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Posted: 14 years ago
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Edited on page 44! :D Update Who Knew!! 😔
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Although I agree with Mehak, I also disagree in a way. The confession was perfect in my opinion! The talk about what they went through, and what Armaan went through shouldn't be brought up in this chapter, because seriously they JUST confessed! They need to let that feeling sink in and themselves understand the depth of what they went through in those 2 months first, before confronting those feelings! And most importantly A needs to get rid of his myth of R being happy without him! Obviously for that he needs to know what she faced and R needs to see through that void in A! Only then can they confront each other about the same! So no, THAT talk wouldn't have fit in well in this chapter! In fact, for the time being they should be avoiding it since it makes them miserable! But yeah, one thing, Sanaa, I think the entire Lonavala part should come under this chapter! Doesn't feel like a right end! Seems abrupt!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanaa629

Hahaha...my updates are gonna be less regular as I'm on two fanfictions..and the previous chapters..sans chp 11..were all already written up..and just needed editing..!! Please do catch up when you can..your opinions would mean a lot to me.😊
Thanks sooo much for your wishes..!!! 😃🤗
Love,
Sanaa


Sometimes I wish your FF was a movie so I wouldn't have to wait so much to see how it ends! I'm sure you ain't going to update, you've become way too lazy since your exams got over! Hmph!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Simmy003

RES!! I need a day to read this :P Happy Birthday Sanaa!!!!!!!!!! <3 sowwy for being soo late :) My internet wasn't working so couldn't wish you but hope you had an amazing day girl! And I lalalaloved your birthday gifts, Shru's updates ;) hehe Plus you updated too so it was a double treat! 😃


Now the updateee...I LOVED it! First of all, I just wuvvved the way you started it! AR's phone convo was the cutest! The whole "ouch" part was hilarious! 😆 Riddhima is so dumb, and Armaan was tooo cute! Haha and then their cute little fights, ahhh <3 They are ADORABLE together! I missed this, soo glad they are back now! Locker room was the other funny part, hahaha Rahul and Sid singing those songs and aiming em at AR! 🤣 That cracked me up! But of course...Anjlai, pyaar ki dushman! She ruined it for the two of them ;( When she was saying all that stuff about Armaan I was like "Slap her already Riddhima!" -____- Lol unfortunately that never happened. But I actually am proud of Riddhima for standing up for Armaan like that...I was sooo happy when she was defending him! Everything she said was exactly right! Anjy is just a hater, pshhht!

Plus, how dare she think like that about Sid and Riddhima! I thought she knew how much AR love each toher! I was shocked when she said that, that set off a little haha I was like "Stfu Anjy, you don't know anyhting, sit yo a** down!" 😆 But omgoshhh AR's heart to heart literally made me cry. I seriously was tearing while reading that...not cause it was tooo sad and stuff.. but because it was sooo real! Like I could actually imagine them being like that! I have to say Sanaa, hands down, you write amazingly. You wrote so simple yet deep...I just loved it. And that just made AR's reltionship stronger, and I can see them never drifting apart now! Thank god for that 😳

Phew, that was long haha but you write sooo beautifully I have to comment on it :) Anyway, Happy Birthday once again and UPDATE REAL SOOON!! BUT first update Who Knew please 😃Otayyy love you, Simmy <3

Thank youu laodz for ur wishes..!! i read ur latest update today and I'll commenton it..dnt worry..!! 😃
Awhh..poor Anji..give her a break..she was being an elder sister..if my younger sister (though I don't have one) went through something similar I would personally want to kill the guy..!! But since I have an elder sister..I'd expect her to react the same way..😆 SO Anjy acting like that proved how AR's relationship matured..!! 😃
As for her thinking of SR..you'll get to know why pretty soon..in the next chapter..!! And it's nothing serious..so don't start hating on Sid already..!!😆
That was why Anjy was needed..coz AR needed a heart to heart..and something had to trigger it..So voila..I brought in Anjy for that..!! Gosh I use my characters loadz don't I?? Sara..Sid..Vidya..now Anjy?? hmmm...😕 I feel so evil..!! 😭
Thank you sooo much..!!! 😃 Yepp..I'll update Who Knew today..!!! 😊 Well installment stleast..and I'll try finish it before Aanya MURDERS me..!!! 😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Armaan : Basket Why Are u Upset?
Riddhima : Hmmm...I want you..(side-hugs)
Armaan(holding her close and smiling) : Hey,I'm here with you baby..
Riddhima : Arrey not here!Idiot !(Spanks his head) I want you there in the part which Sanaa has posted in LOOC..Dekho na she's not completing it..Tell her na..I miss you so much :(
Armaan(To Sanaa) : Sweetheart,won't you update for me?(Dimpled smile)
DEKHO! AB TOH UPDATE KARROO!!
ARMAAN KE KHATIR!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Guys guys guys guys guys...
I am honestly at no fault here..!! The lectricity went from like 7 in the evening and didn't come back till like late late night...by which time I had finally dozed off after waiting soo long..!! SO I woke up extra early..(It's 5:40am) and am giving you an installment like nowish..!!!
I'm honestly not at fault..!!Feel free to fly here and kill the electrcity people..infact I'll help you!!!
Edited by Sanaa629 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey...sanaa...u don't have ANY idea what u have done for me today...ur ff just put another life in me...it was a very very very bad day for me and so much mental trauma i was going through...i knew that just one thing could distract me that is..my ARMAAN! I just came to IF after shedding buckets of tears and what i see is ur installment...u won't believe but it was seriously my life savior today...i can't thank u enough...
the part not only cheered up my mood but also gave me inspiration and positive approach to solve the problems i m facing these days..i m going through the toughest phase in my life and u r just angel in disguise...
the part was as usual awesome and not to mention, only u can write that convo b/w ridz and padma...u are not only a good writer but a great thinker too...hats off to u...i can't express but i just loved the way u brought out and related padma's past and ridzi's love..u don't know how much strength u have given me by the help of this convo!! god has just strange and crazy ways to help u in life...i love him...he is the best superhero...
ok..personal baat bohot ho gai..now coming to ur ff, i needn't say how much i adore it..how much i m addicted to it...u just put life in a simple story..
loved the way anjie and ridz got back to normal..talking really helps...i m very eager to read anjie-armaan convo...i m very happy to read how these things have come out and how padma has trusted her love and her daughter's love and how she gave her the confidence in believing her love...👏
i don't know u personally but i can say that u are very mature and balanced person.. and i wud love to have friend like u..i wud love to know u more...
Edited by mehak_mangi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehak_mangi

hey...sanaa...u don't have ANY idea what u have done for me today...ur ff just put another life in me...it was a very very very bad day for me and so much mental trauma i was going through...i knew that just one thing could distract me that is..my ARMAAN! I just came to IF after shedding buckets of tears and what i see is ur installment...u won't believe but it was seriously my life savior today...i can't thank u enough...
the part not only cheered up my mood but also gave me inspiration and positive approach to solve the problems i m facing these days..i m going through the toughest phase in my life and u r just angel in disguise...
the part was as usual awesome and not to mention, only u can write that convo b/w ridz and padma...u are not only a good writer but a great thinker too...hats off to u...i can't express but i just loved the way u brought out and related padma's past and ridzi's love..u don't know how much strength u have given me by the help of this convo!! god has just strange and crazy ways to help u in life...i love him...he is the best superhero...
ok..personal baat bohot ho gai..now coming to ur ff, i needn't say how much i adore it..how much i m addicted to it...u just put life in a simple story..
loved the way anjie and ridz got back to normal..talking really helps...i m very eager to read anjie-armaan convo...i m very happy to read how these things have come out and how padma has trusted her love and her daughter's love and how she gave her the confidence in believing her love...👏
i don't know u personally but i can say that u are very mature and balanced person.. and i wud love to have friend like u..i wud love to know u more...

Your comment made me sooo speechless..!!! 😳
I'm sooo glad I'm making people around the world happy..!! I transform into another life when I'm reading or writing ffs..!! ANd I'm glad the same happens to you..because thats the only way all problems are put to ease at least for sometime..and I'm sooo glad i managed to do that for you..😊
awhhh..thank you sooo much..!!! 😳😳 I honestly don't think I deserve all that but i'm still mega mega glad that you're inspired..because I was conveying a message..and though I'm not sure myself as to how useful it can be for someone..I'm really really happy that you could see apositive approach to life because of me..!! 😊
Even though prsonally I suffer silently when I have problems..I always encourage others to spill their heart out..so do make sure ur telling someone ur problems..coz it honestly helps..!! Ask Aanya..!! 😆 I'm glad i oculd be of some help..
hahahaha..awhh..ur making me blush...!! I probably did mature early for my age..too early..hence somethings just didn't fall into place😕..but no regrets..!! 😃
Thanks sooo much..!!! Ur comment just put a huge smile on my face..and I'm sure I blushed more than Riddhima did when Armaan was teasing her in the last bit..!!! 😳
Love,
Sanaa
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanaa629

Your comment made me sooo speechless..!!! 😳
I'm sooo glad I'm making people around the world happy..!! I transform into another life when I'm reading or writing ffs..!! ANd I'm glad the same happens to you..because thats the only way all problems are put to ease at least for sometime..and I'm sooo glad i managed to do that for you..😊
awhhh..thank you sooo much..!!! 😳😳 I honestly don't think I deserve all that but i'm still mega mega glad that you're inspired..because I was conveying a message..and though I'm not sure myself as to how useful it can be for someone..I'm really really happy that you could see apositive approach to life because of me..!! 😊
Even though prsonally I suffer silently when I have problems..I always encourage others to spill their heart out..so do make sure ur telling someone ur problems..coz it honestly helps..!! Ask Aanya..!! 😆 I'm glad i oculd be of some help..
hahahaha..awhh..ur making me blush...!! I probably did mature early for my age..too early..hence somethings just didn't fall into place😕..but no regrets..!! 😃
Thanks sooo much..!!! Ur comment just put a huge smile on my face..and I'm sure I blushed more than Riddhima did when Armaan was teasing her in the last bit..!!! 😳
Love,
Sanaa



i never knew i could write this much in comments..seriously u r so easy to interact with...i have always been a very shy and reserved kind of a person and that was one of the reasons for not commenting..but now i m enjoying this interaction with u people..aanya and shru are ur really true friends...god bless u alll...😊
if u say my comment has puta big smile on ur face, then u shud see mine...😊 😊
love u...
-Armaanigirl😉
Edited by mehak_mangi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ok..WOW..guys..yeahh I'm updating I'm updating..!! Tomorrow Night..!! =) Pakka..!! Ihaven't written much anyways..got too much on my plate and my parent's 25th wedding anniversary cake to prepare for..!! =D

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