newFF(Maneet)Mere humsafar Trd 1uptd prt16 pg 138 - Page 67

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Posted: 14 years ago
oye hoye maan...already caring for geet...not bad...in fact very good...it was so sweet of u to take care of her...n the precap...does that mean maan will stay with her...how will geet react...continue soon n thnx for the pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
love it
cont soonnn
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
maan taking care of geet and having some feelings for her...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part
loved it
continue soon
g8 work di
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww amazing update... luved maan's concern for geet..
precap looks gud... continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely...

so slowly their views r changing...hmm...

continue soon...

thnx for Pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you dear friends for ur encouraging comments and a special thanks to those who have pressed the like button. Here is the next part I hope u like it
Love- Piya
PART 14
Geet (thinking): Shayad wo itne bhi bure nahi hai jitna k maine socha tha
Dadi: Geet bete aap kaha kho gayi?
Geet: Haan...nahi dadima kahi bhi to nahi
Dadima: Aap rukhiye hum aapke liye haldiwala dhoodh lekar aathe hai
Geet: Dadima...lekin mujhe dhoodh bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai
Dadi: Geet humne aapki pasand ya napasand nahi jaana hai humhe bus itni khabar hai k humari beti ki tabiyat kharab hai aur humara farz banta hai k hum apni beti ka khayal rakhe...
Geet: (makes a baby face) Dadi...pls
Dadi: geet chupchap lethe rahiye hum abhi apne haatho se apke liye dhoodh lekar aathe hai
Geet: Ji Dadi
Dadi goes to the kitchen
Meanwhile Maan arrives
Maan directly starts approaching the outhouse
Nakul notices maan
Nakul: Are Maan Sir aap itne jaldi wapas aa gaye
Maan: Haan kyun nahi aa saktha kya...ye mera ghar hai mera jab bhi mann kare main yaha aa saktha hoon
Nakul: Thik hain main dadima ko inform kar detha hoon k aap office se aa gaye hain
Maan: Nahi rukho... dadima ko batane ki koi zarurat nahi hai...mujhe sirf ek important file lena tha issliye main wapas aaya hoon
Nakul: magar Sir aap file lene k liye outhouse kyun ja rahe hain file tho aapke kamre mein hoga na...
Maan gets angry
Maan: main outhouse jau ya guest house jao tumhe isse kya tumhe yaha pe logo ko sawal karne k liye pagar nahi miltha kaam karne k liye pagar miltha hai...jaao chupchap apne kaam se kaam rakho
Nakul goes away from there
Maan: pata nahi ye nakul kaha se aa gaya abtho main outhouse bhi nahi jaa saktha...aur agar file liye bina main yaha se chala gaya tho wo dadima ka chamcha dadima ko sabkuch batadega...
Maan goes to his room
He comes to the window the outhouse is clearly visible from here
Maan: ye Annie khambe ki tarah beech mein kyun khadi hai...itne saare furniture hai waha pe kisi pe baith nahi sakthi...pata nahi geet ko hosh aaya bhi hai ya nahi
Dadi gets the milk
Annie: ye lo geet tumhara favourite dhoodh aa gaya
Geet: Annie ki bachhi mujhe chedna bannd kar tu jaanti hai k mujhe dhoodh bilkul bhi pasand nahi
Dadi: pasand ho ya na pasand ho dhoodh tho aapko peena hi padega chaliye hum aapko pilathe hai
Annie moves away from there
Maan: Thank god Annie waha se shift tho ho gayi ab main geet ko dekh saktha hoon
Dadi comes and stands in place of Annie
Maan: Dadi ko bhi yahi jagah mili thi khadne k liye...ab main geet ko kaise dekhu kaise pata chalega k usse hosh aaya bhi hai ya nahi
Dadi: chaliye muh kholiye
Geet drinks the milk
Dadi: Ye hui na baat. chaliye ab aap aaram kijiye
Dadi gets up
Geet is smiling
Maan is finally successful to see geet
Maan just constantly goes on staring at geet
Maan: Tum haste hue bahut achhi lagti ho (smiles)
Nakul: Maan sir aapko aapki file abhi tak nahi mili main dhundkar de du
Maan gets irritated
Maan: Nakul lagtha hai tumhare paas wakai mein koi kaam dhandha nahi hai...lagta hai maine yuhi logho ko kaam par rakh diya hai...
Nakul does not dare to give an answer he simply goes from there
Maan randomly picks up a file and gets out of his room
Dadi: Are maan bete aap iss waqt yaha kya kar rahe hai...aapko tho office mein hona chahiye tha na...
Maan: Dadima main ek important file lene aayatha ab main chaltha hoon
Dadi: Wo tho thik hai bete par aap ek baar bhi geet k baare mein nahi puchenge
Maan: Mujhe geet se kya lena dena...main kyun uski fikr karne laga aur waise bhi mera time kafi precious hain aise baatho mein main apna waqt barbaad nahi kar saktha
Dadi: Magar Maan...
Maan: Dadi main ab jaa raha hoon. Bye
Dadi: Bye bete
Maan leaves. But before entering the car he tries to get a glimpse of geet again...he once again approaches the outhouse but gets angry to see nakul again.Nakul gives a confused look to maan. Maan goes back to his car and leaves
Dadi: Are Nakul aap itne confused kyun lag rahe hai
Nakul: Dadima pata nahi maan sir ko kya ho gaya hai...file lene k liye wo outhouse jaa rahe the...jab main unke kamre mein gaya tab bhi unki nazar outhouse pe hi tiki hui thi...aur ab jaathe waqt bhi wo phir se outhouse k paas nazar aaye
Dadima: (smiles)Achha toh ye baat hai
Nakul: Kya baat hai dadima
Dadi: Kuch nahi aap jaakar apna kaam samhaliye
Nakul goes
Dadi: Lagtha hai maan kuch badal rahe hai...chalo humhare liye tho ye achhi baat hai
Khurana Constructions
Dev: Bro aap kaha chale gaye the
Maan: Kuch nahi dev main ek important file lene gaya tha
Dev: Bro agar aapko file hi chahiye tha tho aap office mein se kisi k bhi through mangwa sakthe the aapko khud jaane ki kya zaroorat thi
Maan: kyun dev main khud nahi ja saktha...aur waise bhi insaan ko khud ka kaam khud hi karna chahiye...samjhe tum
Dev: nahi bro meraye matlab nahi tha
Maan: Tumhara chahe jo matlab ho dev...filhaal ye file lo aur adi k saath milkar ek presentation taiyaar karo
Maan gives the file and enters his cabin
Dev (looks at the file) Ye file tho Khanna group of industries ki hai...ye project tho humne pehle hi complete kar diya hai...Ye bro aaj ajeeb tarah se behave kyun kar rahe hai
Dev is confused
Everyone is busy in their work
But Maan is constantly thinking about geet.
Maan: Geet ne medicines tho liye honge na...ek kaam kartha hoon phone karke pucch letha hoon...
He picks up the phone but then
Maan: Nahi main kaise phone kar saktha hoon...aur waise mujhe kya padi hai wo medicines le ya na le...why am i feeling guity...Maan ye mat bhool k wo ladki teri sabse badi dushman hai tuje toh khush hona chahiye uski ye halat dekhkar...ya yahi thik hai...b happy aur ye dua kar k uski tabiyaat aur bigad jaaye
Evening
Maan and Dev return from work
Dev: Nakul dadima kaha hai
Nakul: Wo geet madam k paas hai
Dev: Bro main geet se milkar aatha hoon aap mere saath chalenge
Maan: timepaas karne ka mujhe koi shauk nahi hai Dev...tum jaao
Dev: Ok bro
Dev goes to meet geet
Dev: Geet ab kaisi tabiyaat hai
Geet: Feeling better Dev
Dev: Chalo ye sunkar achha laga...waise tumne dawaiyaan tho time se le li thi na...
Geet: Dadi aur annie k hothe hue mujhe iss baat ki fikr karne ki koi zaroorat hi nahi padi
Dev: Waise tumne haldiwala dhoodh piya ya nahi...dadi ki speciality hai jab kabhi bhi hum mein se koi beeemar hotha hai wo humhe ye zaroor pilathi hai
Annie: Dadima ne khud apne haatho se geet ko dudh pilaya hai bhai
Dev, Geet, Annie and Dadima go on talking for several hours
Maan is desperately waiting for Dev
Maan: Ye Dev abhi tak aaya kyun nahi...kahi geet kisi problem mein toh nahi hai
Dev comes
Maan: Dev tum aa gaye main kab se tumhara intezaar kar raha tha
Dev: Kya hua Bro koi important baat hai kya?
Maan: Haan mujhe wo gee... he stops mera matlab hai main khane k liye tumhara intezaar kar raha tha
Dev: O tho chaliye bro khana shuru karte hai
Dev notices that Maan is not eating anything
Maan: Tej ne kaha tha k geet ko time pe khana khana hoga warna usse kamzoori aa sakthi hai...
Dev: Kya hua Bro aap kya soch rahe ho khana shuru kijiye
Maan: Haan...
Maan does not eat...his eyes are in the direction of the outhouse
Dev notices this
Dev: Are Nakul geet madam ne khana khaya ya nahi
Nakul: Ji Dev sir abhi abhi unhe khana dekar aa raha hoon...unhone khana kha liya hai
Maan is happy to hear this. He starts his dinner
Dev: (thinking) O tho ye manjra hai...lagtha hai hume humare mission ko successful banane k liye kuch khaas mehnat nahi karni hogi (smiles)
Dinner is over
Maan goes to his room
Outhouse
Dadi: Chaliye Annie ab hum bhi chalthe hai...geet so chuki hai
Annie: Ji Dadi
Annie and Dadima leave
Maan sabkuch apne room se dekh raha hai
Maan: Lagtha hai geet so chuki hai...issliye dadima aur annie shayad ja rahe hai
he then realizes that dadi had switched off the lights before leaving
Annie and Dadima come out from the out house .Maan apne room ki khidki ko curtain se dhak detha hai
After both of them go away maan once again tries to locate geet
then he realizes something
Maan: Geet ko tho andhere se darr lagtha hai...agar beechmein uski neend tuth gayi tab shayad wo ghabra sakthi hai...nahi mujhe kuch karna hoga
Maan ensures that everyone is present in their respective rooms. He slowly comes out and enters the outhouse
PRECAP: Maan: "Tum soch bhi nahi sakthi k main tumse kitni nafrat karta hoon"
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PART 15: PG 122
Edited by piya- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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well m the first one to comment...before ur pm i had a gut feeling that u'll come up with an update and i was not wrong at all...!!!

Well coming to the update...maan singh khurana dil ka itna bura nai hai kyu piya...??waise he cares for her...uski khushi mein apni khushi dekhta hai...geet ke darr ko apna darr bana leta hai...!!! He is a nice fellow actually bas thoda attitude hai that he is great msk...well aaj ke kafi chittar pittar hua...overall nice update...mission maaneet going succeessful somehow...m sure next update mein geet will catch up maan...ab andhere se darr to lagta hai na...so i guess she myt be searching for lights...where she will catch maan...!! Or tab maan usko aisa kuch bolege...par once again i repeat what i always say...all my assumptions...

Continue soon...loved it...!!!
Edited by minnie_tweetie - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thaths lovely .loved to see maan's restlesness .but precap is confusion ?

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Posted: 14 years ago
kitna jooth bologe maan khud se ...u r worried 4 geet...
but maan singh khurana itni jaldi dil ki baat samjhe not possible...lol..
i dnt like dis precap i think geet will accuse him n he will say all dis in fit of his anger...like always n baad main pachtaayega...
do update soon...add me to ur buddy list...
chao 4 nw

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