'AASTHA'-Maaneet FF-PART 1 RE-WRITTEN - Page 50

Originally posted by: ursrithika

Hiii Deepa...

Thankyou Sooo Much Dear... Its an honor for me... and I say it sincerely... when you say, my fiction compelled you to comment... what else I can wish for?? I am sooo Happy... I will always try to keep up with your all expectations... The novel is Harlequin Collection from Mills and Boons.Name I dont remember exactly, some 'Child' it was. The first name, I am not getting. This time, when I go India, I will check and tell you , if you want. I read it when i was in Pre-Degree. But it tuched, me deeply i am still in love with that novel... But, real story is short one. only present is there and not much emotional train.

Also, raw sex is more in that... sooo i changed to suit our Maaneet... with past... emotions... guilt..love.. passion... desire...

Originally posted by: harshdb

Originally posted by: sindu555

woah!! when did MAan sleep with other women 😲 ... did I miss something?

as far as Geet sleeping with other men is concerned .. this was the very reason for their separation... though it wasnt the truth but it was presented as one infront of MAan testified by his own brother whom he trusted with his life and it was backed by proofs (which were fake obviously) ... if at all Maan slept around with other women .. it was prolly after this whole fiasco.. and it was certainly out of rage he must've been doing this .. though I still highly doubt that MAan went on sleeping with other women ... but may be I left some part ...

watever it was .. it can never be justified ... but thats life ... life never comes in rights or wrongs its a combination of both ... and no one is perfect .. small or big ... humans are bound to make mistakes ... and thats a sad reality of life

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Sana

Originally posted by: alfiya7

rele hw cn a woman who hs been molested falls in love wid her molester chi its so disgusting...this kinda women r disgrace 2 womanhood...ofcrse hw cn she trust him again...its d question of her self respect now...n 1 more thing wt if geet wud hve slept wid several men wud he still forgive her n accept her??????is it so easy...its high time nw tht women stop being emotional fools n stand for their self respect n become strong...if d women strt blvg tht she is strong she does nt need any man 2 protect her frm evil...physical needs r different m talkg abt protection...male ego this rele gives me a vry creepy feeling...women shud hve attitude n ego...if he truly loved her he wud hve nevr touched ne othr woman...pls its a request try 2 mention this point in ur fiction...wt if geet slept wid othr men????

Originally posted by: sindu555

I kinda feel bad for Maan ... I know he shud've trusted his love and all ... but in reality as humans we are in need of proofs .. our heart and mind need proofs ... and thats wat went wrong here ... he was manipulated by his own blood ... as u mentioned that Daadi and Dev were the two most important ppl in his life .. and when one of them (Dev) testified against Geet ... along with the proof ... how cud MAan not believe it ... any one wud .. if it was only his Dad .. am sure he wudnt have believed him .. but here the case is different ... if the roles are reversed ... am sure Geet wud also have done the same thing wat Maan did ... in such cases the person is so broken that all the logic and rationality fades away .. which is pretty normal ...after all the situation and ppl here are pretty normal .. not something larger than life sorts ...

from where I see, in this whole thing Maan is the worst effected ... he lost his love ... he was away from his child .. he lost his faith in blood relations ... he lost his brother ... his own brother left him alone with the bitter truth .. to fend for himself ... in short he lost himself ... and as u said ... he is burning from the past 6 years ... initially it was rage and his broken heart and now its guilt ... but his soul is being burnt from such a long time and I guess after the truth the intensity has only increased ... if Geet is not by his side ... his remorse and agony will eat him ... he is already broken .. the only thing which is keeping him intact is the slight hope that he may .. he just may be able to get his love and his child back ... even when he does get them back .. it wont be easy for him ... those 6 years will haunt him forever .. especially those years he lost of Daksh's life ...

as for Geet she was no less effected ... trust in relationships is huge thing ... and mistrust in very painful ... these past 6 years wudnt have been easy for her ... being a single unwed mother is no joke ... survival is not easy ... but she atleast had Daksh with her ... to give her hope and courage to go forward and face the hardships ... Mother's love is indeed very strange and amusing ... it siliently takes over every other emotion ... as of now she is very confused with herself ... she doesnt know wat she wants ... she accepts the fact that with Maan by her side no one will be able to harm her or Daksh .. she has that faith in Maan ...and she is least bothered about the Khurana name Daksh is entitled to ... all she cares for is Daksh to get a father's love ... however on the other hand she is worried whether Maan's parents will accept Daksh or her in their family ... Geet needs to get out of this confusion ... she needs to take a decision ... to think of it ... she has taken a decision in her heart ... its just the matter of accepting it in her mind ..

Daksh is the most important reason for them to be together ... he has nothing to do with the past ... and he fully deserves his both parents love...

woah! that was BIIIG comment 😲 ... plzz pardon me for my blabber 😃

thanks alot for the awesome update ... love the way you write

continue soon

love

Sana