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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great story, just read all parts together. Could u please PM me when you update. Thanks.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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plz update next part as sooon as possible !!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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sorry for the late updates guys..i was quite busy with my project work..hope u ppl like this part...the nxt part will be the last since its an OS..ending will be with their SR...so enjoy..
thanks a lottt for all of ur comments...
PART-4
maan and geet started a new life...mrng geet will wake up early b4 maan gt up she will take bath and wake him up with his black coffee...wen he was taking bath she will prepare the breakfast ...then both will get into the car maan wil go to office while he dropped geet at the temple everyday...as the days moved they bcame gud frnds..geet even helped maan by doing some office work, sometime un the eve they will chat in the balcony...at night maan will sleep in his small bed while geet sleep in the couple bed...when maan worked overnight he will fall asleep with his laptop...wen he woke up in the mrng he will properly sleeping in the bed covering a bedsheet and his laptop shut dwn and kept apart..he knw geet wuld hve dne that...they were like 2 frnds sharing a single room helping each others...wen maan went to office geet will spend quality time with dadi annie ..
but both of them fall in love with each other...secertly admired each other..wen geet come out of shower with her hair wet maan cnt take his eyes off frm her, geet will come near and point out the laptop and move frm tere with a smile, this will kill maan more...wenever maan gt ready for the office in his suite...geet always wnt to hug him frm the back...bt she will stop herself...most of the time she wnt b tere...but is the life just go on as planned..did it??????...nooo...both decided that they will wait until his sucess in the international project..is it rite? maan need to realise that wife is more importanat than buisness eventhough he love his wife most...of course a wife should support her husband , but she should make him realise some fact of life that money is not everything...destiny decided too teach them a lesson.
asusal one day when geet came to give maan's lunch to his office, maan was almost freezed by seeing her in white salwar looking like an angel..the way maan looked at her made geet shy and she looked down..then maan tackled himself saying he is working now..geet also doesnt want to disturb him she gave the lunch and left ...something wwas telling maan to stop geet, he thought he was attracted too much 2 day ..he need to concentrate n work..geet too wanted to stay with him, but she left..
after a few min maan heard some screams in the streets, he called adi
maan: wat s happening ?
adi: sir sum political members ae making probs with gundas..i asked security to close the gates .
maan:close the gates ???problems is orse or what..clients will be coming..
adi:sir they all over the area it will dangerous to roam in the street now..so asked the client to canceld the meeting..
maan: gud adi (suddenly something strucked him, he almost shouted..)..geeettt.
adi:sir r u k?
maan :geet , she just left now(he was so panicked)
suddenly his mobile ring..he saw geets name..he was relived attend the call..
maan:geet (bt it was dadi)
dadi:maan , its me..i called to tell bring geet along with dnt left her alone so much of problems are going k?? ( maan just dropped the cellphone and ran 2wards his car.. (adi picked the phone and toled both are fine..he doesnt want dadi 2 b worried..he ran to maan to give his cellphone but maan already left in his car)
maan was searching geet all over in the strrets..he spots his car in which geet came..he came out of car and checked it no one was there..he asked nearby ppl..and old man relied that gundas forcefully took a gal and driver and went that side..maan was shocked..he ran and searched for her in the streets bulindings shops like mad man...atlast he found her dupatta alone in one of the old bulding suddenly a bomb exploded in that building maan was thrown out from there..he yelled geeettt...holding her duppata in his hand..
when geet left the office when she was in the next street she saw ppl running here there and asked the driver drive soon and get out of this place..but they were stopped by a gang and they pulled both of them out and dragged them to an old building..thats were her dupatta fell ...but they were rescued by a some ppl near the place all ran from that place geet was coming back to her car...when she reached her car she saw maan car burning ..she was stunned and ran 2wards when ppl stopped her all she found was maan's coat...she burst into tears..
maan holding geet duppatta fell on the ground and crying and cursing himself for not being with geet..he just requested god for one thing to give her back..he care damn about his buisness..he will give all his sucess to just see her once ..hold her once...
geet on the other hand holding his coat right in the middle of the road crying..i should have never left the office..he was here just bcoz of me...just show him once babji..i will never leave his side ven he wants me to leave..plzzz...
police and the press ppl came controling the situation there...a small BOY picked up maan watch which is fell from his coat pocket and started to run from there when geet noticed she ran after him and saw that in front of the burning building her maan was holding her dupatta and crying...she yelld "maan"
maan felt an jolt all through his nerves..he saw geet running 2wards him ..he cant belive his eyes..he ran 2 wards her...both of them hugged each like they never want the other to go off...never want to break apart..
dadi maa adi everyboby in the world watching them since press ppl were shooting the most romantic reunion after the riot...
precap: maan luked at geet who has choclate in her mouth near lips hands...and asked where is my share..geet replied dadi ma said u dnt like choclate so i ate all..maan said really, he pinned geet to the wall and said now iam gonna eat my share and came close to her...
Edited by krishdgr8 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
wow loved it yaar !!! awsome !! do pm me !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
awesome awesome update loved it a lottt😊😊
do add me to ur PM list😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
it is just wooow
plz add me in ur pm list
would love to read more😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
I've read all parts of ur os...very well written...can't wait 4 ur next update...must be a passionate sr..😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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read in one flow awesome awesome, that what i can say only!!!
Luv
TC
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Posted: 14 years ago
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superbbb,awesome yaarrr👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
loved da update
do continue plzzz make it longer

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