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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update!!!
there was no need for geet to keep the envelope in the cupboard!!
aik dum dhakan hai geet😆... hahahahahahahaha...
i hope maan doesn't get angry on her before coming to any conclusions!!🤔
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
something missing & fishy
saurabhi upto with priya
pls do separate maaneet
waiting next
thank yu so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the PM
its not letting mehit the like button
Amazing update, hope Maan doesnt react angrily at the pics
Keep up the brilliant work
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ...something is very fishy ..I know it has something to do with water.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey naz... sorry for the late... actually litlle bit busy last week... finally read the part... its very interesting... u maintained suspense in all the characters... n precap is even more interesting... continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

naz...please please please reveal who priya is...i don't believe this kunal guy...i hope geet decides to show maan the pics... and explain everything...so that there are no missunderstandings later

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG...the suspense! It's getting more and more interesting. Don't know what to think of Kunal anymore. What is he upto? Is he a part of it or is he a victim? And Priya...she's confusing too.
Maan finding the pics...hay rabba! I'm scared of his reaction and how will Geet explain to him about what had happened?
Great update! Sorry for the late reply.
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Posted: 13 years ago




Welcome to the next update...will try to update quickly next time😳😳😳
Geet behaves all normal with Maan so Maan thinks he should talk to Geet and say sorry for being late last night, he orders a bouquet for her with a sorry note.

Maan to himself: This is the first time, I am saying sorry to her this way...hope she does not freak out..

Maan goes to her cabin with the bouquet and finds her missing so puts it there and leaves. Geet returns n sees it and feels all guilty. Geet decides to tell him the whole truth once they return home...

In the evening, Maneet leaves to KM and Priya takes excuse she wants to finish some work and stays back. Dev joins Maneet in the car which irks Maneet as they had so much to talk. After reaching KM, Geet gets in some discussion with dadi and Nandini and Maan is in their room waiting for her. He gets bored and remembers Geet putting something in the cupboard when they returned from office. Maan gets curious and opens the cupboard. He finds the envelope and sees the picture... Maan is shocked to see the pictures and gets flashes of Geets behavior since last night. His eyes turn all red in anger. He puts the pictures back in their place and gets engaged in the office work.

Geet returns and finds Maan working..

Geet: Maan...you are working at this hour..
Maan: Yes Geet...its very important...I need to finish it today..
Geet to herself...How am I gonna tell him if he is in this mood...babaji please help me
Maan: Geet..you have anything to say...
Geet: yes ...I mean not really...
Maan: is everything alright?
Geet: Yes...

Geet is biting off her nails not understanding what and how to tell all that to Maan when she is still not sure how it all happened...Maan puts his files aside and comes to Geet...Geet is all suprised.

Geet: maan...you are done with ur work?
Maan: Yes..
Geet: So early..?
Maan: You dont want me to finish my work it seems
Geet: NO maan...actually.

Maan holds Geet and asks if she has anything to say, but Geet gets nervous and says there is nothing important. even before Geet can finish, Maan tightens his grip over her waist. He pulls her towards him. Geet is in no mood of romance and tries to stop him, but he pushes himself closer to her. His hands start running over her curves...but Geet tries to stop him again
Geet: Maan please..
Maan: What happened Geet.
Geet: Nothing actually.

Maan moves closers and closes her mouth with his...Her resistant hands just roll over his shoulders and pull him closer. Geet closes her eyes. Maan kisses her eyes, cheeks, neck. Geet is completely lost in his arms. Maan grabs her tight and give a bite to her neck. Geet opens her eyes in pain. Maan is still fighting between the pictures and his love...Maan lifts her up and takes her to the bed. Maan lays down beside her and looks at her lovingly, Geet finds it hard to look into his eyes. Maan takes off her dupatta and leans over her. Geet does not resist.

Maan just goes to the other side of the bed and turns to the other side. Geet looks at Maan and is totally confused.

Geet to herself: I had so much to tell you Maan...but do not know why your behavior is scaring me today..
Maan to himself: I just cant hate you Geet...

Next morning, Early morning, Dev is walking towards Maneet room carrying a file for Maan. Priya watches this and takes the file from Dev lying to him that she was going to meet Geet. She thinks now she got a reason to go to their room. On the way she bumps into vicky, he finds the file in her hand..
Vicky: bring me cup of coffee...
Priya; excuse me. I am not ur servant..
Vicky: really..you were carrying that file for Dev to Maan bro..so I thought now a days you are doing the servant job.
Priya looks pissed off. Nandini watches this and thinks to do something about this..She finds dadimaa in the kitchen and joins her in preparation for breakfast. While working,
Dadi: Nandini..you generally handle these things daily..let me do this today
Nano: Its ok dadi...btw dadi dont you think its time for Vicky to join the office
Dadi: Vicky and office...she laughs.
Nano: I know dadi but slowly he will learn by helping Maan, Dev, and Geet...even I too am thinking of going to office now and then...
Dadi: Ohh...ok...I will ask vicky to join the office...dont know he will listen or not...he is very stubborn..
Nano: Dont worry dadi..I will handle this..but you talk to Maan jijaji..
Dadi: ok...I will inform Maan..
Maan wakes up and does not find Geet in bed. he gets restless and gets out of bed trying to find her. Geet comes out of the washroom and he feels releaved.

Geet: Good morning Maan
Maan: Good morning

Maan does not even look at her and walk into the washroom. Geet thinks she has to speak to him anyhow. Maan gets ready to go to the office. Geet comes..

Geet: Maan...we need to talk...
Maan: I am getting late..
Geet: Maan please. its important...

Maan just ignores but Geet gets the pictures and gives them to Maan. Maan takes a look at them, which he had already seen..

Geet: I dont know how all this happened...actually...that day..
Maan: I have seen this pictures already..
Geet: What...
Maan: I asked you last night if you had anything to tell me..you said no.
Geet: Maan ..actually I was so scared.
Maan: Scared of me Geet. I dont know what had happened. I just dont care as I trust you more than anything in this world, but you know I hate lies and you hide from me A such thing..
Geet: I had no intention of hiding from you...I just didnt understood how to tell you..

Maan just walks off leaving crying Geet behind. Priya walks in with a file Maan has asked for. Maan just snatches the file and leaves. Priya goes to Geet and consoles her...

Priya: Maan seemed to very angry
Geet: No..he is not angry but upset..I hate myself for making him upset.
Priya: Its ok Geet...He will understand.
Geet: He has to or he will hurt himself..which I can never let happen
Precap: Vicky joins the office. Geet to pacify Maan😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
its been a long time.plz update soon nxt part. thanks for the pm.

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