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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
fabulous update
mayank sketching on nupur t-shirt was so cute...luved his gesture n nupur modelling was so sweet.luved their bonding
sajan part was really gud...gunjan being possessive abt samrat wassoo sweet.
mind blowing
cont soon plz
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
Loved It :) 🤗 MaYur Are Coming Close & Our Gunjan Being Possessive Hun :)) 😆 Loving It !! Want More Of SaJan & The Track Of MaYur Is Going Really Nyc . Hope You Show US More Of Some Tracks Which Will Follow In SaJan's Lyf Coz I Can Guess Somewhat MaYur Story But I'm Blank When It Comes To SaJan ;) 😳 Anywayss I'm Happy That Gunjan Is Coming Our Of Her Depression With The Help Of Samrat 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
hey...
was waiting for ur update..
v cute part..
do cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
Great update Mansi, I would say, the sweetest update<3. MN were adorable as usual, I really liked Mayank's gestures that was sooo sweet what he wrote and he remembered, their relationship is growing, I can see that. SG part was actually shocking, I did not know Gunjan was going to do something like that, It was like woahh. She was jelous ey?
Hope SG tell Mayank about their relationship soon (:
UPDATE SOONN PLSS! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
v sweet update..loving the way mayur's relationship is developing..continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
awesome ff...👏👏
nice concept...👍🏼
i really loved it lodsss😃😃
i loved d bonding dat is shared by all d four characters...😊

i sooo loved d bond between Brother Sister relationship...😊
i alwaysss wished for a elder brother wid whom i can share d same bond as like Nupur n Samrat...😊😉😊
it was such an awesome ff...😊😃😊
plzzz do continue soon...😕
we all r waiting for ur update...😕😊

ps: plzzz next time give me a pm plzzz🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
MANSI 🤗 , please update soon [: I am waiting really eagerly for the next part! Your story addicts me and I can't wait any longer for you to continue! :)

Please Update Whenever you find time!
-Niv! ❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
Lovely update Mansi..🤗 M in love with this MN completely❤️!! sg wer cute too 😃
srry for the late comment..and thanks fr the pm..🤗
do cont soon😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
I know I do tend to give a lot of surprises :D So here goes one more. The next chapter of We're The Perfect Two. The 17th chapter. And wow its exactly a month since Im updating! :D
Thank you for all the wonderful and awesome comments! It couldnt get better. I truly love you all 🤗
So well the pre-cap was kinda general..Mayank Nupur 4th month anniversary and SG go out on a dinner date meeting Sheena.
Scroll down for chapter 17th! 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90

CHAPTER- 17

'Wow!! That is so cool!! Thank you Samrat & Gunjan. You guys are simply the best!!' Nupur screamed in delight.

'Samrat..mujhe office se off nahin milega..' Mayank intervened between.

'Mujhe pata tha tu aise natak karega, is liye yeh weekend ke resort coupons hai..Panchgani. Abhi adjust karlo..and after that maybe you will get a better surprise. ' Samrat added. 'And also..tu to Nupur ko kahin leke jaane se raha...'

Gunjan smiled happily and hugged Nupur seeing Mayank's expression sullen.

'Hum Gunjan ko akele chodke kaise jaa sakte hai? No..not possible.' Mayank said.

But Gunjan was quick to add. 'Bhai iss weekend main apni friend ke yahan jaa rahe hun. Its no problem.'

Mayank was trapped.

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Mayank and Nupur were driving to Panchgani on Friday evening. Mayank was in a rather irritated mood while Nupur smiled looking around and enjoying the drive. She turned to say something, but caught his expressions.

'Pata nahin kaise work-a-holic se maine shaadi karle. Mayank you should have just said no for coming rather than even spoiling my own holiday!!' She shouted while Mayank was startled by her sudden outburst. 'Ek toh khud kuch plan karte to ho nahin ho..koi kuch karna chahe usme bhi problem. Its not too late. Just turn the car and lets go back home.' She screamed now.

Mayank got a little shocked and he stopped the car in sudden. 'Nupur..'

'I don't even want to sit next to you. Itne beautiful drive saare waste kar di!!' She said opening the car door and started walking away from him.

'What should I do with this girl now? God!' He mumbled to himself. 'Nupur..listen to me.'

Right on time Samrat called. 'Hey bro, howz it going?'

'Samrat..you and your sister. We fought..and now shes not talking to me! What should I do?'

'Ofo Mayank..you should try and be romantic for sometime. Har waqt aisa sadu sa expression rehta hai tumhare face par. Like seriously!!' He huffed.

'Okay fine. Ill give it a try!' He said slamming the phone down. Nupur was walking with her arms folded across her chest and muttering curses. Mayank rushed to her, catching up to the same speed. 'Nupur..wait!' He said catching her arm. 'Im really sorry. I was just a little disturbed. My secretary didn't submit this documents..and office…'

'Yahan bhi office!! Mayank go and enjoy a honeymoon with your secretary in your office!!' She shouted.

'Mayank..you have to be romantic!!' He cursed himself now. He caught hold of her hand and pulled her a little close. He closed his eyes to get ready for a speech. But all that came out was, 'Nupur...I'm sorry. I had other things on my mind. But I promise, these two days are all yours.' He ended with a smile.

'Promise?' She whispered in a questioning tone.

'I do.' He nodded.

Smiling she slowly nodded, pulled his face closer and kissed his cheek, which brought an instant smile to his face. 'Shall we go?' She asked in an apprehensive tone seeing his expressions.

He again nodded. She started walking towards the car, turning around every second to look at him.

Mayank sometimes forgot what it is to be actually loved by someone. Those feelings he had forgotten. But now it was all coming back…

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Gunjan was cuddled up on the sofa reading a novel. A cup of coffee and a few cookies were placed on the side table. A little soft music was playing around in the background. Nothing could have been more peaceful. As she was biting into one cookie, she heard the door bell ring in a shrilling tone. Getting scared she got up and slowly walked towards the door. With shaking hands, she peeped through the key hole, seeing nobody, but curious, she opened the door carefully to find nobody standing there. Sighing in relief she closed the door. She should have listened to Samrat and not stayed alone. Turning she saw Samrat sitting on the sofa biting in the same cookie as hers.

'Samrat tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?!' She asked shocked.

'Gunjan..tumhe kya lagta hai .. ke main tumhe iss ghar main akela chod dunga..not at all!! Dinner main kya hai? Im so hungry. ' He sighed taking another cookie and munching on it.

'Samrat just get out..mere neighbors ne dekh liya to kya sochenge? Bhai ko bata diya toh..? Please just get out.' She said trying to act calm.

'Gunjan main abhi office khatam karke aaya hun..aur tum aise baat kar rahe ho..Im so tired and also hungry.' He said making a face loosening his tie. She walked up to him and helped him remove the tie. Making a face, she marched to the kitchen.

On reaching there, she stirred the curry. At the same time, Samrat walked into the kitchen. Gunjan felt his presence but tried avoid any reaction. He came and back-hugged her. She was startled, but again didn't reflect it.

'Gunjan….' He started.

'Hmm..'

'When we get married, then also you'll welcome me just like this? With puffed angry expression?' He said in a sarcastic tone.

Their eyes met for a second. She freed his hand and went to get two plates.

'Mera matlab..jab main office se aayun..you should welcome me with a nice hug..and maybe ..' He said pulling her close. She smelt of fresh roses.

'And maybe?' She asked looking at him.

'And maybe some delicious food!' He finished. She opened her mouth in shock. 'What you were expecting something else?' He asked plainly.

Pushing him away. 'Sorry I don't make delicious food! Go find someone else.'

Laughing he pulled her back. He captured his lips with her, almost surprising her. She tried to move away as she was in a little fear; but then gave in closing all her other thoughts. They kissed until the smell of flowers turned to something burning. Pushing him she rushed to switch of the gas. Sighing with relief, she tried to hide her face, somehow with her hair coming on her face. He made her turn around..

'I love you Chashmish.' His voice was genuine. She didn't want to hide anything more. She just forgot everything and fell in his arms for eternity.

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It was almost night time. Mayank had put on the radio at a very low volume and was tired..but continued to drive. Meanwhile Nupur was fast asleep. Her head rested on the window. Mayank kept looking at her every few minutes to ensure that she was fine. There was one bump on the road, and Nupur hurt her head.

'Ouch.' She said in a rather sleepy tone. Mayank turned to look at her. Drowsily, her head came and rested on Mayank's shoulder. He was very much surprised by her actions; but when she actually cuddled up to him, all he could do was smile and say nothing more.

After driving for almost an hour more, they reached the venue.

'Nupur..get up. We are here. Finally.' Mayank said.

Nupur stirred a little but did not fully get up. Rather she gave a irritated look.

'Nupur get up!!' He took his arm away, and so she finally was up.

'Kya hai Mayank?' She shouted.

He opened the car doors and almost pulling her out, he dragged the sleepy woman to the room.

'Somebody will get your luggage Sir, please make yourself comfortable.' Said one of the hotel managers after showing them the room.

Nupur who was already half-asleep, went straight to the bed and fell asleep.

Mayank on the other hand was extremely particular about being comfortable while sleeping.

'Nupur..utho..change karke phir so jana.' He said going near her.

Meanwhile Nupur was less than even being bothered. Adjusting her skirt and top she turned to the other side.

'Nupur!' He said a little irritated now. 'Acha who scarf toh nikal do!' She had a blue scarf tied around her neck. Before he could go forward and remove it, the bell boy brought in their luggage. Mayank placed all the luggage neatly and took out his clothes from there. As he removed his shirt, the lights went off.

'Damn.' He said annoyed. He decided the best way would be to just go and sleep. So in the same black vest and cargos, he decided to sleep. While he went to the bed,

'Nupur thoda who side hato..?' He said shaking her. It was too dark to go to the other side.

'Kya hai Mayank? Akele ladki ko dekh ke fayda utha rahe ho?' She said a little awake.

Mayank at first fumbled, but then got in his sarcasm mode. 'Haan. Obviously Nupur. Come on. Tum yahan ekdum akele ho..mere saath. Lights bhi chale gaye. Thoda toh fayda utha hi sakta hun main.' He said seriously.

Nupur was wide awake now. She arched her eye-brows and stared at him. A very small amount of fear, crept inside her heart.

'What do you say Nupur?' Mayank added with a wink.

'Just get lost Mayank.' She replied in an angry tone and shifted to the other side.

Sensing the situation. 'Hey Nupur! Come one. I was just joking. I'm sorry!' He said sitting on the bed.

Nupur's mind was elsewhere. 'Just forget it Mayank.' Her voice was icy cold.

'Nupur why are you over-reacting? Main, kabhi kuch galat karunga tumhare saath? Batao?'

She did not reply.

'Fine!' Mayank got up from the bed.

Nupur sighed and caught his hand. 'Mayank Im sorry. I was..just…forget it. Chalo lets sleep.' She said trying to add vibrancy in her voice. 'Kitni der ho gaye hai na..?'

Mayank sat again and pulled her close. 'Kya hua? Tum koi baat se pareshan ho kya? You know you can tell me right?'

She smiled. 'Kuch nahin hua baba.' She cupped his face. 'Mujhe bahut neend aa rahe hai. Good night.'

She removed her scarf and put it away. She lied down and seeing her, he did the same. She softly let her head rest on his shoulder, and tucked her hands under the pillow. Mayank was simply left staring. He hated unfinished talks. But he felt Nupur was not in a situation to tell him her worries. He turned, and put his arm around her waist, and pulled her close. She was pretending to sleep, but still she shivered with his touch. Mayank let his hands roam around her hair, settling them while she slept. There was something..and he needed to find it very soon.

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'Gunjan..waise I don't have any problem. Par jo tumne dinner banaya hai who waste ho jayega na..so..' He said in a teasing tone.

Gunjan quickly broke from the hug. She adjusted her glasses and hair in panic and turned to the gas, from where she dropped a glass.

'Oh god Chashmish. Stop panicking!' Samrat said laughing. He picked up the glass, and also helped her with the plates.

As they sat down for having their dinner, Samrat kept staring at Gunjan..to irritate her as much as he could.

Gunjan could feel the penetrating gaze of his. She hit his arm, causing the spoon to fall from his hand. 'Samrat ghurna band karo aise!'

He kept his hands on chin. 'Kyun? sharm arahe hai kya?!' He said chuckling.

'Haan..kya karoge ab tum?'

'Kya baat hai..aaj kal badi confident ho rahe ho? Whats the secret mujhe bhi bata do?' He said entwining his fingers with hers.

'Tumse hi toh sikha hai maine Samrat..' She said looking at him in a fake awe.

'Sachi??' He said enthusiastically

'Haan!' She grinned.

Both of them were staring at each other and burst into giggles.

'Yahan aao na Chashmish..' He pulled her onto his lap. She sat down a little hesitantly. 'Pata nahin maine kitni baar repeat karke tumhe bore kar diya..hai..but then also ..thanks for coming in life. Abhi achanak..tumhare bina ekdum incomplete lagta hai.' He said kissing her fore-head.

She smiled and hugged him. 'Thanks to you Samrat. Pata nahin agar tum nahin aate toh main kabhi apne andar ke dard ko nikal nahin pati..and I promise main Mayank ko hamare baare main unke aate hi bata dunge. I have never been sure of anything more than this, in my life.'

'Really? So is that a compliment?' He smiled.

'Errmmm..' She said looking around. 'I think so.' She chuckled.

Samrat took his plate. 'Well. Thank you. Waise aaj tum dinner mere haatho se khaoge..' said feeding her.

She smiled and ate.

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Phew that was long! :D Have fun reading! And I just hate IF formatting! So irritating! uggh!😡
Edited by -Mansi- - 14 years ago

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