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Posted: 14 years ago
Sanaa 🤗

Ermm no I've not edited my comment. YET.

Honestly, I've got too much work piled up!!! I have to do a book review for the British Council or something so I'm completing a book [I've only read 50 pages and it's 500 something pages long AND I've gotta finish it by Wednesday! Not the book but the freakin' review :P] Which would be okay but I've got a four hours of my IIT prep classes and stuff today 🤢

Basically, I'm SWAMPED with academia! Damn...I'm sorry for venting it out but it felt good :P

I'll pakka give you an awesome comment [not that I don't give you one always :D] when my schedule frees up :P

Annndd on top of that, Karan is so dumb :( Really, I am SO disappointed! :P My friend [the one who made me sit next to him ...you know the story] and I were just discussing that! Sucks, doesn't it :|

Wee :D I feel tonnes better after writing all this <3

Oh and CONGRATULATIONS! You're a Goldie now 😆

Love you :)

xoxo
Aanya
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

Sanaa 🤗


Ermm no I've not edited my comment. YET.

Honestly, I've got too much work piled up!!! I have to do a book review for the British Council or something so I'm completing a book [I've only read 50 pages and it's 500 something pages long AND I've gotta finish it by Wednesday! Not the book but the freakin' review :P] Which would be okay but I've got a four hours of my IIT prep classes and stuff today 🤢

Basically, I'm SWAMPED with academia! Damn...I'm sorry for venting it out but it felt good :P

I'll pakka give you an awesome comment [not that I don't give you one always :D] when my schedule frees up :P

Annndd on top of that, Karan is so dumb :( Really, I am SO disappointed! :P My friend [the one who made me sit next to him ...you know the story] and I were just discussing that! Sucks, doesn't it :|

Wee :D I feel tonnes better after writing all this <3

Oh and CONGRATULATIONS! You're a Goldie now 😆

Love you :)

xoxo
Aanya

Awhh..it's ok..don't worry..u'll find someone else..!! Good looking and Smart enough for you..!! Hahaha..you guys are all swamped in academia..I feel like the only jobless person around..not that I'm not jobless..but yeahh..!!
Hahahah..I actually only noticed yesterday..!! Which is good..!!😆 I'm a goldie..!! wohooo!!
I've just finished my banner on Who Knew..and you HAVE to it..!! It's got picnik and photobucket and photoshop all mixed in..!! LOL!! i've spent AGESSS on it and I'm FINALLYY happy with it..!! Pheww..!!! So u HAVE to check it out..! i'm posting it up in a sec..!! =D
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Posted: 14 years ago
Comment Edited On Pg 70! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ugh Anjali.. Haha.
Lovely update.

Continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fab part..👏
Loved it..😃
Thanx 4 d PM..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Comment edited on page 76.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Glad to see Ridhima finally confessing to her mother...and sharing her apprehensions with her.. and as sisters go, the Gupta sisters are great and as poor Atul said - khan phas gaye Armaan aur mein :-)

and I thought the Anji and Armaan convo was great. Anji unable to let go of her grudge sgaisnt Armaan despite her best intentions, just as any concerned sister would, and Armaan quietly listening to her cos he understands that he has wronged Rodhima terribly so this is something he needs to hear out time and again till he is able to erase it from everyone's mind - yet firm in his resolve to remain with Ridhima...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

You haven't even reserved a space for your comment on this chapter...!!! 😭😭

Arrey? *Looks Stunned* SEE PAGE 70! EDITEDD! Now its your turn!

Always people blame me..😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry for da late reply...ws outta town 😒

coming to the part...it was MARVELOUS 😊
I love da Gupta sistas 😛
their fight n den da crying scene...aaawww😊

"Atul jeej, Anjali pagal hogayyi hai na?" Riddhima frowned as she looked at Atul who had been a silent spectator all along.

"Yeh toh main kabse kehne ki koshish kar raha tha!" He sighed and muttered to himself. "Ek behen pagal, toh doosri tube light! Armaan aur main kahaan phas gayye?" Both sisters glanced at each other, narrowing their eyes. This guy had so pulled the trigger!


hahahahahaahaha...ROFL ... it was hillarious 😆

i love Atul 😆


And then the mother-daughter scene...it ws sweet...u portrayed the realtion n the feelings so very well 😊


and the Armaan Riddhima phone convo was amazing...😊

loved dis

"Armaan can't you straightforwardly give me the reply I want to hear!" she snapped, anger getting the better of her. He was so thick sometimes!

aaawww👏


and then dis part


"So, do you know I was fighting with Dad today." He changed the topic in a disgruntled voice.

"Whyy?" She was astonished. Armaan and his Dad had a great relationship! Then why all of a sudden?

"Because he said both of you will gang up against me." She could hear his pout however his voice softened with the next line. "You're loved so much already.." Initially, she was shocked that his Dad knew but quickly came over it as she said,

"Just like you are here.." a small smile playing on her face.
aaawww...😍 mmmwwwaaahhh !!!

and Riddhima's behaviour before the armaan anji conversation...was so wife-types 😛
loved her...

at a point i didnt understand anjie's behaviour...i mean i kno she is a lil more possessive about her sister but y shooting arrows at poor armaan 😭

AND...last but not the least 😃

"Na..nahin toh.." she whispered back, under his spell already. His charms had worked on her like the millionth time and feeling his warm breath on her neck, she knew she was going to lose herself. But she didn't take any actions to stop herself either as the next second, she felt his lips rub seductively along her neckline. Automatically, her hands went round his broad shoulders and gripped his hair in a fist.

"I love you," he murmured into her ear while his lips caressed her skin, making her senses go haywire. "I love you so much, Basket." And he traced his kissed down, across her cheeks, and before thinking twice, smacked his lips against hers, releasing a new fire of passion within himself and her.

She drove him crazy. He hadn't been able to control himself after seeing her cheeks colour up when he caught her lying. And neither did he care that she had been eavesdropping. He was just glad everything worked out perfectly. For now at least. And even though no one else believed him to not hurt his basket ever again, she did and that was enough. Enough to him fall head over heels all over again. Enough to make him want to prove her and himself right. Enough to make him insane about her. His hands roved round the back of her blue blouse, bringing her closer to him by every millimeter if it was possible. Not caring, he continued kissing her, his desires getting the better of him, until she pulled out for much needed oxygen.

"Armaan.." but he continued kissing her softly along her beauty bone, trailing the now wet kisses back up her neck. She felt a very tender touch of his teeth on her skin and as it got more passionate, she pulled his head up, and pressed her lips against his, her heart racing.

He had that effect on her. That unexplainable, incomprehensible feeling that aroused inside her every time he was physically close to her.

He had honestly lost it, was the only thought that came to his mind once they pulled out. Pushing his forehead against hers, he breathed in slowly, calming himself while he still had slight sense of his surroundings. She had closed her eyes, and he couldn't help but kiss them once, then her forehead, while his arms were still around her, securing her in himself.

"I love you.." she whispered. "For being there. For making everyone love you..and.."

"And.."

"And for loving me so much.." she finished with a smile and kissed lips once.


Dis part ws enough to drive me crazy 😍


I sooo love AR ...❤️

n i love you more...😃

u kno i was reading LOOC season 1 few days ago n it made me realixe dat ur writing has improved SO MUCH !!!!! u cud really write a novel u know...😃

love u sooo much for giving us LOOC 👏

u r a brilliant writer n ma most favourite so far...u made me love AR 😊

thank u soo much ...

take care ...

n post da next part soon...

waiting eagerly 😃

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