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Posted: 14 years ago
muskan di...
hw long for the update...????
me is waitin eagerly 4 da update...😍
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: niddzz

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc3300">di...😭</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc3300">hamara dhamakedar 50th updatepostponeho raha hai...me not likin it...😭😭😭</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc3300">di pweez update soon...!!! i kno u are stuck wid the jhamela happen in the forum...but iske liye why should our dhamaka suffer ???</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc3300">geet ko maan ki help ki zarurat hai...di aap ke via hi toh maan geet ki help kar payega...so di pweez update...</font>
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Me never stuck in jhamela
Me parting in NYC .. Weekend sweety
Back now typing
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bansipatel

muskan di...
hw long for the update...????
me is waitin eagerly 4 da update...😍


An hr more dear
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Posted: 14 years ago


owwwkkk...di...me is waitin till den...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
me too waiting dear..

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Posted: 14 years ago
ok so finally atlast he realised his love for her do update soon and congrats on ur new thread
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks a lot for all the beautiful comments
& pressing the like button
love u all
muskan



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Posted: 14 years ago
Really liked ur update n i m ur fan muskan di😊. LOL😆 i m behaving like a kid.DO CONTINUE😊
Edited by maneet1995 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Kab se waiting:-( how much more time muskan?
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 48
She gulped harder. His hand tucked her closer & kissed her shoulder. I am sorry he murmured.. she felt a tear fall on her shoulder. She immediately turned to face him.. searching his eyes..he immediately wiped his tears & faked a smile. Sucking in a deep breath, Maan purposely calmed his heart rate and took stock of things.

He remembered he was here to make Rahul jealous, but as he came close to her, he just lost track of every thing. Trying really hard not to get distracted by those questioning eyes. Her full lips had moved as she said something, but he just stared at her, she didn't speak again. She slowly cupped his face trying to read his eyes as she could see clearly there was no barrier...no confusion.. her heart missed a beat to see through.. love in his eyes so clearly, yet he was holding back.
What an idiot he was he thought.. he was still losing himself the moment he was around her. He hated himself..

she became little euphoric seeing his eyes, though she knew he will feel guilty, but seeing that love in his eyes was the most desirable. She raised to tipped toe & kissed his nose, she was definitely feeling bolder now. Her touch filled him with passion. His instant reaction to her made the most electrifying thrill that ran through her. She bit her lower lips & looked down dipping her gaze..lower..now falling on his chest. When her eyes caught the glimpse of his V-shaped opening as his shirt moved with sweet & soft wind in the room.. so close, she felt a deep wantonly ache as she felt his manly bulge softly touching her belly.. though he tried level best to stay away and an ungodly desire filled her when she caught him stealing desirous glances at her. She hugged him & held him tight. He felt so much in peace & so was she. All those years that passed by ..pain..agony ..suffering ..torment.. loneliness..all at once came to an end. It felt like the calm air after the hurricane as passed though the disaster it caused, ruin it cast was still scaring the hearts but that didn't matter anymore..it was them together..knowing there in love.. them in each others arms.

He felt a small hand pushing him away from his waist he looked down. Cute little pair of eyes replica of his dodo's almond eyes.. frowning at him.. pushing him away.. & squeezing between them. He immediately straighten himself. Amy frowned & hugged her. Meri dodo hain.. dare u touch her. He looked around consciously & now reminded of the actual game plan of the event that lead to all this. Rahul!! he scanned the place.. the dinning area.. he was no where around. He thanked his stars ..he didn't see all this.. it was more than mere teasing. Geet lifted amy & kissed his cheeks. Amy gave a victorious smile to tease Maan. Maan ignored it & left from there.
*************

Maan received a call from adhi confirming the tickets. He was not sure now, especially when he saw Geet & rahul arguing in the garden.


Rahul - u r delaying it
Geet - it was any way due on wed right
rahul - but the situation is different now
Geet - lekin genie ke samne kaisen
rahul - its better he knows about it all
Geet - tum samjthe kyun nahi. He won't be able to take all this
rahul threw the news paper on the table & walked away.. do wat ever u want..
rahul drew the children to school & went to office.


Maan couldn't hear wat they spoke, but he knew there was tension. He told adhi to cancel his tickets. He had to solve all this for her. Mera gussa sab pe nikal rahi hain.

Geet got call she instantly answered - where r u? Why r u so angry
nahi kuch nahi
Geet - kya huwa?
Kuch nahi.. why did u call?
Geet - Teri us se baat huwi?
kahana mujhe uske baren main baat nahi karni
Geet - I don't understand wats ur problem
my problem is my madly in love... & I can't take all this
Geet kept quiet & didn't know wat to say.. she just waited ..
the line went dead.. Geet closed her eyes & hit the phone on her head.


She sat in the swing & kept thinking wat she could do about all this. Wish she could sort out things. Maan came down & sat next to her in the swing. She smiled weakly still worrying abt the call
Maan - kya huwa..sab teehk hain na
she nodded
Maan - aab mujhe se jhod bhi bolne lagi ho?
Geet - nahi genie, aisen koi baat nahi
Maan - why don't u tell me then probably I could help
Geet - I didn't want to drag u into all this.. & tum use janthe bhi nahi
Maan - tumhe tho jantha hoon.. aur agar tum involved ho tho main tho automatically involve ho gaya na.
She smiled when he said that .. challo yeh sab chodo ..she gets up & walks towards the house.. lets go for lunch
tumhara office
I will work from home today
so work.. I am fine..mujhe kanhi nahi jana.. he said rather bit irrated tone
he got up & walked pass her to his room.

She understood he was not happy. He was just trying to help, but then she was so used to being independent she forgot how she used to run to him for every small thing. She laughed at herself. But this matter she has not been able to solve it has been so many months now. Guess it would be better she took his help. she looked for him ..he was in the kitchen making coffee.
Geet - mujhe kah diya hota
Maan - tum mujhe se har baat kahthi ho kya
she looked down feeling guilty. He opened few cabinets on the top shelve. She passed the coffee bottle. He snatched it from her hand.. he bend down to open the cabinets below.. she slowly slide the coffee mug. He pulled it closer & added the coffee powder. He added his usual one spoon
Geet - u will need 2 spoons. Yeh utni strong nahi hain
he rolled his eyes & gave the bottle & mug to her
she smiled & made the coffee for him. Though he was fighting but thats wat he wanted. Even she knew that. He sat small dinning table in the kitchen. She placed the coffee near him & kept watching him until he sipped it.

She sat silently for few mins & then very reluctantly ..genie mujhe..woh.. I need ur help
he didn't say anything he continued to drink his coffee.
She slowly slipped a photo towards him, sliding from her to his side 'placed facing towards him
he looked at the photo curiously.

-BLOG maitri part 48-

TRYING TO UPDATE ANOTHER PART


Precap
Maan wondering has she lost it

-PREV PART 47 NEXT PART 49-
thanxs a lot for all the comments
love u all a lot
please please comment
will PM later
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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