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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb part
finally geet met rano. N rano got to knw dat maan is madly in love wid geet😳 but d precap is scary 😕 pls cont soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wonderful update.
Geet was so shattered looking at her brother in such state.
But Rik is improving which is a good thing.
Poor Maan must have been so confused.
Shila is such a sweet heart.
She is helping Geet and trying to make her understand Maan.
Looks like Geet is completely shocked and her rational thinking is lost.
Her past keeps revisiting her and so her trust keeps wavering.
No wonder she shouted at Maan instead of acknowledging his presence and care.
Finally Mom meets Daughter .
Geet fainted because of shock
Maan attended to her right on time.
How much ever she accuses him his love seems to be strong.
He was so concerned and Poor Rano didnt know whether to be happy or sad looking at his love.
Hope Rano discloses the whole truth to Maan.
Waiting for the next update.




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Posted: 14 years ago
U updating gain
Me waiting 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
plz dont sleep dear and update quickly
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Posted: 14 years ago
oMG THIS IS SO ANNOYING i just colour coded.. ^& it disspeared... few more min ugh
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i have a big request fire please please update animosity i love that ff please tell me if you update it please anwser thanks

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Posted: 14 years ago
i want to scream now.. this is my 3rd time.. i am idiot.. ugh.. ugh ugh.. so angry..

will update animosity hun
xxx
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thank you a lot i am happy dancing you know i am your ff addict pecialy animosity
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Posted: 14 years ago
~ENIGMA~
PART 57







Maan gives her a small peck. Worried sick..
Dr "she is fine, just too much stress, please try to put her in bed rest.. Maan nodes & holds her tight. He loves her so much.. But does she?
He observed her face, she looked so pale, very ill, he creased her cheek.. Flowed by another kiss on her forehead.. Rano looked at them from outside.. Crying...

After 4 hours.. Maan sat there thinking about her last word, he did not move from her side at all. "mom!" she called rano mom. Why? Rano walks in, geet was in deep sleep,
Maan "did she call you mom?" he asks, wondering...
Rano "no! No! You must have hard wrong" maan faintly smiles. Having hard time to believe this truth. "how is she?"
Maan "much beter she only requires bed rest."
Rano "that's good. Do keep informing me, I am on my way back home"
Maan "why don't you stay few minute longer mom!"
The word mom cought geets attention again, even in her sleep she started to show the uncomfortable face... Maan became alert instantly while rano took her leave... Somewhere maan did find that fishy.
Geet woke up, slowly tried to sit up. Maan was helping but she snaps "stay way!"
Maan "I have no intention to help but you are week!" that was his firm strong voice, she could clearly sense that maan is angry, & she dare not provoke him further. A faint smile, more of a mockery smile came out ... She sits up & was about to leave when maan stops her, "you are very week"
Geet "I can't effort this amount of money!" she snaps off & was about to leave again, when maan stops her.
Maan "geet, you are very week!" he tries again, & why was he trying? For her? When she ECM considering this anything, I do it because it hurts when I see her in pain, & her, probably won't even care if I die!
She was nearly at the door when she stumbles again, & this maan did not catch her. He was too far. He rolled his eyes & came by... Stood there. Geet looked at his black shoe, angry, giving him glare... He bends down & picks her up, then straight way walks out, geet just looks at him in surprise as they walked passed riks room. "where are you taking me?" she demands an answer.. "leave me aline!... Look I will scream. Leave me alone," she started to shake her leg in order to escape but that went in vain. He came outside & looked at his car. Geet did not like his thoughtful look. "what are you thinking?" she spoke in a rude manner...
Maan "was thinking if I should take you to my house or yours!"
Geet "what? !!!!!!!!! You !!!!!! leave me you !!!!
Maan just looked at her in shock. Did she just swear at him, another new thing he just discovered that geet speaks out rubbish in her pointless anger. "CHUP!" he shouts, making geet jump, actually it did some good as she in fear snakes her hand round his neck. "tumko faltu bath karne ki walaba koi kam nahi hi ka! Her waqt baq baq karti ho! Miss hoshiar express!" geets mouth fell right open. Did he just call her mad, she was about to speak again when maan roughly drops her in the car, tighes her hand back, she tried to scream in fear, what was he doing, then a black cloth on her mouth..
Maans security guard just observed in sock. The one who was holding his mobile he looked round, so no odd people could sespect! It does look like that!

Geet in fear started to kick everything... Maan locked the door..

Maan "make sure 5 nurse is with rik, as dr have suggested he soon to be out of comA, & tell shila geet is with me." be orders the security guards then opens the door of driving seat & drives off.
Geet "hhfirjf nrfjr kff"
Maan completely ignored. Instead he puts his music up. Geet moves allot... Jumping on her seat then she tries to come at the front.. As he breaks she lands flat between the sit. Maan couldn't help him self not to laugh. It really did amuse him, specially the position... He walks out & picks her up like a sack. She looks round. It's his house. She wondered how everyone in his house will react..
Dadima & rano was in shock while rano nearly was about to faint, in all this geet thought seeing her mom was a dream, nothing els,
Dadi "what is this nonsense maan?" she looked at helpless geet. Hand tighed back, mouth closed, she was thinking, how could he do such thing!
Maan "all of them will be living with us from today on.
Dadi "what? No!"
Maan "well I decided that!"
Dadi "per me And rano just have to leave for France, I have a charity conference to attend!"
Maan "that's good then, I have everyone to give me company!" geet could not see Ranos face... But she soon to disspear, she knew her daughter well, how stubborn & high mood swing. She did not blame maan at all.
Dadi "what is this nonsense, untigh her!"
Maan "this is not a zoo that I will let this sherni escape!" geet tries to kick him but again that goes in vain,
Dadi "stop it! Put her down" she somewhere was scared, maan sing khurana with a mere worker... This did not look good, but she had to ignore, specially now... "whatever, sault everything out when I am back."
She walks off.

Rano "is everything alright?"
Dadi "he is maan sing khurana! He have some reputation to look after! & him doing this, with a employe!" she shakes her head, "I also want to met that girl who broke his heart! I can't see him with different girl day after day!" rano looked at her in shock, was she alright? It was always geet!

Maan walks to his room, dropping her to the bed. She fell flat on her face, after long time of straggle she eventually Gives up... Lying there on her stomach... Maan just sat next to her, leaning on the wall... Watching telly.
It was surprising that she was not shaking anymore... Then eventually took everything off, but it wasn't long before when she charges on him.. Hitting his chest madly.. "I hate you! I hate you! I hate you! You are horrible mean! I hate you!"it was more of a playful punch then actually punching. Hard. After few minute she gives up, somewhere realizing why he may have done this, she was so tensed, she nearly burst & over the top. A tear rolled down her eyes... She sat on top of him... Near his private part...
Maan "done!" she nodes childishly. "cloths are there, go and get changed" she nodes, ges up sadly then hurriedly tries to open the door to run way, but it was to late as maan stood against the door like a wall! It made geet annoyed "what type of nonsense is this?"
Maan "nonsense? How am I doing nonsense, so if you do it, it's perfectly fine. If I do it it's nonsense!"
Geet "you crossing your limit here!" she starts her baq baq again, but in vain maan simply ignore... After about 30 minute she gives up & walks in to the bathroom. But when she came out he was not there & there was a bar on his window. Did he just kidnap her?

Maan outside looked at rus & rajji who was just giving him angry glare.
Rajji "this is kidnapping!"
Maan "if you think like that!"
Rajji "I do not like you!"
Maan "why?"
Rajji "because Dii does not like you!" maan roles his eyes. Geet ka chamci..
Maan "so what can I do to change side." rus happily spoke out "game!" rajji who was not easy to convince, he really needs a plan now...

Geet leaned against the door. Waiting for maan, then suddenly she hares click... What a surprise, it's no other then maan... She shoved him, pushed him to get out.. But maan just hugged her from the back... With a gentel kiss... "Atlas we are together."



geets eyes widens in a shock... What exactly is he planning?


next "oh oh..."
thank you so much for the love & support pls pl spls
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome...
i wonder wat his upto.. after sayin 'atlast we r together...
loved it

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