'AASTHA'-Maaneet FF-PART 1 RE-WRITTEN - Page 37

Awazing!! Oh,a first 4 maan,so cute the kid! Liked ur description of the past!

v touchy . the pain that geet is going through, she is in a tough dilemma, neither choosing nor leaving. and Maan, somehow i still dont take pity on him for he despite of being a rational thinker yet turned to an emotional fool but hey after all we all are human being who tend 2 make mistakes and the best of us r those who repent. here maan's laments could be heard and seen throughout his actions n patience. n daksh such a cute child. lucky him 2 have loving parents

good going. do continue soon dear

ni8ce part

continue soon
ty 4 the pm

awesome update...it is really difficult for geet to marry maan...speciaaly when she knows the head of the Khurana family will do anything to keep her out of their family...he had done it once, he can do it one more time...and this time the stake is high qith Daksh in the picture

Thanks for the Pms.Love ur story from the start.Sorry for not commenting earlier,been busy for a while.I assumed Dev would survive,but seems like he got his punishment for such dreadful lies.Anyway it was nice of him to say the truth to Maan before dying.U expressed well the emotional turmoil of Geet and Maan.But Geet forgiving Maan too soon isn't right,but in the case of Maan he seems to be right like if Geet haven't given Dev the unnecessary attention while he was flirting with her,ther would have been a chance of believing her.Maan was right,u can't doubt ur own brother whom u grew with.Daksh is really sweet boy,reminding both of them about each other,hope he will bring his parents together.The story involving how they met first is good,curious to know how they have fallen for each other.Good interesting story.Continue...

AMazing , awesome update, continue soon.

awesome ... superb ...

Originally posted by: MeetPremeer

nice

Originally posted by: bangalores

liked the 'kash-ma-kash'...its so right of geet to be scared of commitment, to be afraid of being hurt...like Maan for being patient, to an extent...

Originally posted by: XXXYYYZZZ

Awesome update... loved it