~*~ PYAAR KA EK NAGHMA ~*~ MG ff ...COMplETED .!!! - Page 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
Loveee the part!!!
Good that geet showed sameera her place!!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.


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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
OMG !! SHIVI SUPER LIKKED THE UPDATE ……👏👏

I M GEET HANDA …. 😳 ufffhhh !!! Now thats what u call ATTITUDE ….😉 loved it how GEET showed SAMEERA her place ….🤣 and wow MAAN was lost in GEET'S WORDS ……😳 LOVED IT !!!!

plzzz UPDATE SOON …. 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
maybe aruhi pregnant
love the lecture geet gave
sam
even maan was affected what
geet said i hope he change & be
responsible man
me loving story turning interesting
fantastic update
love it
cont soonnn
thnaks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
Really NICE...
luved d way GEET show SAMEERA her place...
MAAN also getting influenced by GEET ... GREAT GOING !!!
PLS POST SOON ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
niceee luvly...
update soon
we r waiting...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
PARt 7

geet and arohi were roaming in the corridor ...
when geet's cell rang and she excused herself ... and recieved the call...

nurse -hello...kya main miss geet se baat kar sakti hun...

geet - ya ..who is dis ..

nurse- mam main ..ABC hospital se bol rhi hun...voh apki frend arohi ahluwalia ki reports aa gaye hain ,,,, aap kab ayengi lene ...

geet - ok mai 20 minutes mai aati hun ..
after 10 minutes geet also sits in her car ..and tells the river to drive to ABC hospital ..

ABC hoospital

geet goes to the reception
and says- mai geet hun ..mai yahan arohi ahluwaliaki reposrts lene ayyi hun ...

nurse - yes mam ...aap mrs. nisha ke cabin mai chale jaiye ..she will be handling her case and reports bhu unhi ke paas hain..

geet - alryt thank u ...
geet goes in mrs. nisha's cabin

geet - gud morning doctor ..i m geet ..voh arohi ahluwalia ki reports ...
doctor- ayiye miss geet ...well ek acchi khabar hai apke liye..miss arohi pregnant hai ...aap do din baad dubara ayeg ..miss arohi ke saath unke kuch tests honge ...

geet gets worried - is everthing alryt doc...i mean tests..

doctor- yes yes everything is fine...actually medicines prescribe karne se pehle i have to take her full check up ...and dont get worry dere r no comlications in her pregnancy ..

geet - thank u doctor ...
saying dis she collects the reports and leaves ...while she was movingout of the hospital ... she called arjun ...

geet - arjun kahan ho tum ..??

arjun - mai tumhare coleedge mai hun ...but tum dono kahan ho...maine poora colledge dhoondha ..abhi mai canteen mai hun ..

geet - ok..i m coming and arohi ghra gaye hain rest karne ghar gaye hain ...
accha aap vahin ruko ..mujhe aapse bohot zaroori baat karni hai and etene mai aap ek chcolate cake mangvao ..ok...bye

arjun - bye ..
arjun orders cake as said by geet ..
after 20 minutes geetcomes...she was very happy..and comes and hugs arjun

geet says - congratz jiju ...
as arjun was maan's best buddy ...and both of demwere sitting together ...geet did not notice and hugged arjun ..

arjun - aree btao toh hua kya ..?? ..tum eteni khush kyun ho ..aur yeh congratz kis liye ..
geet was about to say something ..when she noticed maan was sitting dere and was listening dere convo...

geet - aap jante ho iss mr. attitude ko...

arjun - hmm...yeh mera best frend hai maan...aur maan yeh geet ...

geet - chodo na jiju...
so gud newz is ..arohi is pregnant and u r gonna be dad ..

arjun was so happy on listening dis ..he hugeed geet geet and says - sach much ..

geet - han jiju very true ..
geet bends down takes a piece of chocolate cake and offers to arjun..and arjun did the same ...

geet - next step ...jiju aap ko jaldi shadi kar leni chahiye ...varna log usse tane marenge ..aap samajhrahe hain na mai kya kehna cha rhi hun...

arjun says worriedly - han tum uski chinta mat karo ...hum issi week shadi kar lenge ..but mai koi shor nhi chahta ..it will be simple one ..ek mandir mai ..

geet - han jiju ...yeh thik rahega ..aur shadi se pehle ki choti moti rasmein like mehndi ...voh hum apne aap karlenge ...

arjun - and shadi ki preparations tum aur maan sambhal lena ..

geet gives a disgusting look to maan and says - ok...

geet - guest list taiyar aap kardena ..ok...baki cards distribution and all voh sabh hum dekh lenge ...

she again bends down ...picks up a piece of cake and says - yeh apki shadi ki khushi main...yupie ..!! i m very happy..
accha ab aap jao aru ke ghar par and tell her about our plan and han next 2 days ke baad aru ki doc ke saath appointment hai kuch tests honge..toh aap le jaana ...ok...bye i have to go ...
she gives the reports to arjun and leaves ...

maan - tu isse kaise jaanta hai ..

arjun - koun geet ...?? yeh arohi meri hone wali wife uski best frend hai ...kyun..??

maan - nahi ..yeh ..vohi ladki hai jisse mai subah takraya tha ...

arjun - well yeh mr. handa ki badi beti hai ...phir bhi bilkul attitude nhi hai geet mai ...sab kuch apne aap karti hai ...apne dad ki bilkul help nhi leti and isse toh coledge mai scholarship mili hai ...

maan was really impressed by geet ...he was getting attracted towards her ...was feeling very different wid her ..he hasn't felt anything lyk dat before even when he was wid sameera ...
...
it was something different he had never felt before ...well it was the begining of his new life , new love , geet ...
he was totally impressed by her character ..
he knew dat he was no where bear her ...he was not like her ...he was known becoz of his father's name ...while she was known for her talents ...

he decided dat day he will work very hard sirf isliye ki voh geet ke layak ban sake ..and he also decided to ignore parties ...and ignore samerra ...


PRECAp - party ,,...sameera creating problem in party..

PLZ..GYZ..DO COMMENT ...
I M WAITINF FOR DEM ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! maan is so impressed that he decides to change himself, now that is love...what drama will sameera create in the party?...great part...loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
Loveee the part!!
Maan is going to change himself for geet!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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