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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello Friends... I m really sorry for the late update. I will try to update the next part fast. Thank you for your constant encouragement and support. I m really very thankful to each one of u who have pressed the like button this time I have got in all 89 likes and this is the highest till now...It really means a lot..Thank you guys I hope to get the same encouragement in future as well
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PART 16

Maan was practicing TAI CHI.

Geet simply walked in

She was unaware that maan never tolerated the interference of anyone during his martial arts session.

He always preferred privacy

As geet entered she was totally captivated by the sight that met her eyes.

This was the first time that she had seen a shirtless maan'

There was an unknown desire that was forcing her to keep her eyes fixed on maan

He had a perfect physique 'the perfect looks that had the capability to make any girl go weak in her knees

His body was totally flawless perfectly sound and unblemished

The perfection with which he was moving his body'the kicks the punches that he was generating was a magical sight for geet

The sweat that was covering his body was making maan look more n more handsome and dashing

This was the first time that geet was getting attracted towards him'

With every vigourous n energetic move of Maan the heartbeat of Geet was increasing

This was the first time that she had no control over herself'she wanted to submit herself completely to this moment

She was simply admiring maan'she was sure that maan did not require any weapon to kill anyone'his looks were enough to snatch the breath away from any individual'

The magic of his charm was indeed working on geet

She simply closed her eyes as if she wanted to capture this moment permanently'

She slowly started moving towards Maan

Maan was unaware of geet's presence

As geet is moving towards Maan she comes in contact with an object and the object falls down

Us cheez ke girne se geet phir ek baar hosh mein aa jaati hai'aur usse apni galti ka ehsaas ho jaata hai.

Geet jaldi se peeche hath jaathi hai

Maan's concentration was also broken due to the object

Maan: Kaun hai yaha pe?

Geet was really scared on hearing maan's voice. She could easily make out that Maan was indeed very angry

Yes Geet was perhaps nervous for the first time in her life'

But she herself was unable to trace the real reason for her nervousness'

why was she feeling scared'this was not the first time that she had seen maan in an angry mood'infact geet was very well aware of his nature'and every time she had faced him with full courage'

But today she was tensed maybe b'coz today she was fighting with herself'she was battling a war with her emotions'her attraction for maan was far more stronger than her self control

Yes she was scared that if she comes infront of maan right now she won't b able to suppress her feelings'n maan would very well become aware of the situation that she was going through

Yes this was the truth'she had to stay away from maan at any cost

Maan was approaching the place where Geet was standing

Geet realized this an immediately moved away from there

Geet started hiding from maan

For a second maan thought that this might be his illusion'as he was aware no one had the guts to disturb him during his martial arts session

Maan turned to move away

Lekin tabhi usse geet ke payalo ki gunj sunai padthi hai.

Aur uske baad'.watch this video

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=udyib6rSoE0[/YOUTUBE]

Maan finally gets hold of geet

But Geet still tries to run away from maan

In the entire process'maan forcefully pulls geet towards himself

Maan encircles his hand and place his chin on her neck

Geet could feel the warmth of his breath on her skin

Geet ki saaso ki raftaar badh rahi thi

Maan himself was in a totally different world right now

Maan ne dheere se geet ko apni taraf turn kiya

Geet was still scared and worried'she did not had the courage to face Maan

Maan was simply fascinated by her angelic beauty

Geet was looking so adorable and gorgeous

Maan was enthralled and simply awestruck'by her innocence and purity

Maan(thinking) Pata nahi kyun log banawati cheezo ke peeche bhagthe hain'jabke isski koi zaroorat hi nahi hoti'Geet..tum ek paaqh meher ho'koi bhi banawat ya chal nahi hai tumhari khoobsurati mein'tumhare chehre se tumhari pavitrata chalakthi hai geet'wakai mein tum jaisa shaayad hi iss jahah mein koi dusara hoga

Maan bade hi pyar se geet ke chehre ko uthatha hai

He gently caresses her face

This touch of Maan was different

Geet dheere se Maan ki aakhon mein dekhti hai

This time Maan gets lost in her mesmerizing eyes and so does Geet

Mahi'mahi in the background

This was the first time that geet had seen love in maan's eyes

All of a sudden her fear vanished

Maan releases his hand that were holding geet forcefully

He lovingly places his hand on her waist

Geet also starts responding.

She places her hand on his shoulder

Maan carefully displaces a hair that was troubling geet'

Isi dauraan geet ki aakhon mein kuch chala jaata hain'geet dheere se apni aakhein malne lagthi hain

Maan stops her immediately

He delicately caresses her face'

Mahi'.Mahi'

Maan's touch and his close proximity were sending shivers throughout Geet's body

Maan carefully blows air into her eyes

Mahi'.Mahi'.

Geet starts trembling'

Maan moves his fingers across her back'

Mahi'.Mahi'.

Geet ke dil ki dhadkane badne lagti hai

Maan dheere se apne haatho se geet ke haatho ko chutha hai'and he starts moving in the upward direction

He reaches her shoulder'Geet ke roungthe khade ho rahe the

Geet tightens her grip on maan's shoulder

There was a sudden need'that wanted both of them to feel each other'

Maan gently rubbed his fingers on her lips

Geet did not resist'she allowed him to do so

Maan ek baar phir geet ki aakhon mein dekhtha hai

He could see the same feelings and emotions that he was going through at that particular time

There was a bond that was connecting both of them

Maan slowly starts approaching her lips'Geet also starts responding

They come closer'there is a very minute distance between them'

PRECAP 1: Maan: "Tum soch bhi nahi sakthi k main tumse kitni nafrat karta hoon"

PRECAP 2: "Geet: "Mujhe laga tha k maine aapko pehchaane mein galti kar di thi magar nahi'aap tho insaan kehlane k layak bhi nahi hai"

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love- Piya

LINK TO MERE HUMSAFAR THREAD 2
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
MystiqueDew thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome one

Both are out of control & in different world.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
precap is same as earlier

update soon
bye
tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update😃
Both of them are lost in themselves.
Continue soon.
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
what a romantic updare...Maan ullu apni feelings chupane ki liye kuch galat bolega aur phir se ladaai shuru...
but really hot and those pictures were just fab
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
wonderful maaneet moment...
itne ache moment ke baad phir se yeh dono jagada shuru karne wale hain...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thnx 4 pm

Both r lost in themselves

nice udate

UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update both r getting attracted to each other continue soon

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