SURROGATE RELATIONS ...part 11 on pg 142 - Page 45

Loved the parts... I like it that its a slow realization for Maan on the effects Geet's presence is having on him... his instincts are protective at best and his temper is toned down manyfolds for Geet only...for all others he is still the MSK ...
Geet's work is only a temporary distraction...but she needs to mourn her mother's loss only then will she be guiltfree...guilt of not having been able to save her mother and guilt of giving up a child which will not know either its birth mother or its adoptive parents ...would love to read a monologue or maybe a scene where she is shown penning down her perspective towards life where she did whatever she did for her mother... being pregnant at that young age,leaving all that is normal at her age knowing well that she will be giving up the child is a difficult decision...emotions you didnt know existed come into play when you carry day in and day out that baby which is a part of you and only you for 9months...n then to realise that the reason for the baby and the hopes she had of giving the baby a better n secure future is all gone... its not about financial security for the child but about emotional security that the child may lack due to loss of both set of parents ...its never easy to grow up knowing you dont have a regular life like most kids..dadi is old and Maan might have his own family maybe in near future or much later...but the kid will lack a parent's love all its life if Geet happens to now give up her kid
she took up surrogacy for 1 reason - her mother's treatment but she also knew that the baby will be cared for and loved like their own by Dev and NT... now both the reasons dont exist...so a scene where she questions her current standing on her past decisions would make a good read as per me...
superb writing ... plz continue super soon... u know the impatient me! :-)
I like it that you dont show Maan as lovestruck at day1... also, now that you have started hinting on possible disconnect Geet has with men in general would love to read how you play this... maybe her father was abusive or something...

wow ur ff is sooo nice.👏
love it to the core... pls add me in ur pm list
luv ya😛

me upset ... i do not like Maan n sam together :(

wowww loved it

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

pata naheen kyon..no matter which ff it is...the name sam ..just makes my blood boil.😆

u r going out of town? where to? business or relaxation?

i'll miss u 🤗

I understand ur problem Arzoo 😉😆

Yeah I am going to hill station for relaxation with my family 😊

Am also gonna miss u & this forum

AWESOME UPDATE DIII⭐️👍🏼