Aggressive and Arrogant: Part SIX page 47 10oct

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Hey all.

I am Muskaan. And I hope U all remember me. Remember I wrote the ff named as 'Love, Rage and Fury'?

So that is over and I felt like writing another ff.

This ff is for 16+ only. And the entire stuff written is entirely fictional.

Hope u all like my work again. And the stuff written has no intention to make any offence. So please don't mind and do not pm me that 'this cant happen' or 'this is impossible' regarding any information. Everything is possible as it is fictional NOT real.

So here's character sketch.

Muskaan.

Aggressive and Arrogant

What would you do,

when the only fear of your love

is YOU!



Maan Singh Khurana


"When he is good, he is good. When he is bad he is excellent."

The 24 years old business tycoon. He does not demand respect, he governs it! He is the one who is very arrogant and aggressive as he hails from a royal background in India. But currently, Lives in London. He is so powerful that the cars in his garage just has 'MSK' printed on its number plate and in the strict city like London; no one dares to stop them, as they all are afraid of the consequences. He is the eldest prince of his family. He is the heir of the Khurana Empire. He is the one behind the great success of Khurana chain of Hotels, named as The Kingston hotels. Kingston hotels are the most expensive hotels of London. And one of the best hotels in the world. He is very short tempered and gets angry very quickly.

Vanraj Singh Khurana

Maan's dad. He was the king of Rajasthan's most powerful area, Chittorgarh. The area is filled with palaces. Now also the grand wedding of maharaja Vanraj singh Khurana and princess Sonakshi is still remembered. He was very disheartened by the death of his wife whom he called Soni, so he moved to London. That time maan was just 12 years old. He is very nice, and kind.

Dev Singh Khurana

Maan's younger brother. He is also very nice and caring but he often invites trouble as is very spoilt by maan. Maan loves his brother a lot and cant see him in little bit of tension. He is 20 and is a big flirt (not in terms to hurt anyone but in a funny manner). Whenever he is in trouble maan comes for his rescue every single time! And dev also loves him the most. He is a free bird to fly anywhere with maan on his back to his rescue.

Anvesha Singh Khurana

21-year-old sweet girl. She is not maan's real sister but she is vanraj's older brother's daughter who passed away with her mother when she was just 2 months old. Then soni and Vanraj decided that they would adopt her and never tell her that she is not their 'real' daughter. Maan knew this and never bothered about it. He just loved her as he loved dev. But even more than dev. She is maan's princess. He had not even let a cold breeze touch her. She was his first priority in anything. Maan can even miss his most expensive deal than to miss her college drama competition. Maan handed her everything before even she knew she needed it. She is also very much spoilt by him.

Dadi Ma

Vanraj's mother.After soni passed away Vanraj came to London and when he was having a tough time handling his children, then she was the one who would look after the kids, they call her Dadi ma. She knew maan's every single secret. And only she can handle him when he is angry. She has the special ability to calm him and make him understand everything. Maan also loves her and can't tolerate her insult a bit.

And now the place, sorry 'palace' in which Khurana's live-



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Geet Handa


21 years old. She is the one and only princess of Devgarh, owning the true beauty of a princess. Whoever saw her, kept staring for a minute. She has been raised in full traditions and rituals. She has been given the good 'sanskaar' by her family and she is very kind hearted. She is very calm and composed. She has been taught to live like a princess but be nice to everybody she meets. She lived in devgarh, Rajasthan with her family. But currently is studying in London. She is modern but by mind not with clothes. She is the one with so much high values. But still a girl inside her heart lives, who is wishing for a best husband to come and take her away as every normal girl, wants.

Mohinderlal Handa and Rano Handa

They are geet's parents and his ancestors were very respectable kings of devgarh. Though when democracy took place they were not the one ruling but still people gave them the same respect and honor that a king and queen may have. People also believed that may be princess geet would have a swayamvar of herself in which she will to choose her desirable prince, as any guy in India or abroad would feel an honor to be married with the most beautiful princess. Her parents were waiting for geet to finish her studies and come back soon, but instead they shifted to London as well.

Aditya Raj Handa (adi)

He is geet's cousin who loves her more than anything. He is with her in her college and protects her from any random guy who dares to harm her. Geet is the one who he admires as a human being as she helps each and everyone in need. Aditya is the man with heart of gold. He is in love with Pinky, who is geet's best friend. He lives with geet and her parents, as he has no one in his family.

Pinky

She is the sweet girl who is geet's best friend. She is also in love with adi but is scared to admit and tell him.

Now comes the villain- Vikram Raichand.

He is very cunning and bad guy. He 'thinks' he is in love with geet. But instead is taken away by her beauty. He once proposed geet but she rejected. He also is the competitor of maan in his hotel business. He wants to make geet his and for that he can go to any extent. He is evil and plans to get geet at any cost. But destiny has other plans for him.(lol)

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(other characters will be introduced when they enter.)


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Character sketch : Page 1
Part one : Page 1
Part Two- A : Page 8
Part Two- B : Page 8
Part Three : Page 15
Part Four : Page 23 & 24
Part Five : Page 31




















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Part One

He held her hand and pinned her to the near wall, making her gasp in shock and pain. She frowned at him and he was just looking at her big almond shaped light brown eyes, clearly highlighted with kajal. He was trying to read her eyes, searching for answers.

"A h. leave me." she said in low tone, trying to get off but his muscular body felt more close.

"No one. No one in this world can runs away from Maan Singh Khurana!" he saw her eyes and this time she looked down. "Why are u running away!?" he just asked her gritting his teeth.

"I- I am-not running away. I ju.just don't k.know what are y.you saying?" she stammered seeing the anger in his eyes and she tried to look other side but he made her face him.

"Really? You were running away from me from last two times.! Whenever you saw me, just acted like you dint and went away or should I say literally ran away? Huh? Could you mind explaining that to me?" he came too close to her face that she faced other side revealing her neck and beautiful dark brown hairs, which smelt of roses.

She was going weak on her knees when his cologne filled in her nostrils and she breathed heavily feeling his breaths on her neck. That was then what she feared the most. His eyes. They again looked at her with piercing gaze and so much intensity that she would melt any moment.

After few seconds when he just stared in her eyes he saw a sudden jerk in them, which lead them to be welled up. He instantly snapped his hands back and gave her enough space to run away again.

That was the time she just required. Without wasting a second, getting the last glance of his eyes and unknowingly saying 'thanks' by the eye contact, she ran away, making her long hair fly back and her dupatta waving good bye to him.

And here he was standing confused like a dumb. He never ever left anyone go before answering him his question but here she was. She was so adorable that he can't even imagine those tears in her big eyes.

Flashback-

Geet's POV

It was a cold night of London and the cold breeze was touching my face when I was hiding from a beast. He was following me and I was running away from him. I was hiding in the free space between two buildings. It was hardly 2-3 feet in width. I quickly went in between them and the darkness hid me from him. I just saw his face. His face was the same, which I rejected. Yes. He was Vikram raichand.

He was just 10 feet away from me. he was searching me on the road. Thinking where I disappeared suddenly. I was hiding in the dark as the street light was off but to my dismay, the light went on and he quickly turned and saw me. I hid my face in my dupatta and ran for my life. Thankfully his body was well built and he had a broad chest so he was having a tough time running. I was very slim so I quickly got out and ran on the other street.

I was running and running when I was out of breath. But I can't stop. He was behind me. I quickly started running again. Then I took a glance behind me checking if he was there. But he was not. I then bumped into someone. His body was warm and I was so tired. I just felt my heart beating like hell. I unknowingly hugged him and begged for my life.

Maan's POV

That night I saw her first time. She just bumped into me and was breathing heavily like hell was behind her. I saw her innocent eyes that were now red by tears. Instantly I was taken aback when she started pleading me.

"p.please p.please help. Sa.save me. p.please." she was not even able to speak due to her sobs.

I quickly saw the man behind her. My blood boiled at the degree of infinity and he was coming closer to her. I quickly hid her behind me. When he came closer and said "Hand her over to me. She is mine." That was when it was confirmed that he is the one responsible for her state and then I punched him hard. He was totally knocked out. Then I heard her gasp in shock. She just looked at me and ran away. Just ran away. Without saying even simple thanks for saving her life. I just saw her running away.

Geet's POV

The man I bumped into just punched Vikram and I was so shocked. I cant tolerate violence a bit. Not even slapping, let alone punching someone. I saw his eyes red with anger and I feared them. That was then I decided to again run away. And I did the same. He might have seen me running but I quickly ran far away. Though I would never forget his face. And the warmth I felt on his touch was so fimiliar, that I cant explain.

After 4 days from the incident I was ready to go to the college that was just 2 blocks away. I walked for 10 mins and I was in front of my college. I crossed the road and started to walk when I saw the black car stop in front of me and I stopped with a jerk. The same man came out who saved me and I thought he was following me. He was again seeing me with anger and I was going weak seeing his angry face. He started to take steps near me and I backed off. He was not stopping even he was seeing me going back. Then I heard the bell of my college rang and I ran in the building. Leaving him behind.

Maan's POV

I was going to office when a girl was crossing the road and suddenly came infront of my car. Thank god I put the break or else she would have gone to death. I got out angrily and saw her face. She was the same girl I saved few days ago. And she ran away without even saying thank you to me. I was going towards her to give a piece of mind when she again ran away from me! She! She was trying to ignore me! The one and only Maan Singh Khurana? How dare she!. I turned and saw her going in the college. Same college I studied in. I smirked and went inside. After 15 mins the bell again rang to indicate that students should get back to their classes. I saw her in the corridor and there was no one else in a nearby room. Then I got a chance to talk to her and asked her whey she was running from me! as I was the one who saved her!

(then the firstly written scene took place)

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Edited by MastiMuskaan - 14 years ago
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love you muskii for coming back.. Missed you and your previous ff so damn much.. Im so on cloud 9 you are back.. And what a stupid question? Of course i still rmb you..

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awesome comeback muskii.. 👏 Love love love the update and im loving this ff.. Its great.. Brilliant writing again dear.. Pls pls pls pls update regularly darling.. I cant wait to know what happens next.. Aww loved maaneet as usual.. Loved the character sketch.. Maan is as usual the arrogant aggressive one.. Wonder how maan gonna be towards geet hereafter.. And wow geet is a princess.. Awesome setting of story.. I hate that vikram rathod.. 😡 he deserved the punch from maan.. How dare he mess with maan's mishty geet? 🤬 love adi too.. I meant his character sketch.. Aww he is overprotective of geet.. And adi-pinky in love! 😃 thanks for that hun.. There seem to be a misunderstanding between maaneet.. Hope it all clears up as well.. Its so cute how maan thinks geet is running away without saying thank you and how geet mistakens it that maan is after her like that vikram idiot.. And maan saves geet here as well, like ghsp..

overall, great update and start.. Really interesting to find out what happens next and the intro of the rest of characters.. A small request, pls update regularly.. Because im just in love with your ff.. Cant wait actually..

thanks for the ff dear.. Really appreciate it very much.. Was very much upset you abruptly ended lrf last time.. It was going well and great.. Now pls don do for this one too.. Im greedy, cant help it.. Just long, regular and many updates from this ff is good enough for me.. And congrats on new ff.. Keep writing dear..
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ps: i cant like your update since im on phone now, but you know from my long comment, that i loved it..
Edited by zaara25 - 14 years ago
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Great intro!!
Really nice part!
Continue soon and thanks for the PM...
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wow awsome yaar ...
nice start ...
continue soon and pm me tooo
maan dosent know the actual reason of her running away and worryinh ...
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wowww loved it
oh maan saved geet n he is surely very arrogant n geet is sooo simple
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very very interesting realy awesum eagerly waitin fr de next part post it soon pls
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