Pablo's Muse#2 - AR Part 35(Completed) Sept.1 Pg 51

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Garima

@ScatteredCastle

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Although, I have no idea what this part is about, because I still have a lot to catch up - here I am - to congratulate you.

Congratulations A! There are many more to come, seriously.

ps - I miss F.O.T.W. and oh, any updates on the update of IoL?? :$

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Thanks a lot Garima :)

Nothing on IoL as of now...but rest assured, I won't leave it incomplete.

xoxo

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aditi

@gupta.aditi20

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

hey

awsome

specially the miiddle ground n middle earth thing...

bt i dint understand the last part...

She came running to the waiting room; stopped at the threshold to catch her breath, the general gloom was eerily infectious. She slowly walked up to him who stood leaning against the window sill, tired, dazed and unshaven, and whispered quietly, "How are they now?"

He just shook his head

hope i can understand it in the next part...

who is she??? n who r they?

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

hiii

congrats on da second thread

awesome update

loved it

loved AR

glad they r okaiii

cant wait 4 more

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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nksweetgirl

@nksweetgirl

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

hey...welcome back..lol ...love the part..it's so gud that armaan and ridhima are bck tgether..hope they sort out their problems togther...
it will be vry nice to get more updates bt i undrstnd tht u r busy..😔
anywy update soon ..and thank you for the pm...😃

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belle_moi

@belle_moi

Explorer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

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*Edited*

Congrats for the new thread darling!! Your story truly deserves it. Let me tell you, I am very critical about stories most of the time. But here is what I call a story, and that is much because of your language. The way you write is nothing short of mesmerizing. I have loved the story so far, and I am truly glad you updated. In fact, Armaan's artistic character(Pablo Picasso et all) is much like what i have dreamed about my prince charming. You have written a very sophisticated story, and only if you were more frequent with your updates, it would be my favorite. Yes, you should definitely update more often, and that is because I have read the chapter, and I absolutely have no idea of what happened before the chapter, a vague outline apart. If it is not possible for you to update much often, then please keep a recap in the beginning of every chapter. Armaan is adorable, and Riddhima as usual, is his fairy. You possess talent, make good use of it:)

Love.

Antara

Edited by belle_moi - 14 years ago

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anu.happy4ever

@anu.happy4ever

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

oooh! update at last! For a long time I was wondering why i got no PMs for any updates. 😭

So, they met with an accident? The ending hints that something bad's gonna happen..

Waiting for IoL update too! :D

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prerna

@prernawaghray

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

hey aria
nice part
the initial scene of AR was sweet though not that romantic but it was very cute n playful :)
so finally the puzzle pieces have fallen into place
still a part of the truth is hidden
i guess that'll also come around :)
but what i really liked was what armaan did for dia n minie
that was a wonderful gesture
hope minie survives :)
update soon

PS: congrats for the new thread :)

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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

i wanted to read ur ff.. frm the past 1 year.. bt i cudnt.. bt now that i finally hav read it.. i must tell u the same thing which u hav heard frm ur other readers.. that its awesm...i so loved it... i loved the way u hav shaped up each n evry character in this ff... bt there is one thing...which i find mssing in this fic is the frendhip n bonding in the interns... n eways.. nice upd8... will b waiting for the next soon

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imshveta

@imshveta

Navigator

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Aaah finally !!!!
Now what has happened. You left me wondering. Actually I read the update twice and then I understood what had actually happened and in what order. Just the last segment was a mystery. I think you left it so deliberately to torture us all (sighing dramatically)
But I loved their cute scene in the car. Their heart to heart talk was heart warming.
Nice update.

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Shveta