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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part...👏👏
love it...⭐️
hate alisha...😡😡
hw dare she come into geet's way and use slang language...
i m glad that geet twisted her hand...
he was restless when he saw tears in geet's eyes... to brought her smile he reminded her the old times when they together...
where she trust him to join him in his 1st cycle ride without any hesitation...
finally he appriciated her with his word and his charming smile for her performance...😉
waiting 4 the next...😃
cont soon...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pawandeepk001

OMG!!! its awsum.. I read d whole in one go.. m a new reader.. Its my 1 of d most fav ffs.. Its js d 2nd time m cmnting on any ff.. But cudn't stop myself aftr reading it.. Hats off 2 u.. I hv always read d cmplete ffs so far.. So m not a patient reader.. And i hv watched dat u r not so quick in updating.. Only d God knows how m gonna wait.. Plz update it now 4 God sake.. BTW thx 4 writing such an outstanding ff.. Plz do pm me 4m now..


thanks for liking it😳
I m not that slow updater but the schedule is a bit tight for me now a days...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -dia-

wonderful!!!


loved it ...awesome!!!

The 'J' track was brilliant ..poor Yash ...kaha pasgaya ..Btw what happen to him??? don't say he made it for team.


thanks dia😊

ahem yash's condition will be revealed in the next update with more details...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: angili

👏 great update i cant tell how much i loved it by the way i still lauthing at yash delima i think he got hurt plying with maan that is way he could not make it to class🤣


thanks angili😛
I m glad u liked yash's part😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: basicquestion1



vicky ...ooo what did u do...
bechara yash! just one match with maan 😆
Sir the list reminds me that yash won't be coming in this period
...he gave a look to vicky and continued...I guess he needs some more rest...!!🤣



geet went head to head with alisha... though maan didn't congratulate her and she was on the verge of meltdown...evn then alisha was no match to geet. 👏
head boy and geet the warrior princess...perfect couple

I guess you need special classes on how to walk properly...maan taunted her and added...I wonder how could you dance even after being so clumsy...!!
awww maan u r being rude...but i'm sure it must b fun to c geet fuming in anger and pouting and making faces all for u

or is it bcoz I defeated your favourite alisha chudail in the competition...!!
geet u r such a qtpie.
bubbly and immature really like a 10th grader. maan was inwardly smiling..if i was there , i wud pinch u'r cheeks and run away🤗

anu i'm so happy that in u'r updates the evenings and night parts come after the school morning interactions. i wonder if i'd b able to breath through u'r update if u started the chapter with their balcony & bedroom scenes. ...naheen aisa mat kerna...mujhe apni jaan bahut pyari hai


just like alisha's importance for me which has no existance...!!


She felt immense happiness hearing him but still wanted to confirm...

o believe me anu we all felt immense pleasure.😍

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drashsree100



👏 👏 👏
I loved the portrayal of pain on Geet's face seeing the blank look as also no words of appreciation from Maan when all her friends complimented her 👏
On the other hand , Maan's resolve to stay away from her & that she should not have any expectations from him is irking me big time 😡 . 1stly he took side of that 🤬 Alisha & then @ least initially did not praise her 😡 . Although I'm ready to forgive the second one coz he did appreciate in the end in his special way ... so okay forgiven !!! 😳

The lighter moments provided by Yash & Vicky were superb 👍🏼
Alisha is a complete *yuck* 🤢 Everything about her is 👎🏼

Geet trips & Maan's catch ... yet again 😍 can't get enough of it 😛
Maan's such a devil 😈 ; always teasing our poor Geet .
God knows let a hot hunk come & starts to give Geet attention then Maan would realize all his Egos & attitude are futile when he would see someone else causing his Geet to smile

I loved it immensely ; each update just gets better than the prior one . Its really one of my favorites Glitter Star Red Glitter Star Red Glitter Star Red
Thanks for pm ... Glitter Heart Red

(Okay it seems God is happy with my prayers that I'm getting good news every week 😃
This week our very own Drashti is residing in Numero Uno position in India-Forums ranking for the 1st time 🥳 🥳
So me all 'Mauja hi Mauja'
Although I don't believe in the number game coz for me she's always no.1 yet it feels nice to see her hard work & sincerity getting appreciated for once publicly 😊
So me on a treating spree 🤗 wanna share my happiness with you
P.S. I hope I lived up to your 'long comment' expectation 😆)


OMG...!!...love u priya for the awesome comment.🤗
u made me happy dear😃

alisha's reaction was totally out of her unable to bear the loss but she should know that our lil geet is a fiery sherni...😉
ok plzz don't hate my maan he's suffering much more than geet😭

poor yash...vicky's sudden plan proved quite deadly for him...😆

maan pe itna julm...😲😲...pity him dear...😳
thank you a lot 😛

I m too happy for dhrasti...she deserve the success😊

love u

anupam
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

it was so much fun to read how maan went on and on in justifying geet's behavior.

does he think her attitude is like this only coz he called her mishti 🤪

maan u r always thinking about her ..sumtimes do sumthing for her too. geet was absoloutely right...kharoos singh khurana cudn't evn praise her infront of every1...but i guessed he saved it for their alone time 😉😍

vicky is an adorable friend. he'll take all the pains just to figure out the missing pieces of geet's life.
awww what a caring, loyal friend...
...laikin ...
os ka upper deck thora empty hai😆 gud for us...werna the story wud end soon if he turned on the lights of his room upstairs. permanent load-shedding cud b beneficial..i nvr realized that.


arzoo sorry dear u waited for so long...I know how it feels to wait for an update as I have also read many ffs before...

I m glad u enjoyed it

I always try to experiment to give my readers something new and of course not to bore them and this ff is very close to me as I am writing it keeping in view my own school life...!!...many scenes in the ff actually happened in my school time...😳😳

loved ur comment as usual full of life and love😳

love u

anupam
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally she got appreciation from him, sweet update
what is vicky's plan
Posted: 14 years ago
AWW nyceee yu knw gr8te jobbb xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update!!!
Thanks for the pM

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