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Posted: 14 years ago
great update...
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awesome...

now vicky also knows...he will surely b of gr8 help...

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Just read the entire ff in one go. awesome writing. Can't wait it is so entertaining, exciting, exhilarating, and enjoyable. Please continue soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago
😆 I'm laughing at Maan's condition...Geet is really going to drive him crazy with her devious plan and now she has Vicky to help

Can't wait to see what they will do next
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( I would like to give a shout out to Shreya aka maangeetcrazy for making this amazing and beautiful banner. Luv u! muahh! 🤗)


Part: 41

Lost in her eyes

Vicky: oh hoyyyeee I think some of my genes rubbed off on you'that is my sister! Naughty like me.

He raises his hand for a high five and geet smiles back giving him a high five.
Vicky: okay now tell me what do you want me to do to help.
Geet comes closer to his ear and whispers everything slightly changing her plans, as now Vicky wanted to help so she used that to her advantage. Vicky even added some ideas as well making it both a spicy and hot thrill in store for poor Mr. Maan Singh Khurana.

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Maan goes to his office and when his employee was about to ask him again, he almost yells at her to leave him alone. He was taking out all his frustration and anger out on the poor employee. His back was turned away from her and he was just looking out the window to let the fresh air calm him down.

Vicky comes in and with signals basically tells her that right now was not the best time and that it is better if she leaves.
"Mujhse kya hora ha hai? Why can't I just forget her?!?!" he murmurs as he throws the file in his hand out in frustration, which skids and hits Vicky's feet.

Maan didn't notice Vicky had come in and becomes a little worried if Vicky suspected anything. Vicky looks at him and a smile starts to slowly creep up on his face. He bends down and grabs the file.

Then he walks over to Maan and hands him the file and says, " Is everything okay bro? R u okay?"
" Yes! I am totally fine! Why would you ask?" Maan says trying to decipher if Vicky found out anything.
" uhhh oh nothing'just thought the employee may have made you mad or something like that" Vicky tries to brush it off and Maan just took a little sigh of relief, which Vicky noticed and thought,
" It is kind of too early to take a sigh of relief bro".
Vicky: I just came here to tell you that our client from London is here to "Geet" you
Maan: Kya'!
Vicky: I said someone is here to meet you. She is outside and won't come in unless you "Geet" her in.
It had to take all of Vicky's strength not to burst out laughing, but he managed.
Maan: What! Unless I What..???
Vicky: I said unless you "greet" her in. You sure you are okay bro?
Maan murmurs to self: Okay???...i am turning crazy! Not only do I imagine and see her everywhere, I seem to hear her name too. I always knew that yeh lakri mujhe pagal kar degi. See I am even talking to myself just like her!
" Aap kuch kaha bro?" fighting back a grin.
Maan: oh uhh yeah I said I will be there.
" Apparently Maan Singh Khurana has to "greet" people in now. Who is she anyways bro?" Vicky says so Maan wouldn't suspect anything later on.
" I don't know but I am going to find out and it better be worth it" maan says before leaving.
Vicky to himself: oh it will be worth it bro. Trust me!
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Maan walked out of the building with his style and attitude. He glances to his sides, but couldn't find anybody. He walks down the steps to see if he could find her, but then just gives up there were barely any people in sight.
"This is not my job to look for her. . . I am not desperate to work with her either!" he angrily murmurs.
He turns to go back up the stairs and into the building, but in just that fraction of a second he freezes in place. Maan felt his breath catch yet again and his heart started to flutter uncontrollably. No matter how hard he tried to not look back and to just run into his cabin . . . to run away from the situation as fast as he could he could not gather up the strength to do so.

He turns himself around slowly only to find himself mesmerized at the sight in front of him. Geet was approaching him on a motorcycle in the most sexy saree he has ever seen on her. He closes his eyes in frustration to stop his alluding hallucinations, which were only going to give him pain once it was over.

Maan: She is not real maan. She LEFT! You KICKED her out of your life YOURSELF!...and she is not going to come back'ever!
He opens his eyes slowly only to find Geet was now much closer than before, and her beauty one hundred times more magnified and beautiful close up. Maan was so lost in her eyes to move as geet was coming right at him from the side.

Except Geet knew what she was doing and pressed the breaks to slowly whizz passed Maan's body, which caused her dupatta/drape of saree to blow and fall right onto his face.( I don't know what is called'.she is wearing a saree so the part of the saree/cloth she is wearing that is draped over the shoulder so i am just going to call it drape of saree).
Geet felt the tug on her saree and quickly brings the motorcycle to a stop. She unknowing started to breathe a little heavily and her heart started to thud frantically. Right that second it started to rain, but neither Geet nor Maan could gather themselves to move.

It was as if time seemed to stand still with them. It was until Geet remembered she had to complete her plan before the client actually showed up she slowly came off the motorcycle and approached Maan while holding up her saree so she could cover up as much of her exposed skin.
Maan's face was still covered with her drape of saree as he was too awestruck and captivated to comprehend anything. Geet hesitantly and nervously brings her hand up to his face, which gently caresses his lips and slides her drape of saree off his face. The drape of saree gently brushed off his wet closed eyelids and long eyelashes and face leaving his throat dry and breath caught right in it.

Geet quickly shies away to find herself yet again stopped as she felt a tug on her saree again.

Maan slowly approaches from behind and drives his sensuous fingers up her exposed and sexy back sending tingling shivers down Geet's spine and all the way to her toes. His hands finally reach her shoulders in which he succulently places the drape of saree across her shoulder.
Even though the rain was cold it was not enough to cool down geet's burning hot pink cheeks.
She shies away and starts to smile up into the sky letting the rain calm her burning body and hysterically beating heart down having no idea what effect it was having on Maan.



She calms down a little and acts a little seductive.


Maan totally lost in admiring Geet. He encircles around her, but then stops right in front of her grabbing her hand and then presses his lips against it as if planting kisses i going all the way up her arm.
Than Maan grabs her by the waist bringing her closer . . . lips millimeters away, both gazing intensely inside each other's eyes.


"You miss me" geet says directly looking inside his eyes sending shock waves inside Maan hearing those words and snapping him out of his compulsion.
Geet: toh phir kyun yeh duriya maan?
Maan lets go of geet as the realization hits him hard. He slowly turns his back away.
Geet: You love me maan. You love me!"
That Maan already knew, but hearing it out load and from Geet had a different and stronger affect on him almost making him surrender. He turns around and the ugly truth comes back slamming back to him. There was no Geet to be found. His legs go limp and numb from the immense pain he was feeling and he just falls on his knees. What he saw was his mind playing tricks on him again and he was the fool to fall it again and again.

Pre-cap:

"It will take much more than that to completely weaken me. Today was just a small battle tomorrow I will initiate my second plan" She says with sheer determination.


Hit the like button if you liked the update!

and also you better leave a long long comment. Haan i am demanding!!!!! 😆 . . . but seriously leave a comment.😛😆
Previous Part~Let the game begin
Next Part~Love torments?
Edited by zeynab111 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yayy Me first again LOL😆
awh the banner..lol luv ya too😳okay now to the update ..Zee!! OMG Haila..!
What an update ..HOT HOT HOT!! 😳😳
Amazinggg part..Lmfaoo lovee the maan vicky scene
"greet" = geet..love that scene🤣
poor maann..he thinks he has gone crazy awh😆 OMG the Maaneet scene was HOT☺️ Love it..the drape is called Pallu ya Duppatta ..😃 Awesome part
Cant wait for geet's next plan to be on Action
update soonnn
Luv ya muah
-Shreya

Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice one loved it
maan babu aap to gaaye kaam se 😆😆😆

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