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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ssch

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Hi everyone
i can not update for a few let say 2 or 3 days as something bit me today in the zoo and now my rigt hand is swollen and its hurting
i am sorry😭
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its ok dear take ur time and get well soon🤗🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
may god bless u with good health
tc and gt well soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
ok dnt worry... Get Well Soon sweety!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi

Just came across this FF.Actually its about the title.I was goin start an FF with tha same title!!!! Thank God i saw this!!! Otherwise there would hav been a copyright infringement 😆...Ok now i hav to read ur FF & think of another title for my upcomin FF

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: madhubala123

Hi

Just came across this FF.Actually its about the title.I was goin start an FF with tha same title!!!! Thank God i saw this!!! Otherwise there would hav been a copyright infringement 😆...Ok now i hav to read ur FF & think of another title for my upcomin FF

well thankyou for reading it
hope you like it
good luck for your fiction
and plz don't tell me it's almost the same thing that you were going to write😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great work Samra!👏 Do take care of yourself.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
take care of your health
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi everyone
thankyou for your support here is the update
plz comment

PART 8:

Maan was taking a shower smiling at his wife antics.while Geet was arranging his clothes back in the closet

When maan came out in towel. Water dribbling from his hair , he took slow steps towards geet. He pulled her in embrace she was under his spell. All anger long forgotten.

So mrs are you happy with me or still angry he said while hugging her from back

Well mr if you don't do anything now than you might be in for a night out.

Ooops such a tempting deal why wd I leave it

Ahan she smiled

They shared a romantic passionate night.

12 am maan was sleeping peacefully with Geet sleeping in his embrace.

Maan Maan uthu na

Ha geet sone do na

Maan aap kabhi mere baat nahi sunte and she started crying

Maan sat up straight.

Geet kia hua why are you crying. Kia hua?

You don't love me any more

Geet how can you even think like that I love you more than my life

You don't even look at me like you used too

Geet seriously.. hum ye discussion subah kar le I am tired and sleepy

Daikha and she started crying even louder

Acha baba bolo kia chahiye kaise proof karo k I love you

Make love to me

But we just did twice tonight

She sobbed louder

Baby are you alright . kaha tum hath nahi lagane daiti or kaha aaj itni energy.

She cried louder.

This is insane isse kuch hogya hai.

Ok ok fine we will do that happy

She smiled and kissed him

Next morning

Geet woke maan up

Maan utho na

Kia hai geet sone do 4 baje hai. Office 9 baje hai and for God sake we slept at 2

Hogya?

Ha kyu?

Mujhe bhook lagi hai

To ja ke kha lo

Daikha you don't

Nai nai I love you. Kia khana hai.

Paratha achar wo bhi aam ka

Geet ye paratha wgaira mujhe banana nahi ata. Kuch aur chahiye to bolo

Aap mere liye itna nahi kar sakte she said with tears in her eyes

Ok fine they went downstairs. He made paratha after an effort of half an hour.with flour all over him.

Lo madam khao.

Ok she picked up the acha and started eating it.

Paratha to khao

Dil nahi chara

To banwaya q

Mere marzi… ab aap mere

Bus Geet plz no more dialogues job hi khana hai khao.

He sat there and dozed off sitting on the kitchen counter.

PRECAP:

Poor maan trapped btw wife and business meeting

sorry for the delay and a shorter update will be updating again tonight.will pm together

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awsome part
kia yaar geet to maan ka band bja k hi dam legi
awsome ff
mjhe to pta hi ni tha mere dost itna kamal likhti hai

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d update ...

continue soon ...
Edited by maaneetsangel - 14 years ago

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