~maitri~ MAANEET FF THREAD 6

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

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Posted: 14 years ago

#211

maan must be really having hard time hearing dodo from amy..

now wats the matter she is disturbed about, waiting for update

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PoojaMishty

@PoojaMishty

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Posted: 14 years ago

#212

ME back after a week... Feeling good after reading all your updates.. Its like a refreshment...😊

Yeee.. double updates.. waiting eagerly...

Muskan.. Ye Geet aur Rahul kya baat kar rahe the.. ??? i think something about Amy...😲 I hope nothing is serious..

Photo ??? NT... My guess. Lets see.. Waiting ...

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Shruti_0505

@Shruti_0505

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Posted: 14 years ago

#213

plz finish the suspense

n when r u updateing?

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Anupama

@beforesunrise

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Posted: 14 years ago

#214

i cant still bliv ...u r giving double update 😃

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

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+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#215

Beautiful part.
Loved it.
Maan is completely lost in geet.
He lost all track y he is there and lost him self.

Geet noticed love in maan's eyes.

Geet know her maan well

Loved their (Maaneet) scene,

Both r suffering too much from last few days

They feel peace in each other arms.

the pain, they bear last 7yrs. The loneliness, the separation they took after they parted away from each other.

Finally the feel the peace in each other arms.

But I loved this part more.

Cute amy , mere dodo hain. So sweet.

loved this part.

He felt a small hand pushing him away from his waist he looked down. Cute little pair of eyes replica of his dodo's almond eyes.. frowning at him.. pushing him away.. & squeezing between them. He immediately straighten himself. Amy frowned & hugged her. Meri dodo hain.. dare u touch her. He looked around consciously & now reminded of the actual game plan of the event that lead to all this. Rahul!! he scanned the place.. the dinning area.. he was no where around. He thanked his stars ..he didn't see all this.. it was more than mere teasing. Geet lifted amy & kissed his cheeks. Amy gave a victorious smile to tease Maan. Maan ignored it & left from there.

Loved it.

He teased maan this time but maan ignored it.

Now maan is searching where is rahul and Thanks his star for not rahul is there but hota bhi toh kya hota.

Usse thora kuch lagta.

Maan samjho dear

Hmmm there is some suspense in geet- rahul and geet and some person conversation.

Maan want to go back to delhi but seen geet- rahul r fighting and want to stay there to solved their problem.

Hey bhagwan,

Ok ek tarah se accha hain , maan rehega toh slowly slowly he will know everything and understand also,

Maan want to help geet but geet said she will handle it as in this 7yrs she always take care of her all problem by herself.

Since she left Bangalore and parted from maan she is taking care of everything by her own.

But maan want to help her when she said that , he got angry and left from there.

Geet know it.

And now she will take his help .

Aww maan is so cute when he is angry.

Maan went to make coffee in kitchen and at last take geet's help.

Maan loved it and geet know it..

So whose pic geet showing to maan.

Suspense.

Loved it.

Precap is interesting.

Continue soon.

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Sameenaas

@Sameenaas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#216

Feeling so sleepy!!!!!
Pleeez update sooon Di...

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aali

@18mypride

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Posted: 14 years ago

#217

hay rabba kya feelings bhara hug tha... cho cute small one showing his possessiveness... meri dodo hain... loved it.

omg now suspense is killing yaar musky!

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vivacious_gurl

@vivacious_gurl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#218

I demand a triple update... 😆😆😆😆😆

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#219

grt muskan darling u r giving another update
I'm little greedy more can we get 2more updates
kya karu iye dil mange more

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Muskan

@muskanp

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Posted: 14 years ago

#220

She slowly slipped a photo towards him, sliding from her to his side 'placed facing towards him
he looked at the photo curiously.

He almost chocked & then wondered wat exactly she meant.
Genie this naintara
he remembered Rano aunty mentioning about her. Still wat the hell was she doing in this pic with rahul he wondered.
They really love each other.
He knew she was too nave.. but not so dumb to talk abt her husband with another women.
They were in love since school days
he wanted to say he can see that.. but thats past.. but he preferred to keep quiet since nothing made sense.
Ek choti se baat ko le ke itna gussa hogayen hain
tell me about it he thought.. wondering how she used to blow matters out of proportion... especially leaving the hostel just because some one said something abt him (muskan wonders me really influenced by things happening.. chi chi babaji...)
pata nahi main insab ke beech main kanah se aagayi
exactly wat he was thinking.
Genie meri help karo na
wat do u want to do?
I want them to sort out their misunderstandings & be together
he wondered if she has lost her mind completely. Though he didn't mind that.. if rahul & Nt are together then Geet will be left alone.. & off course he won't leave her alone... so it is a win win situation !!! such wicked thoughts.. he tried to curse himself.. genie tu sach main heartless ho gaya hain. Here she is trying to patch that stupid rahul with that NT.. in the bargain .. losing all that she has in her life.. & all he could think about of was getting his dodo for himself. How selfish & cunning u have become. Well he was always mean .. from the start never thought abt anyone else when it came to issues with his heart. Well now.. it is abt his dodo.. he has to change change himself at least for once think of someone else feeling before his.
he was snapped out of his fight with his own feelings when he heard her plead
genie plz meri help karo na

how do u want to do it
I want then to meet just once.. sab kuch apne aap teehk ho jayenga
he smiled how cute she is he thought
but then she was so true.. when u r in love.. then its the distance that plays the negative part. When u r together u can't express hatred to a person when u love him/her from bottom of ur heart. Probably he couldn't dislike her when he hated the whole women species for 8 long yrs to such an extent.

All the while his thought was wat will happen to her if NT & rahul decide to be together. Probably thats why she said RIP. Probably thats why Nt divorced her husband. Khud tho divorcee..hain aab meri dodo ka bhi ghar thodne main lagi hain. he hated it..

In the hospital rahul walks straight into Nt is cabin
Nt looks at him for a min keep looking at him .. then immediately shouts - just leave
rahul - meri baat suno..plz.. its not abt us
Nt gets up & decides to leave herself.. she couldn't really fight or be angry with him especially when her heart cries to be in his arms but wat he did was unforgivably. She just couldn't accept all this. She didn't want to even get weak .. though every passing min in his vicinity was melting her, breaking the strong wall that she had build around her heart for so many months now.

Rahul held her arm & pulled her back.
Jaanu ek bar meri baat sun lo
nahi.. not after u spend the night with that b****
rahul clinched his fist & pinned her to the wall.. it is not the way u think
we finished arguing on that
her legs were getting weak feeling him all over her. His closeness.. reminded her of all the time the made love.. they came close..their love, passion.. how it felt to be in his arms. She looked away. It was not just her even he couldn't have resisted being so close to her. He knew she was angry he did any thing with her kind of temper she will only get more angry ' but the closeness was beyond them.. he took her angry lips into his & kissed her. Her eyes melted into the kiss. Her hands that were protesting now slipped behind caressing ..slipping feeling his strong back that was only hers.. claiming him. His kiss expressed his longing.. her tears showed her denial to it. She realized wat she was doing. She put all her wit together & pushed him away. How dare u.. just leave... she covered her lips hiding her tears she ran to the wash room.

Geet - Maan Mansion

Maan thought for a while - why don't we take them for a dinner.
Geet - dono saat main nahi aayen ge
Maan - lock them in a room
Geet - room!! Nt will not even step into the house if she knows he is there
Maan - get them to some place beach or something.. don't tell them other is coming
Geet jumped & placed a peck on his right cheek. ur the best genie. ..she kissed him again.. almost clinging to him side ways. He gulps his saliva ..captivate his mind for a few minutes before he finally closes his eyes. he could see her face in his mind as he last saw it, drawing away from that kiss ..happy giggling..most beautiful sight. Her arms around his neck holding him so close to her body, her lips on his cheek, sweet and tender'it took his breath away.

He just wanted to pull her close to him and never let her go. Always keep her smiling.. giggling lively.. closed protected in his arms. The happiness caused a spell on them.. the emotion and excitement was almost too much for them to bear. She leaned in tentatively, and he leaned closer. She closed her eyes and breathed in his scent, a slight touch of aftershave mixed with his own ruggedness. He was strong. His arms encircled her waist, and he brought his fingertips to rest at the small of her back, sending a shiver up her spine. She wrapped her own arms around him and rested her hands on his strong, muscled back.

They struggled as their emotions began to overtake their common sense. Here they were, planning to get Nt & rahul together but letting each other easily overpower the other. Yet all their actions indicated that they wouldn't do anything that other wasn't willing to do. the question was both wanted the same but didn't know wat the other wanted. It took a lot for them to behave normal & pull out of the hug.

She cleared her throat.. tum ..rahul ko leke ana..main Nt ko
umm
we can drive to a private beech house.
He didn't know anything but agreeing to her. It was not in him to ever deny her. He did once & lost her for 8yrs.. he couldn't do that not again..

-BLOG maitri part 49 -

Precap
dinner date
-PREV PART 48 NEXT PART 50-

thanxs a lot for all the comments
love u all a lot
please please comment
will PM later
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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