FF Ye rishta kia kehlata hai...Updated part 12 p36

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eiliya

@eiliyafatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: monsi08
Hey that's rocking !!!!
Totally different style of writing... AWESOME 👏
liked the scene by scene aproach of the story... and the passion and chemistry between Arnav and Khushi is simply fabulous... SIZZZLING ... i say 😉

Pls PM for the next update...

Cheers,
Monsi

thanx for your sweet comments thats really appreciating 😃😛

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eiliya

@eiliyafatima

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#192

PART 11

SCENE 43

Scene shifts to Anjali and Khushi in the hall for arrangements

Anjali: wo khushi kal tum theek se ghar pohanch gai thi na, chotey ne koi badtameezi to nai ki thi

Khushi: (*flashbacks of Kiss scene*) 😡

Anjali: kia hua!

Khushi: kuch nai, (smiles) nai aisa kuch nai hua tha kal

Anjali: phr theek hai humain to pareshani ho rahi thi ke aap dono main koi larai na hojaye

Khushi: nai nai kal kuch bhi to nai hua (embarrassed)

Anjali: hmm...wo kia hain ke subha se aap dono baat nai kar rahey to humain laga ke...

Khushi: ke kia??

Anjali: larai hui ho

Khushi: aap bilkul fikar na karain Anjali aisa kuch nai hua tha kal

Anjali: (just smiles and thinks KUCH TO HUA THA aur wo hum pata kar kar raheinge phr chahe aap hum se kitna he chupa lain Khushi 😉)

Khushi: excuse me! Anjali... ye yahan se sab kuch sahi karain,

aur ye kia kai hai aapne, aap sab kia kar rahe hain...ufff...

Anjali: (calls Angad to inquire) kuch pata chala

Angad: hmm...humare target itney aasan nai hain jo itni asani se sab pata chal jayega, tumhain kuch pata chala

Anjali: nai yaar...Khushi to chotey se bhi zyada ziddi nikli wo to kuch bhi nai bta rahi, humne kitni koshish ki

Angad: han lekin mujhe ek baat pata chali hai u meet me at cafe coffe day i'll tell u everything there

Anjali: abhi isis waqt?

Angad: nai yar thori dair main kaam khatam karke ajana, do let mw know when will u meet me ok!

Anjali: han ye theek hai, yahan ka kaam khatam karke main aati hun

Angad: ok done...see you then

Anjali: see you!! byee (smiles sweetly)

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eiliya

@eiliyafatima

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#193

SCENE 44

scene shifts to Akash and Payal who were managing the backstage preparations, models, and other people, then they pass by each other, Akash notices n calls out Payal, she turns around

Payal: aap yahan?

Akash: kyun mujhe yahan nai hona chahiye tha

Payal: (smiles) nai nai mera wo matlab nai tha, i mean aap yahan kaise, humne notice nai kiya

Akash: wo baat ye haina ke Payal Malhotra mujhe kyun notice karengi

Payal: arey aisi baat nai hai, wo hum kaam main busy itna honge ke humne aapko dekha nai, agar aapko bura laga ho to I M SORRY (touches her ears and make sweet face)

Akash: (laughs) oh! i was just kidding, no need to sorry

Payal: *sigh* main to dar he gayi thi, bhai aap ASR ke cousin hain agar meri complain kardi unse to main to gayi kaam se

Akash: nai nai main itna bhi kharoos nai hun 😉

Payal: (serious) waise ek baat kahein humain na is kisam ke mazak bilkul nai pasand

Akash: (worried look) wo...wo..mujhe nai pata tha ke apko bura lag gaya I m really very sorry

Payal: (starts laughin hard)😆

Akash: (confused 😕)

Payal: aapko kia laga mazak sirf aap he kar sakte hain, hum nai?

Akash: (relieved) *sigh* aap ne to mujhe dara he diya tha

Payal: (still laughing)

Akash: (starts staring her lovingly unknowingly ans smiles)

Payal: (observes him) kia hua

Akash; kuch nai, main soch raha tha aap kuch bhool to nai rahi na

Payal: Main, kia?

Akash; yaad karain aapne mujh se ek promise kia tha

Payal: promise..hmmm...

Akash: chalain main he yaad dila deta hun, aapko mere saath ek cup coffee peeni thi

Payal: ohh...wo wala promise...waise aap aise promises bohat yaad rakhte hain, haina?

Akash: kia karun, yaad rakhna parta hai

Payal: flirt karne ka ek bhi mauqa chorte nai haina aap (smiles)

Akash: bilkul...jab god ne natural talent dia hai to usey waste nai karna chahiye...its bad!!

Payal: ohh!! i see (smiles)

Akash: to kab chal rahi hain aap coffe ke liye

Payal: filhal to bohat kaam hai

Akash: hmm wo to hai

Payal: Aisa kyun na karain ke ek baar ye fashion show hojaye, phr hum aaram se ja sakte hain

Akash: yeah u r right indeed

Payal: ye show mere, Anjali, angad ke liye bohat zaruri haina is se humain apne aap ko prove karne ka ek aur mouqa milega

Akash: aur aap mujhe bhool gayi?

Payal: main aap ko kaise bhool sakti hun, aap he ki to company organize kar rahi hai to aap ke liye to zaruri hoga he

Akash: yeah (smiles)

Payal: to main chalti hun bohat kaam hain...bye!!

Akash: bye (smiles) see you again!!

Payal: turns around and just smiles to herself😳

Akash: turns around and smiles😳

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.Saraa.

@.Saraa.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#194

hey its good..waiting for nxt update of ARHI..di it soon plz...

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#195

Fab updates.

Anjali and Angad, and Payal and Akash share awesome chemistry.

Looking forward to more Arnav and Khushi scenes.

Thanks for the PM hun!!!

😊

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Sanchari

@.hea.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#196

It's rocking yaar
haan! Khusi is more ziddi than arnav, true
And Aakash's natural talent! I was laughing hard!
Aakash and Payal's cute convo was nice!
Thanks for the pm