maaneet FF... alwayz yourz... note on... pg73 - Page 15

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Posted: 14 years ago

brilliant update…

don't know why both of them are scared of naintara ….want to know more about her….

Dadi and Vicky are really very sweet…

Please continue soon…

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice one...

the khurana family shares a gr8 bond with her...

nt is back...it is all related to past...waiting to know more...

continue soon...

thnx for PM..

n HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY to u too...
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Posted: 14 years ago
excellent
plzz add me in pm list
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow nice update..
luved dadi n vicky...
maneet were cute... continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update waiting to know what NT did to geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing Updates
Cont Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update like always. As i said earlier, i always get confuse to choose best among your 4 ffs and now you started the 5th one too. Tough decision going tougher.

Long and full of every emotion update. I don't know who to choose, the romantic lover jodi "MANEET" or the cute Bhabhi-Devar jodi "Geet & Vicky". Dadi too is very loveable character here. Possesiveness and angry look best describe Maan Singh Khurana. You did well justice to his role in your ff. Whats with NT, Maan got angry and Geet got scary all of sudden coz of her. BTW, pari part was also nice and i am sure she will too love vicky.

Do cont soon and do PM me.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi dear...thanks 4 da pm n superb update! Love dadi...she is so sweet! The convo between Dadi, Geet n Vicky was hilarious! Poor Pari! Dadi shouted Maan! HAte NT😡. Maan seems to hurt her as well,..he will make sure NT does nt touch Geet...update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Soma...thanx for pm.

wonderful update...I have read first 2 parts before...now I read all parts and I must tell u they are awesome...ur all stories have different concepts...I love ur FFs.

I have one request that u change grandma to Daadima... it sounds familiar...I am not pressurising u...ur choice is last
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Posted: 14 years ago
hello every 1...🤗 i know u all r waiting 4 updatez... but my lappy got sick, some software problem🤢... anywayz me missed if and you all alot... tnx 4 waiting... once again tnx 4 all the lovely comments and likes... now enjoy this update and give honest feedback and press like button... silent readerz plz come out of ur silent mode... guyz will try 2 update next part soon but u have 2 wait me have paper on Monday... wish me luck and me will hopefully update soon... sorry 4 yak yak😳... enjoy... 😃

Part 10

Naintara was sitting in Sasha's living room with Sasha who was opened the taps of tear tank. "Sasha I am sure we will find a way to solve your heart break problem!" said Naintara with fake sympathy.

"Now tell me what's the problem?" she asked her putting some pain in her voice.

Sasha sobbed while telling her heartbreak story "I am in love with my boss Mk but I picked axe and threw it over my own feet, I invited Geet to office and now Mk is all mad about her!"

"Mk?" Naintara asked.

"Maan singh Khurana!" she told her.

Naintara smiled and said "We will find same way to get Mk back!"

Naintara got up and went towards the window and looked out the window while walking down the memory lane.

Maan singh khurana the heartthrob of collage and Naintara's best friend whom she started loving but before she can confess her feelings Geet Handa step in their life and everything destroyed.

******

Maan was playing match at he fell which never happen before and before she could reach him there was a girl stand there with her hand stretch and Maan took it with wide smile and since their first meeting everything in Naintara's life went upside down.

Maan was started following Geet like love sick puppy and ignore Naintara like disease. Then her life took worst turn and something that matter to her most is snatched away from her, she was leading actress at collage play and then for valentine play director choose Geet over her. Then Naintara's eyes witness them make out in class. Her dreams were shattered.

At first Naintara thought felt like her life is refection of movie like kuch kuch hota hai. But she was not Anjali of kuch kuch hota hai who will cry her eyes out and leave Rahul she was Naintara and did everything to get her Maan back but that Geet had done unbroken spell over him no matter what she did it only brought them closer and when Maan found out he insulted her and her love. Now Naintara, Maan and Geet had some unfinished business to complete. Maan I promise you I will take everything away from you, your dreams and your Geet and then if you want you can die. She promised herself with evil smirk on her face.

*******

Maan and Geet let go of each other when they heard dadima, Vicky and Pari coming towards the terrace.

Maan and Geet put smile on his face so others won't know that something is bothering them.

"Dadi ma we better get going!" said Geet with polite smile.

"No way Geet! I am not letting you girls go back at this time, your staying here!" she said in final tone.

Geet didn't have courage to argue with Dadi ma so she smiled and followed Dadi ma.

"Babes why don't you wait in bro room and I get your room cleaned up!" said Vicky.

Before Geet could say anything Maan said "Vicky my room is messed up take her to Dadi ma's room!" Maan don't want to hurt Geet because he remember that when he broke up with Geet he took off all their memories and threw it out of his room and asked Nakul to threw them out if Geet saw empty walls she will be heart broken.

"Bro! I got your room cleaned up!" said Vicky and opened the door. Geet entered the familiar room and tears roll out of her eyes even through she tried her best to stop them.

Maan closed his eyes so he could not see pool of pain in her eyes. "It's still look the same!" she whispered and Maan opened his eyes and saw each picture was where it was before he threw them out and he look at once and Vicky he knew no one other than Vicky could have done this for him.

Before Maan could say anything Vicky said to Pari "Come my bride to be I will show you, your room for the night!"

Pari was shocked with Vicky's words but before single word could leave her mouth Vicky took her hand and pulled her out leaving lovebirds behind closing door.

"This is your room!" said Vicky opening door for Pari.

Pari stepped inside the beautiful room, it has royal touch in it like most of the house and she liked it very much.

"Do you like it?" asked Vicky.

"Yes! But Vicky I want to say something to you!" she said putting together words in her head for next sentence.

"I am hearing!" said Vicky and waited for her words.

"Look I understand that you are very close to Geet and all but I don't like your sense of humor so please stop addressing me as your to be bride!"

Vicky came near her and put his arm around her back and pulled her towards him. He moved aside the stray of hair that was blocking her face and said "You will start liking it tinker bell!"

He then gave peek over her lips and walked out of room leaving behind stun Pari.

Geet hugged Maan and he hugged her back she could not say anything she just pointed her finger at their picture. Maan didn't want to hide anything from her so he said "You know I took off all the pictures after our break up but Vicky put them back!"

She was about to say when there was gentle knock on the door after few seconds Dadi ma stepped inside "Geet your room is ready!" she informed Geet, both Geet and Maan followed Dadi ma to room beside Maan's room.

Dadi ma opened it and all of them step inside. Room was just as Geet left it nothing was moved an inch even through it was clean and spotless. This was room where Geet used to spend her weekends in collage days. Geet had spend almost four years of her collage weekends here. This room was specially decorated by Maan for Geet.

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It was three months since Geet entered Maan's life and one month after he confessed his love. Two weeks ago he introduced Geet as future daughter in law to Dadi ma who was happy beyond words could say. When Dadi ma found out that Geet stayed at hostel so she used to invite her over weekends. Geet used to stay in guest room and it was really hard for Maan to sneak in so he asked Dadi ma to give one room to Geet. When Dadi ma said "Yes!" Maan added few improvement in this room and decorate it for Geet with own hands.

He remembered he spend whole night to paint this room pink then he bought matching furniture and added few dresses and night dresses in her wardrobes.

He hanged beautiful butterflies all over the ceiling and their few pictures all over the wall along with one frame of Geet family. With include her parents who died in plane crash two years before Geet joined collage and her elder stepbrother Brij. Geet and Brij shared same father. Brij is difficult person to understand, he was owner of Handa group of companies and used to care a lot his sister but he wasn't emotionlly attached to her for him she is just his responsibility not more. He make sure that Geet bank account was never empty but he only came to see his sister twice in four years. He really lives in his own world which doesn't have space for his sister but Geet always went to meet her brother once every month.

Maan brought Geet in her room with hand over her eyes along Vicky and Dadi ma. When he removed hand from her eyes she shocked and then she hugged Dadi ma and thanked her.

"It was nothing! Plus this was all Maan idea!" she told Geet.

Geet smiled at Maan with love flowing out of her eyes. They waited till Vicky and Dadi ma left them alone.

Once they were alone Maan hugged her from back and asked "Do you love it!"

She doesn't know how to tell him that's why she lightly kissed his lips.

"Come on! I will show something special about this room!" he said and pulled her towards the closet and opened it.

"What so special about this closet?" she asked him and then he opened the door inside the closet which connect to closet at his room.

"This is secret door and we can sneak each other room anytime we want!" he said with naughty smile.

She just hid her red blushing face in his chest. Since that night they sleep with each other holding hands on weekends.

******

Maan looked at her and said "change into your night dress I will see you soon!"

After Maan left Geet went for bath and then changed into black short nighty and put on the robes. When she returned back in her room Maan was waiting for her on the bed. She took off her robes and went to her bed and settled herself comfortably in Maan arms.

They talk to each other while Geet was drawing senseless patterns over his bare chest with her finger. She missed his arms a lot and now as his warmth touched her she felt at peace. Maan missed her holding in his arms and he was aching to hold her and once she came in his arms and rested her head at his chest like she used to he felt like he got back his world. They were talking to each other and don't know when fell asleep in each other arms unknown to fact that somewhere Naintara was busy scheming about them.


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