'AASTHA'-Maaneet FF-PART 1 RE-WRITTEN

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Aashi_saphire

@Aashi_saphire

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#501

nice update!!!!!!! 😛

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#502

Originally posted by: ursrithika

NOOO ... NOOO MY DEAR... ITS NOT A BLABBERING FOR ME, ATLEAST... U SAID IT... WHAT I TRIED TO SAY IN 22 PARTS, YOU JUST SAID IT IN FEW WORDS... I AM SOOO HAPPY.. HANDS ON MY HEART, I AM TELLING YOU... THANKYOU DEAR...

SITUATION WAS THE VILLAIN... OR SAY FATE... BUT THEIR LOVE IS TOOO STRONG, TO OVERCOME ALL THIS...

THANKYOU SANA... THANKS A LOOOT

awww 🤗 .. no need to thank me lady ... u see my comments were an outcome of your amazing story telling ... u know direct dil se types 😃 ...

thanks for the appreciation .. am elated to know that I was able to understand and portray the writer's thoughts ... 😊

write soon ...

love

Sana

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Anubhuti

@tellyme

Sparkler

+ 20

Posted: 14 years ago

#503

beautiful update...

And this was Maan's side of story...

As ususal very well written

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saim

@amzu32

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#504

Awesome update!!

loved it a lot!!!

Loved the way you elaborated past scene in alternate form ..according to Maan pov..Great

Continue soon

thanks for pm

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@mitzi11

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#505

super duper

love it

cont soonnn

ty 4 pm

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pushpi

@pushpi

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#506

I read your entire story over the phone because I couldn't stop finishing it in one go...that simply says that I just LOVE your story!!!

It's fantastic

From the last update, I loved this part "

Dev's deathbed revelations had set in motion a train of action she had no way of stopping. Maan was the engine driver and she and Daksh were captive passengers. All she could hope for was they didn't crash against an immovable force which would break them apart with worse wounds to carry into the future."

This alone summarizes the focus of the storyline...

Please please PM me too and keep updating :-)