaungi......please..leave me alone for now

P: kripa lekin.....

K: please prithvi....i dont want to talk anymore

P: ok.

Prithvi gets up and walks to the door. He is about to leave when he stops in his tracks and turns to face Kripa.

P: agar tum mujhse baat karna chahti ho...I'll be waiting for you in the balcony.....

He quickly turns around and leaves. Kripa breaks down and cries hystorically.

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She goes to the balcony where she see Prithvi standing in the corner. She walks towards him but before she gets any closer, she hears his voice.

P: you want to talk now?

K(realizing that he noticed her): Prithvi...I'm really sorry

Prithvi turns around to look at her. She is surprised to see tears in his eyes. She moves closer to him and looks into his eyes, both having tears in them. She wipes them and then wipes hers as well.

K: I'm really sorry. i shouldnt have said all that.

P: yeah, you shouldnt have. ......but you meant all that. didnt you?

K: woh...prithvi I.....I cant marry you...I'm sorry

P: i knew it.....why are you doing this kripa?

K: prithvi please try to understand. i have my own reasons for it

P: kripa i have all the right to know what those reasons are......what is it?

K: prithvi I....I cant.....I cant marry you because.....because I'm married already....i'm married!!!

Prithvi is shocked to hear that. He moves back and little and then runs his hand through his hair out of frustration.

K: are you okay?

P: no im not okay!!! how could you.......just leave!!!! just leave me alone.....

Kripa starts crying out of guilt and runs towards the exit but before she can leave, she hears prithvi's voice again.

P: its him isnt it?

Kripa stops in her track and turns to face him. He looks at her and then turns away

P: how much do you love him?

K: more than i love myself. i cant live without him prithvi. im really sorry but i cant....i just.....im so sorry prithvi..im....

She breaks down and falls to her knees. Prithvi walks upto her and sits next to her. He puts his arm around her and rubs her shoulders

P: Kripa....I have loved you more than I have loved myself too. But there is a difference between my love and your love. Angad loves you a lot...youre lucky..........but me. you never loved me...never!! and you say sorry today.......but you know what kripa. dont be. if anyone here has to be sorry....it has to be me. I'm sorry Kripa. i always tried to win you. i always tried to make you mine but .....i never did and i never will. All i can do for you today is.....i can be your best friend.I want to start all over. Kripa Sharma...do you accept my friendship?

K: Prithvi? I...I am..

P: dont be. i was never worth it....NEVER

Kripa cries and hugs prithvi tightly. She had always see him as a friend...just a friend ant maybe that was his problem. He wanted to be more than a friend...he wanted to be her soulmate. But he was too late. She had someone already. Someone who loved her, cherished every moment he spent with her....just loved her more than himself. And that was Angad, the love of Kripa's life.

''''''''''flashback ends''''''''''''

P: she loves you angad. and she will never marry anyone else. and you.....how could you think that she would betray your trust like that? the only reason she even agreed to marry me was because her dad was....she didnt want to hurt him angad.

A: oh my god. but prithvi main....why didnt she tell me? i mean why....she just wants to hurt me even more doesnt she?

P:(interrupting) so you still have excuses? you know what? forget it man!!! you are one lousy person. i cant beleive i chased you all the way here to....just go. go back to london and go suffer without her.

Prithvi turns around and starts to leave. Angad is shocked at how prithvi reacted. He tries to stop him but prithvi just keeps on walking

A: prithvi...prithvi meri baat to suno.....try to understand my point of view. prithvi..pri....just listen to me goddamit!!!!

Prithvi doesnt stop.....he just walks on until he exits the airport as Angad continues to watch him leave.

kripa sits by the window in her room from where she can see all the roads clearly. She stared at all the cars pass by as she thought about her life. She wonder why Prithvi suddenly decided to go home. She had met him after almost 3 days and when he decided to stay over that night, she had felt a little more safer.

K(thinking): lekin woh aise achanak kaise chala gaya?

As she thought about him, a weird sense of anxiety crept over her. Suddenly, she heard a car pull into her drive way. She got up and looked at it. It was Prithvi's car.

K: prithvi? lekin ab woh???????

Kripa gets up quickly and runs downstairs. she almost falls in the process. She finally gets to the door and then takes a deep breath. She opens the door quickly and sees Prithvi standing there. He has a sad look on his face and there are a few tears in his eyes.

K: prithvi? tum wapis kyon aaye? i mean...tum roh rahe ho?....tum....prithvi tum.......

P: kripa! I'm sorry!!!!!

K:( a little paranoid) yeh tum kya keh rahe ho? meri to kuch.......

P: mujhe maaf kardo. meri wajah se......im really sorry Kripa!!

K(starts to cry): prithvi...why are you doing this? mein......im getting scared now. why are you apologizing? im........

Prithvi wipes his tears off and then moves aside. Kripa is shocked to see the person standing behind Prithvi

K: angad?????

A: kripa mein........

P(interrupting): uh...i think i should leave now

K: prithvi.........(he leaves and she looks at angad)

K: tum yaha kya kar rahe ho? tum to.....you were supposed to leave.

A: you wanted me to leave?

K: NO .....i mean yes, i wanted you to leave

A: why are you doing this Kripa?

K: me? mein kya kar rahi hu? i just want you to leave my life alone....forever ( in tears already)

A: you dont really mean it. do you?

K: i do angad. never come back to me. i hate you!! I JUST HATE YOUR GUTS ANGAD. JUST LEAVE ME ALONE!!!!!!!!!

Kripa slams the door. Angad is shocked but he knows that it was his fault for not trusting her. Angad gets into his car and is about to leave when prithvi stops him

P: angad...ruko. kaha ja rahe ho?

A: koi farak nahi padta. she doesnt care anymore prithvi. just let me go.

P: angad....

Angad just drives away. Prithvi hits his hand on the wall. He doesnt know what to do now.

The next morning, Kripa wakes up to the ring of her cell phone.

K: hello?

P: kripa...dont hang up

K: what do you want prithvi?

P: kripa im really sorry about everything. i should have know not to talk to angad. i wont do it again. im sorry

K: whatever prithvi.

P: kripa listen to me. its not okay. i want to make it up to you

K: what?

P: yea what i did was completely wrong and i want to make it up

K: so what do you want?

P: ok. i got us tickets to the soccer game.

K: the soccor game? prithvi but......

P: now dont make excuses. i know you love soccer. so you have to come

K: ok fine. ill come

P: great i will pick you up at.....5:30?

K: 5:30? why so late? the game is in the night?

P: well...its not really a soccer game. its for charity....so its a little late in the evening

K: ok fine. 5:30. ill wait for you

At the game....[ 6:15 pm ]

K:(watching the game): come on.....pass it!!! pass it already....he's open.....go!!!! GOAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Prithvi smiled as he saw Kripa enjoying the game. After a long time there was a smile on her face. He looked at her admiringly and then looked away as soon as she looked his way. It was time for the interval. Prithvi went to the little cafe and bought some coffee for both of them. When he got to their seats, he saw Kripa sitting with her celll phone in her hand again. He knew that she wanted angad to call her but he also knew that if he did, kripa would hang up on him. Prithvi shook his head and sat next to her.

P: kisike phone ka intezaar ho raha hai?

K(suddenly realizing that he was back): uh....nahi to. main bas yu hi.........

P: agar uss se ab bhi pyaar karti ho to baar baar usse apne aap se dhoor kyon bhejti jo?

K: i dont know what youre talking about prithvi.....i need to go to the restroom. excuse me

Kripa gets up quickly and is about to leave when prithvi's voice stops her

P: stop lying to yourself kripa. just stop it. we both know you love and he really loves you too......

K: i know that prithvi. he loves me more than he loves anyone else.

P: so what is the problem? why are you doing this?

K: because im scared....

P: scared?

K: yes, scared. prithvi in the past year angad and I have been separated 4 times. but somehow we always found a way to get back together...just like this time again. but this is the very thing that scared me. what if tomorrow we get separated again and....and this time there wont be any love left to get back together for? what if we would never be able to love each other again....i wont ever be able to take that prithvi. i wont be able to tolerate the fact that...that...one day i wake up in my house, all alone and regret the fact that i ever met angad. i want to live the rest of my life....knowing that he was the best thing, knowing that i love him more than my own life....knowing that there are no regrets.

Kripa is about to leave again but prithvi stops her this time too

P: and wont you regret waking up one day, all alone and wondering what would have happened if you did give each other a chance......if everything would have worked out......wont you regret that?

K: i would rather wonder than know.....

Kripa wiped the tears in her eyes and went off to the restroom. Prithvi slammed his hand on the seat and exhaled some air. He didnt know how to convince her. just then he heard the phone ring. when he looked at his cell phone, he realized that it wasnt his phone that was ringing. It was kripa's phone. she had forgotten her phone on her seat. prithvi picked it up and looked at the number on the caller ID. When he read the name, he smiled but didnt pick it up. The phone stopped ringing and he put in back on the seat and left.

When kripa got back to her seat, she was surprised at the fact that prithvi wasnt there. She sat down and grabbed the coffee. It was cold by now and she threw it away in the garbage can and sat back down. suddenly, she saw her phone on prithvi's seat and it was flashing. she quickly picked in up and looked at the screen. It read " 2 missed calls". When she pressed the button to retrieve the list of missed calls, she found the same name twice....it was none other than ANGAD. Kripa smiled a little. But then, realizing why she was smiling, gave her a guilty feeling. She didnt know why she wanted Angad to call her when she was still going to push him away.

K(thinking): oh angad. it would be so much easier to come to you, to hug you, to kiss you.....but i cant. i want to live the rest of my life in the hope that i can hug you and kiss you.....if only i could live in reality and not on my hopes.......im sorry angad. meri wajah se tum bhi apni poori zindagi.......im really sorry!

Suddenly, she hears a familiar voice on the loud speaker.

P: Ladies and gentleman, today as we sit here and enjoy ourselves, there is a person amongst us that isnt. but there is someone here that wants to say something to her....hoping that she understands what he is trying to say. i would like to hand the microphone over to him.

Expecting what was going to happen, kripa closed her eyes and tried to soak in all her tears. It was going to be Angad....it was him. She didnt know what to do. she wanted to run away from there. She knew Angad was going to sing for her and that had always been her weakness.....his voice....she couldnt control her feeling when she heard him sing. Kripa held her face in her hands and tried to control herself.......

A: kripa.......

That voice made her get chills down her spine. The way he said her name....she could hear the love, the passion, and the desire in it. She wanted to get up and run to him and hug him....but something stopped her. it was her insecurities.......she didnt want to lose him again.

A: kripa mein jaanta hu ke tum yaha ho....main janta hu ke tum mujhe sun sakti ho......aur iss liye mein aaj.....aaj tumhare liye.........i want to say something to you kripa......

(THIS IS THE ORIGINAL SONG NOT THE REMIX)

A:

aashiq banaya aashiq banaya

aashiq banaya aapne

aashiq banaya aashiq banaya

aashiq banaya aapne

tere bin sooni sooni hai bahe

tere bin pyaasi pyaasi nigahe

tere bin bin asar meri aahen

tere bin

tere bin sooni sooni hai bahe

tere bin pyaasi pyaasi nigahe

tere bin bin asar meri aahen

tere bin

aashiq banaya aashiq banaya

aashiq banaya aapne

aashiq banaya aashiq banaya

aashiq banaya aapne

tere bin lamha lamha sataye

tere bin bekarari jagaye

tere bin chain mujhko na aaye

tere bin

tere bin lamha lamha sataye

tere bin bekarari jagaye

tere bin chain mujhko na aaye

tere bin

meri nigahon mein tera chehra rawan hai

gehre hain armaan jane ja pagal sama hai

meri nigahon mein tera chehra rawan hai

gehre hain armaan jane ja pagal sama hai

Kripa tries to control herself but is unsuccessful

K: (in her thoughts)

apne daayre se mein to choot ne lagi hu

tere baazuon mein aake tootne lagi hu

apne daayre se mein to choot ne lagi hu

tere baazuon mein aake tootne lagi hu....

A: (interrupts her thoughts)

tere bin jeena nahi hai gawara

tere bin dil ka nahi hai guzara

tere bin kaun hai apna sahara tere bin?

aashiq banaya aashiq banaya

aashiq banaya aapne

aashiq banaya aashiq banaya

aashiq banaya aapne

bechainiyon ka, faaslo ka silsila hai

dard-e-jigar ka yeh sab ab humko mila hai

bechainiyon ka, faaslo ka silsila hai

dard-e-jigar ka yeh sab ab humko mila hai

K:( in her thoughts)(moves closer and closer to angad)

betabiyon ne humko choor kar diya

pass ane pe majboor kar diya hai

betabiyon ne humko choor kar diya

pass ane pe majboor kar diya hai

A:

teri bin raat katthi nahi hai

tere bin pyaas mitthi nahi hai

tere bin doori ghatthi nahi hai

tere bin

aashiq banaya aashiq banaya

aashiq banaya aapne

aashiq banaya aashiq banaya

aashiq banaya aapne

tere bin sooni sooni hai bahe

tere bin pyaasi pyaasi nigahe

tere bin bin asar meri aahen

tere bin

tere bin lamha lamha sataye

tere bin bekarari jagaye

tere bin chain mujhko na aaye

tere bin

Angad finally looks at Kripa as she stands in front of her. There are tears in her eyes. He opens his arms, gesturing her to come and hug him. But kripa just stands there and stares at him. Angad, disappointed, puts his arms down and then looks at the ground. just then he hears her voice.....

K: angad........

He looks up again at her and smiles. he had felt everything she wanted to say in that one word. He opened up his arms again and she ran into them. Angad is pushed back a little from the force her force but he tried to stay strong. He hugs her tightly and she reciprocates his feelings. After a while, Angad slowly lets go of her and then looks into her eyes. There was the same passion and desire in both of them. He hugged her again, but this time...more gently. He kissed her forehead and let go of her again.

A: kripa...

K: angad..... (at the same time)

Both of them laughed a little and then looked at each other with complete understanding of what the other wanted to say.

K: angad mein......

A: ssshhh............

He kneeled down on one knee and held kripa's hand.

A: kripa sharma. i have been in love with you since i knew what love meant. infact, i learned the meaning of love from you.......and now, i want to learn the meaning of life. i want to spend the rest of my life with your kripa...the rest of OUR lives........will you marry me???

K: NO

Angad is shocked to hear her say that. He slowly got up and looked at her eyes with questions

K: no, i cannot marry you angad...........

Angad looked down in disappointment

K: i cant marry you because im already married to you

Angad looks up at her with a killer smile and grabs her shoulders. Before she knew, their lips touched and locked into the most beautiful kiss of her life. She put her arms around his shoulder and he lightly held her waist. Everyone in the staduim stood up and applauded for them, including Prithvi. There were tears in his eyes, tears of joy. His job was done now. Kripa had finally got what she deserved...true love. and only angad could prove to be her true love....ONLY angad!!!

They were now one......this time forever!!

Angad and Kripa went to Prithvi's house right away after noticing that he wasnt there at the stadium. When they got there, they didnt find prithvi After giving a final look in his study, they saw Prithvi...on the floor. Kripa screamed out of shock and they both rushed Prithvi to the hospital and into the ER. They waited outside for a while in anxiety. Kripa sat with her head in her hands and a few tears in her eyes. Angad sat next to her with him arms around her, trying to console her. Just then the doctor rushed out of the ER and looked at Angad and kripa.

A: doctor...whats wrong? sab kuch theek to hai na?

D: no.....its the last stage of Brain tumor

A-K(shocked): what???

D: yea. its his last stage. he doesnt have much time. I told him to go to America and get a surgery but....he said he needed to take care of friend becuase she needed him more.

Kripa is shocked to hear that. Prithvi had refused to go to America just because she needed him? She felt really guilty. She fell on the bench in a little shock. Angad, surprised, sat next to her.

K: yeh sab meri wajah se .....its all my...........

A: kripa....kripa please. its not your fault...........

K: yeh sab meri wajah se hua hai.

Doctor: im really sorry ms. sharma. but i suggest that both of you go meet him. uske paas zyada waqt nahi hai......he's dying.

K(shocked): i have to meet him

Kripa gets up and hurries to Prithvi's room and angad follows her. When she enters, she sees prithvi on his bed, looking out the window. Kripa went and sat next to him. Prithvi looked at them and smiled.

P: kripa....angad.....congradulations. im really happy for you!

K: ------

A: thanks prithvi. yeh sab sirf tumhare wajah se hua hai

P: nahi..sache pyaar ki hamesha sirf jeet hoti hain

K: kyon kiya aise?

P: kripa?

K: mere liye apni zindagi kyon.....prithvi.....

P: kyonki.....you needed me kripa. mein apni dost ko chodd kar kya apni zindagi bachane chala jaata? nahi kripa.....i wanted you to be happy

K: and you think im happy this way.....you think im happy seeing you like this?

P: you should be....ab koi bhi tumhare and angad ke beech mein nahi aayega

K(screams a little): PRITHVI TUMNE AISE......(calms down) prithvi tumne aise kyon kiya...you know i would miss you....you just wanted to hurt me more. didnt you?

P: i always hurt you kripa. but i never WANTED to......it was my time to pay you back. im sorry....really sorry

He extends his hand forward

P: TRUCE?

Kripa gets up and runs out, not being able to see him like that any longer. Prithvi looks at her and is a little hurt, but doesnt show it on his face. He looks at angad and angad sits next to him

P: uska khayal rakhna.....make sure she never has tears in her eyes. usse kabhi mat rulana

A: rula to tum rahe ho prithvi

P: yeh meri majboori thi angad.....

A: prithvi....im really sorry.

P: sorry?

A: ha. meri wajah se tumhari life mein itne problems....im responsible for everything prithvi

P: shhhh.....i deserved it angad. i dont want to remember all those things anymore.

A:(extends his hand forward): TRUCE?

P(smiles and joins hand with angad): TRUCE!!

Angad smiles and has tears in his eyes at the same time and hugs prithvi. Prithvi hugs him and smiles. Suddenly, there is a weird expression on prithvi's face, which cannot be seen by angad because he is still hugging prithvi. Prithvi's grip on Angad gets looser. Realizing this, Angad gets up and looks at Prithvi. There is smile on his face but the life in his eyes is gone.

A: Prithvi!!!!!!!! (angad screams as he realized that his friend is gone)

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Two Years Later...........

A: come on kripa....come on. push!! push harder!!!!!

Doctor: yes mrs khanna...you can do it, come on!!! push just a little more.

Kripa took a deep breath and then finally pushed as hard as she could and then a cry was heard.

Doctor: congradulations, its a boy!!

A: its a boy? Its a boy!!! kripa....its a boy.......OUR BOY!!!!

Kripa smiles with tears in her eyes. The Doctor brought the little boy closer and handed it to Kripa. Angad sat beside her and touched the baby lightly

A: its ours kripa...we made him........thank you so much for this....you have no idea how much..........

K:(interrupting) sshhh.......I love you Angad......

A: (smiles) i love you too.....and you too (touching his baby boy)

K(smiles): acha....koi naam socha hai??

A: ha socha hai

K: acha? kaunsa?

A: prithvi.......

K(smiles)...prithvi.......ha, humara prithvi

They both hug the baby and each other. Angad and Kripa has finally gotten what they deserved......each other and a gift of their love, Prithvi!

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thank you everyone for making this fanfic go upto page 180. i hope your comments can make it reach 200. i luv you all for leaving those comments and motivating me to write better. i owe it all to you guys. I LUV YOU 😛 😳

luv rani

ur hardwork has paid off!!! that was awesome!!i will always remember ur story as a unique one and kinda beautiful in its own way! i say this regarding prithvi's character n AK's relationship..i mean, prithvi definetely had grey shades to his character but u made him a good guy in the end n AK definetely kept separating alot but they did get together so moral of the story is that.......things do work out, just don't lose hope in relationships or people n keep working on them cuz they might just surprise u!!! one of the parts of this story that touched me was when kripa lost her child n she was by the beach n she started hallucinating! now that part i think was very well envisioned and execueted!!! so take care n do give us another good story to read soon!!!

PS: i am a very lazy person so i don't think i commented that much in ur ff, but here is my longest comment to u!!