Maneet FF walking down dark lane/upd#19-pg128 - Page 25

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Hi,

I caught uo with your FF today...wonderful story...myster of Piya...loving it just please don't make it supernatural...

there is nothing supernatural about it dear... u can enjoy reading it😉😛
Edited by Naz_Angel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wooaw, Awesome upd. 🤗
Naz, very well written. Its flawless. 👏
The precap is scaring me..
Upd sooon. Thanku for the Pm 🤗
Loev from Hina ❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for liking my FF..love u all🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Hina-

Wooaw, Awesome upd. 🤗

Naz, very well written. Its flawless. 👏
The precap is scaring me..
Upd sooon. Thanku for the Pm 🤗
Loev from Hina ❤️

thanks for appreciation..Hina😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nai1311_ysp

update soon ya...

want to know how geet react when maan surrounded by girls...
and who s priya, plz reveal the truth ...

priya's truth or past whatever i should call it will be revealed in a quick time dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
HI all,🤗
I am back with my next update...
Enjoy reading and do leave ur comments and suggestions...

Geet and Priya enter the party and Geet is all excited about meeting Vicky.

The mediator between the music band and the organizer says best of luck to the band and adds today their lives are gonna change...

The music band consists of 4 young boys including Vicky. All 4 of them get so excited as its gonna be a big day for them as they got advance money and special dresses for their performance for the first time...

The mediator walks out of the venue, says bye to the organiser. Security guys allow Maan in who ends up bumping into the moderator. They say sorry to each other and give a smile to each other. Organisers misunderstand them to be knowing each other and Maan to be the part of the music band..Organiser directs towards the room alloted for the music band. Maan is confused but walks in which is empty as the group left to start the performance.

Party starts, all the ladies start enjoying themselves making small groups. Geet and Priya notice wines being served.


Geet: Priya...have you ever tried wine.?
Priya: No ...now dont tell me we are gonna try thatt..
Geet: No...not today.
Priya: Geettt...u...
Geet smiles...
Geet: Anger is the only expression u r showing..so i am making u angry .so ur expressionless face gets some expressions...
Priya looks at Geet helpless

Music band starts their performance all excited with a slow song which angers the ladies and they demand the group to come with some hot number...so they start I hate love stories title song...all of them start dancing...

Priya and Geet start feeling nostalgic with the environment, loud music, n wines. Priya looks visibly unhappy, but Geet tries hard to hide her feelings from Priya by giving fake smiles...Maan gets confused with the way n is searching way where the main event taking place...

Organisers approaches the music band and ask them to start the real things and winks. The band is all confused. Organiser asks if it is their first time. Boys say they dont understand what she is talking about...Organiser's friend says may be its first time so they are feeling shy. she signals towards the other ladies who drag the boys on to the dance floor and start pulling off their dresses...Vicky and co. are so shocked and hardly understand what to do..

Geet and Priya are shell shocked and are confused. Geet inquires whats happening. A lady replies stripting and winks...

Geet to Priya: Stripting. what is that..looking at Priya
Priya; Shrugs her shoulders...no idea.

Maan walks in, watches what is happening there and misunderstands that Priya and Geet came there to see all that and gets angry. some ladies approach him thinking he is with the group and he dances with them to tease Geet on character dheela song...

Geet notices Maan surrounded by so many women and her jaw drops down.

Priya: Geet..what is Maan doing here...
Geet: I dont know
Priya: You told him we are coming here for Vicky??
Geet: nope. I told him we are going to shopping.
Priya: Shopping. you lied to him?...but why?
Geet: I thought I will give him surprise..but never thought he will give me such a shock...

Maan notices Geet getting jealous n gets happy..but slowly he realises that the women around him are getting uncontrollable and are trying their hands on his dressing. Geet tries to get close to Maan but fails.

Priya stands in a corner not understanding what to do whenn she hears a male voice saying today they are all gone. She turns back to find a guy of the group hiding behind the curtains.
Priya: What are u doing here.?
Guy: I dont wanna do all that.
Priya; Oh ..really...then what are u doing here.
Guy; we are here for the music performance. This was not part of our plan and the mediator has ditched us.
Priya; Where were you till now?
Guy: I went to check the wiring
Priya; You know where the main box is..
Guy: yep...
Priya; come n show me.
Guy: nope. if someone sees me..i will be gone.
Priya; if u dont help me. I will myself rip ur clothes off and drag u in...come (angrily)

Priya and guy walk towards the main switch from where they are getting power...Priya asks the guy to switch off the power after 10 minutes and requests him to not ditch her and he will be paid accordingly...Guy agrees..

Priya walks back to the event hall swiftly and informs Geet what she has arranged for. Geet walks towards Maan but again fails. Priya teases Geet that Geet cant even approach him. Geet gets angry and pushes all the women and grabs hold of Maan when the power goes off. Maneet run towards the door, but bounces into the window. Maan suggests they find the door, but Geet says they dont have time. Maneet jump out of the window and start running...After running for sometime Geet remembers Priya n stop. They look back and find 3 people running towards them. The 3 end up to be Priya, Vicky, and the guy who helped Priya.

Precap: Maan to face the music...Can Maneet manage to convince Vicky to return home???

Please do hit the like button and leave ur precious comments...🤗


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
s😊

Beautiful Graphics
Thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it loadz
can't 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
muahhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update..
do cntinue..
cant wait to see waht happen next!!thx for the pm!!

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