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Deepi20

@Deepi20

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Nice update! I'm so glad Abhay came on time and saved Piya! I'm worried about the precap! I hope Abhay doesn't get hurt with the silver that Maithali attacks him with! Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon 😊

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CleviveDsouza

@CleviveDsouza

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

wow

awesome

excellent

fantastic

fabulous

perfect

great

have no words to day

continue soon

plz pm me

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Gals

@Cute_Gal

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Gr8 update yaar.. dis metz is too much.. hope abhiya will b 5in.. carry on.. thanx for d pm..lol.

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

@.Chashmish.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: punjabkudi98
Amazing Job!!!!!!:)

thansss u sooo much

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

@.Chashmish.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: punjabkudi98
Amazing Job!!!!!!:)

thxx a lot

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abhiya7fan

@abhiya7fan

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

superb...love ur ff...its great...continue soon...👏

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annie

@abhay4piya

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#137

awww..!!! it was very sweet but short..! plz write a lengthy one..plzz..n pm me..

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Sanchita

@sanchita1410

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#138

superb ud. Waiting for the next part eagerly. Plz ud it soon.

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sweety_crazed

@sweety_crazed

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#139

superb update 👏.👏..luved it totally...n thnx 4 the pm😊...continue sooon waiting eagerly...

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

@.Chashmish.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#140

chapter 10 :

abhay : chalo yaha se piya yaha bhaut khatra hai

piya : tik hai abhay par panchi ?

abhay : tum jao piya , bhabhi ko main lekar aao ga

piya : no abhay , main yaha tumhe aur panchi chod keh kahi nahi jaogi

abhay : piya dont argue , maine kaha na tum jao

piya : no abhay

abhay ( shouting) : piya just go , abhi

piya : tik hai abhay par tum apna khayal rakhna

abhay : tik hai , ab tum jao

piya lefts , then abhay starts searching for panchi and finally finds , panchi was trapped under a silver chain jail

abhay takes a stick and break it and releases panchi just then someone hits abhay with silver chain , it was maithili

abhay was screaming in pain , panchi also could not do anything then some power touched maithili and she droped the chain and moved away a little , it was sid who used the ring

,then abhay quickly bought tulsi and traped maithili and then sid was about to use ring to kill maithili just then maithili said

mets: ruko , siddharth tum humein marogay ,tum toh humse pyaar karte thay aur abhay tumne toh kaha tha ki tum hamari raksha karogay aur aaj tum hi humein maar rahe ho

sid : no mets ab tumahari bato mein nahi aaygay

and sid used the ring to kill mets

abhay turned around as he just couldnot see mets being killed

and in a min , mets was killed

abhay start remebering every sweet moment he spent with mets but then thought of piya and called her to see whether she reached home safely or not

abhay : piya tum theek ho aur ghar poohch gayi na

piya: ha abhay main theek hu , par panchi aur tum kaise ho , aur mets ka kya hua

abhay : ab mets nahi rahi , sari muskile khatam ho gayi aur bhabhi bhi theek hai

piya : sachme , oh my god

abhay : ha abhi mein rakhta hu , ab tumhare ghar baraat leh kar aaoga 2 din baad tyaare rehna

piya blushes and says : mujhe intezaar reh ga

precap : wedding prepration were going on abhay comes to meet piya secretely climbing her balcony