MN - The Fragile Magic ** Epilogue - Pg 140.

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Binal Damania

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Posted: 14 years ago

#261

hey lovd it
d bonding between pranav n rahul...
lovd it continue soon

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Wings-of-Fire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#262

edited my comment on page 37.

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Mulan.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#263

WOW!!!!! KINZUUU KYA AALLLAAA UPDATE THA YAR!!!!!!👏EVERYTHING FALLING INTO PEICES!!! THE WAY nUPUR HANDLING THE KIDS AND mAYANK... THE KIDS FORMING A STRONG BOND... AND THE ENDING PART, BOTH KNOWING THE OTHER HAD A PAST!!!! BEAUTIFUL UPDATE KINZU!!! LOVE YA!!!!🤗

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ginny munjal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#264

the part was so good :)

hope they'll soon find love in each others eyes too

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#265

PT...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗... wht a wonderful upd8 yaar...👏👏👏👏...

u knw i alwz afraid of rahul-pranav bonding...lik diya said in her letter...bt aftr this upd8...am immensly happy ki finally they r goin to bcome one as saga brothers...n i hope it will continue lik this...

comin to MN,,,,loveeed d lil Mornin scene d most...😍😍😍😍...bt ur endin hv left me confused...😕😕...kahin yeh log jo feelings they hv startd developin somewht for each other...ab vo unke 1st loves ke baare mein sochkar...daba toh nahi denge?...bt nywz i wil w8...coz i knw in d end they wil bcome MaYur from Mayank & Nupur...😳😳...

n lastly thnxx for d spl thnx jee...😆😆😆...bt u knw...my PBM KASAM IS VALID TILL D END OF THIS FF...so dnt u dare break the promise ok???😈😈😈😈😆😆...

w8in for tuesday to read the next update of this heavenly ff...😍😍😍😍

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_ArTi4ever_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#266

the bonding between the brothers is forming well...looking forwad to see how mayank nupur started falling 4 each other...wil b waiting 4 the next chapter

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Radha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#267

awesome update..!!
loved the way rahul & pranav are bonding..!!
coming to mn..the morning scene was awesome..!!
looking forward to the next part..
cont soon😊

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Zehnaseeb

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Posted: 14 years ago

#268

i loved dia's letter especially the ending😆nupur's convo with rahul was so sweet. Its nice to see that she understands that she has 2 kids to look after now not just one😃i love all the things that came in his mind when she asked to come in😆 his last question showed that he is genuinely a really sweet kid😊 the i'll handle my son was really sweet and touching😃

loved part 5. The i dont want to go to school thing is something my little brother does every single day🥱and it works as well though it never works for me😆 the ice-cream blackmailing was awesome👍🏼 the sketching moment was really beautiful and i'm glad that she didnt let mayank intervene and scold rahul👏 the end of part 5 was really touching😭 i felt bad for both the kids as well as mayur.

the little bit of consolation at the start of the 6th part was really touching😭 its nice that pranav could sense she was crying just by looking at her shows their bond😃 and again the cheesecake bribe was great😆 the worry of him not returning was so wife like its nice that she has started caring for him😳 the compliment was really sweet👏 love the fact that she took away his sleeping pills she has started to act more and more like a wife😃the last line of this part was beautiful👏

part 7 was fab as well. Love the way both were cuddled in sleep together😃looks like mayank is a little more hesistant than nupur towards the new relationshippoor rahul that was a strict punishment i hate maths like anything😆its sweet that nupur tried to console him😃the last bit was beautiful the fact that the kids wanted to share a room to talk i literally awed out loud at 3am😆 finally great ending

Edited by MayUr-ArTi_fan - 14 years ago

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aishwarya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#269

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im so sorry for the late comment. btw, awesome parts.

nupur and mayank were finally opening up to each other. she even asked him about the sleeping pills..and he didn't really want to reply to her, i guess. but she was concerned about him? thats so sweet :) she hid his pills, lol nice! andd he knew that she had hidden it, but she wasn't giving it back, and he had to sleep without him. she even stopped him from going to work. the concern is all there!

nupur is even bonding with rahul, thats a good start :) she helped him with the drawing, and she's the nice one. she comes to his rescue or aid when mayank scolds him. aww, thats nice.

pranav and rahul are actually becoming friends? wow. i didn't think that would happen soon, but thats good that it is :) they even shifted to the same room!

dia left, aww! i'll miss her,man, loved her character! her letter was epic :D lol. i hope they take the hint ;) and do something about it, too.

so they found each others partner's ex's photos? aww, i wonder how that must feel!

thanks for the pm

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Payal-15

@Payal-15

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Posted: 14 years ago

#270

i loved the whole part 👏😳but last part did hurt......but they can't run away from the fact...that's the biggest truth of their lives...and i just hope they understand each other's pain as well as trying for a better future with each other...

Edited by Payal-15 - 14 years ago

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