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.Dalisay.

@.Dalisay.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

YAY! 1 st :))
Oh now Abhi is treating her the same way she did! now u know Nikki how it hurts...

Khush, very nicely described tension between the two... Very well written, short part...😃😛😆
Waiting for more to come...n for their next convo...or may be confrontation... 😳

Edited by ANrucha - 14 years ago

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Namy

@Amy_an

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

Yeah I read it before Mitzi.. Woahhh!!..😛😆😆

*edited*

Hey Khush, Nice part but it was too short.. A genuine request.. Please make it little longer next time😳😃

Hmm so another dramatic update…. Everything is getting so messy eerhhh…. 'consfusion hi confusion hai solution ka pata nahi.. solution jo mila to sala problem kya tha pata nahi.. This lyrics perfectly suits to AN's relationship.. Joke apart.. U've left me on a cliff hanger.. Don't know what to comment.. Kya ho raha hai? Kyo ho raha hai? So many questions are running in my mind.. Never mind will patiently wait for the next updates to find it out..

I must tell u all over again that I indeed like Nikki's characterization in ur FF.. She is very different from the original track and I'm loving this strong pigheaded Nikki.. ⭐️

Umm can I ask u something?? Why Abhi had to wear the same shirt that Nikki had used as an apron??😳 Don't mind haan.. 😳😳Am asking just out of curiosity.. 😳😆

Well coming back to the topic, I liked Abhi's taut and brisk dialogues in this update.. U've penned it very nicely.. Loved it to the core.. Hey but what was that yaar?? Abhi drove off from there just like that.. I would have preferred him grabbed her by her wrist, made her sit in the car and shut her up with his ironic tone 'Bolti rehti hai bolti rehti hai'.. Umm but yeah he is the most unpredictable man.. Never acts the way we expects or predicts.. That's the beauty of his character.. Hence no complains..

I always love the way AN communicate/convey their anger, disliking, hurt through their eyes.. And you've depicted it very well.. According to me AN have the most expressive eyes😍😍 Now, I miss them all the more

I know u've planned something sadist this time, yet I'm optimistic.. Hope everything settles between them soon.. Good going.. Update soon.. Eagerly waiting for Sunday..

Edited by namy_an - 14 years ago

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jibreen

@jsha

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#103

Khush i like this update alot like the way now abhi is treating niki weldone "TIT for TAT "
nice update waiting for the next part

Edited by jsdoll - 14 years ago

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Deeksha

@annie.shona

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

awww..

they both are sooo stubborn ..

gosh someone tell them not to be..

anyway

nice update

continue soon :)

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NEHU

@Glitter_In_Eye

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#105

EDITED (as promised)

Ok read the part all over again and trust me it took me less than a minute to go through it and now why I'm telling this to you, because I want you to make it a bit longer from the next time so that I can have something to comment on but I know it won't be possible as you have already penned down the whole story and divided into parts Ok I'm done with my ranting...lol...

Coming back to the part, it was very well written Khush but I somehow fell that you utilized the part describing the emotions only and the story didn't move much, my honest opinion... But again the ever so confused AN were at their best and you were fab in portraying them.

But I'm very much confused after reading the part. I thought they would confront each other but they messed up everything I'm curious to know what will happen now.

And what was that😲

He seemed in no mood to invite her. And indeed, she was still wondering what to do when to her extreme shock, he pressed the accelerator and drove off.

Don't tell me he really did. How mean! But again, I love him only..☺️ Oh, here I go again.😳

Waiting for tomorrow to read your next update...😉

Edited by Nehu_1 - 14 years ago