MAYUR SS: WISH (Epilogue Update pg # 17) - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
awesome update Gul
this update confused me. actually i couldnt understand how to react!!
m very happy to see mayur together, but nupur's action made me scared...m really scared of nupur.
i never imagine nupur like that.
so, its really new for me.
like shilpa-mayank bond...although shilpa is his step mom, but he loves her dearly...like his own mother!!
very nice.
so mayur went to london n d game began..
m really scared...wht ll her next step!!
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
oh myyy nupur kya kar rahi hai
mujhe toh abhi se hi acha nahi lag raha .
but w8ing fr time jan mayank ak love usse win over kar lega :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
She is less like the Nupur we love! But guess that's called innovation...
Go ahead... wud love to read more🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
what the hell is nupur doing with mayank..why is she being so unreasonable...but anyways vry interesting concept..looking forward to the next updates...continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55

Asalam alikum Guys Hope u all are fine.

Thank u so much For Your's Super duper response on my previous update.

Thank u for Liking this SS

Here is the Next part of this FF.

But its not an perfect one or U can just a filler

Hope u will like it also

Waiting for Your's Response

Happy Reading

Sorry For all Mistakes.😉

PART 3

Finally mayur reached their destination .Nupur was so happy but Mayank was quite upset. They entered their new house.

Nupur(with excitement): Wao Mayank what a beautiful house Look there.

Suddenly she felt that mayank is not responding to her. She saw towards him.

Nupur: what happen Mayank?

Mayank come back from his thoughts.

Mayank: Hmm kya hoa tum kuch keh rahi thi?

Nupur(angrily) : Mujha nahi pata tha ka tum yaha a kar itna badal jao gay ka tumha meri awaz bhi nahi aye gi.

Mayank (catches his ears) : oho Mrs sharma sorry dil sa sorry dekho kan pakar ka sorry ab to naraz mat ho or jaldi sa batao kya keh rahi thi.

Nupur: Tum bhi na acha cholo wo dekho and she saw whole house with him.

With passing days they settled them selves in new place. Mayank joined his new job .Nupur was so happy for her first won and she didn't do any thing bad in those days.

One day mayur was sitting on bed in there bed rooms. Mayank was busy on his lap top and Nupur was trying to talk to him.

Nupur: Wo Mayank mujha tum sa kuch abt karni ha.

Mayank : Hmm bolo.

Nupur: Oho Myank tum meri taraf dekho ga to ma kuch bolo gi na.

Mayank( closed his lap top): ok wify boliye konsi itni imp bat ap ko mujh sa karni ha.

Nupur: I wanna do Job:

Mayank(shocked): What ? But why .I think I earned enough and there is no any need of yours job.

Nupur: I know there is no any need But U know na tum to sunbha hio apni job pa chala jata ho or ma pora din ghar ma akela bor hoti hon agar ma job karo gi to ma bhi busy raho gi.

Mayank: But Nupur.

Nupur: By God Mayank ye typical husbands ki tarha behave karna band karo or ab man jao warna.

Mayank: ok ok naraz ku hoti ha .Bus ma man gaya ab khush.

Nupur: Hmm

Mayank (naughtly): wasa agra ma nahi manta to tum kya kar lati mera( he hugged her from behind) .

Nupur(awkwardly): Mayank choro mujha.

Mayank: ma na kitni bar kahja ha na ka tumha hum na chorna ka lia thori pakra ha akhir ap sa shadi ki ha asa kasa chorda.

Nupur (irritatingly): Mayankk.

Mayank: Nupurrr.

She saw him with anger.

Mayank; acha acha mujha itna khofnak look mat do nahi to mera heart fail ho jae ga .Acha lo ma na chr dia .

He freed her from his grip and nupur immediately Ling on the bed and closed her eyes.

Mayank was quite upset on her action but he also slept silently.

Nupur's provision:

I know Mayank tumha mera job karna bilkul bhi pasand nahi ah per Mayank sharma ab to tumhari life ma bohat kuch asa ho ga jo ka tumha bilkul pasand nahi ha .

She also slept.

Nupur joined new job in few days. She made new friends and spent most of time with them and completely ignored Mayank.

Mayank was so upset and depress due to her behavior .At one night in there bed room. Nupur was about to sleep .suddenly mayank said.

Mayank: Nupur.

Nupur: hmm kya hoa.

Mayank: Mujha tum sa kuch bat karni ha.

Nupur: plz bad ma mujha abhi bohat neend arahi ha.

Mayank (angrily): nahi mujha abhi bat karni ha or tum itni busy ho gai ho ka tumhara pas mujh sa bat karna ka bhi wakt nahi ha.

Nupur: mujha is wakt koi behas nahi karni ha wasa bhi mera sir ma dard ho raha ha is lia brrer ye hi hoga ka tum bhi so jao or mujha bhi sona do.

She closed her eyes and slept. Mayank was so angry with her and goes out of the room and slept in Tv lounge.

NEXT MORNING:

Nupur wake up and doesn't found mayank on bed. She remembered the night incident and smiled.

Nupur(in mind): Mr sharma itna naraz ho gay ka bahar sye. So mayank ji aj ap ko pata laga hoga ka kasa lagta ha jab koi apna pa ko ignore karta ha.Kitna dard hota ha or aj wohi dard ap ka dil ma ho raha ha j oak ap ka char sa saf pata chal raha ha.

She got up from the bed Get to fresh and after some time come on terrace to take fresh air. Suddenly she heard Mayank was shouting on his driver.

Mayank: Ma na tum sa kitni bar kaha ha ka meri car pa zara si bhi dust nahi honi chaie or dekho is ki halat.

Drivor: sorry sir

Mayank: Sorry sa kam nahi chala ga abhi ma office ja raha ho jab wapis ao to sab thek hona chaye .

Drivor: Ok sir

Mayank goes from there.

Nupur came down stares towards the car.

Nupur: Kya hoa ram lal(he is from India)

Drivor: kuch nahi mama sahib asal am sahib ki sab sa pyari gari ko saf karna bhol gaya tha is lia wo naraz ho raha tha. Asal ma ye un ki sab sa chaheti gari ha.

Nupur: Acha (suddenly an idea struck in her mind)

Nupur to drivor: Give me Keys.

Drivor: But mam.

Nupur: Ma na kaha na keys do mujha .

He gives keys to her.

She sits in the car and takes it out.

In evening mayank came back home and saw his car completely damage .

Mayank (angrily) : Ram lal Ram lal

Drivor : Yes sir.

Mayank: Ye meri car ko kya hoa.

Drivor( scared): Wow o sir nupur mama is ko al kar agi thi or is ak accident ho gaya.

Or Mam..

Mayank( wordily) : What ? Nuupur kaha ha.?

Drivor : wo andar han or.

Mayank immediately run inside the house and shouted her name.

Mayank: Nupur nupur.

Suddenly he bumped with her.

Nupur: oho mayank kya hoa.

He saw towards her and hugged her immediately and start sobbing.

Nupur( shockingly): Kya hoa Myank ha ro ku raha ho .batao na kya hao ha.

He broke the hug and said.

Mayank: Tum thek ho na.

Nupur: han ma thek ho mujha kya hona ha

Mayank: Wo car bahar.

Nupur : acha wo ha ia m sorry wo mujh sa tree pa takra gait hi to us ka ye hall ho gaya I am sorry.

Mayank: Oh to hell with the car. Thank God tumha kuch nahi hoa agar tumha kuch ho jata to ma kya karta nupur.

Nupur (confused): 'per wo to tumhari sab sa favorite car thi na.

Mayank: nahi Nupur mera lia tum sa zayada favorite, tum sa zayada Kemti or koi chez nahi ha I love U jaan

He again hugged her and tightened his grip.

Nupur's Provision:

Ye kya ho raha ha mujha kuch samaj nahi a raha .ma na ti is ki car ko jaan bojh kar mara tha taka is ko takleef ho magar yeh to ulta meri itni fikar kar raha is ko car ki bilkul bhi parwha nahi ha.

Ab ma kya karo per myank sharma ma tumha itni asani sa nahi chor sakti mujha kuch na kuch to karna para ga

PRECAPE:

Mayur in Party

Nupur drunk.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
res
itni kardoos nupur...
mayank is such a sweet heart n she doent even pays any attension ...
im fearing so much the moment he will get to know abt her...
update soon...
n bigerr too
Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
Nupur is acting heartless...can't she just see his love n concern...poor Mayank...wonder what the next blow will be...cont soon n a longer update plss...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58

Gul

awesom update dear
so noe Nupur started feeling for Mayank...good..i hope she ll fall in love with him soon
waiting for next part
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
ye nupur bhi na!!!!
when she will realize that mayu loves her a lot a.. she was too harsh to him...
hope sab kuch jaldi thik ho jaye
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
res..!!:D

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nupur...😡
she is doing wrong,wrong and wrong...i hate her.!
mayu is such a sweetheart!! love him..!!
precap is so interesting...!!
update soon..!!

payal_
Edited by pearl10 - 14 years ago

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