Life Out Of Control #2

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PRACHI GOYAL

@prachi06

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#411

WAOOO

atlast done, their confession

lovely yaar

when i was reading this na, to smile was not leaving my face

this was loveliest update

thanx forpm

continue super soon

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firoza malik

@dimpledsmile

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#412

hey sanna ..

nyc part..

awesomely written..

do continue soon..

thnx 4 da PM!!!

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sreejita Das

@sree12

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#413

Finally they are together. I am so happy...😊. Kuch toh akal ayi dono ko. Great part. Riddhima is sooo adorable. Plzzz update soon the next part...

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Super.woman

@Super.woman

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#414

Hey!

Amazing part!

really loved their confession! Finally!

Hoping to read some extra-romantic parts, now! ;) :P

Please continue soon!

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Sanaa

@Sanaa629

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#415

Originally posted by: scorpio95
i'm sooo sorry for commenting late. i just finished reading it now. anyway, coming to the part, the confession part was written sooo beautifully, and i liked the way, that after they confessed near the part, that you made it back into a light hearted mood between the two, when they were both joking with each other. loooking forward to the next part! 😊 any chance of you completing who knew. 😊 aaargh. i just realized, that after i commented for your part, i became i goldie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🥳 i'm sooo happy. ee, cause you put up a part, i became a goldie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊 thank you for updating. 😊

Thank youuu..!!! Yupp..next chapter is all light hearted..! Very actually after all the intense scenes that I have mercilessly put you guys through..lolxx😆

So newly turned Goldie..(lolxx 😆) I'm not sure when I'll be able toupdate who knew..I was thinking tomorrow..but it looks like it's gonna have to be monday or tuesday because I'm having real imp guests over on Sunday for lunch so I'll be busy helping my Mum tomorrow and on Sunday throughout the day..(as I'm the only other person in the house who can help her..lolxx)

Thanks laodzz once again..!!

Love,

Sanaa

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fri42911

@fri42911

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#416

amazing update.

thanks for the pm

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mehak_mangi

@mehak_mangi

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#417

hey...nice part..finally they confessed! i m sooo...happy.the bus part was gud.loved the way he protected and assured her.ridhima wanting him to beat the guy was funny..😆 the story of the old lady eas tragic and this triggered AR to tell each other about their feelings.but i must say i didn't like the way their confession came out 😔 i mean the idea was gud but it wasn't written in Your style..the thing in this ff which attracts me the most is "the intensity of the emotions you describe" and this confession somehow lacked the intensity.maybe i had much more expectations from u, this part being the most awaited one..being very honest,I am sorry to say but it didn't satisfy my heart..🤔 i wanted ridzi to know how much armaan has went through in these months without her.ridzi cud put the blame on armaan for their separation but armaan had none to put his blame on! and he went through much more pain than ridz as he had the pain of separation as well as the baggage of guilt for hurting HIS basket.this was my opinion..i hope you show all this in next parts..update soon..

Edited by mehak_mangi - 14 years ago