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Will We Just Get One Part ?! 😳

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..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai !
[-A Passionate Love Story]

PART-30 [1/4]

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SHERGILL GROUP of INDUSTRIES (H.O)

A dejected and depressed SAMRAT entered the elevator to reach his cabin, situated on the Top floor of the huge office building... so lost was he in his own thoughts that he did not acknowledge the attendant as he wished him.He looked at his wrist watch...the time showed 8.00 pm. Totally disheartened by the way this day had passed, he entered his cabin and slowly walked towards his desk. He pushed the chair behind and sat down... leaning back and closing his eyes. He frowned a bit and shook his head as 'HER' face flashed before his eyes... He opened his eyes quickly... and pushed the hair on his forehead behind as he looked at the chair opposite him... where 'SHE' would sit as he instructed her... very rudely. He shut his eyes again. And again leaned back. He remembered the first time he saw her...

In the garden at THE PARADISE...where, he had mistaken her to be RiCHA and blasted her... now that misunderstanding seemed so sweet...

because,when she had turned around to look at him, his heart had skipped a beat...though he had denied it then. Those pretty eyes... that angelic face... he could never forget that.

Second time he had seen her, when she had mistakenly entered his cabin... That sweet misunderstanding...then...as he saw her scared and lost look.

He unknowingly smiled faintly as he remembered how her beautiful expressive eyes and pretty smile had him mesmerized.

As if, that was not enough, the scared, innocent look on her face had made him feel different.To top all this, her sweet voice as she asked if she was at the right place... It had sounded like music to his ears... He remembered how the security had rudely asked her to leave the cabin... how he had hated the way she was spoken to... then, when she had looked back as she left... that look on her face had made his heart flutter... then, when she was appointed his P.A. He remembered her first day at work...

He opened his eyes and looked at the chair, that was now empty...She was not there...It was now almost 24 hrs. that he had seen her...heard her sweet voice... and whether she would be back again the next day...He was not sure...so did it mean, now he would never see her...hear her voice... he took out a small box from his coat pocket... a Jewelry Box. Slowly he opened it and took out a Locket... holding it gently in his palm... his mind continued with the thoughts... (( Yeh Locket...?? Mera guess sahi tha...woh Compensation Envelope' par Printed "Jewelery Shop" ka name aur GUNJAN ki Cabin mein mila uss "Jewelery Shop" ki reciept yehi prove kar rahi thi ki, GUNJAN ne uss shop par kuchh toh sell kiya tha... par,kyun...?? Sirf 23,000 jaise small amount ko compensate karne ke liye...?? Usne apna Ornament sell kar diya...?? Aur yeh Locket... (saw very carefully) Yeh 'Locket' toh kisi chhoti bachhi ka maloom hota hai...toh kya...? Kya yeh GUNJAN ki childhood ka 'Locket' hai...?? Lekin,apna Childhood ...ussse related sabhi cheezain har 1 insaan ko pyaari hoti hain...Maine toh aaj tak apni Mom ke diye hue Khilone [Toys] sambhaal ke rakhe hue hain...whatever, mere childhood ki yaadein achhi nahin lekin,woh khilone aaj bhi mujhe meri Mom se jodte hain...unke saath bitaye hue unn khoobsurat palon ki yaad dilate hain...

His eyes brimmed with tears as he remembered his mother... The most important person in his life...all those precious moments he spent with her... He remembered those times when he had insisted she play the Board Games with him...and she would leave whatever, that she was doing to humor him...His mom never let him felt the empty space his Father had created...She always tried to fill it in the best way that she could... till destiny...NO... It was not destiny that snatched her away from him... It was...He did not want to remember... but,this 'Locket'... He looked at the Locket that he held in his palm, wondering...

Woh apne childhood ki cheezain kaise sell kar sakti hai...? Kya uske liye uski,childhood ki memory ki koi value nahin...?? Ho sakta hai usse inn cheezon ki importance na ho... Aur,hogi bhi kyun...woh meri tarah orphan nahin... Parents na hone ka dard kya hota hai...? yeh woh kabhi nahin samajh sakti... Par,kya uske parents ne bhi usse nahin roka...? It means ki,woh sab kaafi poor hain... lekin,agar woh log itne hi poor hain toh,usse yeh 'Compensation' Re-Pay karne ki kya zaroorat thi...Maine toh kaha bhi tha ki,unki 'Aukaat' nahin...Phir... (realized something) Oh ! Kahin sirf mujhe wrong prove karne ke liye hi toh usne yeh sab nahin kiya...?? Yaa...shayad usse meri baat buri lagi hogi...Inn 'Middle Class' waalon ki yehi problem hoti hai...Kuchh ho na ho...EGO zaroor hoti hai...,jise yeh 'Self-Respect' ka naam de dete hain... yeh sach ko jaldi except nahin kar paate. Maine kuchh wrong nahin kaha tha... Maine usse reality batai thi... Agar usse Fact except nahin toh yeh uski problem hai...meri nahin.

Clutching the Locket in his fist, he stood up and walked towards the window... the rains had relented and the sky had cleared... The scene out was so beautiful... The reflection of street and building lights in the small puddles created by rains... people gingerly walking, trying to avoid the puddles... a calm, cool breeze... kids jumping in the puddles, splashing water on the elders walking with them, giggling away... but,SAMRAT saw none of this...his mind was dominated by thoughts about GUNJAN... what she had done...and why she had done that...

Mujhe wrong prove karne ke liye usne apna 'Locket' sell kar diya...but,I can't understand ki itne small amount ko pay karne ke liye koi apna Ornament kaise sell kar sakta hai...? woh bhi itna cute 'Locket' ...?? Rs.23,000 is such a very small amount. Mere toh 1 ordinary accessories/stuffs bhi 50,000 se above ke hote hain... If,she is poor...belongs to a poor family...toh usne Salary increment offer ko kyun except nahin kiya...?? Usne apne 7 days ke Remuneration par bhi koi claim nahin kiya...why??

Aur, Main...?? Mujhe kya ho gaya hai...?? Kyun main uske liye itna think kar raha hoon...?? Maine yeh 'Locket' uss Jewellers se kyun purchase kiya...?? Mujhe iss 'Locket' se kya matlab...?? Yeh mera nahin hai... Phir,mujhe isse purchase karne ke baad 1 Khushi si kyun mehsoos ho rahi thi...jaise...jaise...maine apni kuchh bahot hi important si cheez save kar li ho...?? Mujhe pehle kabhi kuchh purchase karne mein aisi khushi mehsoos nahin hui...jitni aaj iss 'Locket' ko purchase karne se hui... Par,main iska kya karoonga...??

Lekin,yeh sab se itna toh clear hai ki,usne kisi ke kehne par File mis-place nahin ki...usne mere saath koi cheating nahin ki... Maine uske Cabin mein khud achhi tarah search kiya hai...woh FILE wahaan bhi nahin thi...Phir,sawal yeh hai ki,woh File gayi kahaan...?? Woh jhooth nahin bol rahi thi...Usne uss Report par kaafi hard labour kiya tha...Yeh Dulicate 'Report File' uss ki sachhai ka proof hai...(He turned to look at the file lying on the desk... the one which GUNJAN had asked Mr.SHARMA to deliver to SAMRAT...He walked towards the desk and keeping the 'Locket' back in it's box, he picked up the file...) Shayad maine usse uss Gunah ki sazaa de di jo usne kabhi kiya hi nahin tha...She was crying in-front of me...Lekin maine...Maine usse kuchh kehne ka mauka hi nahin diya...sirf,usse sazaa de di...Aur pata nahin...gusse mein kya kuch keh diya... Woh kya tha jo mujhe itna hurt kar raha tha...Main kyun uss par believe nahin kar paya... Mujhe uss par trust karna chahiye tha...

The tears finally broke loose from his eyes as he remembered her face the night before... Her beautiful eyes crying rivers as she had tried to explain herself... and those harsh words that he had spoken, not letting her speak. He shut his eyes tight, helping the tears find their way out of his eyes. He kept the file down, and wiped his tears...

Ok...Fine jab woh Office re-join karegi,Main usse Yeh 'Locket' de doonga... Ussne toh kabhi socha bhi nahin hoga...woh khush ho jaayegi... SAMRAT SHERGILL ne kabhi kisi ladki ko koi gift nahin diya...Yeh uske liye 1 badi baat hogi. Waise bhi,main toh usse 'Sorry' kehne se raha...SAMRAT SHERGILL ne aaj tak kisi ko 'Sorry' nahin kaha..except my Mom...toh usse 'Sorry' kehne ka toh sawal hi paida nahin hota...Uski sell ki hui cheez usse lauta doonga...yeh uske liye kaafi hai.

I wish ki woh sab kuchh bhool kar wapas Office join kar le... phir,mujhe usse kisi tarah ka Notice nahin dena hoga... aur yeh matter yahin par khatam ho jaayega...sab kuchh pehle jaisa ho jaayega... Yeh toh accha hua ki maine unn 'Terms n Conditions' ke Papers par uske signature kara liye the... Ab woh kahin nahin ja sakti...Main be-wajah hi usske decision ke baare mein itna think kar raha hoon. Agar,SHARMA Jii ke kehne par bhi woh nahin aayi toh uss Legal NOTICE milne par toh zaroor aayegi... Sirf 23,000 jaise small amount ko re-pay karne ke liye agar usse apna Ornament sell karna pada toh 10 lacs ka Big amount ko compensate karna uske yaa uski family ke liye impossible hai...woh kabhi bhi itne saare paise nahin de paayegi...and as per result...Usse again SHERGILL's join karna hi hoga.

This thought... and his victory smile played on his lips. He felt relaxed and sat on the chair ... He picked up the 'Jewelery Box' and looked at it... just then, he heard a knock on his cabin door. Hurriedly,he kept the box in his Suit Pocket and pretended to be reading a file as he asked the person to enter... looking at the person, in an emotionless tone... his voice not showing anger or frustration, he said...

S - Oh...Aap aa gaye...?? Mujhe toh laga ab kal hi aapke'Darshan' honge...(said in taunting way)

Mr.S - Sorry Sir ! Par,woh main Office mein nahin tha toh...

S - I M not interested in your excuses...so,come to the Point. (said strictly)

MR.S - Sir...woh...Miss BHUSHAN ka land line No. thik ho chuka hai..

S - GR8 !! toh..?? Kya yeh koi achievement hai...?? My question is...Aapki uss se baat hui yaa nahin...? Agar hui toh kya kaha usne...?? Kya woh kal se office join kar rahi hai..??

Mr. SHARMA looked downwards, not knowing how he was going to break the news to SAMRAT... SAMRAT was waiting for an answer and not hearing one...finally, losing his cool, he spoke in a loud and rude tone...

S - Mr.SHARMA..(yelled) I M talking to U...say something...what is her answer...??

Mr.S - Sorry Sir...par kisi ne phone pick-up nahin kiya tha...iss liye main khud uske address par uss se baat karne gaya tha...

S - Fine...! Toh...?? Kya kaha usne...??

Mr.S - Sorry Sir ! But,she was not there...Maine Society Guard se baat ki...par,usne sirf yeh bataya ki,woh Air-port ke liye ja chuki hai...apne Family members ke saath...usse aur zyada kuchh maloom nahin tha.

S - WHAT ?? (shockingly) AIR-PORT...?? PAR KYUN...?? Kahaan gayi woh...?? Aapne kisi aur se poocha nahin...?? (asked all questions in 1 breath...)

Mr.S - Sir unke Apartment mein koi nahin tha...toh as per SECURITY Rule unhone mujhe unke Apartment floor par jaane ki permission nahin di...Jiski wajah se main kisi neighbor se baat nahin kar paaya.

S - Again Damn Excuse...?? U R a totally useless person...1 kaam nahin hota aapse...uss Guard ke saamne kuchh paise maarne the...woh saare rules change kar deta...par,nahin...aapke paas itna brain kahaan...(said angrily) Now,jaaiye yahaan se...Leave me alone...Aap se toh main kal baat karoonga...

"GOOD NIGHT..." Mr.SHARMA quickly said this and rushed out... SAMRAT looked angrily as he left... and then he flung the file on the floor... swirling the chair to the side, He stood up and started pacing the cabin... He did not know what to do now... This night was anything but,GOOD..??... He did not even feel like going home... He had to find out where GUNJAN was going...but,who would tell him???

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SHERGILL MANSION

SHERGILL MANSION... The place where SAMRAT spend some of the Best years of his childhood. The day her son was born was the happiest for VASUDHA[SAMRAT's Mom]... after a long time, she could experience happiness. But not her husband...He was not affected by the birth of his son... It meant nothing for him. He was busy in his own life. VASUDHA's happiness was short lived though...Her health seemed to be going downhill...It became strenuous for her to even take care of her little one.

PRATAP [SAMRAT's Dad] anyway never existed for her anymore. So she called DAI Maa... a widow, who would help her raise her son. Though rarely home, PRATAP would be really horrid with SAMRAT when he was around. So, VASUDHA would ensure that she kept SAMRAT away from PRATAP. But, SAMRAT missed having his Dad around...His friends had their Dads with them... but, never SAMRAT. VASUDHA however filled up that void in his life..always there for his school functions... praising him when he won Awards...celebrating his Birthdays...inspite of her ill health.

The day his Dad made his intentions clear of getting married to TRISHNA, his girlfriend... his Mother was completely shattered. As she signed the Divorce papers that PRATAP handed to her that horrible day, VASUDHA was a wreck. She signed the papers and collapsed. VASUDHA never really recovered after that. Her health deteriorated...her only solace, that did she have to leave, her son was in safe hands...DAI Maa would be there to care for her little one.

That day, almost a month after the Divorce came through... VASUDHA knew her end was near. She handed her young son to DAI Maa and asking her to care for him like he was her own, she slept... forever...never to wake up again. But, before shutting her eyes, she captured the innocent, tear stained face of her darling son...her SAMRAT and she shut her eyes forever...

Spelling doom for little SAMRAT. SAMRAT's Dream House...The House that had memories of his mother... the house that should have been his mother's... now belonged to this lady called TRISHNA... His Dad's new wife... who hated the sight of SAMRAT... Her first condition fulfilled by PRATAP. Young SAMRAT was bundled off to the boarding school. As SAMRAT packed his bags to leave, He chanced upon a garbage bag lying in the backyard of the mansion. He saw that TRISHNA had thrown it away. He walked towards it and opened it...and his heart broke. In the garbage bag were the toys his Mom had gifted him, some pictures of the good times spent together... He picked up the Bag and took it to his room. Somehow, his tiny hands managed to pack the stuff in his suitcase and barely had he finished stuffing them in his suitcase that the Driver came to tell him it was time to leave. The Driver picked up his bags and went away. Slowly SAMRAT walked out of his room, his eyes searching for his Dad. But, he was nowhere...wiping the tears that were flowing down his cheeks. Finally, he walked out and left the house.

School Days were lonely for SAMRAT... where,during vacations, other students had their Parents visiting, SAMRAT would be left to himself... in the dormitory... holding his Mother's pic close to his heart as he cried.By the time schooling was over and done with...SAMRAT's mind had decided the inevitable... MONEY CAN BUY YOU ANYTHING... and so, in that age itself, SAMRAT decided... that was how he was going to live...make money... and go to any limits to be successful.

Schooling complete, SAMRAT returned to MUMBAI hoping to live in the house that housed the memories of his mother. But,that was not to be. PRATAP handed him the keys of his Flat and asked him to live there. He was not even allowed to enter what was once his dream home. A heart broken SAMRAT lived all alone... in the flat that his Dad 'gifted' him.

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[SAMRAT's College Look]
College life was pretty much a calm one...But,his aim in life remained... His mother's pic. as she smiled at him reminded him of his aim in life. He would revenge her death... all those responsible for her death would pay...

And with this in mind, SAMRAT, completed his studies and soon took over 50% of the SHERGILL empire. And the first thing he did was buy himself a huge mansion...even bigger than the one occupied by Mr. and Mrs. SHERGILL... He then went to meet DAI Maa who had gone back to her village after SAMRAT was bundled off to the Boarding school. When, she saw this strapping, handsome young man... His eyes resembling a woman she knew, not so long ago... A woman she had promised something... that promise made to a dying mother echoed in her ears... and she could not refuse SAMRAT. And so DAI Maa came back to take care of SAMRAT. Up till now he had done what he wanted to do. His avenge would be complete soon... but,at the SHERGILL MANSION, a New Drama was unfolding...

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As He spoke over the phone, PRATAP had a wide, evil smile occupying his face. Finally, things were falling in place... just as they had planned. Mrs. TRiSHNA SHERGILL could not understand the reason for this smile...Who was this man talking to? Why was he so happy?? She sat next to him, her face clearly asking all the questions that were in her mind. Looking at her, PRATAP just nodded and continued talking...

P - (On phone) Ok..then,Bye...Main abhi yeh Good News SAMRAT ko bata deta hoon...woh,bahot khush hoga...Tum nahin jaante work ka over load hone ke bawjood bhi woh apni marriage ko lekar kitna excited hai...OK...abhi phone rakhta hoon...other things baad mein discuss karte hain...Bye...Good Night. Hearing this, TRiSHNA got up in a huff and was about to leave as she was stopped by her husband. Keeping the receiver back in it's hook, he made her sit next to him and smiled at her. She could no longer hide her displeasure... and in a haughty tone asked her husband...

T - Kya baat hai...?? Kis se baatein kar rahe the.., Jo itne khush nazar aa rahe ho...??

P - Mr.MALHOTRA se. Unhone SAMRAT-RICHA ki marriage date final kar li hai...Aaj hi unke 'Guru Jii' ne unhein Date batai hai Usse hi confirm kar rahe the.

T - Toh...?? (angrily) Iss mein itni khush hone waali kaun si baat hai...?? Main iss ghar mein uss ladke ka naam bhi sun na nahin chahti...aur agar tumhein uss par bahot zyada Pyaar aa raha hai tum ussi ke paas kyun nahin chale jaate...?? Donon Baap-Bete 1 saath mlikar wahain apni khushiyaan celebrate karna.

TypicaL...thought PRATAP... this reaction was expected...He would have to explain to her everything again... so,he turned her face towards him and said in a loving tone... "Do U know what?...jab tum iss tarah se naraaz hoti ho...toh,aaj bhi waisi hi khoobsurat lagti ho jaise 30 yrs. pehle lagti thi...Arre ! Don't worry Dear..Main tumhein chhod kar kahin nahin ja raha...Par, Haan !! khush toh main hoon..Aakhir.Mr.BALRAJ SAXENA se rishta jo judne ja raha hai. (said proudly)

T - Wohi toh mujhe samajh nahin aa raha...Aap iss Marriage se itna excited kyun hain...?? Aakhir kya prove karna chahte hain aap? Yeh ki,Aap apne Bete se kitna pyar karte hain...?? Yaa phir yeh ki,aap iss duniya ke sabse bade 'Foolish' insaan hain...? (said in taunting way)

P - Come On Dear...Apne hubby par thoda toh trust karo...Main jo kar raha hoon woh,hamare liye aur hamare bete ViCKY ke liye hi kar raha hoon so,Chill...and Enjoy the Marriage of SAMRAT SHERGILL (laughed in devilish way)

His wicked laugh could have given a chill up anyone's spine who would have heard it... but,not his wife... she turned away angrily... and then turning to look at her husband again, she said...

T - Achha...?? Aur,woh kaise...?? Mujhe toh aisa kuchh nazar nahin aa raha jise, ENJOY kiya jaaye... Pehle toh tumne usse SHERGILL's mein itne bade post par entry de di...Phir,50% ki Partnership aur iss shaadi ke baad toh Company ke 51% share bhi ussi ke paas honge...Ab iss mein mujhe toh hamari koi 'Bhalaii' nazar nahin aati...aur phir,SAMRAT ki marriage ka matter kahaan se aa gaya...?? SAMRAT ki marriage toh hamare 'PLAN' ka part nahin thi...Kahin tum...?? (asked doubtfully)

P - (smiled evily) Tum auratein bhi naa...hamesha,Coin ke 1 angle ko dekh kar hi conclusion par pahunch jaati ho. Arre ! Thode toh depth mein ja kar socha karo...SAMRAT ko maine office mein entry issliye di Kyunki,uss waqt mujhe uss ki zaroorat thi. Uss mein 1 Junnon hai...Mujhse badla...Revenge lene ka Junoon...Iss liye usne bina kuchh soche-samjhe...mere offer ko accept kar liya. Aur uski hard labour ki wajah se hi SHERGILL's ka name pehli baar TOP par aa gaya...Hamari Loss mein ja rahi Company ke liye woh 1 Seviour ki tarah hai. Usse Office mein entry dena meri pehli chaal thi. 50% ki Partnership dekar maine usse yeh feel karne ka chance diya woh mujhse jeet raha hai...yeh meri dusri 'sheh' thi...Woh apni success ko dekhkar yeh bhi bhool gaya ki,main bhi uska Baap hoon...

For a father... PRATAP SHERGILL was way too wicked... It was not surprising that SAMRAT had no faith in LOVE... It never exsited for him...

T - Yeh sab toh main bhi samajh rahi hoon...Par...?? SAMRAT ki marriage...?? Yeh kyun...?? Iski kya zaroorat thi...?? Aap toh jaante hain ki,agar SAMRAT ki marriage ho gayi toh...

P - (Cuts with smiling face) Toh...hamare paas "RAINBOW COMMUNICATION" Ke 65% share bhi aa jayenge. Its means, "RAINBOW COMMUNICATION" par bhi hamara hi kabza hoga...think positve naa..

T - Yeh sab toh thik hai...lekin,phir hamare 'PLAN' ka kya hoga...?? After marriage,hamein SAMRAT ki wife ki bhi tension hogi... Usse kaise handle karenge...?? Waise bhi hum zyada dinon tak woh 'sachhai' SAMRAT se hide nahin kar paayenge...usse pata toh chal hi jaayega ki...

P - Haan..!! usse 'Sach' ka pata chal jaayega..par,tab tak kaafi der ho chuki hogi...woh kuchh bhi nahin kar paayega. Issi liye,main chahta hoon ki,yeh shaadi jald se jald ho jaaye.

T- Pata nahin,Aap kya karne waale ho...par,jo bhi karna kaafi soch-samajhkar karna.He is very clever , kahin humara Plan hum par hi bhaari na pad jaaye...Agar usse thoda bhi doubt ho gaya toh...

P - Oh Don't worry...Maine sab kuchh set kiya hua hai...Maine uss par nazar bhi rakhi hui hai...Aaj kal woh thoda disturb hai...shayad,Office ke kuchh new Projects ki wajh se...Aur,yeh humare liye achha bhi hai kyunki,woh jab tak Disturbed rahega...hum Relax rahenge. Ab hum bhi kya kar sakte hain...woh apna Dushman khud hai...Uska anger uski weakness hai...Kyunki,jab woh angry hota hai...Right-Wrong ka decision nahin le pata...aur,hamein issi cheez ka toh benefit lena hai. (He smiled at his wife,She too realised that her husband was right... both laughed ) ...Ok...Ok...bahot hua...wait...zara yeh Good News apne 'Pyaare' bete se bhi toh share kar loon...warna kahega ...Mr.SHERGILL koi Good News nahin dete... waise bhi uss ki zindagi mein ab khushi ke pal kaafi gine-chune hi bache hain...

And he dialed SAMRAT's number. An already tensed and disturbed SAMRAT was going to get the news of his Marriage. His aim in life would be achieved... or would it??? Only time would tell, If SAMRAT would get what he wanted or yet again, his Dad would snatch his happiness, like he had before...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#533

..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai !
[-A Passionate Love Story]

PART-30 [2/4]

{Banner made by AASHi [aashizin]}

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SAMRAT VILLA

Upset with the happenings of the day, SAMRAT reached home in a very foul mood. He barged in and walked towards the stairs...as he put his foot on the first step, the loving voice of his DAI Maa stopped him, as she called out to him... "SAMRAT"

He moved his foot back as he turned to face her. She came closer to him and her eyes noticed the upset look on SAMRAT's face... he looked depressed. She asked him in a caring voice...

DM - R U Ok..?? Kaafi tired se lag rahe ho...?? Sab kuchh thik toh hai naa...??

S - (said in plain voice) - I M fine DAI Maa...feeling tired...sone ja raha hoon..thodi der aaram karne se shayad kuchh better feel karoon.

DAI Maa was worried. SAMRAT being tired was not new to her, He did work hard. But SAMRAT so listless... she touched his forehead to check if he had fever... "Oh ! Fever toh nahin hai...shayad tiredness ki wajah se hi hoga...waise,mujhe GUNJAN ke baare mein poochna tha...Actually,main sirf jaan na chahti thi ki..."

S - (cuts imediately) Wait...!! Aapko kisne bataya GUNJAN ke baare mein...? Kya aap uss se mili hain...??

DM - Nahin..nahin mili issi liye toh,milna chahti hoon...aur mujhe kisi aur ne nahin...tumne hi bataya tha..aaj subah hi...,Office jaane se pehle...Bhool gaye kya..??...Aur,mujhe pura yakeen hai ki,agar tumne usse roka hoga toh woh kahin nahin gayi hogi... (said with smiling face)

S - (said in irritating voice) Oh Please DAI Maa...This time I M feeling really tired...so,don't want to discuss anything about her... and 1 thing..Aap jaisa soch rahi hain waisa,kuchh bhi nahin hai...she was only my P.A. aur woh... (Beautiful doe eyes and that amazing smile on her lips... her pretty face flashed before his eyes...he shut his eyes tight... and then after a pause, he looked at DAI Maa and said...) ...aur woh ab Office se resign de kar ja chuki hai...(said in very upset tone) Maine nahin roka usse...usse aana hai toh khud aayegi...mere paas aur bhi kaam hain karne ko..She is not really important for me.So,please...forget it...Now,I M going to sleep...sabhi se keh dijiyega...ki,koi mujhe disturb na kare...Mujhe abhi koi disturbance nahin chahiye. and he went to his room.

DAI Maa kept looking at him... she was able to understand his inner most feelings... as he went up to his room, DAI MAA's eyes followed him.. (( Shayab ab main sab kuchh samajh pa rahi hoon...Subah tak toh mujhe sirf shaq tha par,ab yakeen ho gaya hai..Yakeen,iss baat ka ki,tumhein PYAAR ho gaya hai...jise tum accept nahin kar paa rahe...aur yehi cheez tumhein disturb kar rahi hai...I know,tumne zaroor usse bhi hurt kiya hoga...iss liye woh office se chali gayi...aur issi wajah se tum zyada pareshaan ho... Par,Main bhi tumhain aise nahin jaane doongi...tumhein aaaj na kal...apni feelings accept karni hi hogi... Main ab tumhein tumhaari khushiyoon se aur zyada nahin bhaagne doongi.)) And she started climbing the stairs to go to his room.

SAMRAT reached his room and flung his cell on the bed. His lappy's bag found itself being flung on the chair as SAMRAT removed his coat. hanging his coat on the hanger... He opened his cupboard and took out the 'Medicine Box'... He was about to open it when he heard a knock on the door. He turned around and saw that DAI Maa stood there, her hands folded...looking at him. He spoke to her even as he opened the medicine box... his voice filled with curiosity...

S - DAI Maa...?? Aap abhi...? Kuchh kaam tha...? kaha naa...Mujhe bhook nahin hai...sirf Medicine le kar so jaaonga...

DAI Maa smiled at him as she entered the room. She stood next to him and spoke in a very caring tone... "I know...U R Fine...bas,yun hi tumse baat karne ka dil kiya toh chali aayi...par,agar tum chahte ho toh thik hai...phir,hum kal subah baat karenge. and she was about to turn...SAMRAT held her wrist gently ...and said, "Nahin..! Aap baithiye...hum abhi baatein kar sakte hain..." She sat on the bed as SAMRAT sat next to her. She looked at the 'Medicine Box' in his hand and asked him...her tone caring...

DM - Yeh MEDICINE BOX ?? Kis liye...? Phir kuchh hua hai kya...

S - No...Bas waise hi..Thoda Headache tha toh,DISPRINE le raha tha.

DM - Oh ! Actually,main bhi issi baare mein baat karne aayi thi...

S - Matlab..?? Kya aapko bhi DISPRINE chahiye thi...

DM - Nahin...! Woh baat nahin hai...Actually,afternoon mein Dr.BATRA ki call aayi thi..woh tumhaare Mobile par try kar rahe the par,woh switch-off aa raha tha...

S - Haan...Woh actually,Main switch-off kar bhool gaya tha.Woh meetings attend kar raha tha naa... ((Ab DAI Maa ko kaise bataoon ki,Main aaj kitna disturb tha...Kisi ke bhi call attend nahin kii..kisi se baat nahin ki..aur,Jis se baat karna chahta tha..usne toh mujhse baat karna toh door mujhse 1 baar milna bhi zaroori nahin samjha...Maine usse rokna chaha tha DAI Maa..par...rok hi nahin paaya...aur woh chali gayi...)) SAMRAT was lost in his thoughts...his eyes clearly showing sadness... He turned his face away... but, he quickly composed himself and turning to face DAI Maa he said...in a normal tone... "Anyway,Aap kuchh keh rahi thin...?"

DM - Haan...! Woh Dr.BATRA ne bataya ki,tum last 2 month se unke paas Check-Up karane nahin gaye...Toh,woh jaan na chahte the ki,tum check-up karane kab aa rahe ho..? Aur,tumhaari Medicines time par lete ho yaa nahin...?

S - (He looked away flustered... he did not want to discuss this matter, but he knew DAI Maa would not let it go so easily...) Oh ! Yeh Dr.BATRA bhi naa...(said in irritating tone) Arre,jab kuchh sick sa feel karoonga toh hi jaaoonga naa...? aur,Yeh har month check-up..yeh sab mujhse nahin hota. (said in little childish way)

DM - WHAT...?? Yeh kaisa excuse hai...? Only Check-Up karane ko hi toh bulaya hai...treatment karne ko nahin...aur Medicine..?? Woh toh regularly lete ho naa...?

S - DAI Maa...Please...! Woh medicines kaafi kadwi-kadwi si hai...Mujhse nahin li jaati...Aap please mujhe woh Medicines lene ko mat kaha karo... (He said like a little Kid)

DM - Oh ! Toh..yeh baat hai... Meri hi galti hai jo socha ki,ab tum bade ho gaye ho is liye apni care khud se kar sakte ho...par nahin...! Woh 'Shaitaan' bachha,mujhe ab bhi yahin par...mere saamne hi dikh raha hai jo,apne Medicines ko chupke se phenk diya karta tha...Par ab nahin...Kyunki,Your strict DAI Maa is back...Lao..kahaan hai woh MEDICINES...?? Dekhti hoon kaise nahin lete...

These words of DAI Maa and for some time, SAMRAT forgot his tensions... he became the same kid that he once was, before his dad and destiny conspired and snatched his happiness away... As innocently as he would when he was a kid, he spoke today again...after a real long time... "DAI Maa...Please...Ab aap mujhe mat daanta karo...I M not a kid...Main bada ho gaya hoon..."

DM - Woh toh main dekh hi rahi hoon... aur main tumhein sirf Daantoongi nahin.., Main tumhein maar bhi sakti hoon...agar tumne phir se MEDICINES lene mein carelessness show ki toh...Chalo batao..kahaan hai medicines...?? (asked strictly)

S - (said more innocently) Woh toh last month hi khatam ho gayi...Mujhe laga main thik hoon iss liye...

DM - SAMRAT...yeh kya bachpana hai...Doctor ne kaha tha na...ki,jab tak woh naa kahein..tum MEDICINES leni band nahin karoge...phir...?? Anyway,Tum kal hi unke Hospital jaaoge aur saare Check-Up karaoge. (said in very strict way) aur,kal se tum apni saari MEDICINES bhi regular liya karoge.. Nahin toh mujhe aur bhi zyada strict hona padega...

S - (said with innocent expression) Achha Baba...Time milte hi Dr. BATRA ke hospital chala jaaoonga. Ab toh happy...??

DM - Haan...Happy...very happy...aur yeh happiness aur bhi badh jaayegi,agar tumne mujhe GUNJAN se...

And this statement brought SAMRAT back to the present... the same arrogant and rude, hot headed SAMRAT was back... he quickly cut her sentence midway..."DAI Maa,Please...I really don't want to talk about her..toh aap ko agar kuchh aur kehna hai toh..."

DAI Maa smiled as she moved her hand over his head... and she said lovingly... "Nahin...aur kuchh nahin kehna...Lekin main uss din ka intazaar karoongi...jab tum khud uske baare mein mujhse baat karoge... Patting him gently on his back, she stood up and was about to leave when SAMRAT's cell rang. She looked at SAMRAT as he scowled on seeing the name flashing on his cell... he immediately disconnected the call and switched off his cell. Getting up hurriedly, he walked towards the side table and removed the wire from the telephone instrument kept there... DAI MAA looked at him in surprise and asked... "What is this...? Kiska call tha...? aur tumne wire kyun nikal diye...??"

S - (said in serious tone) Kyunki,main sona chahta hoon...and I M sure...agar iss insaan se baat kar leta toh,meri neend udd jaani thi...phir,shayad yeh slieeping Pills bhi work nahin karti...Yeh insaan...kisi ka bhi chain...sukoon chhin sakta hai...

DM - WHAT...?? Tum yeh kiski baat kar rahe ho...?? Kaun tha Phone par...?

S - Aapke Bhai saab...!! Mr.PRATAP SHERGILL.

DM - SAMRAT !! What is this...?? Woh tumhaare...

S - (His voice a bit on a higher pitch than he would normally use while speaking to his DAI Maa, he cut her off...) Business Partner hain...bas...aur mera uss insaan ke saath aur koi rishta nahin...Aur,Iss waqt...(he looked at the table clock... and pointing towards it , he said...) already 10.30 ho gaye hain...Aur,abhi main official matter discuss karne ke mood mein nahin hoon.aur iss insaan se main koi personal matter discuss nahin karna chahta..toh,achha hai ki,main abhi inhein avoid karoon.

Before DAI MAA could say anything else, a servant came rushing into SAMRAT's room... panting, he said... " DAI Maa...Jaldi chaliye...Bade Saab ka phone hai..woh SAMRAT Sir se baat karna chahte the...par,jab yahaan ka No. nahin lag raha toh...aapse baat karna chahte hain...Jaldi chaliye..woh kaafi angry hain..."

DM - Achha thik hai...Main aati hoon...Tum chalo...

She also started to walk out as SAMRAT said with a wide smile on his face... "Best of Luck DAI Maa...I knew it...yeh yehi karega...OK..then..Good Night...Agar mere baare mein pooche toh keh dijiyega...after 10pm main bahar waalon ko apni personal life se door rakhta hoon.

He picked up his change of clothes and went to the washroom, to freshen up and change for the night... DAI Maa smiled and left his room, shutting the door gently behind her...

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As he came out of the washroom after changing, he realised his headache had increased a bit... he quickly took the medicine from the box that was lying on the bed and went to the cupboard to keep the box back. As he was about to shut the door, he saw the diamond ring box lying on the shelf... he picked it up and opened it carefully.The ring... it looked so beautiful... the solitaire gleaming... he remembered all the incidences connected with the ring... (( Pata nahin iss Ring mein aisa kya hai jo,mujhe iss ke liye itna possesive bana raha tha...Kitni mushkil se isse purchase kiya tha maine...Aur yeh ring.. (remember...Shop keeper's reason) I wish ki,jis insaan ne isse pasand kiya tha...uss ki Engagement ho gayi ho... Kitna upset ho gaya tha main iske misplace ho jaane ki wajh se thik ussi tarah jaise aaj...

And he remembered something. He picked up the coat that was hanging in the closet and from it's pocket, he took out the locket... and looked at it... for the first time in a lot of years, his eyes shining...

Aur,aaj yeh 'Locket' jo GUNJAN ka hai... (feeling sad) Maine toh socha tha,Jab woh aayegi usse yeh lauta doonga...par,ab toh woh shayad kabhi nahin aayegi...(He could feel a stabbing pain in his heart...) Pata nahin kahaan chali gayi...? Kaash..subah maine khud usse baat ki hoti...jab woh SHARMAA Jii ke cabin mein thi..toh main usse kahin jane nahin deta.

Keeping both the boxes back in the drawer, he shut the cupboard and walked towards the window. he looked up at the sky... it was a rainy night...lightning, thunder... he could not see any stars...it was a cloudy night... his mind was crowded with thoughts about HER...

Yeh sab kuchh meri wajah se hi hua...Maine hi toh usse jaane ko kaha tha...Usne toh sirf mere order ko follow kiye...bina kuchh kahe...woh chali gayi...Maine hi usse kaha ki,mujhe uski shakl se nafrat hai...iss liye toh woh mere saamne bhi nahin aayi...(some tears falls from his eyes) par,yeh sach nahin...sach,toh yeh hai ki,usse dekhe bina uss se baat kiye bina..Ab sab kuchh adhura sa lag raha hai... Usse dekhe hue 24hrs. se zyada ho chuke hain..aur yeh already kaafi zyada hain...Mujhe usse dhoondhna hi hoga...kahin se...kisi bhi tarah...Kya hua jo main uss se apne PYAAR ka izhaar nahin kar sakta...Kya hua jo main uss se shaadi nahin kar sakta...par,agar woh mere Office mein rahegi toh at least,mere saamne toh hogi...Main usse roz mil toh sakoonga...Kya yeh mere liye kaafi nahin...?? Usse mere Rude aur harsh behavior se problem hain...toh,Its fine naa...Iss baar,main usse nahin daantoonga... Uss ke saath rudely behave bhi nahin karoonga... phir,toh usse koi problem nahin hogi...? RiCHA se marriage ke baad bhi,hum Office mein toh roz mil hi sakte hain...Waise bhi,main maximum time toh Office mein hi rehta hoon.YES..!! This is Right...Main apni marriage ka koi bhi effect hamare beech nahin aane doonga...Bas ab 1 baar woh wapas aa jaaye...phir,main sab kuchh thik kar loonga...))

And a small smile flickered on his lips. So happy was he with this thought that as he turned around to walk towards his bed, his eyes sparkled ... and he flopped on the bed... and shut his eyes. And as soon as he did so, GUNJAN's pretty face flashed before his eyes... her brown eyes that had a twinkle in them...her pink lips smiling... this was enough for SAMRAT to sleep peacefully... just this small little visualization about her and SAMRAT was in deep slumber...

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..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai !
[-A Passionate Love Story]

PART-30 [3/4]

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NANDA HOUSE

Meanwhile GUNJAN at her Room

GUNJAN changed into her Night dress and went to window side...wanted to forget everything...

Thereafter,went near to her Bed...and sat there... She pushed herself towards the head rest of the bed as she leaned against it...picking up the pillow that lay next to her, she kept it on her lap... she wanted to sleep, but she was anything but, sleepy at the moment...She was thinking about her best friend...RAHUL... (( Ab tak toh RAHUL ka plane kaafi door ja chuka hoga...pata nahin,kya kar raha hoga woh...Yahaan toh iss waqt hamari chatting continue rehti thi...aur chatting na ho rahi toh...Sleeping (smiled) I M sure woh,ab tak so gaya hoga...uff,kitna sota hai woh... as she thought about RAHUL and remembered the way he would be sprawled over the Sofa as he slept...she could not help but, smile even more...Aur uski snoring noice... (smiled again) woh toh kabhi maanta hi nahin ki,woh snore karta hai...Iss baar aayega...toh Mobile par record kar dikhaoongi...Ki,kitna funny lagta hai woh sote hue...Bilkul,1 chhote bachhe ki tarah...

Par,RAHUL ke jaate hi yeh ghar kitna suna-suna sa lagne laga hai...lagta hi nahin ki woh ja chuka hai...aisa lag raha hai hai jaise abhi Door par 1 knock hogi aur woh kahega..." PiNKi...?? So gayi kya..?? Please,1 cup coffee bana do naa..." (again smiled) Kabhi-kabhi toh yakeen hi nahin hota ki yeh wohi RAHUL hai jis se main itna darrti thi...itna ki uske saamne aane se bhi darr lagta tha...woh bhi toh mujhe dekhna nahin chahta tha...Mera uske room mein aana bhi usse pasand nahin tha...Kitna daantta tha woh mujhe...No actually,Daantta toh ab bhi hai...par...thoda kum. Lekin,galti bhi toh meri hi hoti hai...tabhi toh woh mujhe daantta hai... (she convinced herself) Par,main kya karoon...Main nahin chahti ki koi galti karoon...phir bhi pata nahin kaise,galti kar jaati hoon...Jaise SAMRAT Sir ko pyar karne ki galti...agar maine unke liye feelings develope nahin ki hoti toh shayad aaj itni zyada hurt nahin hoti...pata nahin kyun main khud ko rok nahin paayi...Unki aankhein...unki khamoshi...mujhe kahin na kahin mere dard ki yaad dilati thin...pata nahin mujhe kyun lagne laga ki,woh bhi shayad meri tarah akele hain...lekin,phir kya hua...?? Mujhe meri galti ki sazaa mili... Main kisi insaan ko samajh kyun nahin pati...?? RAHUL sahi kehta hai...mujhe insoon ki samajh hi nahin hai... I M a big Fool... (some tears falls from her eyes,she wiped quickly)

Par,Mujhe kya haq hai SAMRAT Sir ko galat kehne ka... Unhone toh kabhi nahin kaha ki,mujhe pyar karo... meri parwah karo... Unhone toh mujhe ussi tarah treat kiya jaise shayad koi Boss apni 1 ordinary employee ko treat karta hai. Par,afsos toh iss baat ka hai ki,woh mujhe samjh hi nahin paye...maine toh koi galti bhi nahin ki...phir,bhi unhone mujhe job se nikalne ki baat kahi...mujhe itna kuchh kaha...Mere Maa-Papa aur mere Character par kiye gaye unke comment main kabhi nahin bhool paoongi...aur,shayad iske liye unhein kabhi maaf bhi nahin kar sakoongi... (she again cleaned her moist eyes).

Thank God ki,ab sab kuchh thik ho gaya... Thank God ki main hamesha ke liye unse door ho gayi... Ab kabhi kisi ko pata nahin chal paayega ki,mere dil mein kabhi unke liye 1 sided love tha. Main kabhi kisi se kuchh nahin kahoongi...woh,toh already bhool bhi gaye honge...ki,kal tak unke office mein koi GUNJAN naam ki ladki work karti thi...lekin main..?? Kya main unhein kabhi bhool paaoongi...?? shayad nahin...lekin main koshish toh kar rahin hoon naa...aur,phir jab unse miloongi hi nahin toh kya pata kuchh dinon mein main bhool bhi jaaoon...

I really wish ki main unse ab kabhi na miloon...lekin,main unke baare mein itna zyada kyun soch rahi hoon...? Ab woh mujhe kaise mil sakte hain..? Kyunki,Main SHERGILL's toh jaaoongi nahin...aur,woh toh mujhse milne hamare ghar aane se rahe...New Office join karne ke baad agar kabhi mile bhi toh..main wahaan akeli kahaan hongi...? RAHUL toh hoga na mere saath...RAHUL ke saamne woh mujhe kuchh nahin keh sakte. Aur agar kabhi unse mili bhi toh main hi unhein avoid kar doongi...unse koi baat hi nahin karoongi...Aur,phir ab toh mujhe unse darrne ki koi zaroorat bhi nahin...ab woh mere Boss nahin hain...ab unhein mujhe kuchh bhi kehne ka koi right nahin hai...aur,waise bhi maine Resignation dene se pehle unke saare Loss aur Expenses compensate kar diye hain...Main jaisi bhi hoon...apni zindagi mein apni Family ke saath khush hoon... unhein koi haq nahin ki,woh mere ya mere parents ke baare mein koi personal cheap comment pass karein... Agar phir,kabhi unhone aisa kiya toh main RAHUL ko bata doongi...SINGAPORE se aane ke baad toh woh bhi unki company se Resign kar dega...phir,woh hi unhein daantega...

Ok...ab mujhe yeh sab bhool kar sirf apni New job par concentrate karna chahiye...kal se hi RAHUL ki reccommend ki hui books ki study start kar doongi.1 month is sufficient for me. Please God ! help me..ab new job mein sab kuchh thik ho...kaash...wahaan ke Boss thode se cool hon...Uff...RAHUL sach hi kehta hai..Job paana mushkil hai lekin,usse continue karna uss se bhi zyada mushkil...I hope ki,ab sab kuchh thik ho jaaye...

Par,maine pehli baar RAHUL se itna bada jhooth kaha ...Usse MOBILE ke na hone ki sahi wajah nahin batai...par,main kya karti...? I know his anger...agar usse yeh sach bata diya hota ki,SAMRAT Sir ne mera mobile tod diya hai toh woh unse fight karne Office chala jata...aur,agar SAMRAT Sir ne usse bhi meri tarah job se terminate kar diya hota toh...?? Phir,woh kabhi SINGAPORE ki trip par nahin jaa paata...Yeh trip uske career ke liye kitni zaroori thi... Main kabhi nahin chahoongi ki,meri wajah se uske career spoil ho...yaa uncle-Aunty ko koi takleef pahunche...Yeh sab kitne achhe hain... Mujhe jaisi 1 orphan ke liye inhone kitna kuchh kiya hai...mujhe itni achhi Family di..itna pyar diya... shayad iss janam mein toh main kabhi inka karz utar hi nahin paaoongi... aur badle mein maine kya kiya..?? RAHUL se jhooth kaha...?? yeh sahi nahin hai...yeh toh cheating hui naa... Main aisa kaise kar sakti hoon?? Ok...Main bahot dinon ke baad...jab sab kuchh thik ho jaayega...main RAHUL ko sab kuchh sach-sach bata doongi. I know,mujhe thodi daant toh padegi but,its ok...galti ki hai toh daant toh padegi hi...I hope ki,woh mujhe maaf kar de...I know ki,woh mujhse zyada der tak naraz nahin reh sakta lekin,mujhe bhi bura lagega,agar usse bura laga toh...))

Innocence personified..GUNJAN was lost in her own sweet thoughts of a tension free future... everything so simple...so clear...just like her clear heart and simple thoughts But, she was unaware of what destiny had in store for her. The toughest test of life was yet to take place... As of now, she was at peace with herself...

She put the pillow away and lay down on the bed... She shut her eyes and finally sleep did overtake her.

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SAMRAT VILLA

Unlike the stormy Night, this Morning was sunny and bright. SAMRAT was in a hurry to reach office. He hurriedly dressed up and walked down and went towards the Dinning Room where, DAI Maa was busy setting the table for breakfast. She looked up as she heard footsteps. A look of surprise crossed her wrinkled face as she saw SAMRAT. She asked him, curiously...

DM - Arre SAMRAT ! tum yahaan...?? Abhi toh office jaane mein time hai naa..??

S - Good Morning DAI Maa...woh actually 1 bahoot hi zaroori kaam hai iss liye,jald hi nikalna hoga. (said happily)

DM - Ok...phir baitho...main abhi serve karti hoon...

S - Thanx... (smiled softly)

DM - Waise main tumhaare Room mein hi aane waali thi...woh kal raat..

S - DAI Maa Please...agar 'Unhone' phir kuchh kaha ho jiski wajah se...

DM - (cuts softly) Nahin...Pehle meri baat sun lo...phir,jo chahe keh lena...waise bhi,mujhe lagta hai ki,tumhein ab iss matter par 1 baar aur achhi tarah soch lena chahiye.

SAMRAT was not really paying attention to DAI Maa... He was in a hurry. He picked up 2 toasts and pulled the butter bowl closer. Before, starting to butter the toasts, he added milk in the corn flakes bowl that was lying near him as he asked very casually... "Kis matter par DAI Maa...?"

DAI Maa sat next to him and put her hand on his shoulder, as very seriously she said... "Main tumhaari marriage ki baat kar rahi hoon SAMRAT..."

SAMRAT kept stopped his hand which was buttering the toast and keeping the butter knife down, he looked at her. She was looking at him, a worried look on her face...Her eyes trying to say something. SAMRAT asked her... "Kyun kya hua...? Unhone phir kuchh kaha kya...??"

DAI Maa realised that to get her point across to SAMRAT, she would have to keep her calm and act normal. So she picked up the half buttered toast and as she started buttering the toast, she said... "Haan...Kal raat Bhai Saab ka phone aaya tha...unhone bataya ki RiCHA ke ghar waalon ne Tum donon ki marriage date fix kar li hai... Issi month ki 28th ki date ko Final kiya hai...25th ko Engagement Date announce karne waale hain.

SAMRAT said nothing as he heard these words. He accepted the toast that DAI Maa held towards him and started eating it. His face was blank...No expressions...Neither of happiness, nor of the impending victory according to him. DAI Maa felt sorry for him...His silence hurt her... softly, she tried to make him open up his pent up feelings in front of her. She asked...

DM - Tumne kuchh kaha nahin...? SAMRAT...Kya tum iss rishte se khush ho...?? Kya Tum RICHA ke saath...

S - Main khush rahoonga DAI Maa...(completed her sentence) RiCHA se marriage karne ka decision maine kaafi soch samajhkar liya hai...She is perfect for me. Kya nahin hai uske paas... Name, Fame, Class, Status,Standard,Money...She is totally Right choice for me. Mujhe uss se aur kuchh nahin chahiye...

DAI Maa sighed as she heard SAMRAT speak. She said nothing...but disappointment on her face could not be hidden...

S - (asked softly)Kya aapko aur bhi kuchh kehna tha...??

DM - Nahin...Bete...Ab aur kuchh nahin...Tumhaare iss answer ke baad mujhe mere saare sawaloon ke jawab mil gaye. Bas ab aur kuchh nahin poochna... (said in very sad tone)

SAMRAT noticed that DAI Maa was upset... she wanted to say something, but did not. So he asked her... in the tone he normally spoke to her...He would have spoken to his mother... "Aap mere iss Faisle se khush nahin hain...??

DM - Nahin bete...Aisa nahin hai...Tumhaari khushi mein hi meri khushi hai...par,1 baat kehna chahti thi... shayad aaj ke baad kehne ka koi matlab na ho...

S - Kaun si baat DAI Maa...?

DM - Koi bhi last decision lene se pehle...apne dil ki zaroor sunn na...kyunki,Kai baar Dimaag se liye gaye faisle sahi saabit nahin hote. Main tum sab jitni padhi-likhi nahin...shayad issi liye,Aaj ke daur ko bhi nahin samajh paati...lekin,zindagi ka experience hai...jo yeh batata hai ki,yeh Name, Fame, Status... kisi insaan ke paas hamesha nahin rehte...Reh jaate hain toh sirf...'Sachhe Rishte'...Pyaar aur ek-dusre ki parwah. Insaan ki value uske 'Status' yaa 'Bank Balance' se nahin...uski insaniyat...uski soch se karni chahiye... Paisoon se sab kuchh khareeda ja sakta hai par khud ke liye,'mann ki shaanti'[Peace of Mind] nahin kharidi ja sakti. Jo kho gaya...hum usse wapas nahin paa sakte...par,jo hai usse toh bacha sakte hain...

SAMRAT understood what she was trying to say but, he was not going to let this talk change his Plans... He continued eating as he spoke in a disinterested tone... "Don't worry DAI Maa...I know what am I doing...so...aur waise bhi ab mere paas khone ko kuchh nahin bacha..."

Accepting defeat, DAI Maa stood up from her seat and in a sad voice, she said... "Yeh tum behtar jaante ho SAMRAT ki, tumhaare paas khone yaa save karne ko kuchh hai yaa nahin...? Mujhe jo kehna tha..maine keh diya...shayad main galat hoon...shayad meri puraani soch kaafi 'Puraani' ho chuki hai... Kyunki shayad,main ab bhi ussi zamane mein hoon jahaan Pyaar,Rishte aur Shaadi ke bandhan ko har bandhan se zyada Pavitra mana jaata tha...jahaan aaj ki tarah log inn rishton ka sauda nahin karte the... Anyway,main chalti hoon... Mujhe Kitchen mein kuchh kaam hai...

She walked away... still hoping SAMRAT would at least give a thought to her words...much as it sounded remote.SAMRAT looked at her as she walked away, and then he turned away. He did not wish to argue with her... much less even think about it...

He knew he had taken the Right decision... His aim in life... was clear... this decision was for that aim... but, then...He looked towards the kitchen..DAI Maa was keeping the jug of milk back in the Refrigerator...He looked at her... somewhere deep down, he knew, she was Right... but... NO... His aim in life was more important... He finished his breakfast and left home for work.

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..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai !
[-A Passionate Love Story]

PART-30 [4/4]

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NANDA HOUSE

SHARADA Jii entered GUNJAN's room. But,she did not find her in the room. She looked around and smiled... everything in its place...Her room was so neat... GUNJAN was so perfect in all she did... She had even managed to discipline RAHUL a great deal... RAHUL... maybe GUNJAN was there... she turned around and walked towards RAHUL's room. She was right. GUNJAN was in RAHUL's room... searching for something...she stood near the table, moving the books about and flicking through them... mumbling...

((Oh God ! kahaan rakh di woh slip...? ? Issi table par toh rakhi thi...Kahaan gayi woh..?? Kya ho gaya hai mujhe...?? Pata nahin kahaan khoyi rehti hoon...?? RAHUL thik hi daant ta hai...Main hoon hi irresponsible... Mujhe toh daant padni hi chahiye... No,wonder woh Office ki File bhi maine hi gum kar di hogi...Yeh toh achha hai RAHUL nahin hai warna,abhi phir se daant pad jaati...))

SHARADA Jii could not help but, smile... GUNJAN muttering to herself and searching for something... SHARADA Jii wished she could capture that scene...keeping her hand on her mouth, she stifled a chuckle as she composed herself and asked...

Sh - Yeh kahaan jaane ke liye ready ho rahi ho...? ? RAHUL ne toh kaha ki,tumne Resign kar diya hai...phir...? ?

G - (looking at SHARADA Jii, her pretty face looked even more pretty as she flashed her smile at SHARADA Jii...and she said with smiling face...)

Office nahin ja rahi Aunty...RAHUL ne some books recommend ki hai...kuchh books uske shelf mein hain lekin,kuchh books laani hongi...Uncle ne kaha hai ki woh college se issue kara denge...iss liye, College ja rahi hoon

S- Ok...lekin phir dhoondh kya rahi ho? ?

G - BOOK LIST...pata nahin kahaan rakh di hai...Kal yahin toh rakhi thi par abhi mil hi nahin rahi...Pata nahin kahaan chali gayi...?

S - Oh...jaayegi kahaan...? Yahin kahin rakhi hogi...aur nahin bhi milti hai,toh problem kya hai...? RAHUL ko phone kar dobara pooch lo...woh phir se bata dega...Ab tak toh woh pahunch bhi gaya hoga naa...

G - Haan Aunty...lekin itni chhoti si baat ke liye usse pareshaan karna sahi nahin hoga aur,abhi toh woh kaafi tired bhi hoga...agar usse pata chala ki maine phir kuchh gum kar diya hai toh again phone par hi daant pad jaayegi... Aapko toh pata hai jab woh tired hota hai toh,kitna gusse mein rehta hai...woh saara Gussa mujh par hi utar dega... (Gulping, she spoke...innocence evident in each and every word she spoke)

S - Oh...yeh toh maine socha hi nahin... (smiled) Achha phir, dhoond lo...yahin kahin par rakhi hogi.

GUNJAN nodded and started searching again. She saw a novel lying at the corner of the table. She picked It up and was about to open it and flick the pages, when something fell out of the book... she kept the book on the table and picked up the paper, which was neatly folded. She opened the folds of the paper and her eyes sparkled... she smiled broadly as she looked at SHARADA Jii and said, excitedly... as a kid would on finding her misplaced toy... WoW !! Mil gayi..... saying this she kissed the paper that she was holding.

SHARADA Jii was looking at her lovingly... She smiled as she saw the excitement on GUNJAN's face...She was still so innocent...like she was when they had taken her under their care. She kept looking at GUNJAN who was oblivious to the stares of SHARADA Jii...She was busy marking some books on the paper...after which, she carefully folded the paper, put it in her purse and adjusting her dupatta, she started to leave...as she said...

G - Aunty main college ja rahi hoon...jaldi hi aa jaaoongi...Uncle ki call aaye toh kehna main bas thodi der mein hi aa rahi hoon...Bye!!

SHARADA Jii walked with her as she opened the main door of the house and walked out. Waving her Goodbye. SHARADA Jii shut the door and started walking towards the kitchen...She felt happy...everything looked so perfect... each one happy with the way their life was going about...She silently prayed to the almighty to keep everyone happy... Tears of happiness glistening in her eyes.

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SHERGILL GROUP of COMPANIES :

SAMRAT entered his Office Premises... lost in his own thoughts. DAI Maa and her advice was something that SAMRAT could not ignore. He knew she always wanted the best for him... but, then he had set a goal..and he had to achieve it... as he passed GUNJAN's cabin, he stopped. His thoughts crossed over to her... He kept looking at the closed door, when suddenly it opened. SAMRAT's heart skipped a beat...

But,then when he saw the peon exit the cabin, He came back to his senses. The peon was scared seeing SAMRAT stare at him and he immediately clarified that he was just cleaning the cabin. SAMRAT did not utter a word and walked away.

He entered his cabin and after taking his seat behind the desk, opened his lappy and attempted to work. But, his thoughts wandered...from DAI Maa's advice to GUNJAN... He was finding it difficult to concentrate. He read the mails... so many...this confirmation of 'Marriage Date' had increased the work load. He had just about less than a month to finish of the pending work... and 'SHE' was not there to help him too. He leaned back and shut his eyes... when, he heard a knock on the cabin door. He opened his eyes, and sitting up straight, he asked the person to enter. His Chief Accountant, Mr.MITESH NANDI entered...

Mr.N - Good Morning Sir !

S - Good Morning Mr.NANDi. Achha hua ki,aap khud aa gaye... Actually,mujhe KIWISH INTERNATIONAL ke some account par aapki opinion chahiye thi. (He picked up 2 files lying on his desk and handed them over to Mr.NANDI...) Yeh 2 Files hain...1, KIWISH Int. ke last 5 yrs. ke saare Accounts and Balance Sheet ki copy hai..2nd File mein Miss GUNJAN BHUSHAN ki banai hui Report and Analysis hain.Aap inhein again check kar mujhe batayein ki GUNJAN ne jo suggestions diye hain woh... kitne sahi hain...? Mujhe yeh report shaam tak mil jaani chahiye...This is a very important Project for me...so,can't take any risk.

Mr.N - Ok..Sir ! I'll do. (Accepting the 2 files, he kept the file he held in his hand on the desk...and said...) Sir yeh kuchh Bills and Cheques hain,jo clearance ke liye aaye hain.Inn par aapke signatures chahiye the.

S - Ok... (took the file) Main inhein abhi sign kar deta hoon. Wait... and SAMRAT was busy signing those cheques.

Mr.N - Thanx. (after a little Pause he said slowly) ... Sir can I ask 1 thing...?

S - Yaa...U can. (He did not look up but continued signing the cheques...)

Mr.N - Sir,woh 'THE AMBASSADOR' waale last Bill ka kya karna hai...??

S - (Looked at him and questioned...) Matlab...??

Mr.N - I mean,Last day Miss BHUSHAN ne uss Bill ko unke Account se debit karne ko kaha hai...Abhi thodi der pehle bhi unhone call kiya tha...actual Bill amount jaanne ke liye. Maine unhein actual Bill Amount bata diya hai...Unhone kaha ki woh jaldi hi aakar uska payment kar dengi...toh...

S - (Startled as he heard this, SAMRAT suddenly stood up and asked in a shocked tone...) WHAT...?? GUNJAN ki call aayi thi...?? Woh bhi aaj...?? Kahaan se call kiya tha usne...? Kahan hai woh...?? (All questions asked without a pause...)

Mr.N - Yes Sir,abhi thodi der pehle hi aayi thi...shayad half hrs.,B4. Kahaan se call kar rahi hai...? Yeh toh maine nahin poocha...Kya woh kahin bahar gayi hai...? (asked softly)

S - (Though excited to hear that GUNJAN had called,He composed himself immediately and spoke in a harsh tone...) Mr.NANDi...Kya aapko pata nahin ki,Mujhe questions aur questions karne waale insaan donon hi pasand nahin...

Mr.N - Sorry Sir...woh maine waise hi... Extremly Sorry for that.

S - Its Ok...Aap jaaiye aur Mujhe woh No. send kijiye jis No. se GUNJAN ne call kiya tha.

Mr.N - Ji...ji...Sir...main...main... abhi bhejta hoon.

Totally petrified with this sudden change in SAMRAT's behavior, he left the cabin and once outside, heaved a sigh of relief. He used the Desk Phone of an employee sitting nearby and called the telephone operator, asking her to send him the number from which GUNJAN had called...

As Mr.NANDI left, SAMRAT let go of his real emotions... He grinned widely... waiting was getting very difficult... He sat down and tapped the desk with his fingers...looked at his wrist watch and then at the door. Why was it taking so long for Mr.NANDI to give him one telephone number ??? He looked at his wristwatch again and then heard the sound he was so waiting to hear... The knock on his cabin door. Upon getting permission to enter, A peon entered and handed him paper..on which was written a number. He asked the peon to leave and saw the number... upon reading the number, he was surprised as well as elated... ((Oh ! Yeh toh uska Land line No. hai...Iska matlab woh ghar par hi hai...?? Yeh SHARMA bhi naa...!! Abhi usse call karwata hoon...

He was about to dial Mr SHARMA's number, when he stopped. He thought about something... dropping the receiver back in it's hook, He looked at the number again and thought...

No !! Iss baar koi risk nahin loonga...SHARMA ko kehne ka koi benefit nahin...He is totally useless person...pehle hi uski wajah se kal ka saara din waste ho chuka hai.. Pata nahin,kisne uss duffer ko bata diya ki woh kahin chali gayi hai...jab ki woh kahin nahin gayi thi...Yahin thi...issi MUMBAI mein. Mujhe hi uss se direct baat karni hogi...aur phir,main usse darrta nahin...Main khud uss se kahoonga... aur agar usne seedhi tarah meri baat nahin maani toh,kal NOTICE milne ke baad toh maan hi jaayegi (smiled as a winner) lekin...mujhe thoda normal tone mein baat karni hogi...woh thodi si upset hogi but,I know...jab wapas join karne ko kahoonga toh mujhe mana nahin kar paayegi... SAMRAT SHERGILL ne khud usse call kiya... uske liye yehi kaafi hoga... The thought of the great favor that he was doing for GUNJAN... by calling her up and asking to join back... appeased his ego. With his victory smile pasted on his face, he dialed her number...

A few rings later, the call was answered... as a soft voice said... "Hello"

SAMRAT recognised the voice... though he was disappointed not to hear her voice... her sweet, soft voice...He so yearned to hear it. But, this was her Aunty [Mrs.NANDA]...

S - Hello..!! Mujhe GUNJAN se baat karni hai...Kya aap usse bula dengi...?

Mrs.N - GUNJAN toh abhi ghar par nahin hai...par,bete aap kaun bol rahe ho...??

S - ((Oh God ! Again a question...I hate questions...par,agar mujhe uski information leni hai iss lady ke aise stupid quetions bhi answer karne honge...Kya kahoon..? Apni real identity bata doon..?? No.abhi nahin...Abhi kuchh bhi keh deta hoon...))

Mrs.N - Hello...??

S - Ji...Ji woh main unka colleague hoon...Actually,mujhe uss se kuchh important baat karni thi...Kuchh Office related work tha.

Mr.N - Oh ! Lekin bete ,Abhi toh woh nahin hai...jab woh aayegi main keh doongi...par,Apna naam kya bataya tumne...?? (asked in very soft tone)

S - Ji...Ji..woh main...

He had not expected this question... what was he going to say?? He looked around and saw a newspaper lying on his desk... and in bold letters were some headlines...his eyes caught a name...BHAVANA SHARMA...He read it and then...

...Bh...av...!! Bh..av..SH...!!

BHA...V..E...SH...

Yes !! BHAVESH...KUMAR...

My name is BHAVESH KUMAR

(He heaved a sigh of relief after saying that...)

Mrs.N - Thik hai bete..main GUNJAN ko bata doongi...

S - (Asked quickly) Waise Kya aap yeh bata sakti hain ki,woh abhi kahaan gayi hain...?

Mrs.N - Haan...Kyun nahin... Aakhir tum uss ke colleague ho...Actually,woh thodi der pehle hi College ke liye nikli hai... Dopaher[Afternoon] tak aa jaayegi...

S - (asked curiously) COLLEGE..?? Kyun..?? I mean,uski study toh complete ho gayi hai phir...? Kahin Higher Study ke liye toh...

Mrs.N - Arre Nahin..woh College mein admission nahin le rahi...woh toh,College Library se sirf Kuchh books issue karane gayi hai...shayad uski new job ke liye unki study zaroori hai...issi liye. (said in very normal and soft tone)

S - (SAMRAT was definitely not pleased on hearing this... his tone turned harsh as he asked...) NEW JOB...WHERE...?? (but,composed immediately and changed the topic) Oh...Its really GR8...Lekin,Books toh students ko hi issue hote hain...phhir,usse kaise...? (asked softly)

Mrs.N - Haan...par,Uske Uncle hain naa...I mean,woh NIXON ke Vice Priciple hain..toh,woh unke card par Books issue kara denge.

S - Oh ! Anyway,Thanx for telling about her...Main baad mein call kar loonga bye.

Mrs.N - Ok..Bye bete...Uske aate hi main usse tumhaare baare mein bata doongi...Bye !!

As she kept the receiver back in its hook and was about to go back to the kitchen to continue cooking, she heard the doorbell chime. Who could it be at this time?? She was not expecting anyone. GUNJAN and Prof.NANDA were also not expected so soon. She walked over to the main door of the house and opened it... standing at the Door were Three-Four well dressed men...but, she could not place them... looking at them, she questioned...

Mrs.N - Jii...Aap sab...?? Aapko kinse milna hai...??

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Meanwhile SAMRAT

As SAMRAT disconnected the call, his eyes were blazing with anger. Just one line uttered by Mrs NANDA was ringing in his ears...

"shayad,Uski NEW JOB ke liye unki study zaroori hai"

Angrily, he flung the phone on the floor,shattering it into small pieces. His mind was only thinking about one thing.GUNJAN ... and she taking up a new job...he leaned over the desk as he thought... ((WHAT THE HELL...?? NEW JOB...?? STUDY FOR NEW JOB...?? Paagal ho gayi hai woh...Dimaag kharab ho gaya hai uska...Yahaan main kal se uska wait kar raha hoon aur wahaan usse New Job ke liye study karni hai...Its my fault...totally my fault...Mujhe kal hi uske saath strictly behave karna chahiye tha... but,no problem..mujhe ab uske saath strict hona padega warna usse kabhi bhi SHERGILL's aur meri kahi hui baat ki importance samajh nahin aayegi.

But,1 sec...uss lady ne kaha ki,uske uncle NiXON ke vice Principle hain... NiXON...?? If,I M not wrong toh...SHERGILL's NiXON ke silent Trustee mein se 1 hain. Lekin...agar uske Uncle, 1 of the Top college of MUMBAI ke Vice Principal hain toh,isska matlab yeh hai ki,uski Family itni poor nahin ho sakti ki sirf,Rs.23,000 ke amount ko re-pay karne ke liye usse apna ornament sell karna pade...phir,usne apne childhood ka 'Locket' kyun sell kiya...?? Usse apni study complete karne ke liye...'Scholarship' ki zaroorat kyun padi...?? Kya uski Family usse support nahin karti...?? Lekin,agar aisa hai toh woh apni Family ki itni parwah kyun karti hai...?? Kyun unke liye itni posssesive hai...? Maine jab uss raat uske Parents ke baare mein kuchh kaha toh woh aur zyada hi upset ho gayi thi...Kyun...?? Lekin...maine uski Aunty ki baatein pehle bhi suni hain..unki baatoon se toh woh kaafi loving and caring maloom hoti hain...then,what's the main metter...??

Anyway,these questions are not important for me..Agar mere liye kuchh important hai toh,bas yeh ki..Woh again SHERGILL's join kare aur apne work par concentrate kare naa ki other useless things par... Ok... mujhe usse baat karni hogi...usse batana hoga ki,woh kisi aur Company ko join karna toh door ki baat hai... woh aisa soch bhi nahin sakti...phir,chahe uss se milne ke liye mujhe abhi NiXON hi kyun na jaana pade...Main jaaoonga...aur yeh koi request nahin hogi...yeh mera order hoga... jise usse maan na hi padega... Mujhe abhi hi jaana chahiye... NiXON yahaan se zyada door nahin...woh abhi wahin hogi.))

SAMRAT stood up straight and was about to leave the cabin, when he stopped. He walked to the washroom in his cabin and looked at himself in the mirror... He seemed dissatisfied with what he saw. he removed his spectacles and splashed water on his face. wiping his face with a towel, he put on his specs and set his hair...check his look on the mirror but,... he was still not happy... he once again removed his specs and checked himself again... and finally... "Yaa... Its better..." (said with a satisfaction)

And he walked out of the washroom and with quick steps reached the door of his cabin. As he opened the door... He exclaimed strangely...

"TUM...?? YAHAAN...?? ISS WAQT...??

MONISH stood there... a smile on his face...Disgusting...thought SAMRAT. This smile indicated that MONISH was here to create another problem...again...

[To Be Continued...]

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Hi Guyz n Glz,
Finally...Part-30 posted...(Phheewww!!🥱), this time without any Break😳. Thanx 4 bearing our all Bakwaas...😳.Thank You so much for giving your Valuable time😳.

Really Sorry Guyz, for any disappointment. V know many readers want to read SaJan scenes in this FF...but,as per Story demand V cant show it so soon. After,SAMRAT's behavior with GUNJAN... how,can she forget or forgive SAMRAT so easily...?? Is it possible...?? This is the question of a Girl 'Self-Respect' n her 'Dignity'. and,V really want to maintain her Character essence in this story.

V don't want to spoil GUNJAN' Character B'coz, She is the main character of this story...and this FF is a story of her journey of life...Childhood to motherhood. V want to portray an innocent and simple girl's feeling about Love n marriage.

2nd side the Character of SAMRAT is over ambitious...so,how can he change overnight...?? His dream and revenge is the only aim of his life... How can he forget his aim after his feelings for GUNJAN...??

Guyz, Please wait for some time... 'Realization of LOVE' is very important part of this story...so,V don't want to mess-up any thing. If,U noticed...V always show all characters thoughts so briefly...B'coz, here all Characters and their view..is very Important of this story... Especially Male Characters B'coz they are out n out 'Grey Shade' characters... Their thoughts is helping readers to relate to them..and understand their situation and feelings about GUNJAN.

V hope our readers understand us and continue giving us their precious feedback. And, If...U like this part...Please,share your 'Honest View' about this Update...Thanx😳

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PRECAP-31 [TEASER scene-A]

The smirk on MONISH's face ensured that SAMRAT totally lost his cool... he blasted at MONISH...

S - Now...U can go...from my Office...

M - (His smile getting all the more sarcastic, he settled even comfortably in the chair, showing no signs of leaving...) Chill Dude...! Chala jaaoonga...Itni jaldi bhi kya hai...? main bhi yahaan iss chhote se office mein apna ghar basane nahin aaya...Just Relax..

S - Achha hoga...tum abhi chale jaao...warna,main kya kar doonga...yeh main bhi nahin jaanta...

M - Ok.As U like It...Par,mujhe pata hai mujhe ab kya karna hai...Maine toh socha ki,apni 'purani' dosti ki wajah se tumhein 1 chance de doon...Lekin,koi baat nahin...Its your choice...main ab kya kar sakta hoon... He stood up and pushing the chair behind a bit aggressively, he smiled and turned to leave. But before he could reach the door, he heard SAMRAT's voice stop him...

S - Ruko...!!

MONISH gave a slight laugh... as he turned to face SAMRAT, victory all so evident on his face... "I knew it...Yeh awaaz aayegi...par,itni jaldi aayegi...yeh nahin socha tha...Thank God ! Tumne time se pehle hi situation ko samajh liya.

S - (looked angrily n yelled) Really, Maine jitna socha tha...tum uss se bhi zyada 'Kaminey' ho...

M - (smiled softly n said without any shame) Thanx for compliment Dude...! I M so,touched...Yaar,itni taarif toh aaj tak mere baap ne bhi nahin ki...Thank God ! Kisi ne toh mujhe pehchana...!! Par,Dude...kabhi khud ko dekha hai...? 1 baar khud ko bhi dekho...phir,aaram se judge karna..kaun kitna...

S - Just Shut-Up...! (Yelled) Main tumse bekaar ki baatein nahin karna chahta...Mujhe kuchh waqt chahiye...sochne ke liye...

M - Oh..sure,Please take your time...Main kahaan koi zabardasti kar raha hoon...Hum dost hain...ooppss sorry 'the'...Hum dost the toh, apne purne dost ke liye itna toh kar hi sakta hoon...but,problem is...mere paas time hi toh nahin hai...toh woh main tumhein kahaan se doon...?? par,agar tum itne request kar rahe ho toh...chalo aaj shaam tak ka time diya...Ab tumhaare liye itna toh kar hi sakta hoon... (smiled with teasing way...this smile was indicating his victory)

SAMRAT looked at MONISH in anger... If only...If only, the offer made by MONISH was not beneficial to him, GOD alone knew what SAMRAT would have done with MONISH...

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gosh havent finished wid d earlier one itself... 😆
but don worry will comment on dat very much soon n for this one may b a li'l later but soon 😉 😆
as of now a reservation has to take place 😆

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finally finished this part n the teaser also...!!! It was LONG as usual 😆 😆 But it was fun... Chalo chalo aage padho for the reviews... 😉 😛
[A] for AWESOMEEE part... of the whole update...!!!! Poor Samrat... Using soo much of his timy brain. 😆 You guys ask us to use a little less brain n put him into soo horrifying dillemas that I sumtyms get worried about wat is wrong n wat is right.😳
N yaaa he rescued d locket???? how sweet yaar 😳 😳 😳 🤗 But yaar ye acche rehte rehte bure q ban jaate hai??? 😕 😕 😉 N that ego waala line... Look who's talking...!? 😲 Middle Class family ki girls ko ego hai n wat about Samrat kinda people??? Wat is it called?? 😛
Poor Mr.Sharma...😆 Always gets scolded for sum or d other reason😛 😆 😆
[B] for Baaarrr... My monitor was really lucky that I didn break the screen while reading it 😡. That Trishna... B🤬 I'll kill her 1 one day...!!! And I won't spare Mr.Pratap also...!!! Gosh u people na... make me soo much aggressive at times... Sometimes its via Samrat n sometimes like this... 🤣 🤣 U noe wat... I have a doubt...not about this FF but in general a very genuine question. When people noe that they r SUPER INTELLIGENT n SUPER SMART y can't they utilise these qualities in sumthin good??😛😳😕😕😕 Not only d roads but 1/4th of d world is filled with IDIOTS 😛. But I also pity them hun... coz unke sapne bohot jald chur chur hone waale hai... jus like PAPDI CHAAT (famous in mumbai) 🤣 🤣 🤣.
That Dai Maa waala section was soo cute ree... Samrat was soo adorable...!!! 😳 😳 😳 N the pics u guys hav put... so apt yaar...! I really liked the way Samrat refused to talk to his dad... Very correct decision. If it was me there may b even I wud hav had dun d same. 😕 😛
And yaar now wat is with this ENGAGEMENT RING??? 😕 U guys na... 1 suspense doesn ends but the new one starts 😆 PYAAR KA IZHAAR... aayee haayeee haayeee...!! Too Good yaaar 🤗
Gunjan's single part was soo touching for me. I remembered wen i was young n my dad went to abroad... The first night even my situation was d same 😳 😳 Missed my dad soo much... but now he's back 😃 Keeping it aside, m worried for this darling yaar... why do always d innocent ones have to suffer?? Also people will love only d innocent ones... Yaar kare toh kya kare... 😒 😒
Next morning, Dai Maas gyan was very effective but very filmy kinda😉 😉 but I lykd d way Samrat reciprocated... 😆 😆 M really excited to noe that what will Samrat do now regarding Richa...😳😉😆
The scene when Samrat came to noe about Gunjan's contact till the one where he talked to Mrs. Nanda was soo awesome yaar BHAVESH KUMAR 🤣 🤣 🤣
N the end... SUPERBBB... MOHNISHHH my baby... 🤗 too good... 👏 👏
Overall stunning update...!!! Loved it to the core...
Okay... Teaser dena zaruri tha?? 😕 😛
U cud hav had avoided it...!!! Now i'll start guessing... n u very well noe wat happens to my li'l brain wen i start guessing...😆 😆 Anyways d teaser was interesting... leaving sum thots in my mind... so lez c how it goes... 😃 😃 😃 M happy coz it had Mohnish 😆 🤗

The scene when Samrat came to noe about Gunjan's contact till the one where he talked to Mrs. Nanda was soo awesome yaar

Edited by cool_tuli - 14 years ago

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TULI

@cool_tuli

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#538

have edited my comment for d last update on Page No. 61 do check...!!! Will comment for this too soon...

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lakshmi

@gnaneswari

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#539

Hi S3, first of all i'm very very very sorry for not commenting from 3 updates. But, i have read all of them and the pressed the like button too. It was because, i was damn busy these days and haven't came online for 3 weeks and when i came i have so pms to read and i was really busy. So, haven't got time to comment, instead i had read the updates. I'm very sorry. Ok, coming to updates... They r mindblowing. My love for this ff is increasing. U guys r very good at maintaing the exceitment and suspence among the readers. And that teaser... it was amazing but made my b.p high! Really! If that monish kiss gunjan, then i'll kill him. Give this warning from me to him. I doesn't mean that i hate him. I like his scenes also. But, being sajan fan. I can't accept gunjan with others. And omg! What happend to gunjan, why is she in hospital? I hope nothing serious happens to her and she becomes alright. And most importantly who is her husband?! What was in that envelope that made angrier rahul to worried rahul. Sajan shopping and lift scenes were looking intresting. It seems that we r going to see a cool n funloving sam in those scenes. And wow! Sam had brought that locket back! I'm very happy coz when gunjan sold that i felt sad. And samrat past is painful no wonder that he had that much hatred and anger in him. Now, i have understood samrat's charector and his pain completely. Poor soul he is carving for love, and he is scared to love n own some one. Coz, he is insecure and have a feeling that whatever he loves it goes far for him. But, i'm shocked to see sd's behaviour. I have one doubt in my mind. Is pratap really samrat's dad?! Coz, no father wants his son to hurt his son. Even though they don't want their son in their life, but they can let him to live his life na. And that mrs. Shergil... She is a woman na, she can be sensitive to samrat. Instead, stopping sd she is also accompained him. He can't be a father, but he can be a human na. They don't even have humanity in them. What is their plan? Why is he wants to ruin sam's life? For money? Can any father wants his son to live a dishartened and miserable life? U my feel that i'm overreacting. But, i really feeling disgusted to see the mr 'n' mrs. Shergills behaviour. On one side there r nandas who gave gunjan love, family and a new life after their parents death. And on other side there is pratap, who abondonded his own son for his happiness letting him grew by his own! No, wonder that sam doesn't respect relations and persons feelings. Because he don't about all these. And there r no one to teach and expalin that there r so many valuable things in world which r nothing infront of money. But, now dm said about these to sam and he even thought of it for a second. But, after it hatred for his father overcame him. Dm is such a sweet heart. I wish she was there for sam in his childhood too. He is in such a pain! I hope gunjan would fill his emptiness in heart and wound his pains. Gunjans thoughts in room was explained nicely. She is missing rahul, and why not he is her bestfriend after all. And sam thought that gunjan left the city! But, it was for good coz he realised that how much he wants be with gunjan. And i thought that from now he won't be angry at her. But, in the end he is angry with her, thanks to his mood swings. And his acts in the washroom is funny, it had a glimse for our 'cool dude' samrat. By, shopping scene in teaser it is confirmed that gunjan will rejoin shergills. As she said she was obeying her boss. But, the question is when and how? And what is monish's proposal? And what make sam to think about it? Monish doesn't do anything with out his benfit. So, what did he get by this deal? I know, to know about all these i have to wait for next updates. So, don't keep me wait for long and update soon. And sorry for my longest comment. U must be bored. Do cont soon. Thanks a lot for pms.

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kritika

@Kritianya

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#540

Nice update dear
i was wating for the update & my wait was worth it
the update was realy worth wait
& yes u r right u realy broke all the records of ur previous updates
plz cont soon

kriti