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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#691

congrats for re writting it

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Nitya

@ChanandlerBong

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#692

kuddos for re writing

waiting for d next part ...

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pearl_warrior

@pearl_warrior

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#693

Happy to know that you are re-writing...

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ExpectoPatronum

@ExpectoPatronum

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#694

I just hated this dev...let him say for it
maan didn't trust geet? I'm angry wid him...

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Simran_14

@Simran_14

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#695

awesome update dear

loved it

plz cont soon

thnx 4 da pm

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Ratna

@--Ratna--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#696

Rithika 🤗...thank u so much for rewriting this FF...really appreciate your effort my dear...loved the 1st part...i agree with u it is way better than the previous one...plz continue...love u...TC 😊

Edited by PerfectYaRav - 13 years ago

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#697

thanks a ton for taking the pain for us and re writing this FF .. cant wait to read ..

love

Sana

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#698

RITHIKA

DONT REMEMBER THE EARLIER VERSION

BUT I AM SO GLAD THAT WILL BE ABLE TO CONTINUE IT

AND THE FIRST PART WAS GREAT

MAAN'S DESPAIR AND HIS GUILT FOR NOT BELIEVING IN HER AND THE MEMORIES OF HER LOVE WERE CLEARLY VISIBLE

AND THE LINE THAT SHE SAYS IS NEW AND SO TRUE

HOPE HE IS ABLE TO BEAR THE TRUTH OF HIS DAD AND BROTHER

BUT I THINK THE CONFRONTATION BETWEEN MAAN AND HIS DAD CAN BE MORE EXPLOSIVE THAN IT WAS IN THE EARLIER VERSION

I FELT IT WAS TOO PASSIVE

MAAN SHOULD BE ABLE TO LET OUT THE LAVA IN HIM MORE FORCEFULLY ON HIS DAD FOR TRYING TO PLAY GOD IN HIS LIFE

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Saams

@Saams

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#699

Hey yaar..This is nice one.

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priyanka

@doublecross

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#700

superb!
love it to the core!

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