newFF(Maneet)Mere humsafar Trd 1uptd prt16 pg 138 - Page 22

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Shalve

superb update...plz add me to yr pm list...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

oh MSK wants revenge from geet

i'm eagerly for second time showdown
wonder what i'll dadi & anie do when they
find it was maan who geet slap infront of public
wonderful part
love it
ty 4 pm

thanks 4 ur lovely comment dear... regarding d reactions of dadi n annie u will cm 2 know abt it in d next part. thank 4 commenting😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ... interesting ..


continue soon ...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: soni4eva

jus read ur ff n i totally luv it

der meetin was soo funny
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gurtilover

I'm waiting for the next part plz update soon dear...

Farheen will b updating tomorrow today enjoy d update of "dil mil gaye"
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: namita25

great part..
waiting for Maaneet second meeting..

thanks dear😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thnx for the pm

Pls update soon


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EXCELLENT PART -
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Posted: 14 years ago
Banner: BY SHIVANGI (CIDManeetNaksh)
hello frnds here is d next part i hope u will like it. enjoy reading and do leave ur precious comments
love- piya
PART 4

Khurana Mansion

Annie: Dadi ye liyejiye Dev bhai bhi aa gaye (goes and hugs dev)

Dev: Lagta hai meri little sis ne mujhe kafi miss kiya kyun?

Annie: Ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai bhai' it's almost 2 weeks now

Annie: Waise bhai aapki trip kaisi thi aur us deal ka kya hua?

Dev: Humare company ko wo project mil gaya hai annie

Annie: O wow Bhai this is great news aapne maan bhai ko bataya ya nahi?

Dev: Subah se unhe call karne ki koshish kar raha hoon par pata nahi kyun unka mobile switch off aa raha hai. Khair main khud office mein jaakar unsse baat karlunga

Dadi: Annie aapka irada kahi dev ko wahi rokhe rakhne ka tho nahi hai na unhe zara andar tho aane dijiye bete

Annie: Dadi aap bhi na' chaliye bhai warna dadi mujhe phir kuch keh dengi

Dev and annie come inside

Annie: Dev bhai isse miliye She is geet my best friend and geet this is my brother Dev Khurana

Dev: Hello geet nice to meet u

Geet: Same here dev.

Dev: Waise geet tumhare baare mein annie se khafi kuch suna tha par aaj pehli baar tumse milne ka mauka haath laga hai Tho batau tumari journey kaisi thi raaste mein kuch problem tho nahi hui na?

Geet Annie and Dadi start laughing

Dev: (confused) Kya hua maine kuch galat keh diya kya?

Geet: O no Dev not at all asal mein aisa hua ke' she tells him the whole incident

Dev: O my God geet I think mujhe tumse dur rehna chahiye pata nahi tumhe kis baat par gussa aa jaaye aur tum mujhe bhi thappad maar dho

Geet: Dev tumhe darne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai I won't do any such thing with u

Dev: Geet waise job ke baare mein kya socha hai?

Geet: Ya Delhi tho main job ke silsile mein hi aayi hoon now let's see chance kaha milta hai

Dev: Why don't u join Khurana Constructions as bro's secretary

Annie: Haan geet main bhi tumse yahi kehne wali thi

Geet: But Dev'

Dev: Look geet let me clarify one thing tum ye mat sochna ke tum annie ki best friend ho issliye main tumhe ye offer de raha hoon. I am giving u this offer b'coz u deserve this job aur humhare company ko bhi tumhare jaise mehnati aur sincere employees ki zaroorat hain

Geet: Thanks dev tumne ye baat kehkar mere problem ko solve kar diya I would love to work in your company but what about your brother unhe tho pata nahi hai na

Dev: Don't worry geet bro ko main inform kar dunga so that's not a problem

Geet: Thanks dev

Dadi: Dev bete aap fresh ho jaayiye hum aapke liye khana lagathe hain

Dev: No Dadi khana main office mein hi khaunga filhaal main fresh hokar seeda office ja raha hoon bro ko good news jo deni hai

Dadi: Thik hai bete main aapka aur maan ka lunch khud office mein le aati hoon

Dev: But why dadi brij hai na wo humesha ki tarah office mein lunch lekar aa jaayega

Dadi: No dev mujhe maan se kuch baat karni hain issliye hum khud aaj office aayenge

Dev: Ok dadi as u wish. Main fresh hone jaa raha hoon. Ok geet badme milte hai

Geet : Fine dev

Dev leaves

Khurana Constructions

Dev enters maan's cabin

Dev: Bro

Maan: (surprised to see dev) Are dev tum tho do din baad aane wale the

Dev (goes and hugs maan) Bro kaam jald hi khatm ho gaya and u know what we got the deal bro we got d deal

Maan: Wow this is great news dev' ye sab tumhari mehnat ka nateeja hai

Dev: Thanks bro. Wasie bro main aapse kuch aur baat bhi karna chahta tha

Maan: Haan kaho

Dev: Bro aaj ghar pe main aanie ki best friend geet se mila and I think she is perfect to be ur secretary

Dadi enters

Dadi: Dev is absolutely right maan geet se behtar aapke liye koi ho hi nahi sakti

Maan: Mere liye main kuch samhja nahi dadima

Dadi: (rectifying her words) Mera matlab hai aapki secretary ke roop mein wo perfect hain

Maan: Thik hain ab aap dono uski itni taarif kar hi rahe hain tho fine she can join the office from tomorrow

Dadi: Thanks bete waise aap sham ko aap khud geet se mil lijiyega m sure u will like her

Maan: Ji Dadima

Dev: Dadi if u don't mind kya hum khana kha sakte hain bahut bhook lagi hai

Dadi (laughs) Sure bete. Chaliye ab aap dono jaldi se khana kha lijiye

Maan n Dev have their lunch. Dadi leaves

Khurana Mansion

Geet is sitting alone in her room. She removes her diary and starts writing

"Aaj ka din shayad hi main kabhi bhool pau. Aaj pehli baar apne shehar ko chod main iss ajnabi jagah par aayi hoon lekin tab bhi ye shehar mujhe ek pal mein hi apna lagne lag gaya hai. Haan din ki shuruwat ek behet hi ghamandi insaan se milkar hui lekin aaj maine ye bhi jaan liya ke saare rich people ghamandi nahi hote

Ab annie ke family ko hi le lo. Dadi tho mujhe abhi se apni beti ki tarah pyar kar rahi hai wo pyar jiske liye main bachpan se tarasti thi aaj mujhe who dadi se mil gaya. Dev is also a very sweet and humble person. I m sure Annie ke bade bhai maan bhi aise hi honge. I m eager to meet him. Ye family mujhe apni family ki tarah lag rahi hai."

Just then annie comes

Annie: Ofho teri ye diary likne ki aadat abhi tak nahi gayi

Geet: Ye diary hi tho hain jisme main apne dil ki baat bejijak likh sakti hoon main tho kehti hoon ke tu bhi ek diary likna shuru kar de

Annie: Give me a break geet' ye diary wairi likhna mere bus ki baat nahi hai main tho tujhe bus ye batane aayi thi ke teri naukri confirm ho gayi hai dadi aur dev bhai ne maan bhai se baat kit hi and he has agreed to give u the job

Geet (happy) Thanks annie pata nahi main aap logo ka shukriya ada kaise karu

Annie: Geet tujhe thanks kehne ki koi zarurat nahi hai ye job tujhe sirf teri kabiliyat ke wajah se mili hai

Geet: thanks yaar waise m desperate to meet ur brother maan unse khud thanks kehna chahungi

Annie: well uske liye tujhe shaam tak intezaar karna hoga

Geet: sure shaam ka tho main besabri se intezaar kar rahi hoon

Annie: Shaam ki baat shaam ko dekhenge right now I will show u my entire house come

Annie and geet go

Khurana constructions

Maan: (thinking) Dadi aur dev ki baato se tho yahi lagta hai ke uss ladki geet mein wakai kuch khaas baat hai. Whatever d case aaj shaam ko tho usse mulakat ho hi jaayegi aur waise bhi wo annie ki best friend hai toh she must surely b good' well I m curious to meet her

Evening

Khurana Mansion

Geet is searching for annie at d same time maan also enters d house

Just then light goes. Geet ko andhere se darr lagta hai.

Geet: (in a frightened voice) Annie' annie'

Ussi waqt geet ka pair fisal jaata hai and she shouts But isse pehle ke wo neeche gire maan usse pakad leta hai

Geet realizes that someone is holding her and she again starts shouting

Maan covers her mouth with his hands

Maan: Chup bilkul chup' darne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.. tum thik ho

Geet still shocked

Maan: (thinking) Iss ladki ki skin kitni soft and subtle hain' Kaash ye ladki geet ho' (then realizing what he was thinking )ye tu kya soch raha hai maan'

Maan immediately removes his hand from geet's mouth and helps geet to stand properly

Geet: (thinking) o kaash ye annie ke bade bhai maan ho' pata nahi kyun inki bahon mein aate hi mera pura darr kaha gayab ho gaya' aisa laga mano jaise mera koi kuch bhi bigad nahi sakta

Maan: Tum chila kyun rahi thi

Geet: Wo mujhe andhere se darr lagta hain

Maan: Don't worry light abhi aa jaayega I will wait with u till then

Maan: (thinking) ye mujhe kya ho raha hain main kab se kisi ajnabee ki itni care karne lag gaya?

Geet: Thanks

Maan n geet stand silently holding each other's hands

Precap: Light aane ke baad kya hoga? 😆

PART 5: PAGE 46
Edited by piya- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update!!!! Of course there will be huge blast when the light will come😆.
U have great skills,keep up the good work
Luv
TC
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