~*~ PYAAR KA EK NAGHMA ~*~ MG ff ...COMplETED .!!! - Page 13

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Posted: 14 years ago
me waiting for dhamaka
oh sam i'll embarrassed herself
wow arjun & aruhi so cute couple
beautiful update
love it
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
love the part..sameera is such a stupid..waiting to see what she creates in the party..
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE ….. 👏

OMG!!! that BIT** SAM ….. 😡whats her problem ….😡 well i m pretty sure she will get her reward for what ever she is planning for GEET ….. 😆

PLZZZ UPDATE SOON ….. 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

kill dat sam yaar ... i really want to see har dead ...

plzzz ... give d nxt one real soon ... plzzz ...

cant wait ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
shivi a great hope
really nice dear
but dont want geet to be seen like that ...
make sure that sameera gets chappals before all
arjun should say the truth
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Posted: 14 years ago
👏👏awesome part👏👏
but do something dat sameera herself gets embarrassed 😉😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 9

as geet enters everybody's eyes were on her ...
geet arrived ..many of the waiters were walking behind her as she was assigning dem deir works and duty for the party ...
..she was looking like an angel dat had arrived from heaven...

even maan kept looking at her ...

she was very simple yet the most beautiful girl dere ...

sameera was dressed like dis

geet to servants -ab aap log jaiye ...aur dhyan rakhiyega kisi bhi guest ko koi problem nhi honi chahiye ..

sarvants- yes mam..
saying dis all the servants left from dere ...
khurana family was standing in the ryt ...
mr. handa was standing in the middel of the hall talikng to some busiiness ascoiates ..
as sonn as he saw geet he dispersed all of dem and stood ere ..waiting for his angel to come to him...
geet moved towards the middle of the hall...
hugged her dad ...and mr. handa hugged her too ...

geet - congratz dad ..

mr. handa- thanks beta...

she gives a peck on mr. handa's cheek and says- u r the best dad in the world..i m proud of u ...

mr. handa - ooo..!! my lovely princess ..vaise humare angel kahan hai ..

geet geet giggled and says - aa rhe hai ...

jst den dia enters and says in her childish voice - mujhe bhi family hug mai join karo ...
everyone's gaze turned to dia ..she was really looking a princess in gown ...

she ran towards mr. handa ..and mr. handa lifted her in his arms..and says - my dia is really looking like a princess ... and gives her a peck on her cheek and dia also did the same ..

mr. handa - chalo mai aap dono ko apne guests se introduce karvata hun ...
mr. handa bended down and left dia on the floor ..and hold her from her shoulders and syas chalo while geet also moved wid dem ...
mr. handa get dem introduced to everyone present dere ...except vardhan and khurana family...
den dey moved towards vardhan family...

geet - namaste ...

dia- namaste ..

mr. vardhan - well mr. handa no doubt apki dono betiyan bohot sanskari hai ... aur ek hamari beti ..glaring at sameera ..usse toh sirf parties ke alava aur kuch nhi aata ...aur to aur maine suna hai geet ne 12 th class mai top kiya hai ..

mr. handa - bilkul thik ...

mr. vardhan - aur usee toh scholarship mili hai ...XXYYZZ coledge mai ...

geet - ji uncle ..

mr. vardhan - ur dad will be very proud of u ...

mr. handa - i m very very proud of my daughter ...saying dis he kissed geet on her forehead ..
after some chit chat ...

mr. handa took dia and geet towards khurana family to introduce dem ..

geet- namaste ..

dia - namaste ...

maan - hiii ..to geet ..and hey sweety ..really looking gorgeous..

dia - thank u ..
vicky was palying around wid some of his frends ..when he cae to his parents and saw dia dere

vicky- tum yahan bhi pahunch gaye ...tum mera picha nhi chodogi na ..

dia- oh..plz..!! dia handa kisi ka picha nhi karti ...tum apne kaam se matlab rakho ..cockroach ...

vicky- kya kaha tumne ..??
dia - cockroach ..voh bhi ganda sewer wala ...she sticks her tonge to him..

mr . khurana - stop it kids... vicky yeh dia hai mr. handaki choti beti and dia beta yeh mera chota beta vicky..

dia - nhi uncle iska naam vicky nahi cockroach hai ..apko pta hai isne mere bag mai cocroach dal diya tha ..aur iski vajah se mujhe mam se dant padi ...I HATE U (to vicky)

vicky - hate u to...
jst den arjun and arohi comes ...

arjun - namaste uncles ..(to mr. handa and mr. khurana ) and namaste my seet aunty (to mr. khurana )

geet - hi jiju ...

dia - hii arjun bhaiya ...

geet - dia bhaiya nhi jiju ...humare arohi aur arjun ki jaldi hi shadi hone wali hai

dia - sacchi ..

arjun -yes sweet heart ...he pics dia in her arms ..u r looking like a sweet doll...and gives a peck on her chekk ...

geet goes and hugs arohi and says - congratz ...

arohi blushes and says - thanks .

den both of dem turns towards mr. and mrs. khurana and says - uncle aunty ..humme apse kuch baat karni thi ..

mr. khurana - han bolo na beta ..

geet - uncle ji voh mai aur arohi ek NGO shuru kar rhe hai jisme hum unn womens ki help karnege jinke pas job nji hai ...hum unhe job dilvayenge aur courses ke liye bhi help karenge ..

mr. khurana - god idea dear ... koi bhi help chahiye ho toh be jhizhak bolna ..

geet - uncle ji hi chahte the ki uss NGO ki inaaugration aap dono karen ...

mr. khurana - well ..its our pleasure ..we will surely come ..bas mujhe tym and location bta dena ..we will be dere ..

geet and arohi excitedly - thanks uncle ...

geet - uncle mai apko date , day and tym mail kar dungi ..

mr. khurana - no problem dear ..

suddenly sameera came in the midddle of the hall ...
and says
- attention everyone ...
everyone turned deir gaze towrds her ..and thought wat will she be saying ...

sameera - actually mai apko ek acchi newz dena chahti thi ...

she moves towards geet and says loudly - congratz geet ..

geet says confusingly - congratz par kis liye ...

sameera - tum pregnant ho na geet ...
everyone was shocked ...
arohi , mr. handa , dia , arjun , maan ...

geet - yeh tum kya bol rhi ho sameera ..

sameera - kya hua geet ..?? aree aaj coledge mai canteen mai tumne maan aur arjun ko btaya tha na ki tum pregnant ho ...
aur tumne unhe cake bhi khilaya tha ...

mr handa turns towards geet and says - kya yeh sach hai geet ...
geet mai tumse kuch pooch rha hun..
sameera jo bol rhi hai kya voh sach hai ...

geet - dad ..voh...mai nhi ..
she burst out crying ...


mr. handa- iska matlab yeh sach hai ..

geet was againdenying wat sameera said - nhi dad ..
mr. handa raised his hand to slap geet ..
but someone holds his hand ...

who is dat ...????????


PRECAP - the full truth ...
+ sameera ki acchi wali insult ..even maan insulting sameera instead of taking her side ..
+
geet lost ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part...but plz update fast, waiting to see truth out and sameera getting insulted
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

eagerly waiting 4 d nxt one .. plz .. can u give nxt update asap .. plz ..


continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
i kill that bitch sameera
how can she say that she is preganat
make everyone knew the truth shivi
then she ll get tight slap
hope all the truth comes...

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