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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice and beautiful update...
keep it up...
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Posted: 13 years ago

hmm...i want more passionate maaneet...😍...and who is priya???😉...great update⭐️

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hmm...i want more passionate maaneet...😍...and who is priya???😉...great update⭐️

whatever u say😛...ur questions are back😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesooome part...
very nice...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Ji...😉..

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome partss
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cont soon

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I am back with my update...
Maan leaves to the office alone. Geet goes to office thinking whatelse she can do to pacify Maan. She reaches office and finds Maan missing from his cabin. She asks Pinky who says Maan is in a meeting. Geet gets involved in the work. Geet asks peon if Maan had coffee, he says yes. Geet starts missing Geet but Maan is busy so she too tries to concentrate on work..

At lunch time, Geet thinks at least now she can see Maan as he will come to have his lunch. Adi comes and informs her that Maan went for lunch with a client where they will be having the meet. Geet is upset. Adi says Maan asked to send back the lunch which came from home as he thinks she will not be eating it. Geet snaps why will she not eat. She snatches the carrier and pushes the food in her mouth. She feels it hard to get down her throat as she keeps thinking about Maan.

Geet finds Adi all worried and asks him what is wrong. Adi says some clients have come for meet and Maan has not returned yet. Geet asks for the file, but Adi says Maan got the original file. She gets angry at Adi for being so careful. Geet asks to bring the details of the project. Adi says he does not have the details and she needs to get the file from the store room. Geet leaves from there all angry. Priya hears the whole conversation.

Geet walks towards the storeroom scolding Maan for missing from the office and even taking the file with him. Geet is almost at the storeroom when some pulls her into the other room. Geet is shocked and closes her eyes all scared. She opens her eyes slowly and is surprised.

Priya thinks of helping Geet in the store room and goes there.

Geet: Maan!! what are you doing here..I mean Adi said..

Geet is all confused. Maan looks intenssely at Geet and moves close to her.

Maan corners Geet and closes the door.
Geet: Maan. clients are waiting for us..
Maan: Hmm..
Geet: Maan. you are not angry with me...right?
Maan: Do I look angry.
Geet gets emotional and hugs him.
Geet: Sorry Maan...I can never hide things from you. I wanted to tell you, but..
Maan: I am not angry Geet, never was I, I was upset maybe with myself. How can Maan be angry with her misty. Do you remember we left something incomplete.
Geet: What
Maan looks naughtily at Geet.
Priya goes to the storeroom and looks around for Geet but she does not find anyone there. She walks in to see if Geet is inside. Someone comes and grabs her tight from behind not letting her turn around, takes her close and pushes her off. Priya is totally confused with what is happening. Priya gets a blow on her head and she looses consciousness. In the midst she hears the person say something, but fails to see him. She falls on the ground unconscious.
Geet: Maan. this is office.
Maan: Yes. my office.
Geet: Clients have already come. Lets go..
Maan pulls off her dupatta.
Maan: You go. I will join you later.
Geet: Maan. How will I go like this.
Maan smiles. He grabs her both hands and pushes her against wall. Maan kisses her ears, then cheeks, and they hear noises from outside. Geet and Maan come out of the room. Adi informs them about Priya being found unconscious in the storeroom. Doctor is called who checks her and say she is fine and needs rest. Everyone ask Priya what happened but Priya is in trauma and does not remember what really happened. Maan asks her to go home and rest. Maneet get busy with work.
Priya goes home and goes to sleep. She wakes up at night. Geet comes and enquires about her health and she says she is fine. Geet again asks what happened in the storeroom, but Priya does not remember anything. Priya finishes her dinner but findss it hard to go to sleep as she slept for long hours. She goes out for walk. She is about to return when hears some noises from the outhouse. She initially gets confused as the outhouse is locked. She goes and peeps through the window.
Vicky has given a party to his friends in the outhouse. As he knew he will not get permission from dadi or Maan for late night party. They do it in a secret way. Priya gets shocked looking at the wine and dance and weird clothes. She laughs at such a party being held with low volume. She then gets an idea and takes snaps of all the happenings and even gets a video of Vicky having wine. She just quitely slips away from there.
Priya is about to return to her room when she bumps into Nandini. Nandini gets angry at her for sleepwalking or else she may end at wrong place at wrong time. Priya says sorry and returns to her room all excited about the snaps she just got. She lays down and her head hurts badly and she remembers what Nandini said and what the guy said in the store room...THIS IS FOR BEING AT WRONG PLACE AT WRONG TIME.
Priya is shocked and thinks she should tell this to Geet.
Maneet are in their room.
Geet: Maan. Do you think what happened in storeroom was just accident.
Maan: What happened. did Priya say anything.
Geet: No but I was supposed to be there before her...I dont know I feel weird about it.
Maan: Dont worry. Your Maan is here to take all your troubles.
Precap: Vicky in office. Priya tells Surabhi for her being in Delhi
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Edited by Naz_Angel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

wow...i think this is the best update you have ever written👏..and i think your mystery man has inspired the cv's 😉...

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Posted: 13 years ago

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wow...i think this is the best update you have ever written👏..and i think your mystery man has inspired the cv's 😉...

see now u will not be scared to watch the coming man😉😆

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