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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#851

Thanx for the super fast upd8 my deary zappy ... <3

cuming to the part it was short as compared to the last one as.. last one was very very very long hehe

bt this was nice part wid not much of rona dhona ... n thank you for that..

it was light & simple especially after a lot of crying in the last part from my side.. this was a breather...

Waiting for the next part eagerly.. as i want to see armaan's niki's manaofy session.. that wud b cute.. if u are planning to shw that... (plsssh do it .. bt no forcing its ur wish ), n secondly , the new years party.. wanna see wat u hav in store for this payal character... n which keema is ridzy gonna make of her hehe

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friends_4dream

@friends_4dream

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#852

this was awesome
d way u expressed armaan's feeling was awesome
loved it

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#853

Wow Rachna .
I am just too happy to say anything ... AR talk was superb. What a relation they share. Jo bhi hoo they will find the way. God bless them always like this..
Though Ridhima forgot to mention about her papa here i am sure she will tell him and Arman will get the heart attack of his life after know about new development in his dear sasurji 😆

Looking forward to the new year celebration .
Continue soon .

Thank you so much for this quick part.

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zoya-ammy

@zoya-ammy

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#854

Zappy did i ever told u 'I love u ' now i want to admit it ,from roof top i can shout
Loved it wen dis tiny brain ridhi was send by shanky papa .
Da convo.btw AR their emotions d way they understand each other was superbb

" sANTUSHTI" lolz typical boy's code
&bestest was "joh tum kaho" hahaha

now million dollar Ques is "where is sHaNkY PaPA"???

Edited by zara-20k - 14 years ago

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anjie22

@anjie22

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#855

Superb parts...Loved the way u write about AR bonding and their understanding..

Continue soon and thanx for the PM

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#856

That was a brilliant part Rachna. I love the way Armaan always tries to understand Riddhima, through everything. He maybe hurt , be upset, and she may be the reason for it, but he never ever stops thinking from her side. I love how he realized that her intentions behind it weren't wrong at all.

But what I adore the most about this part was Armaan's way of explaining to her, how her being with him wipes away all the memories that pain him. She is all her wants, and lives for. I totally agree with him,.. he lost everything at a very early stage in his life and didnt know how to manage it all alone, he did whatever he could.And now that so much time has passed, he is used to dealing with the pain the way he would back then, because he doesnt know any other way.

And he is right, he obviously loves his mom, and wants to remember her happily, but the pain he feels for losing a wonderful person from his life comes along with it and its not his fault.

I guess Riddhima does realize now that even though she wouldnt want him to feel the pain, but its something that is a part of him, and the only thing she can do to lessen it is , be with him .

I LOVE lovee the words Armaan used for Riddhima, especially when he said you are me. I was in awe of how confident he was , how he could talk so effortlessly to her. Just shows the level their relation has reached.

I dont know how you do it Rachna, or maybe we all love Armaan so much that we all feel what he does. You have written his feelings so beautifully. Its so so touching. I think I cried reading it.

I hope AR stay how strong they are now, and the next few parts give them some peace, and some calm and beautiful moments together.They deserve it 😆

Thanks a ton for all these quick updates.

Edited by Ankita.M - 14 years ago

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anushkajain

@anushkajain

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#857

wow full part in a day
these barish of updates bring back the feeling of nostalgia ...remind me of those wonderul days n time spend while reading TOWS n also remind me of those days when we use to get updates on daily basis ...zappy i missed those days
well ur updates r according to season wise n up to date becoz at a time monsoon we r having a shower of updates😆

the title is soo true
love turns the whole thing around ...totally agreed
awesome the part was lovely
there heart to heart talk was awee fantastic talking always works
tufan bhara previous part was a indication to this shant n santust part zappy ur update denied the sayin something like tufan ke pehli ki khamoshi i hope u understand it is something like that only
this part was totally contrast as compare to previous part
i m toh very santusht with the part
pativatra thing was hilarious
continue soon😊

Edited by anushkajain - 14 years ago

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HC_love

@HC_love

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#858

Okayy this was such an amazing update!!😍I keep rereading it man..Rachna you're gifted :| and you have no idea how happy this update has made meee,especially after the fight they had hehe<3

Armaan's reaction was kind of unexpected,but then again,hes Armaan..what is he made of?He went through so much because of her,but inspite of being mad at her,and shattered after all that she said to him..he tried to understand her pov..and actually forgave her without giving it another thought :| Wow i looove this guy so much!❤️I LOVED absolutely LOVED their talk,whatever armaan said to her,to free her from that guilt,awwieee I love AR<3 uve expressed his feelings,so effortlessly..and the words armaan used to make her feel better,like "you are me" it shows the depth of his love and also how much their relationship has matured!!

And oh,Armaan and his satisfying activity🤣hes choo CUTE,and im so glad things are back to normal between them!

Overall,I loved the entire update..from the beginning till the very end..oh and Rachna I musn't have said this before..but ur sense of humor is FAB😳

Thankyou for updating so sooon,looking forward to the new year celebrations,I hope its full of AR ,and payal disappears somewhere😛

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Maria

@JRia

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#859

hey

simply superb part

a mix of sadness, a dash of romance and loads and loads of masti

that's what i can think of to sum up this part

it's like actually living it

oh how i wish i' m actually ridhima

but ya i wouldn't want any harsh cruel past for my armaan

u r truly a very superb writer

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aditi

@gupta.aditi20

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#860

hey rachna

first when i received the pm i thought it waz for the last part...

but yaar last part was too serious and this part was so cute and adorable.. only you can do it...

but still i feel that armaan should face the past.. its time now...

ridz is always with him.. even when juhi came.. but as you have shown he still had the lost look on his face due to mention of his mom or listening about delhi's house... so his mind only diverts for sometime.. but then he is back to thinking.abt his past...

but thats only my point of view...and as i think a third person should come and may be explain him about it.. or what was that child's name.. rohan i think whom armaan supported and was shifted to sanjeevani orphanage should tell him.. may be then he will have the courage to face it...bcoz he suffered the same pain...

waiting foor you to cont. and i think this time armaan should tell ridz to go to delhi's house...

love

aditi