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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: semran31

GREAAATTT PLZZZ GO ON WITH THISS!!😉😉😉

thankls semran...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: luvdhrishti

wow dat's awesum
Vd love 2 read furthr. . .
Do continue soon

thanks for the comments dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: mayadika11

Hey deepz...
Awesooome...
Superb...
Fab...
Wonderful...
Loved the upd.
Thanx for the pm...
Take care.

thanks priti... for the wonderful comments
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: sona-rai

awesome

do update soon and add me to ur PM list👏

thanks sona
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
Thanks to all my friends... who liked and commented on my OS...
here u go the second part:
Part 2:
Geet gets into a taxi and starts cursing maan for spoiling her whole day...

ek baar takaray itna kaafi nahi tha kya?? baar baar takrate rahte ho...
kamina...
Geet reaches her hostel and checks for her fone and puts the phone on charging...
Maan reaches home and sees kashsih and sujal in front of his house sitting on steps...
he sees them and says.. uf fho..tum dono ko apne ghar mein rehna chahiye tha na mere ghar ke samne kyun mocha lagake baite ho...
Sujal: yeh sirf tera ghar hai kya? and shows anger... and maan looks at kashihs.. and she just shruggs her shoulders... and calls sujal.. sujal tum bhi na...
yeh ghar bhi mera hai.. maan ko chodo.. Geet kaisi thi?? achi thi na.. she was giggling.. and did she allow u to talk.. woh apni bak bak shuru karthi hai na.. koi bhi nahi rok sakthe hai.. main bhi nahi...she laughed...
Maan suddenly remembers about the girl... actually wet girl.. oh she was really hot...her eyes so beautiful.. he lips so sensual..
Maan...
Maan comes out his senses and hears kashish talking and talking this and that and sujal was laughing on her every joke...adoring.. Maan felt a small jealous.. thinks why doesnt he get lucky like them...
and then he turns takes them both inside and kashish says...
woh main geet ko try kar rahi hoon but she doesnt pick up the phone.. pata nahi kahan gayi woh...
acha tum bolo kaisi thi date??? kya khaya...
Sujal: tumhe aaj kal humesha khane ki padi hai...
Kashish wacks him and says to stay quiet... sujal gives her a flying kiss...
maan sees and smiles and says... woh tum sorry keh dena apni dost ko main nahi mila usse...
and narrates the whole story... kashsih feels bad and says... tumne kuch khaya nahi hoga na..
Maan: no problem i will have a pasta.. from here...
Kashish nahi humne bhi nahi khaya.. chalo main lekar aati hoon ayah baitke khayenge...
Sujal smiles and says u know her na.. she was so curious to know what happened... mujhe aur jr ko bhi bhooka rakha...
Kashish pouts and show faces to him... She gets up to go when sujal says... no ma'am aap yahan baito main leke aati hoon...
Kashish...woh chicken hai fridge pe.. oven mein garam karke laana.. aur roti bhi maine banake rakhe hao casserole main hai
aur
Sujal: pata hai icecream.. leke aati hoon...
Kashish smiles... and turns towards Maan.. what are u thinking...
Maan: i am thinking about that girl... she was something.. cant get her out of mind...
Kashsih smiles and says... ha... to naam poochna tha na... aur address bhi..
naam poochna chahtha tha... leking mujhe gussa aaya uske gusse main.. and kashish starts laughing...
Maan... can u imagine she called me stupid kamina and for waht just splahing on her dress...
kashsih laughs and says.. thats a girl Maan Singh Khurana... welcome to real world... and she laughs...
Sujal brings the food and Maan puts on news and kashish takes the remote and changes to bollywood songs and she haves food...
Both Sujal and Maan dont even dare to say no to her coz they love her so much...
after so much talking and teasing... sujal and kashish left for their home...
Maan goes to him room and goes to take shower...
he keeps thinking about those hazel eyes.. that beautiful girl and how hot she looked all wet and hears her calling him all ,kinds of names and comes out, shruggs his shoulders and comes back to bed... he was not able to sleep... takes his laptop and starts working on it for a long time and asfter a very long time sleeps off...
meanwhile geet had smiliar situation...
she was also thinking about that handsome man... whom she fought with... oh what a man.. what an attitude... and she calls herself jhalli
and sleeps off thinking about the anjana man and her flop date...
Next morning at Kashsih's office...
Geet comes in and smiles and says hello to all.. and sees kashsih and goes to her and says sorry woh bahut rat ho gayi thi na isliye mujhe nikalna pada...

par tera woh Maan nahi aaya 8.30 tak main intezaar kar rahi thi...

aur mujhe laga shayad jaldi aakar chale gaye honge aur mujhe bahut guilty feeling hui
Kashish: Geet Geet.. ruko yaar.. mujhe bhi kuch bolne do..
woh maan bhi late ho gaya tha.. use kuch accident hua..
Geet: oh woh tikh hai na...
Kashish: aisa kuch nahi tha... aiveyi hi... aur chalo main tum dono ko baad mein milati hoon..
Geet: nahi yaar...
Kashish: what nahi.. chalo.. kaam karna nahi hai kya???
Mean while...
Maan is working and Sujal is in his cabin talking to some clients...
after the client leaves.. the poen comes with two cups of coffee and sujal.speaks.. wiase kashsih kah rahi thi kal tumhe koi mili thi... kaun tha???
maan: stop it u guys... u are so pathetic...leave it... i dont even know what her name is...
Sujal: to kya hua... hum dhoond lenge...
Maan: mujhe kisi ko nahi dhoondhna... dekho is project ke baare mein baat karna hai...
Suddenly Sujal's phone rings and he gets up saying its kashish...
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After some days...
Sujal is out on some business trip for a meeting with client and kashish was making maan buying something...
Maan was in a book store looking for some book requested by kashsih... He was going through pregnancy books.. and hears a small fight...
He goes to the place from where he hears the sound and sees the same girl fighting with the biller on account of Rs 20.
Geet: kya aapke paas chutte nahi hai tio main kya karu.. mujhe chutte chahiye...
Biller: ma'am we are sorry but its just Rs20...
Geet: Rs 20 ka bhi mulya hota hai.. pata nahi hai kya... bade aaye bade shope kholke baite hai.. chutte nahi hai... kaise log ho aap??
Maan: keeps looking at her... even today she is in a white skirt and red top.. very beautiful...
Geet turns and sees tht same man... smiling ...
Geet pouts and sees him giving a pregnancy book to the biller... and she looks at him . thinks... yeh shayad shadi shuda hai... hmm...
Maan: hai...
Geet looks at him and smiles...
Maan: wiase aapne aapka naam nahi bataya...
Mera naam hai Ma...
Biller: Sir aapke book...
maan turns to say thanks and ssees that Geet has left...
Geet was walking very fast ,... and thinking about the man and thinking lagtha hai shadishuda hai.. mujhe baat bhi nahi karna chahiye...oh god aur main inse attracted ho rahi thi... babaji maaf karo...
Maan thinks... why did she leave without saying anything... maybe she is not interested ya.. yeh sab mujhse nahi hoga...
oh god.. i am embarresed.

suddenly kashsih ka call aatha hai aur maan says... ji memsahab aapki book mil gayi!!!
The very next day,,, afternoon...
Kashish calls up Maan and says... Maan i have a small office party at Blue Lagoon( Blue Lagoon is a disc)
Can u come and pick me up by 9 pm?
maan: ok.. tc.. and dont exert urself too much ok...
Maan reaches the disc by 8 pm...and ask the valet parking and goes inside and bumps to somone and he catches her and seees that its her again...
oh she was looking so beautiful ..in a jeans and a t-shirt...very simple.. yet breathtaking...
Geet looks at the man and says sorry...turns and shocked
Maan: what aapne mujhe sorry kaha... wow...
Geet looks at him in confusion... mainse sirf sorry hi kaha na
Maan: waise aap aa rahi hai ya jaa rahi hai?
Geet: kyun aap ghar tak chod denge mujhe??
Maan: why not? kahan hai aapka ghar... is baar bhi road pe hai kya??
Geet: chaddo... waise main jaa rahi hoon... bye...
and she leaves and slips and lands back in maan's hands... and in this process her back zippers come down and she feels uncomfortable...she tries to wriggle out of maan's hands and maan notices that takes her to a wall and pulls her close to him and slowly pulls the zipper up.. Geet closes her eyes to new sensation.. to the new attraction.. to the touch of a stranger now she doesnt feel he is a stranger...
they keeps looking at each other... Maan has tightly pulled her towards him... her hands on his chest... Maan's hands wounded around her small petite body... and Maan smells her hair... and Geet closes her eyes and
suddenly the DJ says... are u ready... they bothe snap out of each other and geet runs off...
maan keeps looking at her...'is baar bhi naam nahi poocha'...
pata nahi kaun thi.. yeh ajeeb kashish to mujhe uski taraf keehc raha hai... kya hai yeh...
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Edited by maneet1985 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
wow deepu!
kmini jo hai wo nahi update kar arhi hai..aue nayee nayee khol rahee hai..wo bhi jhoota "updating ka tag ke saath"
hehe...
to tell u the truth i loved it!
sujal n maan! aur kya chahiye!
geet ka bak bak was grt!
jaldi se mila do yaar!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

wow deepu!

kmini jo hai wo nahi update kar arhi hai..aue nayee nayee khol rahee hai..wo bhi jhoota "updating ka tag ke saath"
hehe...
to tell u the truth i loved it!
sujal n maan! aur kya chahiye!
geet ka bak bak was grt!
jaldi se mila do yaar!!

Kyaaa😲
Sujal ke saath Maan😲
deadly combo😍😍😍😍😍😍😍...
main toh sunke hi behosh😳
Deepu main yahan ka r kal un r karungi😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

wow deepu!

kmini jo hai wo nahi update kar arhi hai..aue nayee nayee khol rahee hai..wo bhi jhoota "updating ka tag ke saath"
hehe...
to tell u the truth i loved it!
sujal n maan! aur kya chahiye!
geet ka bak bak was grt!
jaldi se mila do yaar!!

sorry darling.. main vahan atak gayi hoon... yeh man main ayya tho...
sujal and maan and are my fav men!!😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: euphoric

Kyaaa😲
Sujal ke saath Maan😲
deadly combo😍😍😍😍😍😍😍...
main toh sunke hi behosh😳
Deepu main yahan ka r kal un r karungi😃

deadly combo honey!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
Indeed Deepu...
and in all honesty... Sujal still takes the cake for me😍☺️

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