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Hey guys i am writing a new ff please do read and comment

CHARACTERS:

Captain Rajveer Singh Shikhawat : a lovely serious kind of person luv military academy .. now is a cadet
Naina Singh Aluwaliya : a bubly gal who just luvs his elder bro but fights wid him too
Catain Naveen Singh Aluwaliya : a bubly , firlty boy , in military academy as cadet .. a only best friend of raj
Sameera Singh Shroff : a bubly shubly gal in collage wid naina one of best buddy of her.. her nick name is sam
Huda Singh : a lovely person who loves sameera
Brigadier Chandok: a very gud person at heart luvs KMA but strict wid cadets
Major Nair : a bad person and extremely stirct wid cadets
Alek Sharma: a very friendly type of person whom sameera luvs but never show her his feelings
Geet Handa : new in collage and in buddies of naina and sameera and huda and alek
Arohi Sinhania : luvs arjun..in collage of naina
Arjun Punj : luvs arohi .. in collage of naina
Shafali : will be releaved later
Kabir Singh Rathore:A loving guy
Pari Singh Rathore:Kabir and Dev's sis
Dev Singh Ratore: A hansome hunk later will be revealed

Part 1
Location Collage CanteenNaina and Huda bamped into each other Naina : tu sudhrey ga nhi naHuda : nhi yaar agar sudhar gaya to tera yeh ghussa kis ko apna mooh dekhaye ga Naina :( in great anger) . HUDA KE BACHE!!!! Ruk beta abhi baate hoonHuda : (running) nhi yaar mera koi bacha nhi hai i am single but ready tp mingle ... mara nhiii!!!Naina Bumped Into AlekAlek : kiya ho raha hai koi apun ko bhi baataoHuda : dekh na alek mein to seedha seedha satvi savitra type ladka hoon na aur yeh witch naina ..Alek : Cleaning his throat tu aur satri savitra type ahem ahemNaina : tu ne mujhe witch bola?? BTW who is satri savitra ??Alek and Huda start laughingAlek: lo madam ko yeh bhi nhi pata Huda : areey yaar satri savitri ka male versionNaina : ohhh ! and started laughingSameera enter da canteenNaina : hey samSameera : heyyySam slip and alek catch her "eye contact "Naina started laughingHuda : giving hand to her Chot to nhi lagii na Alek : yeh sawal tujhe mujh se pochna chahiyeNaina : hmm wisse sam kafi ache lag rahe hoon ek dum pari .. Sam : thanxxAlek : hmmm theek hi lag rahe haiHuda: nhi meri sam i mean humare sam hai hi pyarii to pyari hi lage naSameera : thanxx and :P to alek whats up guys??Huda : i think da sky is up Sameera : chup kar 1970 ke mare hue phooolHuda : Sam ki bachiiAlek still looking at Sam wid mouth openNaina : hitting him on his stomach Muh band kar warna dil ki feelings dekh gaye geAlek : chup kar stop it guys >> Class chaltey hainHuda : nhi yaar economics ka class hai bore hoi gaye ge Alek : economics nhi hindi ki class hai :PHuda : phir to bilkul nhi Alek : chup kar chaltey hainAll went to class


LOCATION : KMA
Naveen : firlting wid sum galsRaj : interup Kiya ho raha hai NAVOOgals goes Naveen make a baby face : thodi der ruk nhi sakta tha bas num hi de rahe thi Raj: num hi to de rahe thi na.. dinner par to nhi bula rahe thi naNaveen : acha abhi to meri baaten buri lagte hia na jab mein chala::Raj : chup kar nautarki chal warna Major Nair mar dale geNaveen : haan yaar chal


LOCATION In CLASS
Sir : giving lecturesHuda : sleeping in classnaina and sam making notesalek : uutt na kiya kar raha hai huda : sone de naSir standing in front of huda : Modiya ap ko sone ke liye raat miltey hai na to ap yahan kyun so rahe hainHuda Kon hai bey ??


Precap : new gal in da collage

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Posted: 14 years ago
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guys I need only 2 comments to continue😃 and please do reply and I am sorry for the mistakes
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanx dear but need only one more😃
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This is just for you dear😃

Part 2
Huda: kon hai bey?? (cleaning his eyes)
All started laughing
sir : Modiya!!!!!!!!
Huda : opening eyes and a small angina SIR SIR SIR SIR
sir: modiya ap ne apna HW kiya
Huda : confused yeh kiya hota hai ??
Alek : chup kar!!! yeh lijiye sir snatching naina s HW
sir: hmmm
bell rings
Naina : alek tu ne mera HW kyun diya
ALek : agar nhi deta tu yeh jata
Sameera : haan jata to acha hota jaane dete na yaar ( winks at alek and naina)
Huda making a baby face
Sam: acha over acting mat kar
all started laughing
Naina : yeh shor kahan se aaraha hai
Alek : lagta hai canteen yeh kissi ki ragging go rahe hai
IN DA WAY
Arohi and arjun jumped on them saying hey guys
All said : yeh kon sa tarika hai hume pareeshan kare ka ???
ARjun and Arohii acha na theek hai ab over react mat kar wisse bhi arjun ka idea tha
Arjun looking at arohi : mera idea??
ARohi hitting at arjuns stomach haan g haan Arjun Punj ka idea
Alek : dekh wahan se shor aa raha hai ja kar dekhey hain
ALL NODDED


IN CANTEEN

a beautiful gal was crying and al was making fun of her
Alek : interup areey tum log isse kyun pareeshan kar rahe hoon and leave at once
all leave
Naina : to da gal : hey i am naina
SAM : dis is sameera u can call me sam
Arjun : arjun
Arohi : arohi sinhania
Huda was least interested
GAL : hey dis is geet...geet handa
Huda : u mean da daughter of famous business man HANDAS
hey i am huda nyc to meet u >>
Geet nodded
Arohi : do din baad collage mein picnic hai tu aao ge geet
Geet : may bee tu log aao ge
All said : hum aur picnic par na aaye issa kabhi ho sakta hai
ALL STARTED LAUGHINg
Arjun : chalo hum chaltey hai holding hand of arohi
Geet : ap dono couple hoo kiya
Arjun and Arohi see each other noded and smile then leave
Geet : what a sweet couple>>
HUDA was drinking coffee and boy bumped in him and coffee spill on da floor
Sam : tum ko rap walk karna aatey hai
Geet : nhi tum kar ke baatao na
Sam : started walking and slip by da coffee spill by huda
naina and geet : sammm
alek : catch her and eye contact**
Alek : lagta hai aj madam ka garne ka shok ho gaya hai
Sam made a baby face
Huda : sorry sam lagee to nhi
Sam : nah yaar itz ok
all of them started laughing


Precap: Naveen and scared?? but of whomm?? and why???

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