~*The Unknown Desire 2(RP)*~part 52 up pg. 64 on 13/08/16 - Page 13

Originally posted by: arpita25

Hey bhagwaan mujhe to yakeen hi nahi ho raha hai ki jaane Sooraj aaj kis disha se nikla hai. 😲
😆 😆 sab ko mujh se yahi umeed hai

Tune fic update kar di ye humare liye bahut badi baat hai 😆
sahi me mere liye bhi bahut badi baat thi. 😛

Mai good nahi kahoongi is update ko.😕 Tune ye kya kar diya mere Vardaan ko? Us ka accident karana jaroori tha kya?😡

Are yaar bhadak kyoun rahi hai mujhe bhi accha nahi lag raha hai par kya karoon story me thoda sa to twist hoga hi. 😕

Ab Kajal ki baat sun kar mujhe bhi bhi rona aa raha tha, sach me kitna bura hua hai us k saath life me aur ab Vardaax bhi. 😭
haan yaar kuch logon ki zindagi me khushiyaan kam dastak deti hain. 😭

Vardaan k liye us k mom and dad bhi kitne pareshaan hain na Mr. Mehra kuch keh nahi rahein hain par un ka dard samajh me aata hai.
Sab log apna dard bol k hi nahi dikha paate na. 😭

Vardaan ki mom apne eklaute bete k khone k ehsas se hi seham gayi hain. 🥺
Koi bhi maa aise hi react karegi na.

Yahan tak ki Abhay se bhi Kajal ka dard nahi dekha jaa raha hai, kuch bhi ho Abhay ko jaldi se theek kara do aur jaldi se update kar.

Originally posted by: prerna1

nice part
plz continue soon

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

congarulations and celebrations🥳 finally update ho gaya ye baat alag hai ki chhota nupdate tha lekin phir bhi update to hua😆😉
thanks a lot dear 😃 😃 😃 mujhe bhi kafi surprising lag raha hai 😆 😆 😆

lekin ye kya kiya vardaan ka accident kyun karwa diya isme😡😡 vardaan ko bilkul thik kijiye jaldiii
kar doongi meri maa itne dhamkiyaan de rahe ho tum sab ki sochna padega jaldi hi. 😆 😛 😛

bechaari kajal kitna pareshaan ho gayi ye sunke😭😭😭 aur vardaan ke parents ko ye lag raha hai ki kahin un k eklaute bete ko kuch ho na jaaye😭😭😭
Sach me ye ek maa baap k liye kitna mushkil hai bus vahi samajh sakte hain. 😭 😭 😭

abhi ke liye itne hi comments jab tak aap vardaan ko thik nahi kar deti hain uske baad long comments dungi jaise hi wo thik ho jayega😭😉😊
Le comment paane k liye Vardaan ko theek karna itna jaroori hai? theek hai fir mai Vardaan ko jaldi theek karne ki koshish karoongi 😆😛

continue soon 😊

shreya😊

Originally posted by: danish1

beautiful update

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

sachhi me tune update kiya hai...main yakeen nahi karr pa rahi hun...kha mere...nahi nahi...apne hi sarr ki kasamm kha kar bol de...ha ha ha...😆

aisa sab k saath ho raha hai ab recent waala padh k pata nahi tum sab kya kahoge? 😆 😆 😆

chalo...kuch toh aaya hath me...yeh chutku sa part hi sahi...
haan better something than nothing 😛 😛 😛

vaise maine toh sirf update ki baat kahi thi na tujh se...Vardan ki accident ki baat toh kahi bhi nahi thi...aur tune...huh...😡

Ab kya karein kahani me twist nahi hoga to maza nahi aayega

ek toh itna late update...upar se vardan ko hospital bhej diya...!!! tu samne hoti toh...mere hatho se peet karr tu bhi iss waqt kisi hospital me hoti...huh...!!!! teri behtari isi me hai ke vardan thik thak rahe...!!! varna tu mujhe janti nahi hai...😡😆
Jaanti hoon lioness ka gussa, sweet lioness likhne se koi lioness sweet nahi ho jaati 😆 😆 😆

vaise Kajal kitni dukhi thi...aur Vardan ke parents bhi...aur tu update karr ke chhup gayi...peet ne ki darr se...😆

Samajh gayi lioness tu 😛 😛 😛

vaise sach kahun...toh mujhe pata hai ki vardan ko kuch nahi hoga...kyoun ke jitna main tujhe janti hun...tujhe peetna bilkul bhi achha nahi lagta...n tu isi liye kuch bhi galat nahi karegi...!!! par tujhe toh galiyan deni hi thi...so maine de di...mera dil thanda ho gaya...😆
to mai Vardaan ko kuch nahi hone doongi bus isliye ki kahin mai maar na khaa jaoon. 😆 😆 😆

kajal kafi ro rahi thi...bhagwan ke samne...n ye jo uss ki baat sunn rahi thi...wo uss ki honewali saas hai na...!!! chalo achha hai...vardan ko apne parents ke samne kuch bolna hi nahi padega...😉😛

Sab situation hi aise ho gayi hai ki Vaishnavi jee bina kuch kahe hi samajh jaayengi 😉 😉 😉

abhi vardan ko jaldi se thik kar ke wapas le aa...varna tu kabhi bhi thik nahi ho payegi...😆
Mai theek hoon is ka matlab Vardaan bhi thek hoga na 😊 😊 😊

vaise ye tujhe mera comment kamm aur dhamkiya jyada lagg raha hoga...!!! par sach bhi yehi hai...ke main tujhe dhamkiya hi de rahi hun...!!! okay...ab next part sayad 2012 ke Happy Dussera ke time par hoga...hai na...😡😆

dekh tu hi ek aise hai jis ne sab se kam expectations rakhi hai mujh se. How sweet u r!!!!!!! 😳 😳 😳

Par maine jaldi hi kar diya na update. 😛 😛 😛

Originally posted by: sainiayshi14

Hey Vertika .
Hi dear 😊 😊 😊

i read your whole ff love the every part of it
Thanks a lot Ayushi 🤗🤗🤗

.omg vardan ka accident ho gya oh no bechari vardan ki mom kitni dukhi hain aur uske dad bhi .
Obviously un ki zindagi ka ek lauta sahara hai vo 😭 😭 😭

and kajal bechari kitna ro rahi hain hope sab theek ho jaye .
Sab theek ho jaayega don't worry 😃 😃 😃

very emotional part .
yeah i know

cont'soon

n thanxx for the PM

love

ayushi.

Originally posted by: varshita

Nahiii ye kya kar diya tune. 😲 😲
ab aisa kya kar diya? 😲 😲 😲

Bilkul accha nahi tha ye update mere liye matlab itne dino baad update karegi vo bhi itna bada shock degi hume Vardaan k accident ka, not fair.😕 😕
i know tum sab satisfy nahi ho is se but jaldi hi all will be well. 😉 😉 😉

Tum aisa kaise kar sakti ho humare saath?😡 😡
Kuch bhi ho jaaye ab jaldi se us ko theek karo kuch nahi jaanti mai aur mai Kajal aur Vardaan k parents ko aise nahi dekhna chahti. 😭 😭
Mujhe pata hai hum me se koi nahi chahta hai aisa,😕 😕 😕 sab theek hoga jaldi hi 😃 😃 😃

Abhay k Vardaan pe najar rakhne se ye accha hua ki sab log time se Vardaan k pass time se pahuch gaye aur us ka proper treatment start ho gaya. 🤔 🤔
hmmm, kuch bura hota hai to kuch accha bhi hota hai na 😊 😊 😊

Ab to Abhay ko bhi yakeen ho gaya hoga na ki kitna pyaar karte hain Kajal aur Vardaan ek doosre se aur Kajal ka dard to mujh se nahi dekha jaa raha tha.😭 😭
abhay bus yahi jaana chahta tha kyounki Kajal already bahut kuch suffer kar chuki hai.

Sach me Kajal ko zindagi ne itne dard diye hain ki poocho mat, bus ek Vardaan hi us ki khushi tha but ab us ki bhi aise halat hai.
sab theek hoga to us ka dard bhi kam ho jaaayega 😃 😃 😃

Mrs. Mehra ka dard to shayad shabdon me keh paana mushkil hai, apne ek laute bete ko is haal me dekhne k baad kisi aur dukh ki jaroorat kahan rahi hogi. 🥱 🥱

Sahi me ye dard to bus ek maa hi seh sakti hai na. 😭 😭 😭

Humare Vardaan ko jaldi se vapas laa do and try to update this fic soon.
I will try my best 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Nice part
Thanks dear 😊 😊 😊

Kajal is shocked to hear about Vardaan's accident. she panics and does not understand what to do. she is relieved see Abhay there. He tries to console and give her hope. He even calls Vardaan's parents there.
Abhay knew that they must be needed here asap and thank god Abhay was there. 😔 😔 😔

They are both shattered to see their son in such a critical condition.
Obviously, Kajal and his parents both love him so much na. 😭 😭 😭

Mr. Mehra is touched to see Abhay's concern for his family. He tries to console his wife.
he is really good at heart 😊 😊 😊

Abhay finds Kajal at the temple praying for Vardaan's safety and recollects all the things which he had investigated about Vardaan. He can see how much Kajal loves him

And same goes with Vardaan na? 😉 😉 😉

please continue soon

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Great update 👏 but it was not expected yaar. 😭
Thanks and i know

Tum se aise umeed nahi thi itne jaldi Vardaan ka accident nahi hona chahiye tha 😲 ab dekho kya haal hai is time Vardaan ki parents ka aur mujhe to sab se jyada Kajal k liye bura lag raha hai.
I know darls that it hurts but kuch na kuch to twist hona chahiye na story me 😛 😛

Vo kya itne buri hai ki bhagwaan baar baar us ki is tarah se imtihaan le rahe hain.😡 Bechari Kajal kitna gum sahegi itne kam umar me?😕
Oho relax darling kuch nahi hoga, all will be well soon. 😊 😊

Abhay ka Vardaan pe najar rakhna ek tarah se theek hi raha na kam se kam vo time pe pahuch gaya na ? Ab Abhay ko bhi yakeen ho gaya na ki Kajal aur Vardaan ki relationship fake nahi hai 😊
Off course dear, Abhay ki is soch se kuch accha bhi hua na.😃 😃 Kajal k liye Vardaan se jyada koi perfect nahi ho sakta hai. 😉 😉

Mujhe Vardaan k parents k liye sab se jyada bura lag raha hai apne eklaute bete ko aise dekh k kya beet rahi hai un pe.😔
Sach me maa baap pe kya betati hai vo vahi samajh sakte hain 😭 😭

Please jaldi se theek karo Vardaan ko and please try to update soon.

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710

Hey dear...hope u are doing well..😊...seems like U are really busy...as kaafi waqt me bas ek hi UD hua...however...I cant complain...main to bas abhi abhi ayi..😆😳
U can complain but yes i know u too were invisible like me 😆 😆 😆

Coming to the part...Vardaan met wid an accident...😭...and uski halath bhi critical hai...it hurts me to realize that...lekin mujhe tum par pura bharosa hai...he has to be fine...samjhi na? 😈
Yaar agar tum sab aise threat karoge to i must should do something 😛 😛 😛

Feeling really sad for Kajal...especially the way she tells Abhay to save her Vardaan...and also speaks to God......
That was touchy, i too was feeling emotional while writing that 😭 😭 😭

And yes...this update had special attention on Vardaan's parents...and sumhow I loved the portion most...u have depicted it all very beautifully...Vardaan was actually a vardaan for them...and now on the verge of losing him...the fear and pain in indescribable......but u did amazing!! 😊
thanks a ton dear 😊 😊 😊

Hope u continue soon dear...😊
I too hope d same 😉 😉 😉