~*~ PYAAR KA EK NAGHMA ~*~ MG ff ...COMplETED .!!! - Page 15

Created

Last reply

Replies

786

Views

140.8k

Users

133

Likes

3.1k

Frequent Posters

shalinisaran89 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
awesome upd ...
lov it...
anxiously waitin 4 d nxt prt
pickachu thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 14 years ago
Veryyy nice part!!
This sameera!!!!
I hate her!!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.


fatima
savie_ thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
thanks a lot everyone...
for reading and commenting on my FF ...
Edited by shivikasavvy - 14 years ago
alfiya7 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
eagerly waitg for tht...n may b tht is arjun...
piyasingh thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
hey shivi, i m not gettng ur updates after part 4.. i guess u forgt 2 send it...plzz nxt tym send it to me too... n ye i m likng ur ff very much waitng fr nxt part..
ritusoni2233 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
sameera😡
nice update
waiting 4 next part
nibi_suchi thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
SORRY !!! FOR REPLYING LATE !!!😃😃
READ BOTH PART 8 N 9 AT A TIME !!!
LIKED BOTH A LOT ...
LOOKING FRWARD FOR PART 10 AS IT IS GOING TO BE DAM INTERESTING ...😊😊😊
savie_ thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
PART 10

maan - ek minutes uncle ji...
aap bina poora sach jaane apni beti par haath nhi utha sakte ...

he turns towards ameera and says - tumhe dusron ki batein sunne ke alava kuch aur kaam nhi hai kya ...????
bina poori baat sune ...tum apne conclusion par aa gaye ki get pregnant hai ... jabki yeh zhoot hai ...

arjun - aur tum jaise ghatiya ladkiyan dusron ki batein sunne ke alava kuch aur kaam kar hi nhi sakti ... chup chup ke batein sunna toh tumhari aadat hai ...

sameera - maan kam se kam tum toh mera saath do ...

maan -mana ki mai tumhara boy frend hun...par iska matlab yeh nhi hai ki mai tumhare satth milkar tumhare iss jhoot mai saath donnga ...

arohi comes forward and says- geet ne tumhe kal sahi kaha thi ..ki tum jaisi ladkiyan colledge koi be matlab join karti hai ..padne ki jagah u were listening deir talks ...

arjun - pta hai agar tum apne naam sai vardhan hata dogi toh koi tumhe nhi pehchanega ..aur tum agar apni portfolio lekar job ke liye jaoge toh tum ek din mai 10 pasie bhi nhi kama paogi ... earn toh tab karogi na jab tumhe fursat mile ..kisi ki be matlab insult karne sai ...

mr. handa - koi mujhe btayega yeh kya ho rha hai ..???

maan - uncle ji sameera poora sach nhi janti ...usne adhi baat suni hamari ...

arjun- han uncle ji ...geet pregnant nhi hai ...arohi pregnant hai ... voh khud reports layi thi ...

sameera- main kaise maan loon ki geet pregnant nhi hai ...ho sakta hai party mai tum sabse sach chupana chahte ho isliye arohi ko pregnant bata rhe ho ...

arjun - agar tumhe prrofs chahiye toh wait for 10 minutes ...sach aap sab ke samne hoga ...
wid dat he moved out of mansion ..moved towards his car and took out the reports of arohi ...
he moved back to the party and showed it to mr. handa first ...

mr. handa - isme toh arohi ka naam likha hai ..

arjun - bilkul sahi kyunki arohi pregnant hai ussi ka naam hoga na ...

arjun turned towards sameera and said - see dem ..
sameera took the reports ...
and was shocked to see it ...his fear can be easily seen on her face ...he was scared of caught and wat will her parents think about her ...

arjun - ab kya kahogi sameera ..ab toh proof bhi hai tumhare samne...

arjun continued - kuch nhi hai na kehne ke liye ...

maan - mai jaanta hun ki tumhe geet achhi nhi lagti kyunki jo kuch bhi usne kal kaha uski vajah sai ..but ek tarah se toh voh sabh sahi tha ...

arjun - kise samjha rhe ho tum maan ..yeh ladki kisi bhi kaam ki nhi hai ... be matlab bechari geet par etena bada ilzaam laga diya ...
the guests started speaking bad about sameera ..

guest 1 - iss ladki ko kya problem hai ...bechari geet ..kitni bholi ladki hai ...

guest 2 - koi problem nhi hai usse ..bas bardash nhi kar pari hai ki isse accha sundar aur godd minded koi aur ladki hai ...mai keh rhi hun a jealousy ka case hai ...

guest 3 - bada ghamand hai isse apni pita ki power par...

guest 2 - bhigad ka rakha hai apni beti ko mr. and mrs. vardhan nai ...koi sanskar hi nhi hai ...

guest 1 - kapde bhi dekho kaise pehan rakhe hai ...
everyone started deir gossips ...saying something or the other bad about vardhan family ...
while maan and arjun were having deir fight talks wid sameera ... geet really felt very bad ..not becoz of the charge put on her but becoz her father did not rusted her ...
she slowly moved out of the mansion... sat in her car and drove away as she wanted some time in piece ...
nobody noticed geet moving out ...
suudenly dia noticed dat her di was not dere ..she go to maan ..tugged her pants and
said- bhaiya ...

maan - han dia kya hua ..???

dia - geet di pata nhi kahan chali gayi abhi yahin thi ...par abhi nhi dikh rhi hain ...

maan got wooried ..he ran from dere ...checked each and every single place of the house ..and den went back toh the hall...

took arjun and arohi in a corner and said - tumne geet ko dekha maine aur dia ne poors ghar dekh liya par voh kahi nahi hai ...

arjun and arohi got shocked ...

PRECAP - finding geet ...

gyz..
i m in my 10th ..and have to study alot..
so till my exmz...
i gues still the end of september i will be posting short updates ...

but after my examz...big ones...
srry for dis...

plz..gyz do comment waiting for dem
rupzloveu thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
awsome...
loved it...👏
mitzi11 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago

good luck glitter roses

pls next time less hindi
if dont mind sweety
good sam got what she derseve it
wonderful part
love it
cont soonnn
ty 4 pm

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

4 months ago

ArShi OS : Pyaar Ka Naghma {Completed} ArShi OS : Pyaar Ka Naghma {Completed}

[NOCOPY] P Y A A R. K A. N A G H M A. "Friends?" a little boy extended his hand towards a girl which she responded. They smiled and embraced...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

29 days ago

The Unending Dream OS [Completed]

In Every Birth, Find Me The night air in Mathura was thick with monsoon rains. In her small room lit only by a flickering diya, Radhika drifted...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

1 months ago

Moh-Maya ~ MayRa OS [Completed]

Whispers of Maya The glass towers of Delhi glittered under the cold moonlight, but inside the corner office of Ruan Publications, darkness...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

2 months ago

Pyaar Ya Rebound? ~ Rumya SS [Completed]

Intro: Rudra fakes a relationship with his best friend Soumya to impress glamorous Bhavya-but ends up falling for the one girl who truly knew...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

5 months ago

Student of the Year: When Love Lost Its Way [Completed]

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @JasmineRahul in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: The alternative version of the...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".